Ryse Felix’s
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(group member since Dec 03, 2014)
Ryse Felix’s
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from the Net Work Book Club group.
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"In all likeliness, you shall find me as a bag of skin and bones, with eyes that have turned..."
Its a great book and the landscape it is set in is very imaginative. But I couldn't understand the whole idea behind Phineas' story. It sidetracks the main book every 50 pages and it doesn't come to a conclusion. That's the problem with indie books. They don't cut the book where it needs to be cut.