Eros’s Comments (group member since Sep 19, 2013)

Eros’s comments from the X-Unity Vs. The Alliance group.

Camaztoz shakes his head, "No, keep them guessing. I'll disguise you in shadows while I fly above using the same technique to its deadlier degree. I'll blind their senses and then you can attack. Just don't look threatening until you step into the light my shadows will disperse and you can ave your way with them."
Camazotz' own hands seem to create a large fume of black moving over Shion like a gentle smoke from a cigarette. It would only paralyze his senses momentarily before he lets up on it.
Camazotz shifts into his regualr bat form and takes to the skies. His form black in the small glimpse of a cresent moon after the new moon of last night. He circles above and from hsi wing tips the same fog rains over the entire building causing thsoe inside to become blind of the outside and those outside to become completely blind in any form. The feel of the wind no longer on their cheeks the calm of the night being induced with fear. Then total darkness as if they did not ever exist.

Mikael nods, "You are one of the first to see any form of good in me, Thanks." He says before frowning, "So how exactly am I going to get out of here without causing damage to the place. I can't fly out a barred window now can I?" He seemed to like something about this woman and he couldn't place what. Maybe it was the fact that he hadn't seen the outside beyond his window since he was a teenager.

Camazotz laughs, "Don't underestimate the humans. They have security everywhere as much as they have camera's and those Anti-mutant weapons firing the serum into any identified mutants making them human nearly instant. Be careful, they will have caught on by now and preparing to give us a welcoming party."

Mikael looks up as the room lights flash for a moment and an alarm sounds, not loud like that of a fire alarm, but loud enough to let people know that they were under attack. When mutants stepped onto the property the lights would always go out and the emergency flashers turn on. All the doors auto lock in a slow sequence to keep all in in and outsiders out. "Seems like my way out has arrived, but I'll need to use my powers to get us both out of this room when the security doors lock."

Els wrote: "Just wondering what level rank would you think would be better for her? :3"

Gamma would be my guess with a magic user, or even Epsilon.

I don't care as long as it gets dfone, but you can't rp until it does. Just have it fixed and I'll approve of it. ^_^

Els wrote: "Name: Darneyious Avaley
Age:23
Species: Mutant
Powers:
➲Dimensional travel
➲Magic or also known as Magical Powers
➲Telepathy
➲Fear Inducement
➲Elemental Control
➲Flight
➲Healing
X-Unity, The Allia..."

Els review back over your character, Res made a few minor detail errors I would like fixed ASAP.

Onyx { Rebelious Italian Dancer Extraordinaire} wrote: "Rebel ( Soon to Be Allience, planning to convert her)

NAME: Ariella North Frost
Nick Name: Ari, Ella, Frost (Prefers Frost and only allows her friends to call her Ari or Ella)

AGE: 19
Date of B..."

Fix her please and add an image that Goodreads finds suitable.

Els wrote: " Continuation from upwards.☝☝☝☝ ☝

Part Two

BACKSTORY:

▁▃☛Darney's Birth▁▃☛
Her birth was the hardest out of all the others. Scratch that. Actually, Queentin and, Darney's was the hardest. Isn..."

Other than everything posted above she is in the clear, fix it before approval.

Els wrote: " Continuation from upwards.☝☝☝☝ ☝

Part Two

BACKSTORY:

▁▃☛Darney's Birth▁▃☛
Her birth was the hardest out of all the others. Scratch that. Actually, Queentin and, Darney's was the hardest. Isn..."

Darneyious's Toddler Years: This needs to be fixed family wouldn't know how powerful she is and she wouldn't be the most powerful in the country. she is just a Toddler. A child with that much power doesn't exist as powers really aren't supposed to set in hard core until puberty has been achieved.

Els wrote: " "Cute is when your personality shines through your looks. Like, when you see someone's personality in the way they walk and you just feel like hugging them every time you see them."
▁▂▃♠♠▁▂▃▁▂▃▁▂▃..."

There can be no more Beta. Adjust powers and fix to another rank.

➲Elemental Control[ Elemental Control is basically the use of all the elements. Not the chemical elements in which you would think. Just all the natural elements such as:Ice(Water), Fire, Earth, and Air.
Would be under magic.

Els wrote: " "Cute is when your personality shines through your looks. Like, when you see someone's personality in the way they walk and you just feel like hugging them every time you see them."
▁▂▃♠♠▁▂▃▁▂▃▁▂▃..."

She can't be born in 1993, read the background story or intro on top of homepage. This is the future 1993 is ancient to this time period.

Camazotz noticed the crow above and smirks lightly casting a swirl of glowing shadows into the sky knowing it had to be the angelic being who at last arrived. He was pleased with hismelf to know how easy it was going to be to break i with a darkened being and a being of darkness.

Night time was at last stretching across the skies and darkness began to take it's form. Camazotz stood int he shadows looking at the facility as if it were weak. It was not nearly as guarded as the one he took down nearly a day ago. This was going to be far less amusing, but a bit more fun playing around with the defenseless beings.
Surely he knew some mutants of worth rested within this building and Crucifix wasn't going to make a mess of thing here.

((Wow, love it, I never got the lead in such things, but I never tried for them...I was Tulleo...I think that's his name...then in Pride and Prejudice I gave a whole new life to Mr. Collins.))

Mikael rolls his eyes at her job description, "Wow, you must get appreciated for ensuring the humans treat us right, huh." He says mildly sarcastically in a retorical sense. "Well, do you also go around offering freedom to every mutant you encounter?" He couldn't help but to ponder things like a zoo if every animal escaped terrorizing the public of humanity.
"Listen, you get me out and I might just do you a favor also. I just can't risk being stuck here all of the time, you know."

((Cool, what play?))

Mikael smirks, "I doubt you would want to do that. If you truly read my file you would know on there it clearly states that I am at high risk to all employees. What is your job here for if you are trying to help mutants and A-mutants out?" He asked curiously. He started relaxing more around her for the stragest of reasons he couldn't even explain himself. "If I am released I could cause alot of horrible damage."

Ezekiel smiles, "Now, if you excuse me I need a much needed bit of rest." He smiles curtly before moving off to his own quarter of the building. "I'll see you then." He says kindly. He walks off toward his own quarters expecting an interesting day with Pandora. He was already aranging their day with one another in his ehad. He enjoyed calculating the details of such things.

Adrien nods generously, "Excellent, unfortunately we will need to wait until the morning of the next moon, given we would not have time by the break of dawn. I cannot be in the sunlight at all, therefore we must wait until tomorrow. I expect to see you outside of this facility at the wake of a new and grander night."
He couldn't help before giving him one more generous glance.
"I'll see you tomorrow night." He says shifitng into his large bat form and taking flight into the crossing branches of a path of trees.

np

Ezekiel laughs, "Very well, grand tour of New York City it is then, eh. We will leave in the morning." He says with a sly smile..."Then you cna share all the secrets you want with me." He says playfully himself which seemed a bit odd given his aura of personality.

Effects of Treatment used in law enforcement weapons and medical use:

Ezekiel nods, "Very well then, not much of a competition then are you?" He plays with her for a moment before moving to the way they had entered the courtyard. He holds the door open like a gentleman. "After you, enjoy your shower...well deserved....very good." He says before moving toward his own room where he prepared to make a few arrangements.