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There once was...

"Why," you ask? That's simple. Because I'm sick of it, because I'm sick of just sitting there, reading a book, and just imagining what would happen if the character did this instead of that, and how it would be different. I was sick and tired that I figured "what the hell" and started writing my own stories. No more standing on the sidelines for me, and I've loved every one of my stories ever since.
Even as I read them over, I don't get the feel that I wrote them rather than I like what happens. Even so, I still sit there and fantasize about the books I read. Old habits die young, but I've created my own set of worlds, my own universe, where every planet is a story, and every star is an idea to come. Each story is unique but are connected by one computer. One day, one of those worlds will collide with another. I can't wait! =^)


Summary: Dorina Scott is a Virgo in the astrology world.
Her name means "perfection" in her astrology month of September.
She is suppose to be the following:
modest and shy,
meticulous and reliable,
practical and diligent,
intelligent and analytical,
a perfectionist, and
criticizing anyone and everyone she meets.
However,
Dorina is none of those things, wants to be none of those things. She wants nothing more than to be herself, someone that doesn't base their life on a stupid sign. Though, that is exactly how her life is, and everyone around her. How can she fight back if she's outnumbered 11 to 1? And that's with her sign, something that she doesn't plan to use.
Oh, and there's one more thing.
A Virgo's enemy opposite is the Pisces, for Dorina that's the ever annoying, ever naive Julian Moonstone.
Only now, he's suddenly become a threat, and that threat is aiming straight for her heart.
What will happen to her goal when he's in her way?
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

The Perfect Pretender
Summary: What if being perfect could help you escape something you never wanted to deal with again?
That's what Gwendolyn Thaler aka "Brownstone's Jewel" thought. However, it is not true. It's only hiding you from the truth, by lying, pretending.
Little Miss Perfect will meet her match, and find out she can't pretend to be something she's not.
But, with her kind of background, that "match" will see, who wouldn't want to pretend?
"Lying, my friend, is my salvation. After all, who wouldn't want to be perfect, even if it is just pretending?"
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Dead, Until We Meet Again ;^)
Summary: Mini-story about A girl named Abigail (Abby) who-every morning-woke up and made a funny face out her window at her best friend George (Georgy), whom did the same to her. Abby died when the window closed down on her head, causing her to lose consciousness but appearing as if dead. Now they are both older. Abby hasn't seen George since the accident, and George thought Abby was dead all of these years. Abby finally gets to move back to her old neighborhood, though not in the house next to Georges' who she thought moved away. Their rival schools cause them both to meet again, but will they be the same as they once were?
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Beautiful Fear
Summary: Everyone has a fear...
...and a killer is no different.
Alex is a girl who has killed, and is now being tortured by "The Center." She meets Travis who, like her, has a shady past that he doesn't want to share. However, because of his mission he must get the "tough" Alex to open up to him and show her weakness. The Center sent him on this mission. They want Alex to be used as the "Killing machine" she once was. She is drawn to him as he is drawn to her, no matter how dense their feelings are. However, will Alex's past come back to haunt them both? Is it truly worth protecting her?
Everyone has a fear, and a killer is no different. With the POV's of both Alex, a former killer, and Travis, whose parents were murdered by a killer, watch as they go under one roof and find that pasts can connect, whether they like it or not.
*WARNING: The following story does contain some foul language. Young readers should be careful and beware.* Enjoy! =^)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Planets: Beautiful Fear, Dead Until We Meet Again ;^), The Perfect Pretender, Imperfect Virgo, Unforgettable, Parallel Hearts

1) No cursing at each other. You want to fight? Go to some digital arena and duke it out there, not here.
2)Have Fun, because isn't that always important? ^-^
3) Be helpful and don't just say you straight up hate someone's work. Give them detailed lists and reasons why it's not your cup of tea
4)Be Creative (though I don't really need to tell y'all this, right?)
5) Be yourself, we won't judge you
6) Mingle ~(-.-)~
7) ...

