Jeremy’s Comments (group member since Aug 29, 2020)

Jeremy’s comments from the the kingdom of agria //semi-advanced// group.

(Good that locket is a VERY sensitive topic for him. Also how did I do? Did I mess up at all?)

He nodded. "Thank you for your time." He said as he got up. He dropped his locket picking it up as soon as it fell. Olberic hoped to the heavens the queen would not ask about it.

He smiled back. "I shall stand by your side till my last breath M'lady." Olberic said briefly having a flash back to when he first joined the kings army.

As he enters the sense of pride he has for just possibly serving burst forth with each step, the fire in his eye glowed ever bright, and the gentle smile on his face shone like the sun. He kneeled before his lady. "M'lady. I have completed your task and then some. I have also helped train a few of the new recruits, and found that one of the horses may be ill fit to ride." He said as he then looked at her. "All of this in the span of one morning your majesty." He said to her with a subtle form of pride in his voice.

K. Good luck to both of us.

I'mma post first. Reply when your ready.

Olberic took a breath again. He was nervous. Clutching the locket of his late wife he prayed. "Rosa....wish me luck from above..." He said as he pushed open the doors and went in.

We shall see.

I will...but it will be a struggle for the ages XD

I will. but still. You tell me one thing but ma brain is like "But what if we did it this way instead?"

Good. I'll try to do third person but, again, DnD has trained my mind a certain way so if I can't I'll edit it.

Lizzie if your free Olberic has completed the queens task and is heading back to the great room to tell his lady his status. You cool with that?

Olberic had done what his lady asked, and then some. He was out of energy yet he did not falter. "Now then. Once I wipe my brow clean, and possibly get a drink I shall report to my lady." Olberic said sheathing Charity. For one so old he moved like he was younger then his age. Each step he took had a air of pride to be serving under a royal family once more. He quickly bandaged his hand forgetting the sharpness of his sword, then carefully put on his glove, and headed to the great room.

(OOOOH YEAH IT WILL XD)

(I'll try. As well I'll read the sentence too.)

(Got it.)

(I keep forgetting that UUUGH!!! OK can you write me a sentence in third person so I can drill it into my head?)

(XD She mad...)

He gives a gentle smile, then taps his sword again letting your go.

"If you calm down I'll let you go." he says glaring back. "But if you struggle more..." You feel the roots get tighter.