s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§»’s Comments (group member since Jul 28, 2013)

s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§»’s comments from the Character Resources group.

:( That is so sad! I have so many characters I want to make but no characters for them!!!!

Not all people do, so that is good to know!

You could just say rectangular, and describe him as having an angular jaw?

Thanks dear!

I am great! How have you been?!

Disclaimer:

You are welcome to use my profile or critiquing system if you would like, I would just prefer that you attribute it to me as I am rather vain and somewhat prideful.

NAME


Name:
Gender:
Age:
» Birthday:
Residency:
Occupation:
Appearance:
» Hair:
» Eyes:
» Skin:
» Face:
» Body:
» Style:
» Voice:
» Impression:
Personality:
Description:
Background:
Relations:
Other:


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Explaining this clear and slow. For the formatting, delete the periods before the letter in between the '<' and '>'. As parts of this may be confusing, I would encourage you to look at mine and Aria Lily Sokai's characters for example.


NAME (Delete this word. Replace it with the name the character goes by, typed out in all caps. Then insert two blank lines.)
<.b>Name<./b>: (First Middle [if they have one] Last)
<.b>Gender<./b>: (Female or Male)
<.b>Age<./b>: (Be realistic.)
» <.i>Birthday<./i>: (Month Day)
<.b>Residency<./b>: (Where they live.)
<.b>Occupation<./b>: (What do they do? If they have more than one occupation, put 'Occupations' instead of 'Occupation' and separate details with semicolons.)
<.b>Appearance<./b>: (No pictures. In this section, you will be listing traits. Do not put this section in sentence form. Separate details with semicolons.)
» <.i>Hair<./i>: (color; hair type; length; other details)
» <.i>Eyes<./i>: (color; shape; other details)
» <.i>Skin<./i>: (color; other details)
» <.i>Face<./i>: (face shape; other details)
» <.i>Body<./i>: (height; body type; fitness level; other details)
» <.i>Style<./i>: (style of clothing worn)
» <.i>Voice<./i>: (pitch [low, medium, high, etc.]; other details)
» <.i>Impression<./i>: (first impression given off)
<.b>Personality<./b>: (What sort of personality traits do they have? In this section, you will be listing traits. Do not put this section in sentence form. Separate details with semicolons.)
<.b>Description<./b>: (This is complete sentences. Take all the details from the Appearance and Personality sections and use them to paint a picture of this character. Help us get to know this character. What sort of quirks do they have? Don't go overboard with the length. Be succinct and clear. Use good grammar.)
<.b>Background<./b>: (What is their background? What have their lives been like up to this point? Again, do not go overboard with the length. Use complete sentences and good grammar.)
<.b>Relations<./b>: (What family do they have?)
<.b>Other<./b>: (What other things make this person who they are? What is their favorite color, season, or time of day, etc.?)


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How this works:


Create a new topic in this folder (Character Critiques) with your character. Use their name as the topic title. It will be subject to critiques in its own topic. When we are satisfied with your character, we will ask you to post them in the Characters page in the Characters folder, at which point your critique topic will be deleted.

If you have a profile you like to use for your characters, you are welcome to create a thread in this folder to share it here. Title it "(insert your name)'s Profile", or if it is not yours, give credit to the person who created it by inserting their name.


[Example of thread title: Sunshine's Profile]

Hey RedPath! Welcome my dear! Long time no see!

Hello Koi and Jojo! Nice to meet you both and welcome!

If she's fine with you guys critiquing her character, I'm totally fine with it.

Yes, you are.


My view on this is that these aren't things you CAN'T do, they're just things you definitely want to think about before doing...

Sure! Go ahead and post said character in their own topic in the Feedback folder.

;D

Lady Poppy wrote: "Hello! Cool group idea, thanks for the invite :)"

De nada!

What! (Awkward same-time post...) I'm shocked with you!

Me either. I really don't do vampires, but Rosie on the other hand... ;D Sorry m'dear, I'm always going to give you grief!

Average Height to Weight Chart: Babies to Teenagers

Thanks, darling. :D