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I'm surprised I had stopped where I did. The proto monster in the ship is pretty scary in an Alien kind of way, though other than that there wasn't a lot of immediate, grab your attention conflict going on. Bobbie and Ava's POV sections came to a nice twist in the last few pages, so I'm more engaged about their roles. Nice job, Corey.
While this series it tauted for being more realistic, I'm not the kind of reader that enjoys reading all the science details about the spaceship and physics of survival. That could be why I have read so casually, I tend to get bored in those details and put the book down.
So, that's what I'm thinking halfway through. The politics are becoming a little clearer now that Ava has figured out the spy. Props to Corey for making the proto monster such a big threat. Did they really remove every piece from their ship? I'm surprised they are still flying.

Any suggestions for books that have a strong antagonist POV? What did you like about reading the story through their eyes? Were you hoping they would become "Good" in the end, or was it fun simply to see them be "Bad." Did it help to have a side character involved in their POV that you were rooting for to join Good?



ATPT is a unique experience in reading. I am at times in awe of Tori, her character arc, and the far reach between her and happiness, but other times I'm confused or not as interested in what is going on. The halfway point introduced some surprising conflict, leaving me very interested in how it will wrap up, but on a page by page basis, I'm either disinterested or interested about equally. I'm not sure how to pin down why I lose interest. I've mostly kept track of the characters, and like Muir-Smith and Elizabeth as secondary characters. Maybe it's not moving quickly enough? I'm not sure. Anyone else have thoughts on this?

