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Here is a sample of my writing. I would love if someone would read this for me.

(view spoiler)[I smiled at him a bit. Things couldn’t get better than it already had. Life was really good for me. He stepped in closing the space in between us. He gently put his lips on mine and we officially had out first kiss. I didn’t want it to end if felt like everything was perfect nothing could go wrong. Until he stepped back some.
“How can you kiss me?” He asked looking at me. I was confused on why he was acting like this. He started to circle around me like I was his prey. He bit his lip a little. He light blue eyes pierced my soul. “Come on Alyssa you’re smart one. I’m a monster. ” He said.
I was shocked on why would he call himself a monster nothing was making sense now. “You are not a monster Chris you’re far from that. You have so many great personalities traits compare to most of the guys in America.” I said looking at him.
“I like to kill things. I kill things. I love to hear my victims scream and beg for mercy,” he said as he started back circling me.
The word victims didn’t catch my attention. “So what if you like to hunt? A lot of people like to hunt where I come from.” It was true most people owned guns and loved to hunt in the country. It wasn’t just hobby it was a sport.
“Not animals. I guess you’re not smart as I thought you were Alyssa.” He said with a low dark voice. The sound of his voice sent chills down my spine making the hair on the back of neck rise. I bit my lip a little.
What was he talking about? I started to fit the pieces together. The word victims echoed through my head as I came to realize something. He had some connection to the Jack the Ripper murders. I gulped some. “Chris if you know something about who is killing those people then you need to tell someone.” I said.
“Why would I do that?” He paused and then I saw an evil grin on his face this wasn’t the Chris I knew. “I mean they would be able to connect me to these murders and the other ones.” He said coldly.
I should have ran as fast as I could out of there. He said other ones. I was way too curious for my own being. This wasn’t one of the smartest things I ever done. “What other murders? You mean the original ones? Chris you weren’t alive then.” His grin grew wider when I mentioned it. This wasn’t possible there was no rational explanation for it. He couldn’t have been alive in 1888. He would be over 100 years old.
Part of me wanted to scream. He was so sweet and kind. He helped along so much this past two weeks. I believe he can change. Then there is another part of me that wanted to walk away he did the same thing like my dad did but worse. (hide spoiler)]

I know there is grammar mistakes. This is the first time I wrote it down. I want to know if it is worth writing still.

What helps me is not writing in order if that makes sense. I write a when a scene comes to my mind.

Yeah November 2015

Guys I'm the only who didn't know that she pushed back the release date?

I can't wait to get a hold of this book. I heard so many great things about it.

yeah I know but I want to know.

(view spoiler)[Does anyone know her real name? (hide spoiler)]

Oda wrote: "Once Upon A Time wrote: "Same her it says I'm reading books but I'm kind in a reading slump and haven't started any of the books are my currently reading shelf."

aww :/ I hate being in reading slu..."

I know and I have so many books I need to read.

Same her it says I'm reading books but I'm kind in a reading slump and haven't started any of the books are my currently reading shelf.

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Loved Winner's Curse

Rachel (Miss Perfection) wrote: "should we change series continuation BOTM to Retribution of Mara Dyer since it came out today? It's only Nov. 4th ;)"

I agree with that.

It comes out today. I got book its on epub Bud I'm so happy. My day was made.

Me too I hope everything goes well I'm nervous but at the same time I can't wait to read it.

Me too I need a happy ending.

Thoughts on this book? It comes out in like in a few days. I'm so happy.

I'm in the country of Britney

This is a fun challenge where you will spell out Holiday words with the title of each book. Sign ups are here. This is a month long challenge starting in December. Good Luck:)
Here is how it works:


Word: Snow
Letter: W
Letters Read: W
Review:(link)
And you continue until your done with the word and start on a new word.

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