T.O.L.I.’s
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T.O.L.I.’s
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from the Let's Just Face it.....writing is addicting group.
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yeah i have heard of stone soup too
good advice...i shall do that!
has anyone else used writer's market
so wait has anyone ever sent some of their writing to a publisher or magazine (other that dee)
oooooooo.....cigssleeping for the rest of ur life or dying immediatly in a painful way
this is from Freeze!!But my Dad paid no answer. The first Freeze had happened right then. In the middle of him telling us about something important, and something not only important, but important about my mom.
“Hello? Dad?” I asked quickly, standing up. Almost ready to scream at the terrible sight of those glossy eyes, and the non-moving mouth. And his eyebrows forever poised at a downward angle.
“Dad?” I called again as I jumped up and walked around the table to him. I was on the verge of tears now. I could see Meg huddled in her chair, already bawling. I reached my Dad but it was almost like I was too afraid to reach out and touch him. “Daddy, please, stop this now. It’s not funny. You’re really scaring me.” I reached out to touch him, only a small poke but, what ended up happening, was that (because I was so scared) I hit him. With all the power I had in that moment.
And as me hand hit his shoulder it felt just like my Dad’s skin like any other human flesh, but it was cold. Like he had been put in a freezer , or he had been dead for hours. But that couldn’t be? Right? Well wrong. The things all of us have discovered in the past few, oh I don’t know how long it’s been, are really scary and one thing that I will tell you now, is that everything that was taken by one of the freezes stayed still, but they turn ice cold too.
I don’t know exactly what happens to them; all I know is that they freeze. But the one question I keep hearing inside my head is: are they dead?
lol.....coolz
yuppss
lol ur welcom!
here is my completed nanowrimo story!please read an comment!
the name is Fallen To Darkness!
the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
here is my completed nanowrimo story!please read an comment!
the name is Fallen To Darkness!
the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
O.o i know....ya know ill post it right now. how bout that
tempus is so good!!
oh with spencer?? hes my favorite
i love tempus seth!!!!!!!!!! hilarious!! but exciting at the smae time!
