T.O.L.I.’s
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(group member since Oct 30, 2008)
T.O.L.I.’s
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from the Let's Just Face it.....writing is addicting group.
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ok heres one from my new story im writing, freezeFirst everything non-living went. Just stopped. Yes, cars in the middle of the road, everything that could not breathe stopped, frozen in time, never to be moved again. And oh please, listen to this writing, listen to this story, I will explain all this later on, just please, please listen to what I have to say. But right about now, I’m just as scared as you are. But, well, here we go anyway. Back to what you’re here for, a bit of juicy entertainment, but now that you are reading this you’re just as much a part of this, and the one thing I have to ask before I return to the story is, if you figure out where this piece of writing came from go there, because we may be alive still, and you may be able to save us.
Everything just froze. Lights that had been turned on would be on forever, lights that had been off would be off for the rest of eternity, how ever long that is.
Then the animals, dogs, cats, rabbits, squirrels and birds, every non-human thing on earth was gone, frozen. If they had been leaping in mid-air at that exact moment they would stay there forever, floating always staring at the ground and always ready to land once again. The birds high up in the sky remained there, never to reach the tree, or wire, or nest they were heading for.
oh wow, I almost forgot about that website! I created it so long ago, I really should add some more books and thanks!
three more new chapters to my nanowrimo story!!!please read and comment!
the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
