T.O.L.I. T.O.L.I.’s Comments (group member since Oct 30, 2008)



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Dec 13, 2008 05:20AM

10287 yuppers i reached my goal and its the longest thing I have written yet
Dec 13, 2008 05:19AM

10287 ok heres one from my new story im writing, freeze

First everything non-living went. Just stopped. Yes, cars in the middle of the road, everything that could not breathe stopped, frozen in time, never to be moved again. And oh please, listen to this writing, listen to this story, I will explain all this later on, just please, please listen to what I have to say. But right about now, I’m just as scared as you are. But, well, here we go anyway. Back to what you’re here for, a bit of juicy entertainment, but now that you are reading this you’re just as much a part of this, and the one thing I have to ask before I return to the story is, if you figure out where this piece of writing came from go there, because we may be alive still, and you may be able to save us.

Everything just froze. Lights that had been turned on would be on forever, lights that had been off would be off for the rest of eternity, how ever long that is.

Then the animals, dogs, cats, rabbits, squirrels and birds, every non-human thing on earth was gone, frozen. If they had been leaping in mid-air at that exact moment they would stay there forever, floating always staring at the ground and always ready to land once again. The birds high up in the sky remained there, never to reach the tree, or wire, or nest they were heading for.

Dec 03, 2008 04:26PM

10287 21000!!!! WOOT!
Dec 01, 2008 01:12PM

10287 LOL!!!
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Dec 01, 2008 01:06PM

10287 oh wow, I almost forgot about that website! I created it so long ago, I really should add some more books and thanks!
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Dec 01, 2008 12:49PM

10287 awesome!
Nov 11, 2008 03:07AM

10287 Lara: FUN!
Nov 11, 2008 03:06AM

10287 Yea, some people think it is but I dont
Nov 07, 2008 05:44AM

10287 well that makes sense....i guess
Nov 07, 2008 05:44AM

10287 Lara: Ladee dee dum *shoots energy out of her hands*
Jericho: STOP THAT!!!
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Nov 07, 2008 05:43AM

10287 three more new chapters to my nanowrimo story!!!

please read and comment!

the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Nov 04, 2008 04:35PM

10287 me? yea mine are all on goodreads
Nov 04, 2008 03:42AM

10287 yes, yes i have
Nov 04, 2008 03:42AM

10287 i know shes crazy
Nov 04, 2008 03:30AM

10287 hehe
Nov 04, 2008 03:28AM

10287 lol
Nov 04, 2008 03:26AM

10287 cool!
Nov 04, 2008 03:08AM

10287 LOL!!
Nov 04, 2008 03:08AM

10287 hmmm let me try to think of one....gart!

ok no. that sounds stupid
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Nov 03, 2008 02:04PM

10287 lol kenzie