T.J.’s Comments (group member since Apr 06, 2013)

T.J.’s comments from the Broken-Hearted and Confused group.

Here's one of mine and I am trying to get it published.

Do Not
Do not haunt me with my sorrows
Do not shelter me with dread
Do not uncover my fears
and leave me for dead.

Do not rid me of love
Do not disguise my escapes
Do not shatter my hopes
for my own life's sake.

Do not darken my path
Do not lure me today
Do not erase my memories
to bestow them away.

Do not eradicate my logic
do not reject my imperfection
do not embark on my endeavors
that morph my reflection.

You will cease to confuse me.
Your game will stop before it begins
because the battle has been over
for I am the one who wins.

Apoorva wrote: "What has happened to me?
All I feel is regret
Things I'll never forgive
Things I'll never forget

Through all these broken years
Lost my heart, lost my mind
Looking for the closure
I know I'll neve..."

Ooh! I like it! I really respect poetry that gets into the writer and makes people think about themselves in a new perspective instead of what others poets write regarding things like...glass.

Apoorva wrote: "That's... wow. I'm sorry about that. I have always wanted to be a writer, and I still hope to publish some of my work. However, my parents always told me I couldn't make a career of it. I am intere..."

Writing is a great career! It takes hard work, sure, but don't let anyone get you down and discourage you from fulfilling your passion in life!

Same here. But you never cease to learn something new, like watching a movie for the second time.

E.B. wrote: "I agree 1000%. The one in the middle of the Triangle is always stringing one along for various reasons. And I completely lose respect for the one being strung along... what is he hoping for, sloppy..."

Yes. It also makes it a bit unrealistic. Because if the person truly cared for the first one, they wouldn't have fallen for the second.

I love re-reading books.

E.B. wrote: "Shadowhunter Girl wrote: "E.B. wrote: "Love triangles not so much but I don't always like it when the first love they meet is the one they end up with. I don't mind if they outgrow that person and ..."

No, I am pretty good on knowing what I do and do not want. Plus, I've noticed love triangles also make it to where you start to not like the female lead and begin to lose respect for the character BECAUSE of how indecisive they can be.

E.B. wrote: "Shadowhunter Girl wrote: "E.B. wrote: "Lord of the Rings"

I only read the first one and half of the second."

I will say they are hard reads, but there really worth it. The books pickup steam unli..."

Huh, the first one I read when I was ten and I thought it was very interesting, which I now find ironic that I can't even finish the second one now.

Aw,I like it, E.B.

E.B. wrote: "Love triangles not so much but I don't always like it when the first love they meet is the one they end up with. I don't mind if they outgrow that person and move another direction. I don't like th..."

Yeah, it is very undecisive of them.

E.B. wrote: "Lord of the Rings"

I only read the first one and half of the second.

If you have any poetry you'd like to share!

Yes, I finished it and it took me awhile to move on. Oh, Will...

Honest

I know what you mean, Cookiemonster. But I can really only think of two series that captivated me instantly, sucked me right in, and had it to where the sequels were better than that before them. And whose love stories were not clich'e. Which are Divergent and the Infernal Devices.

E.B. wrote: "Great, if you will do a review I will send it to you for free."

Okay. My goodness, it got great reviews! One of the highest-rated I've ever seen!

E.B. wrote: "If you need help, let me know. I have published one book and on the verge of a second. Once you work through some minor learning curves it's not that hard. What is real work is promoting your book,..."

Okay, thank you. And I will definitely check your book out!

I personally do not like love triangles because 80% of the time, the book ends in the way I do not want it to with the main character with the person I didn't wish them to originally be with. I find them quite frustrating.

You?

Witty

KylieAwesome wrote: "DIVERGENT!"

Divergent-lovers UNITE!

If I lived in that book, I'd hang with Uriah. Tobias is already taken so... <3 Uriah.