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message 1: by Gary (last edited Jan 01, 2026 09:19PM) (new)

Gary Martin These are my debut publications. And while they're kinda old still, I would really like some honest opinions before I release the third booking the series.

So far I've had five human reviews in 11 years despite selling copies in 10 countries across 3 continents in four languages... Without paying for marketing.

Regardless, so far My worst critics are the subjects which I antagonize throughout the series. My "self-reviews" for each book were ai-generated and are essentially my worst-case benchmark.

But they're not whom this series was writtenfor and thus I need to know from a human perspective what I can do to get this off the ground (preferably via word of mouth) and/or at least get some incoming webtraffic for the AI Simulation that's gonna encompass Book Four

While I will not alter-remove-influence any reviews that are submitted I do ask two favours:
1) I am looking for critical opinions regarding dialogue between civilian characters. If it sounds forced, let me know.
2) I endeavored for scientific accuracy in ALL aspects of my story, not just AI. So I ask that anybody who happens to be an 'expert' in ANY aspect of the story that gets it wrong speak up! Go "mythbusters" on any 'Hollywood science' that pops up.

Deus Modus: Book One - Conception
Book Two - Evolution: DEUS MODUS


message 2: by Gary (last edited Sep 30, 2026 12:37PM) (new)

Gary Martin After:
11 Years, 3 Continents, 10 Countries, 2 Title changes, five unique reviews, 250 handwritten pages, book one is now free indefinitely.

https://blackstonespecs.github.io/11t...
URL IS CAPS SENSITIVE

This is my debut novel. I am accepting low-star reviews w/explainers


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