[Beta Reader Wanted] Torlog: The Last Migration (Epic Fantasy) > Likes and Comments

Hello everyone!I'm TG Khan from Mongolia, and I am thrilled to share the very first chapter of my upcoming epic fantasy novel. I am currently looking for beta readers and initial feedback on the opening chapter.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1E...

Thank you so much for your time and feedback! I look forward to hearing your thoughts.

Hello,

Can you please share the word count of your book? And if possible a short blurb too?

And are you open to paid beta readers too?

Thanks!

The Last Migration makes me curious about what the journey means for the people making it. Are they leaving by choice, or because staying has become impossible? A little of that context would help readers approach the opening chapter.

Actually, the journey runs much deeper than a simple flight from danger. It represents humanity leaving behind all its past mistakes, its fallen ways, and every misstep ever made. They are making their final migration toward the ultimate truth—the natural order of the cosmos, where a flower can bloom without hindrance and the sun rises precisely on time.
The stars have migrated. The sun has migrated. The earth itself has migrated, and we are the ones left behind. This journey is their one and only path back to the fundamental harmony of existence.