Seeking Beta Readers for The Helios Project – Dark Fantasy Romance (90k words) > Likes and Comments

Glimpse into the Book:

They took her life. Now they want her soul.

When nurse Lilith Murphy is abducted and forced into a government experiment known as The Helios Project, her reality shatters. Everything she once believed is a lie. Now, the only truths that remain are gods rule, blood, and betrayal.

Marked by ancient power and thrown into the brutal Blood Games, survival means mastering abilities she never asked for and outwitting those who would see her destroyed.

As secrets unravel and fate binds her to a dangerous rival, Lilith must decide whether to fight for freedom—or embrace the darkness within.

About the Project:

Genre: Dark Fantasy / Dystopian Romance

Length: ~90,000 words (complete novel)

Tone: Emotional, survival-driven, and morally gray

Comparables: Red Queen, The Hunger Games, From Blood and Ash

\What I’m Looking For:
I’m seeking beta readers who enjoy dark, character-driven fantasy with romantic and psychological depth. I’d love feedback on pacing, world clarity, character emotion, and overall story flow.

If this sounds like your kind of read, I can provide a secure ARC link (PDF or EPUB).

hai
that would be great! im a bit of a slow reader so it might take me a while to finish but i can give good feedback :)
-alice

Hi,

I’d be happy to take a look for you!

Hi, I’d be happy to review your manuscript and provide detailed feedback on clarity, pacing, and reader engagement.

I enjoy working on dark, character-driven stories like this, and your project sounds really interesting.

Let me know if you’d like me to take a look.