RiedlerReads’s review of Artificial World Colony: The First Journey > Likes and Comments

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my book and share such a thoughtful and sincere review. As someone publishing their first novel, constructive feedback like yours is incredibly valuable, it helps guide my growth and shapes the direction of future books in the series.

Your observations about character names, digital memories, and narrative clarity highlight exactly the areas I plan to refine further. I’m working hard to offer a smoother, more coherent reading experience in the revised editions and upcoming installments.

I’m also truly encouraged by your positive take on the book’s core ideas, especially the way I’ve explored the interaction between humans and AI. It means a lot to know that this aspect resonated with you, and I’m excited to expand on it even more in the next books.

Thank you once again for your insight, support, and open-mindedness. I look forward to sharing more with you in the future!

Hi again RiedlerReads,

Just a quick follow-up to my previous message!

When I first published the Artificial World Colony series and read your review, I was working with very limited resources, but I always had long-term plans for this universe. Fortunately, I am now in a much better position to invest in the professional polish the series deserves.

Since you are a professional editor and already familiar with the story's core, I would love to discuss the possibility of working together for the editing process.

If you are still interested and available to provide professional support, please feel free to reach out to me directly at: orhanumut@gmail.com

Best,
Umut Orhan