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✦ autumn ✦ (to write is to breathe) ✧ Here ya go! lmk if you ever want to change the name


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} Poem about my crush 🥴
(Im horrible at poetry, dont mind meee)

I want you to love me
Maybe I’m just delusional
Maybe we could be
For me, this love is unusual
I’ve never seen it before
But here it is
In front of you and me


Sai.‧ ⊹°‧ 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 ·。⊹ that's actually really good!! i could never say so much in just a few lines


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} I want to write something kind of dark, with themes of [tw] suicide or death as a whole


✦ autumn ✦ (to write is to breathe) ✧ i love dark poems 🙃 go for it!


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} This one’s everywhere. I need some critique on this


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} To be Invisible

I’m so good at hiding my tears
I’m so good at hiding my cuts
I’m so good at hiding my fears

I’m so good at hiding the darkness under my eyes
So good at saying “I’m fine” and other lies
So good at comforting others with words i will never believe
So good at being someone nobody sees

To be invisible isn’t a hard task
All you must do
Is drink torture from a flask

Sometimes I wonder “could someone notice me?”
“The way my empty eyes bore into nothing?”
No, that couldn’t be

Not the invisible girl
A walking fire
A collapsing world


message 11: by Sonel (new)

Sonel Jami Relatable!! Love this ❤️🫂


✦ autumn ✦ (to write is to breathe) ✧ ugh i feel that…and i love the last line so much


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} Found this in my notes app-gonna try to turn this into a peom of sorts.

A walking fire, that no one seems to see flaming and smoking, heat burning the air. Not until a charred object lays in the pile of ash at the now extinguished site of the disaster. Then they see me.


✦ autumn ✦ (to write is to breathe) ✧ oooh that would make a great poem!!


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} The Moon is me

The moon hangs over the sky
As I start to question why
I question my existence
I question my persistence

Question why I am still here
Caged in my own mind
Shedding a single tear

I wonder if she can feel
If she has a heart of steel
Or if her glow is just a mask

The latter is most likely correct
For the most beautiful are the most vulnerable
Almost never perfect

She wishes she could one day be free
From the universe
From herself

After all,
The moon is me


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} Not my best work but…

The needle

Who knew
That the needle who sewed me
Made me bleed

Who knew
That the knife that cut my food
Stabbed me in the back

Who knew
That the one I thought loved me most
Hated me with all their heart

Who knew
That my own hands
Tortured my mind

Who knew
That the my own soul
Crumbled at my feet


✦ autumn ✦ (to write is to breathe) ✧ I LIKE ITTTT it’s one of those that make you think a lot


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} Someday

Someday I’ll be able to call someone home
Someday I’ll feel safe and warm
Someday I’ll be perfectly fine
No longer fighting with my own mind
Someday I’ll be a writer at work
Someday I’ll no longer have to lurk
Someday I can build my dreams
Make life better than it seems
Someday I’ll never look back
Someday I’ll cut myself some slack
Today is not that day
But one day
I’ll find my way


message 19: by Emerson Browning (new)

Emerson Browning Alina, this is fucking shitty


message 21: by Emerson Browning (new)

Emerson Browning What, you miss me? Its only been a week since school ended


Sai.‧ ⊹°‧ 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 ·。⊹ Emerson Browning wrote: "Alina, this is fucking shitty"

dude fuck off


message 24: by Emerson Browning (new)

Emerson Browning Wow. Great choice of friends huh.


message 26: by Emerson Browning (new)

Emerson Browning Mhmm


message 28: by Emerson Browning (new)

Emerson Browning Fine 🙄


Sai.‧ ⊹°‧ 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 ·。⊹ Emerson Browning wrote: "Fine 🙄"

dude who do you think you are?? leave alina alone


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} I know her irl at school. This is just her


Sai (glitchy aah site ver.) alright but that's not cool at all


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} Heheh

The Phoenix

I used to believe
That the fire in me
Was not a good thing

I used to believe
That the fire
Would char me into ashes

I used to believe that
I would never arise from the ashes
That i would die
Alone and burned

But i never knew
That my soul
My homage
Would rise from the ashes

Stronger than ever
Fiery feathers glowing
For all to see

I used to believe that
I would never make it out
But here I stand
A pheonix, through it all


✦ autumn ✦ (to write is to breathe) ✧ That’s beautiful potatoe, i love the metaphors 💙(and i’m trying to figure out how to ban people rn 😭😭 that’s not ok)


Sai (glitchy aah site ver.) omg i love that!! especially the repetition of the ashes


message 37: by Beyazit (new)

Beyazit Celik I loved you more than yourself —
even when you were nowhere to be found.

You drowned my fragile life
in the waters of your love.

And I,
until I fell,
kept running after you.


Sai.‧ ⊹°‧ 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 ·。⊹ relatable
i love the line breaks/spacings


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} Heartbreak

Every sunset holds a promise
But every sunrise makes it
Every leaf holds power
But every gust of wind takes it
Every person has stability
But life always shakes it
I’ll always have love
But he’ll always break it


jellyousfish (hiatus till thursday!) wow it’s so pretty! I love the flow of it too it’s so niceee


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} Under the morning dew
Sits a place for me and you
A sun risen anew
My heart, no longer laden with rue


potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} Js randomly flipping through a dictionary and did this lol (yes i flip through dictionaries for fun sometimes. Ik it’s nerdy but idc)


𝓢𝓾𝓷𝓫𝓮𝓪𝓶‧₊˚ ☽ ⋅ {COMMENT LIMIT} Lmao
I read a book once where the mmc was forced to read the entire dictionary by his father 😭


message 45: by Beyazit (new)

Beyazit Celik potatoe ⏾⋆.˚ [matchin’ w my big sis] {always the poet, never the poem} (goodbyes to my loves) wrote: "Heartbreak

Every sunset holds a promise
But every sunrise makes it
Every leaf holds power
But every gust of wind takes it
Every person has stability
But life always shakes it
I’ll always have l..."


The descriptions and examples are placed perfectly. It has become a simple, fluent, and enjoyable poem


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