Seth, thank you for your honest feedback. I have some good news for you! I updated the book. I took out the reference to sea animals and double checked animal facts.
You mentioned that the anxiety was shown before the text caught up. I did that to show the internal feelings building. Sometimes people mask their feelings some or part of the time. Here, Stephen was trying to manage his feelings before speaking about them.
You mentioned that the anxiety was shown before the text caught up. I did that to show the internal feelings building. Sometimes people mask their feelings some or part of the time. Here, Stephen was trying to manage his feelings before speaking about them.