⋆｡°✮ Lucy InTheSky ✮°｡⋆’s review of Hostile Territory: Straight to Gay MM Romance > Likes and Comments
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shame, this sounds like smth I would've loved.
@Kati - it's a decent, quick novella for when you don't know what to read, but at this point I'm thinking if they'd at least started in that bathroom and took it from there, if it were just smut it would've been much better. I also expected for Scott to be a bit more dominant based on their dialogues, but he wasn't.
So no, not as good.
I love this feedback so much thank you ^^
@D.J. Love - oh, well, sure! Anytime! 😄 👍
I would hold off my the next instalment of this series if I were you though Lucy, I'll see how I manage about putting your feedback into practice in later instalments. Thanks again for the feedback, really means a lot to me.
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Feb 20, 2025 09:03AM
shame, this sounds like smth I would've loved.
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@Kati - it's a decent, quick novella for when you don't know what to read, but at this point I'm thinking if they'd at least started in that bathroom and took it from there, if it were just smut it would've been much better. I also expected for Scott to be a bit more dominant based on their dialogues, but he wasn't. So no, not as good.
I love this feedback so much thank you ^^
@D.J. Love - oh, well, sure! Anytime! 😄 👍
I would hold off my the next instalment of this series if I were you though Lucy, I'll see how I manage about putting your feedback into practice in later instalments. Thanks again for the feedback, really means a lot to me.
