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The ending was contrived and poorly written. And of course you knew Uriah would die when he took Zeke's place in joining them -- telegraphing your plot points in such obvious ways is not good writing, either.
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Oct 29, 2013 01:01PM
The ending was contrived and poorly written. And of course you knew Uriah would die when he took Zeke's place in joining them -- telegraphing your plot points in such obvious ways is not good writing, either.
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