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Thanks for the reply David. It's an interesting observation that you made about enhancing and increasing the Fredo scenes in the book. He's an important character in the book and going through how he went through in Las Vegas would've been a better prospect for the book's endurance in the the world of Classic Literature.
For some time, I believed that certain sections should be ripped out with a "there, that's better," Thousands of words about an operation on a vagina and liberal sex in a Mafia book? Come on now.
Should some racist lines have been dumped also I ask you all?
that part could have been filled with indepth Moe Greene actions or Fredo learning the ropes in Vegas. I agree, that vagina operation part was so out of place and useless.
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Should some racist lines have been dumped also I ask you all?
