Mage's Burden (Fire of the Jidaan, #1)

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by Whit McClendon (Goodreads Author)

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My main problem with this book is that it reads like a first draft. Grammar and sentence structure makes the book difficult to read. Beneath the lack of editing is a classically structured fantasy book that begs to be edited and revised by someone who knows what they are doing because the author obviously doesn't. Therefore, did the author actually edit this book himself?

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