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The Captured Dead

It's been awhile since I posted anything, but here's a reason why I've gone, my short story "The Captured Dead" https://jymwrites.wordpress.com/2015/...

I started out to write an American Indian zombie story, but decided things would work out better just with ghosts. When I was writing it I kept Charles Dickens "A Christmas Carol" in mind.

I hope you enjoy the story and if you have feedback please feel free to leave a message!

Keep rocking!

Jim
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Published on June 13, 2015 17:33
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message 1: by Jim (new)
Jul 10, 2015 05:46AM

Jim Cherry Thanks for liking this Harry! I've finished the story, a bit different than this almost 1 month old version! I've asked an artist to create a cover for me, I want to put up as Amazon short.

Best!
JC


message 2: by Harry (new)
Jul 10, 2015 12:12PM

Harry Whitewolf I really enjoyed this Jim! Well done mate.


message 3: by Jim (new)
Jul 10, 2015 06:46PM

Jim Cherry Harry wrote: "I really enjoyed this Jim! Well done mate."

Great to hear Harry! I improved it, at least now I hope I did!

Jim


message 4: by Jason (new)
Jul 11, 2015 02:03PM

Jason I liked this too, an interesting take on zombies.


message 5: by Jim (new)
Jul 11, 2015 03:07PM

Jim Cherry Jason wrote: "I liked this too, an interesting take on zombies."

Thank you Jason! It did start out as a strictly zombie story, but was trying more of a ghost story, but some times a story doesn't follow the plan or the constraints the writer puts on it.

Thank you taking the time for reading it and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Best!
Jim


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