DC Evenfall II Excerpt

We got a bit behind on this week's excerpt; the holidays will do that, I suppose. Director's Cut Evenfall Vol II will be out end of this month, September 21. Don't forget to put in for the giveaways!

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And now, without further ado, I bring you a little bit of Jorge for your day.

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The boy stood behind Boyd. His arms were crossed as he peered down through black hair with just enough curl to fly everywhere. He was short and skinny with dirty, ragged clothing, and sandals that were falling apart at the sole. Boyd thought the kid was maybe nine years old, but the dark stare burning out of his face belonged to someone twice his age. Someone who had been through far too much for his lifespan.

"Perdón, pero no hablo español."

The kid's lip lifted on the edge. He gave Boyd a once-over. "American?"

"I can see that makes you real happy with me," Boyd said with a grin.

The kid scoffed and turned his attention to the street. His scrutiny didn't settle for long, but Boyd figured there was someone out there watching. Maybe another courier kid, maybe the person this kid was hired by, or maybe someone else.

"Why you watching me?"

"I didn't know I was. What's your name, kid?"

"Vete a la chingada."

"Your name is vete—"

"Whaddo you want?" The kid crouched in front of Boyd. "I don't like people watch me. You don't say me the truth, I cry and make you look bad. Say you grabbed me—" A sheen of tears swelled seemingly at will. "—down there."

"Oh, Jesus. Cut the waterworks, kid. What do you want?"

"I said. I want to know why watch me. Puta madre, escucha, pendejo."

"I was curious. Thought you might be in the market—"

The kid's glower turned cold in an instant. He shifted away, but Boyd grabbed him by the upper arm.

"Not for that. Jesus Christ, that's disgusting. I meant as an employee." Boyd threw his hands up when the kid's expression hardened further. "Nothing like that! Look, can we start over? My name's Reed. What's yours, for real?"
"What's to you?"

"I'd like to think of you by name instead of 'the kid' all over my head."

There was another long moment in which it seemed the kid might run off but then he straightened. "Not here. Give me pesos."

Boyd narrowed his eyes but pulled a bill from his pocket. Satisfied, the kid snatched it and turned away. Under his breath, he asked, "¿Sabes dónde queda Pío X?"

"Where it is? Yeah."

"El parque, no la calle."

The kid disappeared over a fence and around a building before Boyd could respond.
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Published on September 03, 2014 15:38
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message 1: by Ale (new)

Ale This made me laugh more than it should, I think. Probably because of the conversation we had over mail about my mom wondering who the hell I was talking to that needed to know how to "properly" curse in Spanish xD

I just downloaded the first part of the Director's cut version today. I'm really looking forward to it :)


message 2: by Ais (new)

Ais LOL I still love that all you had to say was it was for a writer and she was like "oh that's cool, then." Writer friend = free pass! Feel free to use me as an excuse any time you want to swear really eloquently XD

I get amused by Boyd repeating it like Jorge's named vete a la chingada XD Imagine him reporting back to Hsin later. "I met this guy Vete a la Chingada.." and Hsin being like WTF?


message 3: by Zoe (new)

Zoe Do you know how hard it is for me Not to read these excerpts? You're testing my self control to it's limits here....


message 4: by Ais (new)

Ais Sorry :( :( We're so mean to you, Zoe!


message 5: by Zoe (new)

Zoe I know!


message 6: by Ale (new)

Ale Ais wrote: "LOL I still love that all you had to say was it was for a writer and she was like "oh that's cool, then." Writer friend = free pass! Feel free to use me as an excuse any time you want to swear real..."

Oh, god. Now it's stuck in my brain, Boyd saying "Oh, hey, I met this kid called Vete a la Chingada." And Hsin would be like... "I'm so done with you." End of book xD

xD You're my free cursing pass now! Awesome~


message 7: by Ais (new)

Ais Zoe -- you'll be tested a couple more times before the release but you're getting close now at least!

Ale -- lollll Jorge could've totally fucked with Boyd, too. Boyd comes back and is like, "I learned from Vete a la Chingada that the most appropriate way to introduce yourself to someone in Monterrey is by saying 'pinche joto, qué pedo, cabrón?'"


message 8: by Ale (new)

Ale Ais wrote: lollll Jorge could've totally fucked with Boyd, too. Boyd comes back and is like, "I learned from Vete a la Chingada that the most appropriate way to introduce yourself to someone in Monterrey is by saying 'pinche joto, qué pedo, cabrón?'"

Crack-fics. I see tons of them in the future.


message 9: by Zoe (new)

Zoe If only I could transfer my newly exercised powers of self control to situations involving chocolate..


message 10: by Ale (new)

Ale Zoe ~ Is incognito wrote: "If only I could transfer my newly exercised powers of self control to situations involving chocolate.."

If it works, would you tell me how? xD


message 11: by Zoe (new)

Zoe Of course Ale :D


message 12: by Gaby (new)

Gaby I needed my ICoS dose... I already want it to be that glorious day when I get to download and read :D


message 13: by Ais (new)

Ais At least it's coming up soon-- only a few more weeks, Gaby! :)

Zoe-- haha I must have a subconscious urge to torture you because I saw you mention chocolate and my immediate thought was, "I've really gotten into chocolate again lately after not having any at home for a while. I should take pictures of the fancy chocolate I have and show Zoe!" haha not even meaning it to be mean but it would be, so no worries, I will not do that ;)


message 14: by Zoe (new)

Zoe Ais wrote: "At least it's coming up soon-- only a few more weeks, Gaby! :)

Zoe-- haha I must have a subconscious urge to torture you because I saw you mention chocolate and my immediate thought was, "I've rea..."


Lol haha it's ok Ais, I would love to see your fancy chocolates :p


message 15: by Ais (new)

Ais Ugh I just posted and it didn't seem to work? I can't figure out how to direct link an instagram pic... sorry :( Here's the link though, latest pic: http://instagram.com/aisness


message 16: by Zoe (new)

Zoe Curry flavoured chocolate???? What is this madness??


message 17: by Ais (new)

Ais right?? also it has pink himilayan sea salt on it which is one of my favorite salts. It actually tastes a little sweeter than I expected but it's still pretty good. I got it at World Market-- sadly it looks like it's currently not available online but maybe you can find something similar elsewhere?

btw I forgot to say but that other colorful piece of chocolate has freeze-dried strawberries and crystallized violet petals on it.


message 18: by Neolavender123 (last edited Sep 07, 2014 09:29AM) (new)

Neolavender123 Lol Boyd and that kid was so damn cute XD I can't remember which part this is, though. Urgh, definitely need Evenfall DC part 2 to refresh iCoS memory...
Also, this excerpt really made me wonder what will happen if Sin & Boyd adopted & raised a kid together as a family ._.

.........the cuteness level of the idea is definitely limitless.

Damn, I need iCoS fangirl supply immediately. Fanfic, extra story, fanart, parody, doujinshi, ANYTHING! :'(


message 19: by Ais (new)

Ais Annisa-- I'm really glad you're enjoying it! I always liked Jorge, and we got to get more of him in the DC volume 2 so that made me happy.

haha it's funny you mention the idea of them having a kid, because people were talking about that over on the Q&A thread too. (By the way, if you haven't already, you should go over to https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/... and leave a question if you have any, because then you could be put into a drawing to try to win an ICoS merchandise prize. All you have to do is ask a question there.)


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