I gots to have feeback!!!

Please anyone who has read my novel Bright, please be truthful and tell me if you didn't like some things about it, pace, character development, etc. I've read it and liked it, but I really respect feedback from readers. How is it different from Crush? What does Crush give readers what Bright possibly doesn't, and what improvements can be made? Sincere thanks and hugs!!!


Note: I can't remove cheating content...it's part of the story and what makes the characters who they are...sorry LOL