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Sep 25, 2013 09:04AM


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It's now properly edited. I maintained medias res in the beginning and cleaned up the ending chapters returning to medias res. I've added approximately 1K words delving more into Nico's feelings, Caleb's distress when Nico was grounded for a month, and cleaned up a few continuity issues, but the story remains the same.
Saturday a.m party for Deeze!