Let's Go Denver!!
Clearly Jet has a way with words:
He rocked back on the heels of his boots and spikes in his ears made him look extra devilish. A half grin twisted up his mouth and it was easy to see why girls all across town were so in lust with him. “To be honest I want to have sex with you, lots and lots of sex.”
I felt my eyes pop open wide and my mouth fall open. I guess there was something to be said for honestly but I hadn't been expecting that.
“I also want to know what you’re thinking about when your eyes go from gold to bronze and why your accent gets thicker when you get upset. I want to teach about music and show you that you’re missing out just listening to that crap on the radio. I want you to come to shows and let me finish what I started in the bathroom. I want you to smile at me, just me so that I know you’re thinking something really naughty and really dirty and oh so good and maybe if we can get that far I want to take you to meet my mom so maybe she can see what a woman that can take care of herself looks like. Maybe she can see that even though that piece of shit raised me I learned how to be an okay human being all on my own because you’re willing to give me a shot. I don’t know Ayden, I want anything you’re willing to give me because right now I’m falling apart and I think you are the only that can put me back together.”
He rocked back on the heels of his boots and spikes in his ears made him look extra devilish. A half grin twisted up his mouth and it was easy to see why girls all across town were so in lust with him. “To be honest I want to have sex with you, lots and lots of sex.”
I felt my eyes pop open wide and my mouth fall open. I guess there was something to be said for honestly but I hadn't been expecting that.
“I also want to know what you’re thinking about when your eyes go from gold to bronze and why your accent gets thicker when you get upset. I want to teach about music and show you that you’re missing out just listening to that crap on the radio. I want you to come to shows and let me finish what I started in the bathroom. I want you to smile at me, just me so that I know you’re thinking something really naughty and really dirty and oh so good and maybe if we can get that far I want to take you to meet my mom so maybe she can see what a woman that can take care of herself looks like. Maybe she can see that even though that piece of shit raised me I learned how to be an okay human being all on my own because you’re willing to give me a shot. I don’t know Ayden, I want anything you’re willing to give me because right now I’m falling apart and I think you are the only that can put me back together.”
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Jan 12, 2013 08:58AM
Love it. I can't wait. Rule was such a great story can't wait for this one too.
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Wow!!! Cannot wait!!! Can we say HOT!!
Amazing story, so different from what you typically see in ebooks! I look the bad boy persona you gave Rule and all the football references, I myself have a love of the game though I am a huge Greenbay Packers fan (go pack go!) I am so excited about the next book in hopefully the series and hope to see more from these characters possibly Rome as well as Nash's possible romance?! Keep doing what you're doing because its working! Do you have any idea when Jet will be out?
Allison wrote: "Amazing story, so different from what you typically see in ebooks! I look the bad boy persona you gave Rule and all the football references, I myself have a love of the game though I am a huge Gree..."Right now I'm saying May, but since I am learning that I have to be more responsible with editing and proof reading it might be longer so we'll have to see. When I have a firm date I'll post it up. :) Thanks for the lovely feedback!!!
there are two errors in this blurb alone. I seriously don't get it. You are so talented. Proofread!"I want to teach YOU about music"
"I’m falling apart and I think you are the only THING that can put me back together.”
Nancy wrote: "there are two errors in this blurb alone. I seriously don't get it. You are so talented. Proofread!"I want to teach YOU about music"
"I’m falling apart and I think you are the only THING that ca..."
I wrote it at 1 am in a bar while I was waiting for my guys to get last call squared away. I figured it was better to just hit send and get it out there before I lost the time. Proofreading is NOT my strong suit, as I'm sure you have seen but I am also of the mind it's better to do it at all, even if it's flawed than not do it at all, which is what I had always done before. Thanks for pointing out the errors I think I fixed them all up and Rule is out at a real editor getting all cleaned up as we speak.
That is great to hear! I really don't mean to criticize and I wouldn't care at all actually if I didn't LOVE your story. ;)And I really want to read the next one!
Nancy wrote: "That is great to hear! I really don't mean to criticize and I wouldn't care at all actually if I didn't LOVE your story. ;)And I really want to read the next one!"
:) I promise Jet will have a professional set of eyes get to him before he comes into the world.
Love it... Don't fret about the errors... your fans love you not matter what!!.. can't wait to read it...
Shannon wrote: "Love it... Don't fret about the errors... your fans love you not matter what!!.. can't wait to read it..."Thanks doll...I need to hear that every now and then :)
Love! Can't wait for Jet's whole story!
Gah! How did I not see this tease earlier?! I'm soooo excited about this book :)
I'm hoping Rome and Nash get books too. I loved loved Rule. I seriously want to read it again.
