Monster: A Short Story

Hi, everyone! I have now published another short story. Like my previous one, Live Well, this story belongs into the horror/thriller genre, and it is somewhat open-ended. It is not written in three-sentence increments like Live Well, so the narrative should flow a bit more. Still, feel free to give feedback on this! Horror is normally not my genre (which is why I only write short stories instead of entire books about it).

You can read my story in my blog here:
https://lucylcarter.wixsite.com/websi...

Happy reading!
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Published on July 15, 2023 17:12
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message 1: by Toney (new)

Toney Baus First, I think this falls into the "flash fiction" category, which I would never try. I need more of a runway to take off.

It was a fun read, but . . .

** spoiler alert **

I saw it coming.


message 2: by Lucy (new)

Lucy Carter Toney wrote: "First, I think this falls into the "flash fiction" category, which I would never try. I need more of a runway to take off.

It was a fun read, but . . .

** spoiler alert **

I saw it coming."


Thanks for the feedback, Toney!

I've heard of the term "flash fiction" before, but I did not know that was what I was actually writing lol.

Horror/thriller stories are probably an area for improvement for me.

Interesting thoughts! Very much appreciated. 👍


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