Annoying Names in Novels


When authors try to be clever it annoys me to no end.
I would rather my readers spend their time immersed in my stories than looking for hidden meaning in the names or locations, so I was floored when one of my readers pointed out one time that the name Sevren (a villain who first appears in The Pawn) is Nerves spelled backward.
Man, I hadn't noticed that, and I never would have used the name if I had.
Why? Because when readers see that, they'll naturally start looking for more of the same and that would get in the way of their engagement with the story.
I've seen authors use Angela to represent—guess what?—an angelic, good character, my, how unobtrusive that is. Or Diablo as the name for a character who . . .  well, you get it.
Yes, I know, Natasha spelled backward is "Ah, Satan" and could be your devil worshipping character, but please don't fall into that trap.
Yes, you could use the name "Marie Annette" for a character who's being used as a puppet.  The name looks okay on the page, but say it aloud and you'll notice that it sounds the same as "marionette." As soon as readers notice this, what do you think they'll naturally do?
Yes, of course, they'll start analyzing every name, every location, to see what you, the clever author, are using them to represent. And when that happens readers are no longer in the story itself, but looking at it from the outside in and you've shot yourself in the foot. 
Why do this to yourself? 
Just use normal names. 
Don't let anything get in the way of the story.
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Published on February 13, 2012 08:16
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message 1: by Paula (new)

Paula Millhouse Wow, never would have thought about that while I was reading The Pawn. I was too busy flipping pages to analyze, and Sevren scared the daylights out of me (shudder).
I do like Scrivener's name generator. I use that tool to reflect my character's cultural heritage.


message 2: by Marjolein (new)

Marjolein Haha, wow. No, I would've never known that Sevren is spelled Nerves backwards. And why do we even look at stuff like that? It's not important at all. A book is about a story, about the characters, not about their names... I think you're totally right. Names (or anything else) shouldn't get in the way of the story! :)


message 3: by Janelllcarlson (new)

Janelllcarlson Like lien-hua?!?


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