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June 16, 2011
SUPER ZERO by Rhonda Stapleton
I have to admit, I'm kind of totally in love with this book. It's a treat of a book that kept me hooked from page one. It reminded me of a cross between THE INCREDIBLES and JANET EVANOVICH, and featured a main character who was fun and sympathetic and witty and just kind of all-around awesome.
SUPER ZERO by Rhonda Stapleton

Aside from the main character, let's talk about the romance. In SUPER ZERO, it sizzled. The male lead, Vigilante, is described in a way which will make every single reader want to become his sidekick (and more). Man, I want to be part of this super hero world. Rhonda Stapleton blends the world of superheros in with our society in a way that is believable yet exciting.
Also, I have to point out, this is an adult book, not a young adult. It's noteworthy because (1) I mostly read young adult, and (2) Rhonda Stapleton has published young adults novels also including STUPID CUPID (Simon Pulse, December 2009).
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED for older teens and adults who love action, adventure, and romance!
And the best part is that it's a $2.99 ebook and totally worth every bit of it and more!
Source of book: Purchased
From Amazon:
Working for superheroes isn't all it's cracked up to be...
When Jenna's superhero boss The Machine gives her the opportunity to safeguard the changing crystal (a jewel that grants, changes or removes superpowers) she jumps at the chance, eager to do this so-called "cake" job and earn street cred with the Midwest League of Superheroes. To help her mission, the League assigns her a partner, the mysterious and super-sexy Vigilante. Too bad he's also super-grouchy--what a tragic waste of hotness.
Soon, Jenna learns the threat to the changing crystal is all too real, and her list of trustworthy people grows shorter by the minute. But when she discovers something even more sinister afoot, involving Vigilante's sexy arch nemesis Dementrix, it'll take all her skills to keep the mad villainess from executing her plan to unmask and decommission the world's superheroes...especially when Jenna accidentally becomes one herself.
June 15, 2011
TRADING CARDS HIDDEN VIDEO
Thank you all so much for all the SOLSTICE support! I mentioned I have awesome trading cards for the book, and each trading card has a QR code to a bonus extra for SOLSTICE. You can request these on the trading card page, and I'm handing them out at author events I do, also.
After each extra has been hidden for a while, I'm going to make it public, so today I give you a bonus vlog I made for SOLSTICE. It's five ways to survive global warming.
Enjoy!
June 14, 2011
TRADING CARD TUESDAY
Hey, everyone! Happy Tuesday! Just wanted to let you know if you request a trading card for SOLSTICE today, I'll send you the whole set!

So what are you waiting for? It's easy :)
REQUEST HERE!
June 12, 2011
FORGIVEN and FAITHFUL by Janet Fox Giveaway!
In case you guys don't know Janet Fox, she's smart and savvy and is also a fantastic author! Janet was kind enough to feature me and SOLSTICE on her blog this week. (You can read the whole interview here.) And so in celebration, I am giving away BOTH of Janet's fabulous books (which have some amazing covers, btw)!
FORGIVEN by Janet Fox (Speak/Penguin, June 2, 2011) (ARC)

FAITHFUL by Janet Fox (Speak/Penguin, May 13, 2010) (Paperback)

Check out this beautiful trailer for FAITHFUL!
From Amazon (for FORGIVEN):
Kula Baker never expected to find herself on the streets of San Francisco, alone but for a letter of introduction. Though she has come to the city to save her father from a cruel fate, Kula soon finds herself swept up in a world of art and elegance - a world she hardly dared dream of back in Montana, where she was no more than the daughter of an outlaw. And then there is the handsome David Wong, whose smiling eyes and soft-spoken manner have an uncanny way of breaking through Kula's carefully crafted reserve. Yet when disaster strikes and the wreckage threatens all she holds dear, Kula realizes that only by unlocking her heart can she begin to carve a new future for herself.
From Amazon (for FAITHFUL):
Sixteen-year-old Maggie Bennet's life is in tatters. Her mother has disappeared, and is presumed dead. The next thing she knows, her father has dragged Maggie away from their elegant Newport home, off on some mad excursion to Yellowstone in Montana. Torn from the only life she's ever known, away from her friends, from society, and verging on no prospects, Maggie is furious and devastated by her father's betrayal. But when she arrives, she finds herself drawn to the frustratingly stubborn, handsome Tom Rowland, the son of a park geologist, and to the wild romantic beauty of Yellowstone itself. And as Tom and the promise of freedom capture Maggie's heart, Maggie is forced to choose between who she is and who she wants to be.
Source of book: From publisher at conferences
For your chance to win this book, all you need to do is:
1) Follow this blog
2) Comment on this blog post
For extra entries...Do something for SOLSTICE to make me happy.
Tweet about it. Blog about it.Join the Facebook group.Add it on Goodreads.I'm not picky. Just let me know, and you get extra entries!
And make sure you leave me a way to get in contact with you when you win!
The contest will run through midnight on Friday, June 24, 2011!
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Don't forget I'm also giving away:
WILDEFIRE by Karsten Knight (Simon & Schuster, July 26, 2011)
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June 10, 2011
Writing from the Place: TEN REASONS TO WRITE OUTSIDE
It seems that as writers we spend lots of time inside, hunched over in front of a computer, sucking in the air conditioning. It's lonely inside. It's dark. It's recycled air.
We here at THE PLACE (being Me, K. A. Holt, Jessica Lee Anderson, E. Kristin Anderson, Madeline Smoot, Mari Mancusi, Stephanie Pellegrin, Kayla Olson, and new members Bethany Hegedus & Jenny Moss) want to offer an alternative. See we've started something new. THE PLACE has indoor seating, and THE PLACE has outdoor seating.
We give you:
TEN REASONS TO WRITE OUTSIDE
1) Sunshine cures rejection depression.
Proven fact.
Writing with friends cures rejection depression, too.
Proven fact.

2) The smell of cigarette smokes brings out your inner Hemingway.
And if it gets to be too much, you can play musical chairs.

3) The dogs roaming around the place make you laugh.
Not to mention you can pick them up and get a quick snuggle.
4) The more overheard conversations, the better your dialogue will be.
And trust us when we tell you THE PLACE is filled with interesting conversations. It defines "Keep Austin Weird."

5) Crazy artwork provides new story ideas.
So do decapitated statues and fountains of boys peeing. This all goes into the ambiance category.
6) Two for one - getting a tan and getting word count done
But do remember your sunscreen if you plan to sit in direct sunlight.
Direct sunlight helps keep the vampires away.
7) Having table service encourages Butt-in-chair writing.
Yes, table service. Outside you get waited on!

8) Exercise provided by chasing papers blowing in wind.
Also by walking the further distance to the bathrooms. It's all good.
9) PJ Hoover will buy you a cookie if it rains
This isn't really true, but it's something I had to convince E. Kristin Anderson of before she would come outside. Maybe I'll make cookies next time and bring them.
10) Writing outside allows more people to fit in the writing group.
There are no confining walls. There is freedom to sit other places besides booths and chairs.

So what are you waiting for? Grab your computer, paper, or notebook and head outside!
June 8, 2011
WIN A SIGNED COPY OF HAUNTED by JOY PREBLE
Joy Preble, who is an amazing, fantastic, generous author is featuring my main character PIPER on her blog today. But it's so cool because Joy's main character ANNE from DREAMING ANASTASIA is interviewing PIPER from SOLSTICE. And best of all...
Joy is offering up a signed copy of the sequel to DREAMING ANASTASIA
HAUNTED by Joy Preble (Sourcebooks, Feb. 2011)

For your chance to win, head over and check it out!
Check out the fantastic book trailer for HAUNTED, too!
Hope your week is great!
June 7, 2011
SOLSTICE and Indie Publishing: 1 Month Retrospective
So it's been one month since the release of my YA ebook, SOLSTICE. Yay! I've been overwhelmed by all the positive feedback I've received. Thank you so much to everyone who's read SOLSTICE, expressed interest, or in some way supported it. SOLSTICE and I really appreciate it :)
Since the release of SOLSTICE was announced, I've had lots of authors (traditionally pubbed, self-pubbed, pre-pubbed) contact me to ask about my decision to publish independently and to ask how my agency is involved, so I thought it would be worthwhile to take a few minutes and share how my last month has been. And let me preface by saying SOLSTICE is not my first book. I have a middle-grade fantasy trilogy out from a small publisher. So, though small, I have gone the traditional route, too.
First the pros. What good has come out of the independent release of SOLSTICE?
1) Foremost, SOLSTICE is out in the world and people are reading it. With the huge upswing in mythology books, I have to admit that a small part of me died each time I saw a new deal announced or a new book coming out on YA mythology. I came achingly close to selling an earlier version of SOLSTICE a year ago, and when it fell through, it crushed me. But I revised and made SOLSTICE so much better. But it's time was now. Comparable titles for SOLSTICE are ABANDON, STARCROSSED, and THE GODDESS TEST, all of which are releases within the last month—not a year and a half from now. As authors we all know the pain of pouring our soul into something only to see a deal in Publisher's Weekly for something so close to our story it hurts. I no longer have to suffer that pain with SOLSTICE. If I had waited, I'd risk having that mythology craze diminish and having SOLSTICE be an afterthought. Not what I wanted for something I've worked so hard on.
2) With the market shifting digitally so quickly, I've had the huge advantage of learning about this new ebook market. And it's fun. And exciting.
3) The low price of the SOLSTICE ebook makes it accessible to so many teens and readers. Teens hear about SOLSTICE and they are pumped. And when I mention the price point, they get even more excited. I've gone from selling middle grade hardcovers from a small press for $16.95 each to selling a YA ebook for $2.99. Price matters.
4) SOLSTICE is currently an ebook. But since I am working with my agency, I have the opportunity for foreign sales and rights. Not to mention it will be coming out in paper very soon.
5) New speaking opportunities have opened up as a result of taking the ebook route. For example, I'll be featured at our Austin SCBWI Digital ePublishing Symposium this fall, and I'll also be on two panels at this weekends Writer's League of Texas conference.
6) My agent makes me feel like a rock star. Seriously, she has been beyond supportive and excited about the entire process. I love that.
7) I have been blessed with friends who have given me and SOLSTICE amazing support. Like over the top. It seriously makes me tear up when I see how supporting people can be. I love you all!
Okay, with pros, there are always cons. Have there been cons with bringing SOLSTICE out independently as an ebook? Sure.
1) Out with it first…There is a huge stigma associated with self publishing. People may claim they don't have this bias or may come up with reasons for their bias, but many readers allow the traditional publishing industry to tell them what to read and never venture outside of that circle. In my one-month experience, I've seen bias in the form of email responses (and non-responses), condescension, and reluctance to blurb. Am I cool with this? Totally. The stigma exists. But it is changing, and in the future, it will go away.
2) Hitting the library and bookstore market with an ebook is not quite in place yet. Does this mean that library conferences are not useful? No way. Librarians are still amazing advocates and love to read. So I'll continue to do what I can in this market.
3) People who don't read ebooks are reluctant to give ebooks a chance. They claim they love the feel of books in their hands, and I respect this. I used to be this person. I'm not now, and more and more I want to shift to ebooks. Ebooks are convenient to buy. Reading on an ereader is way more comfortable. I'm saving the environment. Sure, I still love owning "real" books, but I think, for me, this is more materialism than anything else.
4) A self-published ebook is not eligible for many awards, state lists, and reviews. There are strict rules in place for this much of the time. So what's a girl to do? Look for other marketing avenues and research what awards and reviews are a possibility. And write the next book.
Also, I want to state something I do not see as a con. In my current arrangement for SOLSTICE, Andrea Brown Literary Agency receives 15% of the royalties. Have they earned this? Heck, yes. SOLSTICE has been edited numerous times and not just by me. I've had the benefit of having some amazing pairs of eyes on it, and they have really helped shape it into a story I am so proud of. Not to mention they've taken care of all the effort of making SOLSTICE a real book. I absolutely could have learned this on my own, but I didn't have to. And I don't regret that one bit.
Based on emails and Twitter DMs and Facebook messages and what I've read on the Verla Kay Blueboards, there are many authors considering this ebook route. There are many that have already done so. Am I happy to be a pioneer in the movement? Absolutely!
Questions? Ask away!
THE FOX INHERITANCE by Mary Pearson
The best thing about getting ARCs at library conferences is picking up a gem and having no idea you were doing it at the time. You feel like you've won the book lottery. And it's even better when the book rocks. That's how I felt a few years ago when I picked up THE ADORATION OF JENNA FOX by Mary Pearson (Henry Holt, 2008). The book was a perfect mix of science fiction (light sci-fi, mind you), character development and mystery.
The next best thing about getting ARCs at library conferences is going with a specific book in mind you are really looking forward to and getting it. Enter...
THE FOX INHERITANCE (The Jenna Fox Chronicles) by Mary Pearson (Henry Holt, August 30, 2011)

First, I was psyched when I saw there would be a sequel to JENNA FOX. I admit I was a bit dubious at first that the sequel would not live up to the level set by the first book. So let me get that out of the way right off the bat. THE FOX INHERITANCE I dare say is better that the first book. I personally enjoyed it more.
I think what makes this sequel work so well is how
It has new characters that we love (and they are actually the main characters of the story)It is set so far in the future that what happened in the past is not hardly relevant. It is a standalone story and works perfectly as one. Well-thought-out World Building. I love this world 200+ years in the future.
THE FOX INHERITANCE is highly recommended for fans of THE INHERITANCE OF JENNA FOX and I believe would even work well for those who have not read the first book.
And for catch up, here is the book trailer for THE ADORATION OF JENNA FOX.
Source of book: From publisher at TLA
June 5, 2011
Interview with LARA PERKINS, Publishing Manager for LAURA RENNERT

Lara Perkins works with my agent Laura Rennert at the Andrea Brown Literary Agency as her publishing manager. Prior to that, Lara was Laura's assistant. (I know...the Lara/Laura thing can be confusing). Anyway...Lara's help editing SOLSTICE was priceless and really helped shape it into so much more that I could have ever imagined.
So anyway, I asked Lara Perkins some questions, and she was kind enough to take time out of her (very busy) day to answer them.
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PJH: So your title is "Publishing Manager for Laura Rennert." What does this mean and what does this involve?
LP: I'm delighted that this is your first question, Tricia, because I'm very excited about my new role with Laura. As Laura's Publishing Manager, I work closely with Laura as a part of her business, and my work combines some of the duties of an editor/agent with those of a business manager. On the editorial side, I work directly with Laura's very talented authors (like the brilliant author of SOLSTICE, for example!) to develop their manuscripts and story ideas. I also evaluate potential clients' work, make recommendations for representation, and draft pitch letters to editors. On the business side, I manage many of the financial and administrative aspects of Laura's business.
But one of the most exciting parts of this job, and something that's very relevant to SOLSTICE, is that I also help authors publish their works digitally and independently. In this capacity, I work with the author on the final line edit of the manuscript and then coordinate copyediting, cover art, and formatting. I put together the front and back matter and the jacket copy, and then I upload the book for the author, make it available for sale across all platforms, and troubleshoot any issues that arise. Once the book is on sale, I help the author track sales and marketing efforts. I've always been passionate about editorial work, but helping authors publish their works digitally has been an amazing experience--and tremendous fun!
PJH: What are the plans for more titles coming out the same way as SOLSTICE?
LP: There will be more titles forthcoming, as some other ABLA authors have also made the choice to independently publish projects with ABLA's help. ABLA's goal is to help its authors independently publish very high quality works that are indistinguishable from traditionally published books in terms of the content and the whole package (cover, formatting, copyediting, etc.). The process is both labor and cost-intensive, so ABLA is beginning with just a few authors and projects, and it will grow from there. But you are the trailblazer! The first ABLA author to independently publish a frontlist title with the agency's help.
PJH: What changes do you foresee in publishing in the next year?
LP: What's happening in publishing now is very exciting, and authors, agents, and publishers all have some fantastic new opportunities. Authors in particular have been empowered by these new changes, and all authors, published or unpublished, should pay close attention to the changes happening in the industry because these changes have a direct bearing on what will happen to to their work in both the short and the long term. That's been one of the great things about working with an ABLA agent; ABLA is doing more than almost any other agency to adapt to the new realities of publishing and to focus on the long-term upside for their authors.
As the publication of SOLSTICE indicates, there's been a shift in just the last few months towards embracing these new opportunities. We've seen bestselling authors turning down big traditional deals to explore new publishing models, traditional publishers launching promising new online platforms, and new agency models that embrace independent/digital publishing as well as traditional publishing. I think that we'll see even more of this in the next year. Given the speed at which these changes are taking place, I think that in the next year or two, the dust will settle, and everyone will have a clearer sense of the industry's new landscape.
PJH: Having edited manuscripts, what advice would you give authors looking for representation?
LP: Most writers already know how important the first few pages of a manuscript are, and I'll reiterate that. Your query letter is very important, of course; an agent needs to know that your idea is unique and commercial enough to sell, and how you communicate your book's premise tells an agent a lot about your skill with pacing and your sense of story. But, in many ways, your writing sample is the most important part of your query--the make it or break it part. A killer query letter with a weak writing sample is a much bigger problem than a weak query letter with a killer writing sample. So let's say you've already made sure that your first chapter showcases your writerly skill and your individual voice. You've made sure that your pages are clean and that they've been vetted by at least 3 trusted readers. Is there anything else to look for before sending out your writing sample?
I think there is. In my experience, great first chapters--the ones that make an agent or editor sit up and take notice--are those that strike a balance between the unfamiliar and the familiar. I know that sounds a bit vague, so I'll explain. A writer needs to hook his or her reader in the first few pages by giving the reader a compelling reason to keep turning the pages--some kind of mystery or puzzle or unresolved tension that points forward to the rest of the book. This is true across the board, regardless of genre and age group. (Even self-help books follow this pattern, destabilizing your expectations in the first chapter--"I ate cookies all day and still lost 100 pounds!"--so that you'll want to read on and solve the mystery of how that's possible.) So in your first few pages, you want to (productively) destabilize your reader and engage his or her curiosity. In short, you want to give your reader something unfamiliar.
But your reader also needs a way into the story, a foothold in your world. This means that your reader needs someone to identify with, or a familiar emotion or situation, so that he or she has a reason to invest emotionally in your story and to believe in the world you're creating. So your reader also needs to recognize something familiar in your world and/or in your characters.
If the whole first chapter is unfamiliar, your reader has no way in to the story. If it's all familiar, your reader has no reason to keep reading. So you need to strike that balance right off the bat, and it can be a real challenge. I've seen many first chapters that have one but not the other, and it's almost always a problem.
Now, getting all of that into the first chapter can be a real challenge, but it's worth it. Because the truth is that when your book hits the shelves, a potential reader may not give you much more than the first chapter before he or she decides whether or not to buy your book anyway. Even with ebooks, a potential buyer can sample the beginning of the book before purchasing it. In short, those first pages will be your first impression to your reader at every stage.
The rest of the ms has to hold up too, of course, so before you query, make sure that your whole manuscript is as strong as you can get it. If you think that there may still be problems in your manuscript, there probably are, and you don't want to miss a chance at your dream agent because of flaws you could have fixed. Even agents who enjoy working editorially have limited bandwidths, and if it seems like a work needs a great deal of editorial work, they will be more hesitant to take it on, even if it is very strong in other ways.
A final note: make sure that you query agents whose literary interests and prior sales match up with your work's category. For example, querying an agent who specializes in commercial thrillers, and who has never sold an autobiography, in the hopes that he or she will represent your quiet, literary autobiography probably won't result in a request, even if your work is strong. The agent won't hold it against you, but why query that agent when there are agents out there who have actually sold similar titles? Who would be excited to read "literary autobiography" in a query letter? Unless you have a definite reason to believe that your work will be an exception, focus on querying agents who have successfully sold similar titles or who have said that they're looking to take on works in that genre.
PJH: Thank you so much, Lara! I'm so happy I am able to work with you!