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December 29, 2017

December 22, 2017

An Honest Attempt at Speaking the Absence

The Abridged History of RainfallThe Abridged History of Rainfall by Jay Hopler

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


Jay Hopler’s “The Abridged History of Rainfall” is a collection of good poetry: many fine lines and phrases, imagery that is true and right. Many of the poems have a clear voice that is one we want to listen to. Others play with archaic voices or the stylized voice of Wallace Stevens. Sometimes the poet seems to undermine his own poetic eloquence:


“A squadron of dragonflies is darning the darkening/yard” is a fine line, but the poet then says:


“Correction: a squadron of dragonflies is darning the air above the darkening/Yard” —- not as strong an image or conceit.


Given that these are poems mourning the loss of his father, some seem a bit precious and others a bit cold. Hopler is at his most eloquent in simplicity, as in lEpitaph”:


I cannot tell you

How many years I have done

This.


Last year when I did this,

My father was alive.l


Still and all, I recommend the collection. It is honest more than effete, precise more than ironic. How do you effectively speak the absence. “Abridged” is a game attempt.


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Published on December 22, 2017 13:38

December 19, 2017

Aji Magazine will publish my poem “Anchises” in their spring 2018 issue.

Aji Magazine will publish my poem “Anchises” in their spring 2018 issue.

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Published on December 19, 2017 16:39

December 18, 2017

The Piedmont Virginian magazine will publish 3 of my poems in their next issue

The Piedmont Virginian magazine will publish 3 of my poems in their next issue. My thanks to Editor Pam Kamphuis for supporting local artists and writers.

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Published on December 18, 2017 08:15

December 16, 2017

December 15, 2017

Temenos will publish my poems “Rite” and “Diogenes in the Rain” in upcoming online and print editions.

Temenos will publish my poems “Rite” and “Diogenes in the Rain” in upcoming online and print editions.

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Published on December 15, 2017 16:46

My poem “Eloquence” has been published online by the Summerset Review

My poem “Eloquence” has been published online by the Summerset Review. This is the fourth poem of mine they have published.

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Published on December 15, 2017 05:35

November 30, 2017

Two of my poems will be published in issue 3 of GFT Press’s journal, One in Four

Two of my poems will be published in issue 3 of GFT Press’s journal, One in Four, at the invitation of and selection by Editor-in-Chief, Jack Daniel Miles. “Blood Cries the Earth” and “Squatting in Sunlight” will appear as a staff contribution.

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Published on November 30, 2017 10:01

November 29, 2017

My poem “The Exile is His Diary” is now live online at The Sea Letter.

My poem “The Exile is His Diary” is now live online at The Sea Letter. Thank you Leo Gonzalez, Editor.

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Published on November 29, 2017 07:01

November 22, 2017