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July 4, 2014
Amazon, Hachette, Publishing, Etc — It’s Not a Football Game, People
Amazon, Hachette, Publishing, Etc — It’s Not a Football Game, People.
Scalzi has some good, reasonable takes on this, though I tend to disagree that Hachette is in the right here, nor that all the delays are Amazon’s doing. Though I might feel differently if I were a Hachette author.


June 29, 2014
The Last Ship, Episode 2 – “Welcome to Gitmo” Review
To mis-quote Crocodile Dundee, “That’s not a gun . . . THIS is a GUN!”
5″ / 62 caliber for the WIN!!!
Soooo, yeah, I just watched the second episode of TNT’s The Last Ship, and though I feared a second episode slump might reveal a loss in quality and fidelity from the excellent pilot, I was very pleased instead.
The plot, in brief (SPOILERS!), started where the pilot episode left off, with our duplicitous pa-Ruskie lab assistant, Quincy, talking over a secret sat-phone to his unidentified compatriots, who tell him to delay the USS NATHAN JAMES’ mission on the ground in Guantanamo Bay as long as possible. That mission is to gather supplies, food, and fuel so dear Dr. Rachel Scott, MD, PhD in SV (Sexy Virology) can synthesize a vaccine for the terrible possibly-weaponized virus infecting the world. She butts heads with the XO, whereupon XO Slattery butts heads with Captain Tom Chandler. The Skipper forces a pledge of loyalty out of Jayne — I mean Slattery — and they head to Gitmo for beans, bullets, and bandages. As they head south from Mayport, we get a little more in depth with the crew. We check in with our lovebird lieutenants, hear the COMMO warn her people to monitor distress calls, but to ignore them and to remain at EMCON, a prayer group shows off pictures of their missing loved ones, tactical crews train for land clearance ops, and we find out that the fuel they took from the cruise ship last episode is bad, but the Captain said to burn it at flank speed anyway, which gives the XO pause.
NATHAN JAMES reaches Gitmo, and a quick aerial survey reveals that it looks deserted. The ship moors pierside (a difficult trick without tugs) in order to refuel, and two tactical teams head out to get medical supplies and food. The teams encounter the dead victims of the virus, but are able to mask-up in time to avoid infection. The Captain goes all Captain Kirk and embeds with one of the tactical teams, and — sure enough — he is the first to encounter a real live person. This survivor stops them just in time to avoid a booby-trap, and he reveals that he is the last civilian security operator on the base, and that he and his compatriots had released the last few remaining Al Qaeda prisoners out of compassion, only to find themselves immediately betrayed. The terrorists killed Tex’s buddies (no shit, that’s his name) and are now waiting to ambush all three teams and then attack the ship pierside.
Boom, terrorists semi-sneak attack on two fronts. The refueling team gets shot at first, and the Chief Engineer takes a hit from shrapnel. Desperate to protect his people and the fuel, XO Slattery goes all WW-II on Al Qaeda and introduces them to a little something called NSFS, Naval Surface Fires Support. Boom, one round of 5″ high explosive shell ruins the terrorists’ day and refueling is able to recommence. Then the medical supply team gets pinned down, which is a problem since they are running out of air in the infected building. The skipper sends some shooters from his team to support them, and he continues with Tex and a few others to the food warehouse. In the food warehouse, we get firefight number 3, Tex goes all Splinter Cell and takes out a terrorist with a knife, but he is captured and held for hostage. The lead terrorist Amir demands NATHAN JAMES leave and claims half the food for himself and his five remaining guys. The CO counters with reason, while at the same time keying his mike and relaying his intentions to the ship through overly elaborate dialog. The XO gets his drift and drops the hammer one more time, blowing up the SE corner of the warehouse (my GOD, man, think of all those Twinkies!!) with a 5″ shell, and allowing the CO and the tactical team to finish off the war on terror. It all ends with relationships mended, the ship topped off, new badass comic relief on board (Tex), and with the arrival of a warship of NOT-Brits (they appear to be the Russians hinted at in the beginning).
The Goods: The naval chatter and use of ship-as-setting still works very well. Investigation reveals that the NATHAN JAMES is two ships, the USS HALSEY (DDG 97) and USS DEWEY (DDG 105), both of which were built in Pascagoula, MS, where my two destroyers STETHEM and LASSEN were built. I again appreciate the dedication to realism. I only saw one obvious hollywood set representing a ship-space, which was the Communications Room, but that is to be expected. That space is soooper doooper seekrit. I liked the tactical training on the ship, and the inclusion of more crew doing more things. A ship is a living thing, with its cells comprised of her crew. I really liked the prayer/memorial group. I appreciate them giving more attention to the issues of logistics this week, even if it still seems that they think maneuvering a ship and conducting refueling is as simple as pulling up to Pump Number 7 at the Texaco. I liked the disagreement between the XO and CO, even if it was a bit cliche, and I like Tex. I think he’ll add a new perspective and some needed comic relief. AND I LOVE ME SOME MOTHER FU**ING FIVE INCH GUN ACTION, even if elements of it were problematic.
The Less Goods: I have a fear that they are laying the groundwork for a trite mutiny storyline, with the XO and CO at loggerheads. Please don’t. Second thing, I just don’t give a shit about our two star-crosse LT’s working through the stress of having a relationship aboard ship during an apocalypse. I’m still dissatisfied by the Captain deciding on his own not to send a team inland last week in order to go to the virology lab the DOD had set up for them. He made it sound like it would be a 200 mile trek through a wasteland, but you have a HELO, Dude! You can FLY THERE!! I hated the Skipper going all Captain Kirk and joining the away team. I get the dramatic reasons for doing it, but HE DOES NOT train with those tactical teams and he would be a liability. I understand the dramatic reasoning, and even approve from a story-standpoint, but the CO would not be among the first folks going ashore. That’s dumb. Then there’s the whole issue with burning bad fuel at flank speed. Yeah, you gotta burn what you have available, but these engines are not the reliable old Dodge truck motors you depend upon at the farm. These are gas turbine jets in a box, which are VERY finicky about their fuel, and you ain’t got the parts support you need. Chandler should be babying those gas turbines. And while I appreciated the spreading-of-the-wealth and giving more enlisted folk more screentime, all the major roles are still with the O’s. Now, if you want a good sympathetic antagonist from which to foment mutiny, having a disillusioned 1st class petty officer or Chief with a good case and reasoning would be a great one. You know, someone who reasons that the Navy does not exist any more, so why are they following Chandler still? And, finally, while I love me some 5″ action, it’s a lot tougher than pointing at a spot on a map and pushing a button. Effective NSFS requires spotters and Gun Liaison Officers ashore, correcting your fire. They did not have that, could not have known where to aim, and the shells are not that accurate, they should have had a couple of misses, and the explosions were more like what you’d get out of a 16 inch shell rather than a five inch one. Still, it makes for a badass scene-closer.
Next week, USA vs. Russia, surface navy battle! Tune in and then read about it here!


June 22, 2014
The Last Ship – Pilot Review
Yeah! Naval Porn!
Hi, all, Tom Mays here, naval surface warfare officer and The Improbable Author of A Sword Into Darkness, the finest space navy awesomeness to be had on the printed page. For those of you who don’t know me, I have pined for years for a mainstream entertainment that would do for US Navy Surface Warfare what Top Gun did for naval aviation and Crimson Tide and The Hunt For Red October did for the bubble-heads: kick some ass and show the hoi polloi all that is amazing and cool about the surface navy. I love me some destroyers, cruisers, frigates, and amphibs, and I would love for the rest of the world to love ‘em too.
My hopes have been burned in the past. I squee a little bit every time I see a destroyer or an amphib featured in a movie or a program, but unfortunately they are always just backdrop. JAG was a tragedy in both a naval realism sense as well as for basic plot and drama. Of Battleship, we need not speak. That movie should be buried alongside all those Atari ET cartridges from the 80′s. Then I saw the promos for The Last Ship, and I dared to hope once more (even if Michael Bay was the producer and he had already ruined the Transformers). Would this finally be the program that restored my faith that Hollywood could properly showcase my brother and sister tin-can sailors?
Short answer: the first signs look pretty darned good. Longer answer: I really enjoyed it, it did not offend my naval experience too badly, and I’m looking forward to reviewing future episodes here as well.
The plot, in brief (SPOILERS!), is that a virulent virus has popped up in Egypt that makes Ebola look like the sniffles. Sexy virologist (is there any other kind?) Rachel Scott (Rhona Mitra, who can sample my fluids any day) sees what no one else can, that the virus is unstable and finding a vaccine will require a primordial sample, before it started mutating. This puts her aboard the USS NATHAN JAMES (DDG 151) (if I was the screenwriter, I’d have to have gone for the USS BACARDI), which will ferry her and her assistant to the arctic, where they will sample the melting permafrost to find the original virus that birds picked up and re-exposed to humanity. This is all done under the guise of cold-weather weapons testing for a new style of surface-to-surface missile, all to assuage the concerns of studly C.O. CDR Tom Chandler (Eric Dane, women want him, men want to be him . . . or want him too, it’s a new Navy). After 4 months of fruitless searching, cut off from all contact home, she finally finds what she’s searching for — just in time to be attacked by Russians searching for a cure! Naval air to surface battle ensues and CDR Sexy, ummmm, Chandler demands to know the truth! And the truth is that the world is now 80% infected, and Chandler and his crew must deal with broken national governments, desperate armed factions, and the loss of all they know in order to develop a vaccine and safely get it to the surviving population.
The Goods: whomever procured the use of an actual ARLEIGH BURKE Flight II-A destroyer and acted as the naval technical liaison should be commended. I did not want to tear my eyeballs out while watching them get everything wrong. They got a LOT actually RIGHT! The set is either an actual ship, or a really, really good facsimile. The bridge and CIC chatter is correct, even to the point of identifying the correct watchstations for conducting certain actions, or the names of the various weapons mounts. The actors portray the appropriate amount of gravitas, and if they do dip a bit into over-the-top melodrama, it’s ENGAGING melodrama. The plot is swift and hangs together well, and the dialog is pretty good. They brought up current events in a fairly non-egregious way, everything from global warming (the melting permafrost exposing a primordial virus) and the end of Don’t Ask – Don’t Tell (the female navigator mentions wanting to visit Paris with her girlfriend). Plus, its best good point: ADAM BALDWIN is the freakin’ XO, Mike Slattery, even if he was a bit underutilized.
The Less Goods: Cue the obligatory sexy LT’s bein’ all sexy together. I’m not saying it doesn’t happen, but should secret relationships be the focus of the story, especially when its pretty much the only defining moment for one, if not both characters? At least it wasn’t the CO or XO. The pilot is too officer-centric. Our enlisted outnumber the O’s 10 to 1, and their stories are just as vibrant as those wearing commissioned rank. Don’t let this be Star Trek, where no one actually does any work below the rank of ensign. The Russians can’t shoot worth a damn. The aerial engagement happens WAY TOO CLOSE to the ship. EMCON doesn’t mean that you can’t receive signals, just that you can’t transit ‘em, so they should have known about what was happening in the news, even if they couldn’t call out. If Dr. Scott was calling off the ship, the folks in a-space-that-I-shall-not-name would have known about it, since they check EMCON compliance. The CO restoring power to the ship down in Engineering is just AWFUL. I actually winced at the stupid. They gloss over the XO’s personal loss far too quickly. I’m hoping they fix that later. Time, distance, fuel states, and provisions issues are entirely random and glossed over. A destroyer CANNOT operate independently for 4 months. They haven’t got the parts, the fuel, or the food. It would have been a lot more realistic if the doctor had deployed aboard an AO class supply oiler, with the destroyer NATHAN JAMES providing security escort. The pretty doctor could have done her experiments in a larger, more private area, the destroyer would have all the food and gas she could need, and the Russians would have a ship to sink, which would then necessitate bringing the scientist’s research lab equipment aboard CDR Chandler’s ship (and it would give that first battle a lot more impact).
But, in this case, the Goods really do outweigh the Less Goods. That was not the case with the Last Resort, the AWFUL navy-ballistic-missile-sub show from last season. That show had promise, but just dived right into stupid, and didn’t come up after it reached crush depth. Based on what I’ve seen so far, the Last Ship looks like a good bet for your entertainment hour!


June 21, 2014
Yog’s Law and Self-Publishing
Some good thoughts from Scalzi on how the old adage of “Money should always flow TO the writer,” applies to indie publishers. But I agree more with the sentiment expressed in the comments, where Yog’s Law needs no corollary as long as you realize you wear different hats as author and publisher when you go independent. As publisher, you have to expect to expend some cash for editing, layout, proofing, cover design, and marketing, but you have to manage the level of those expenses such that the version of yourself wearing the Author hat is still netting a profit from royalties.
Note, THIS is why I follow writers like Scalzi (though I also enjoy his books and think he can affect a pithy and enjoyable degree of snark) and Larry Correia. I hate it when Mom (Scalzi) and Dad (Correia) engage in ideological Twitter fights, talking past one another and letting snark override reason. They are both fun authors, but they are also political matter and antimatter. And it’s especially frustrating because each of their core arguments on the issue of rape culture and self defense are right in certain ways, but wrong at their strawman extremes. Aaaaaand if you have no idea what I’m talking about, don’t worry. I enjoyed the argument from a schadenfreude perspective, but wince that these two ideological sides of pro sci-fi-dom can’t get along better. And, for my part, I think Correia won the argument but then got torpedoed by emotional histrionics so that he came out the worse among the Hoi polloi.
Yog’s Law and Self-Publishing.


June 14, 2014
Good Things Come In Threes
Don’t have a whole lotta time to post, but wanted to get this out while interest was high:
First GOOD thing, got a GREAT review from Carol Kean over at the fantastic sci-fi web-zine Perihelion Science Fiction. She’s been chatting with me on Twitter for months (and is part of the oppressive Hashtagocracy, along with me), introducing me to fabulous new indie authors and Twitterati. Plus she expressed an intense interest in ASID. That finally culminated with this month’s issue of Perihelion, and, I gotta say, I owe her one. It is a really good review, critical yet effusive, and even though she admits that military sci-fi is not her thing (she tends to skim the hard science and tactics passages), she is definitely in the fan column. I’ll take a 4 out of 5 stars from Carol any day! So check it out, and also their new fiction and the other reviews of Edge of Tomorrow and Will McIntosh’s latest book from Orbit.
Second GOOD thing, Will Perez and kick-ass narrator Liam from Sci-Fi Publishing have completed the audiofiles for the ASID audiobook! Just a few things to put away and tidy up and then you can LISTEN to awesome hard science, military sci-fi, space opera, technothriller goodness at home, during your workout, or on the commute to and from work! On sale soon, but here’s a little taste:
https://improbableauthor.files.wordpress.com/2014/06/ch-15-5min.mp3
Tee-hee!!!
Third GOOD thing, I have been eliminated from the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award 2014! Hmmm. Why is that good news, you ask? Well, it is and it isn’t. I would have LOVED to have been a semi-finalist, and — of course — I’d have loved to have won one of the $15,000 advances or the $50,000 grand prize, but I never really expected too. ASID is, at best, a good pulp adventure. When people take off marks for its limited character development, I gotta shrug and say, “Well, yeah.” It is not an introspective tale. There is very little deep catharsis. Besides Nathan getting past the sinking incident and learning to lead again, and besides Kris’s strained relationship with the father that abandoned her, my characters are pretty middle of the road. They evolve and express themselves in relation to the plot. No one is going to make a Lifetime movie out of ASID, but it would make the best SyFy Channel movie EVER, not to mention a pretty damn good blockbuster at the multiplex. The Fault In Our Stars, it ain’t. So, I’m out, but I’m still proud of my book, and now I can move on to other opportunities. Besides, all the REALLY cool people I’ve met in relation to ABNA 2014 got kicked out too, so I’m among friends.
Following this is ABNA: Full Disclosure, with my two Amazon Vine reviews of my excerpt, and the Publisher’s Weekly Review of the whole book. I gots nothing to hide!
And, REMEMBER, only a couple of days left on the ASID and REMO 99¢ sales!
Toodles!
ABNA Expert Reviewer
What is the strongest aspect of this excerpt?
Generally, the excerpt is well-structured and flows well. The writing is characterized by some excellent descriptions: “You’re an idle-rich tech wizard with an over-funded amateur astronomy bug, so some eccentricity has to be expected, I guess. In the dusking skies of evening above USS Rivero , the sharp boundary of the eastern horizon had already merged with the night, while to the west a wash of orange and red still set the water afire. These descriptions are not only well-written, they enable the reader to visualize the scene or setting more clearly. Another strength of the excerpt is the pacing. The story flows well and smoothly at a steady pace. I expect the story to be action-packed based on these preliminary chapters, which should make for an engaging read.
What aspect needs the most work?
More careful editing is needed. Avoid cliched descriptions, for example: Everyone heard the familiar dissonance of screeching brakes, squealing tires, blaring horns, and one final movement of crunching metal. The first two chapters appear to be cluttered with technical descriptions. Some of these descriptions are obviously integral to the plot and in driving the narrative forward, but at times, the technical aspects engulf and overwhelm the story, making me feel like I was reading some sort of technical manual and losing sight of the story itself. This might be an area you wish to focus on and improve. I’d like to see the main characters developed more over the course of the narrative. Characterization should not be sacrificed at the narrative’s expense, and I’d like to see how both Gordon Lee and Nathan Kelley are developed.
What is your overall opinion of this excerpt?
For the most part, the excerpt is well-organized and flows well. The protagonist Gordon Lee appears to be a rather eccentric character but one chapter alone does not make for compelling characterization. I would hope that the main characters get developed as the narrative moves forward, including the Navy man, Nathan Kelley. The premise sounds interesting and although sci-fi thrillers are not my cup of tea, I admit my curiosity has been piqued by this engaging excerpt.
ABNA Expert Reviewer
What is the strongest aspect of this excerpt?
The science of this fiction was well done even though some of the terms I read I had no idea if they were real or not. The frustration of Gordon was well written as well as his interaction with Lydia. How it ties in to chapter 2 would keep me reading into chapter 3, although chapter 2 was a bit weaker than the first.
What aspect needs the most work?
Chapter two on the boat gave no reference on why we were firing into North Korea, maybe explained later. The banter for firing nukes was unrealistic as I would think anyone given instructions for firing a weapon that could kill hundreds of thousands could be so cavalier makes no sense, however based on the pitch and the submarine the smugness is probably short lived.
What is your overall opinion of this excerpt?
I thought the pitch of the book was interesting and the author writing does lend an authoritative tone to what I read which is important in a sci-fi book. Would def read on because of the premise and what I have read so far. Send me a copy!
ABNA Publishers Weekly Reviewer
Visionary Gordon Lee sees something that no one else, not even NASA, sees, or at least is willing to see. What initially appears as a rogue comet turns out to be something much more. It’s an alien craft of some sort, on a long haul to Earth from a star twenty light years away. With no way to ascertain the aliens’ motives, Lee resolves to prepare for a worst case scenario: hostile invasion. To that end, he recruits ex-Navy sailor Nathan Kelley, and turns the full force of his fortune and private tech company, Windward Technologies, to developing means to combat the presumed threat. With few allies in government, Lee and Kelley are left to prepare as best they can, recruiting a motley crew, including the brilliant and erratic engineer Kristene Munoz, to lead the civilian defense of Earth. Fortunately, the laws of physics ensure that the ship will take several years to arrive. This manuscript is fairly standard military science fiction. The strongest area is the conceptual technology, which starts out very firmly rooted in present day scientific reality. Unfortunately, this, combined with the drive toward confronting the alien force, leaves little room for character development. The action is well paced, and the reasoning behind both the aliens and their motivations is very well thought out, making this a solid read.


June 11, 2014
Awesome, Cool, Good, & Bad News
First, Hi! Howzyadoin?
Second, prepare for AWESOME NEWS:
Happy Father’s Day!!! A Sword Into Darkness and REMO e-books are both on sale!!! There’s soooo much sci-fi goodness to be had for both you and Dad, you should tell all your friends and followers about it. Shout it from the rooftops (provided you have the training and appropriate safety gear)! ASID is on sale 11-15 June (on Amazon, B&N, Kobo, Apple iBooks, and Smashwords) and REMO is on sale 12-17 June (exclusive on Amazon Kindle). If ever you needed an excuse, you just got one, shipmate. Think of all the Poppas, and just follow the links above!
Cool news, I just made the final edits to the ASID Audiobook. And judging by how AMAZING it sounds, even if you’ve read it, you’ll want to experience it a second time on Audible. I hope to have it available before month’s end, and I will absolutely NEED your help to make its launch a rousing success. Ya see, nobody really knows who the hell I am, so if they’re going to shell out $20, they’ll need some good word of mouth. I hope I can count on you all!
Good news, everyone! I’m writing again. Just tossed down half of Chapter 1 for Demigod (formerly CoPilot) and the initial line is a corker: “The end of the world as Demeter Sedaris knew it began with a lie — her own.” Plus, I submitted my fantasy short story to the Baen Fantasy Adventure Short Story contest. The title is a state secret so’s I don’t taint the voting, but cross your fingers. I’ll let you know how it goes. And in other cool news, I’ve got two reviews for ASID coming out this week. One is from Carol Kean of Perihelion Science Fiction and the other will be the Publisher’s Weekly review that will either doom or continue my bid to win the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award (Semi-Finals). Wish me luck!
And in mild bad news (more awwww, than OH NO!), “Bumped” was rejected by Orson Scott Card’s Intergalactic Medicine Show, but they were encouraging in their form rejection, so I will be trying again. I’m not too busted up, because Baen has expressed interest, but I’m not stopping with just them. It’ll get sold somewhere. The story is too fun not to!
How can you cheer me up? Send people to buy the books on sale and boost those sale rankings!!! After all, ASID and REMO are only


May 27, 2014
Amazon Speaks!
Taken from the Amazon Discussion Boards just now, their word on the kerfuffle with Hachette:
The Amazon Books team says:
We are currently buying less (print) inventory and “safety stock” on titles from the publisher, Hachette, than we ordinarily do, and are no longer taking pre-orders on titles whose publication dates are in the future. Instead, customers can order new titles when their publication date arrives. For titles with no stock on hand, customers can still place an order at which time we order the inventory from Hachette — availability on those titles is dependent on how long it takes Hachette to fill the orders we place. Once the inventory arrives, we ship it to the customer promptly. These changes are related to the contract and terms between Hachette and Amazon.At Amazon, we do business with more than 70,000 suppliers, including thousands of publishers. One of our important suppliers is Hachette, which is part of a $10 billion media conglomerate. Unfortunately, despite much work from both sides, we have been unable to reach mutually-acceptable agreement on terms. Hachette has operated in good faith and we admire the company and its executives. Nevertheless, the two companies have so far failed to find a solution. Even more unfortunate, though we remain hopeful and are working hard to come to a resolution as soon as possible, we are not optimistic that this will be resolved soon.
Negotiating with suppliers for equitable terms and making stocking and assortment decisions based on those terms is one of a bookseller’s, or any retailer’s, most important jobs. Suppliers get to decide the terms under which they are willing to sell to a retailer. It’s reciprocally the right of a retailer to determine whether the terms on offer are acceptable and to stock items accordingly. A retailer can feature a supplier’s items in its advertising and promotional circulars, “stack it high” in the front of the store, keep small quantities on hand in the back aisle, or not carry the item at all, and bookstores and other retailers do these every day. When we negotiate with suppliers, we are doing so on behalf of customers. Negotiating for acceptable terms is an essential business practice that is critical to keeping service and value high for customers in the medium and long term.
A word about proportion: this business interruption affects a small percentage of Amazon’s demand-weighted units. If you order 1,000 items from Amazon, 989 will be unaffected by this interruption. If you do need one of the affected titles quickly, we regret the inconvenience and encourage you to purchase a new or used version from one of our third-party sellers or from one of our competitors.
We also take seriously the impact it has when, however infrequently, such a business interruption affects authors. We’ve offered to Hachette to fund 50% of an author pool – to be allocated by Hachette – to mitigate the impact of this dispute on author royalties, if Hachette funds the other 50%. We did this with the publisher Macmillan some years ago. We hope Hachette takes us up on it.
This topic has generated a variety of coverage, presumably in part because the negotiation is with a book publisher instead of a supplier of a different type of product. Some of the coverage has expressed a relatively narrow point of view. Here is one post that offers a wider perspective.
http://www.thecockeyedpessimist.blogspot.com/2014/05/whos-afraid-of-amazoncom.html
Thank you.
Sooo, a little more depth to counter the newspaper articles which seem almost uniformly pro-publisher / anti-distributor. And DISCLAIMER, Amazon has been a great outlet for those who have chosen the Indie-published route when folks at the Big Six (Five?) publishers — like Hachette — wouldn’t give ‘em a chance, that is, wouldn’t take a chance on books like A Sword Into Darkness or REMO that have sold well and have been well-received. I’d love to be in with the Big Guys, instead of sipping Kool-Aid at the kids’ table, but since I am there, it is some mighty fine Kool-Aid and I’m proud to thank my host.
Thoughts?


Amazon v Hachette: Don’t Believe The Spin
Amazon is my major distributor and very much the hand that feeds me, so I’m unlikely to bite them regardless. But I’d been uneasy regarding the news I’d seen lately. This post gives me faith, though. It’s hard to decide which major international corporation to root for, but I’m going to give Amazon the benefit of the doubt in the face of these slanted and uninformative articles I’ve seen slung about, until I get harder evidence against them anyway. Go, Boss!
Originally posted on David Gaughran:
The internet is seething over Amazon’s reported hardball tactics in negotiations with Hachette.
Newspapers and blogs are filled with heated opinion pieces, decrying Amazon’s domination of the book business.
Actual facts are thinner on the ground, however, and if history is any guide, we haven’t heard the full story. Here’s how it started.
In a historical quirk of the trade, publishers and booksellers negotiate co-op deals at the same time as the general agreement to carry titles. (For those who don’t know, co-op is the industry term for preferred in-store placement, such as face-out instead of spine-out, position on end-caps, front tables, window displays, and so on.)
At publishers’ insistence, the same practice has continued in the online and e-book world, namely that negotiations regarding virtual co-op (e.g. high visibility spots on retailer sites) take place at the same time as discussions over general terms and publisher-retailer discounts.
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May 21, 2014
All I Gots Time For Is Bullets . . . .
- Hi!
- There’s whole bunches of stuff to catch you up on, so I’m turning down the effervescent charm and wit, turning up the maximum information flow (while still remaining effervescently witty and charming. Handsome too. It’s a curse).
- A Sword Into Darkness has now topped over 200 reviews on Amazon and sits at 4.5 stars overall with 123 5-stars and 58 4-stars, alongside a whole buncha real nice write-ups between ‘em. If you needed an excuse to get yourself a copy, that’s a pretty good one. I’m still continually surpised about the folks that are reluctant to give it a try because of its indie-published beginnings. It’s good, folks. Trust the hoi polloi.
- Speaking of good, I just listened to the first half of the A Sword Into Darkness audiobook from ACX and Will Perez of Sci-Fi Publishing, and it’s like experiencing a brand new story. It really comes alive, and even though I wrote the damned thing, it’s like I’m just discovering it. If you’ve read it, but haven’t heard it, you gotta! And if you haven’t read it or lent it to your friends, ummm, see the bullet above.
- REMO continues to chug right along, though it has not had the explosion of popularity that ASID had. Is it because it’s short stories? A relatively short collection? Not as much advertising as ASID had from third parties? I dunno. It has gotten great reviews (4.8 stars in 6 reviews) on Amazon, but it has not made it above 7000 in sales ranking yet. It has more than paid for the investment in its cover from 99Designs, so I’m happy about that, but I would love for it to do ASID numbers. If you haven’t tried it out, I urge you to give it a shot, or to recommend it to your friends. And I’m also producing an audiobook on ACX for it as well, with the talented Heidi Mattson of VO Hollywood reading. It would make your perfect commute companion!
- REMO remains Amazon Kindle exclusive, but ASID has turned out to be a dirty little book that gets around to all the e-book sites. Shameful. But apparently the elder book has been a bad influence on the innocent story collection, and they will soon both cheapen themselves for all the world to see in an internet wide sale! I am shocked and you should be too. In fact, you should tell all of your friends about it and urge everyone to get their own copies during the sale so you can tell them youself how dissapointed you are that such good books would just put themselves on the streets for a mere 99¢. More details to follow.
- In other news (and these are the reasons I’ve been so busy), I’m waiting on the approval draft of “The Rememberists” for Daily Science Fiction, I’ve gotten a commitment from Baen on “Bumped” if I make some revisions, and I’ve completed the first draft of “The Commuter” for the Baen Fantasy Adventure Short Story competition. For Stealth Books, I’ve also reviewed and blurbed Graham Brown’s latest SF masterpiece, and I’m working through John Monteith’s latest Rogue sub-thriller. On top of that, I’m still working on the ASID tabletop game and app with Nathaniel Torson of Jabberwocky Media. Then there’s life (Don’t Talk To Me About LIFE . . . .) where my brave, strong, and beautiful wife keeps kickin’ cancer’s ass and staying busy, and my three kids are ALL in baseball and softball, each of which have both simultaneous and consecutive games in different locations. Plus work at my unspecified Day Job, which eats about 14-16 hours a day.
- What this means is, I have not yet made progress on Lancers Into the Light or on Co-Pilot, but I pledge to! Soon(ish)!!
- Congrats to Ancillary Justice for winning the Nebula! I gotta read that one to see what all the hubbub is about. Best of luck to it and all the upcoming Hugo nominees, though I’m pulling for a Larry Correia and a Brad Torgerson win.
- Final note about goings on, I got to spend an afternoon with Chris Kennedy, author of Janissaries and When the Gods Aren’t Gods, at the Virginia Beach Central Public Library’s AMAZING event devoted to their new Local Author collection. It was a pleasure to donate books both for the collection and to circulate, as well as to meet so many great local authors and small press publishers. A good time was had by all and I really look forward to doing it again next year. If you live in the Hampton Roads area, I urge you to go and check out ALL the books!
- And that’s about it. I obviously don’t understand the concept behind brief, bulletized statements. I have a problem. Pity me!
- Toodles!

