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T is for Trails: A Comprehensive Book Review by Lori Keating

T is for Trails: A Hiking Alphabet written by Judy Young and Illustrated by Sharisse Steber, (Sleeping Bear Press) is an engaging and educational book that introduces young readers to the wonders of hiking and the natural world through an A-to-Z exploration of hiking-related themes. The structure of the book is fun in that it combines both informational content and poetic elements, giving it a versatile appeal for different types of readers.

Introduction

T is for Trails: A Hiking Alphabet written by Judy Young and Illustrated by Sharisse Steber, (Sleeping Bear Press) is an engaging and educational book that introduces young readers to the wonders of hiking and the natural world through an A-to-Z exploration of hiking-related themes. The structure of the book is fun in that it combines both informational content and poetic elements, giving it a versatile appeal for different types of readers.

Review

The book spans the alphabet, with each letter corresponding to a different aspect of hiking or the outdoors. This format makes it a great tool for teaching children about the many facets of hiking while promoting an active lifestyle and connection to nature.

The first alphabetic spread sets the stage by highlighting the popularity of hiking in both the United States and Canada. It provides important context by mentioning the diverse range of trails available, from rugged mountain hikes to urban greenways, and how hiking can be accessible to everyone, regardless of age or physical ability. This opening helps frame the significance of hiking as a universal activity that promotes exploration, health, and well-being.

A is for Ambling Adventures: The first letter sets the tone with a light and approachable description of hiking as a leisurely pursuit, making it sound accessible and fun for people of all ages. The poetic line “Awesome adventures on the trail are for young and old alike!” captures the essence of hiking as an inclusive activity, perfect for families, seniors, and solo adventurers.

Each subsequent letter follows a similar pattern, presenting a diverse range of hiking experiences, from basic concepts like B is for Backpack: The letter “B” introduces the essential hiking gear—a backpack. With a poem and description, the book explains how a backpack is used to carry everything needed for a hike, from snacks to water to extra layers. It emphasizes the importance of being prepared for the journey, making it an essential part of the hiking experience.

M is for Map: The letter “M” focuses on maps, introducing children to the skill of navigating trails. This section explains how a map can help hikers find their way, discover points of interest, and make the most of their outdoor adventures. It teaches the value of being able to read a map, making it both a fun and practical lesson in outdoor navigation.

Each letter is dedicated to poems, which allow for a rhythmic and creative expression of the hiking theme. These poems not only make the book more fun to read aloud but also reinforce key concepts in a memorable way. For example, in the poem for “A,” the rhythmic flow of “Go for an afternoon’s amble / down a footpath on a hike” adds a whimsical touch to the idea of hiking, making it feel lighthearted and easygoing.

The vibrant and colorful illustrations by Sharisse Steber are truly a highlight of this book. Steber’s artwork beautifully captures the spirit of the outdoors, bringing the natural world to life for young readers. The illustrations are filled with rich, eye-catching colors that add energy and warmth to every page. From lush green forests to rugged mountain paths, the illustrations provide a wonderful visual backdrop to the text, helping readers imagine the beauty of the landscapes being described.

The characters in the illustrations are diverse, ensuring that children from all backgrounds can see themselves as part of the adventure. The detailed yet approachable art style invites readers to linger on each page, exploring the landscapes and hiking scenes in depth. The combination of Steber’s expressive artwork, paired with Young’s informative text creates an immersive experience that engages both the imagination and the educational aspect of the book.

One of the highlights of the book is the informative sections, which go beyond basic nature exploration. At the end, there’s a valuable section dedicated to teaching young readers about the compass and how it’s used in navigation. This addition connects the theme of outdoor exploration with practical skills that are beneficial for future hikes. It reinforces the idea that hiking isn’t just about walking but also about learning to interact with and understand the environment.

T is for Trails: A Hiking Alphabet can be purchased at Amazon,  B & N, or BookShop.org is a well-rounded book that blends fun and education. Its clever use of both poetry and factual descriptions ensures that young readers will find something to enjoy and learn from. Whether you are reading it with a child preparing for their first hike or sharing it with an older child curious about outdoor adventures, this book is a delightful introduction to the world of trails, nature, and hiking. 

Lori Keating is an award-winning, multi-genre author with a unique talent for weaving tales that resonate with readers of all ages, blending humor, heart, and a touch of magic. Whether she’s penning a heartwarming children’s story, or an inspiring romance, her passion for storytelling shines through. She enjoys actively participating in the literary community by providing insightful reviews. She last reviewed JUST ONE GIRL on this blog.

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Nine Tips on How to be Your Own Publicist

Fellow writers frequently ask me what I am doing to market Half-Truths. I have learned a lot from podcasts and blogs on this topic, but since becoming the volunteer publicist for my publisher, Monarch Educational Services, I now have hands-on experience publicizing books. Since Half-Truths doesn’t come out until April, it’s too early to say what will yield results; but I’m happy to share what I’ve been doing.

Create a Website

Anyone you contact will want to find you online. Having a space where people can find out about you and what you offer is paramount. Once you create it, keep it current. If you offer workshops or provide events, delete ones that have passed and add the new ones.

Tip #1: Look at other author’s websites. Take notes on what you like about them and what you don’t like. What colors and/or fonts appeal to you. If you are hiring someone to create your website this will help that person make a site that appeals to you. (Feel free to look at mine and tell me what you think works or doesn’t!)

Tip #2: If someone else creates your website, make sure you learn how to update it yourself.

Make a System

I use google sheets to keep track of who I am contacting, when, and any notes about the contact. Here is what my “Media Outlets” page looks like. I highlight people I need to follow up with and important dates. I’m probably a little extreme about this, but I have pages for ARC readers, Awards, Bookstores, Conferences, Community Groups, Endorsements, Fairs & Events, Homeschool, Libraries, Museums, Schools, Senior Centers (because I’m counting on a crossover market with seniors), and Trade Reviews.

Will I contact ever single person on my spreadsheet? No. But at least I know who I have contacted and when.

Tip #3: Don’t contact people too soon. I sent out emails a year ago to local media sources. That was too far in advance. Three months before your book comes out is probably the sweet spot.

Tip #4: Gather the information ahead of time. That will make the process smoother when it’s time to send out emails.

Network

I’m sure you’ve heard this a million times, but building relationships with potential readers and gatekeepers is key. For kidlit authors that includes parents, grandparents, librarians, and teachers Many people are excited to meet a “real” author and want to hear about your book. But make sure that the conversation isn’t just about you. Asking them about what types of books they read is a natural conversation starter.

Social networks are good as long as you don’t use them to only promote your self or your book. Share other writers’ books and successes as much as you can.Build an email list of people interested in hearing about your book.Respond to whoever reaches out to you. Thank them for taking the time to contact you. (“Please” and “Thank you” are evergreen.)Smile when you talk to people. It comes through. Remember, this is what you wanted– a book that you could talk about!Follow up on leads. I have a list of people who asked when Half-Truths is out.

Tip #5: Pay it back. If someone reads and reviews your book, read theirs. If you learn something from an author or workshop leader, shout it out on social media.

Image courtesy Pixabay and Ritinha Corain Ritinha

Think Outside the BoxWhen I told Nicole Hewitt I had preordered her forthcoming book, THE SONG OF ORPHAN’S GARDEN, she sent me a map of the story world and a package of seeds. Both items made me curious about her story.Sarah Hickner was a guest on Thomas Umstattd’s Novel Writing Podcast. She writes books about horses. So, where does she sell her books? At horse shows!Since I’m new to getting into schools, I hope to volunteer at area high schools and speak to writing clubs or the school newspaper staff. This fits in with my book since my protagonist wants to be a journalist.I plan to contact area homeschool co-ops and church youth groups. My presentation, “Choices and Voices,” will compare the choices that were available to teens in the 50s and choices that are available now. We’ll also talk about the different ways teens can have a voice. I will offer a free Zoom discussion for bookclubs that read Half-Truths.If your book fits the audience, check out senior living communities. Senior centers and recreational facilities that give classes are often excited to hear from local authors. Provide library workshops. My workshops are listed on a separate page of this website. My classes on creative writing have opened the door with teen librarians. Adult workshops have been well received by patrons and the librarians who provide programming.I plan to approach a local coffee shop about holding a “Meet the Author for Coffee and Conversation” evening. What teen can resist free coffee?

Photo courtesy Pixabay and Grafmex.

Tip #6: Find your audience.

Find Your PeepsFind other authors who write in your genre so you can promote each other. I left messages on Author Media and Author’s Guild to find other YA and MG historical fiction authors. Other authors find groups on Facebook, X, Instagram, or Discord. If you find someone you click with, consider co-publishing a newsletter and or creating conference presentations together. I am fortunate to have started TALKING STORY with my amazing mentor Joyce Hostetter; she and I also co-taught several times. Now, I share those tasks with the talented Rebecca Wheeler. It’s more fun, we split the work, and we extend our outreach!

Tip #7: Form a partnership with another author.

ReviewsGetting ARC readers is crucial. My ARCs are digital, but I will provide hard copies of the book to individuals who have difficulty reading that way. Reviews help before a book is published to gain preorders, and after the book comes out to help gain visibility.

Tip #8: Treat your reviewers well. They are taking the time to read and review your book. Make sure you thank them and send love and appreciation their way!

Podcasts & InfluencersListen to podcasts and learn what works well on a podcast and what flops.Pitch yourself as a guest on appropriate podcasts. Thomas Umstattd had a great podcast on being prepared to be on a podcast. I highly recommend listening to it. Honestly, I haven’t cracked the nut on influencers, but I understand there are a ton on Instagram and TikTok. If you have experience in this area, please leave it in the comments or maybe you can write a guest post for me on this topic.

Tip #9 Do your homework. Be prepared.

Finally….Have Fun!

Sure, it’s a lot of work. but like the characters in your books, you’ve wanted something and despite a TON of obstacles in your path–you’ve gained it. You’re an author. Smile and celebrate!

Photo courtesy of Pixabay and Paul Stachowiak

Share and Enter to Win!

What marketing tool has worked for you? Please share in the comments. One random commenter will win an autographed copy of Half-Truths!

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My First Interview and My First 5-Star Goodreads Review!

I heard that writing a book was only part of the work an author does to get his or her book out into the world. Marketing and publicity are equally important! As I’m finding out, they’re equally time consuming.

What to Do Next?

Each night I go to bed thinking about the jobs that for the next day. Should I respond to an interview request? Continue to send my Advanced Reader Copy (ARC) out to bloggers and readers who said they would review it? Or, maybe I should write an article for a regional or writing magazine. Should I work on bookmarks or update my business card? Create a ppt for my “Story Behind the Story” presentation? All of these are worthwhile. And all of them expand my own little circle of contacts to make my sphere of potential readers bigger–as I heard about on a recent episode of the Novel Marketing podcast. (Writer friends–I highly recommend this podcast!)

My First Interview!

I started this week by answering questions from my joined-at-the-hip-writer-buddy, Linda Phillips. For those of you who have been following my blog for years (thank you!) you may remember when I shared Linda’s first verse novel CRAZY and her second one, BEHIND THESE HANDS. Linda is a strong advocate of mental health; her books and her volunteer work speak to that lifelong passon.

Well, now it’s my turn! Below is our interview that she posted in her newsletter for the Charlotte Clubhouse. It is used with her permission.

LINDA: I understand that birthing this book has been a long journey.  What did you originally set out to write about and how, if at all, did that change along the way?

CAROL: I was curious about what it was like in Charlotte before civil rights and thought I would write about that. At my first Highlights workshop (that you and I attended together in 2009!) I was fortunate to have Harold Underdown as my mentor. When I told him I was writing a book about Charlotte before civil rights, he told me that was only my setting. He encouraged me to find out what my character wanted. I remember being blown away by that simple yet profound advice. 

It took me years digging into Kate’s (my protagonist) past and finding her story to answer Harold’s question.  Once I settled on what was driving Kate, I could shape the book. There were many outlines and drafts in the process. In addition, since the period is the Jim Crow South, I knew there were racial issues that would be addressed. Over time I realized that most of that racial struggle was not my story to tell.  As a result, HALF-TRUTHS became more about Kate’s journey to find her voice as a budding journalist, rather than a book about racial relations. 

LINDA: What message do you want readers to take away from your book?

CAROL: Don’t push family secrets under the rug. A person’s past influences their present. Whenever possible, open communication is best. That communication leads to healthier and more genuine relationships.

The theme of half-truths runs throughout the book. Kate not only uncovers deceptions that have been passed on in her family, but she also comes to grips with her half-truths. Lillian, an important secondary character, is a teenage Black maid who works for Kate’s grandmother. The two girls bond over taking care of Kate’s goat, and while building that friendship, Kate frequently stumbles. In a major turning point, Kate alienates Lillian by publicly saying a half-truth about Lilian. It is only when Kate admits what she did and communicates her genuine regret to Lillian that their friendship is reconciled.

As the story progresses, Kate discovers secrets about her family’s ancestry. She wants to talk about them to her stern grandmother— the lynchpin in the puzzle—but she’s afraid. At the end of the book, she broaches the topic as the two plant a garden together. Kate’s hunch about her family is validated and she breaks through walls that have existed for decades. She is then freer to speak her voice and move forward without crippling fear. 

LINDA: DEI has come under attack in recent days, and President Trump is eliminating many programs that will have possible negative impacts on persons of color. Your protagonist, Kate, was outspoken and strong-willed. How do you think she might react if she were around to see this today?

CAROL: I think she would want everyone to be treated equally. Like she says in HALF-TRUTHS, “Of course, all men are created equal! That’s what is written in the Bible and the Declaration of Independence!” She’d be glad to see the progress since 1950: she didn’t experience integrated schools, parks, restaurants, sports teams, or businesses. She would want this to continue—that the same opportunities would be available to both Blacks and Whites.

LINDA: Lastly, you know I write about mental illness. Is there any part of Half-Truths that resonates with mental health issues?   

CAROL: Definitely! Families that deny or bury secrets often pass along burdens to subsequent generations. These “half-truths” lead to shame, guilt, fear, and resentment. In turn, carrying around those burdens can result in miscommunication, failed relationships, poor decision- making, anxiety, depression, or worse. 

My First 5-Star Goodreads Review!

As it turns out, Linda was the first person to review Half-Truths on Goodreads. (While you’re on that page, please mark Half-Truths as “want to read.”) It’s been exciting to hear what others think about my first novel. Here are Linda’s thoughts:

Kate Dinsmore, the teenage protagonist in this book you won’t want to put down, and the author, Carol Baldwin, have a lot in common. They both have a way with words and aim to use them to make the world a better place to live. In her first fiction YA novel, Baldwin has used her keen research instincts to give us an historically accurate and compelling picture of racial tensions in both rural and urban settings in 1950s North Carolina. Against a backdrop of KKK rallies and racial prejudice, Kate dreams of going to college and becoming a reporter. When it looks like her tobacco-farming family will likely not be able to afford it, her wealthy Charlotte grandparents agree to let her live with them to attend school. Kate knew living with her aloof and society-minded grandmother would be challenging, but she had no idea how the young, hired help in the household would change her life forever. Kate’s curiosity and observations soon lead to questions about her family tree. There are material items and story fragments in the house and among family members that don’t add up. Baldwin effectively uses the fragile relationship between Kate and her newfound cousin, Lillian, to illustrate the importance of truth-telling, especially across racial lines. I highly recommend this book to teachers and students for its accurate depiction of pre-Civil Rights and the Jim Crow era. 

Friends

It’s no wonder I wrote about friendship in my debut novel. I’ve been blessed with so many wonderful friends who supported and prayed for me on this 18-year journey.

Friends just like Linda.

Image from Pixabay courtesy un-perfekt.

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You Can See It Here First: A Cover Reveal and Giveaway for Stacey Bartlett’s New Middle-Grade Novel

Introduction

It’s a delight for me to share the cover for Stacey Bartlett‘s forthcoming middle-grade novel, MONSTER MOUNTAIN (Monarch Press: 2025). For those of you who can’t wait, you can scroll down to see it and read about the giveaway. For the rest of you who know how to bide your time and wait a few minutes, here’s a review.

Review

What if you, your younger brother, your BFF, and your dog are vacationing with your grandparents in the North Carolina mountains one summer. And what if they take you to a park so you can go for a hike. And what if your brother decides to go exploring and vanishes into a crack between two walls of solid rock? What do you do?

If your name is Nicky and you promised your grandparents that you would look out for your brother, you follow him–of course! But things start looking different. There are leaves from enormous trees that are twice the size of what they used to be, toadstools In every color imaginable, and mushrooms the size of palm trees.  And when you meet a spider as big as a horse, rockgiants, trolls, and screaming monster birds with beaks like saws…you know you’ve entered a totally different world.

Fortunately, you are with two other gamers, and all of you are skilled at encountering and escaping danger. Ha! Ha! But the world of Minecraft isn’t nearly as real as the one you find yourself in.

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Without giving away too much of this tale that intertwines North Carolina folklore with modern video gaming, here is one of my favorite lines:

Dread slithers its way into my mind and curls up there.

Isn’t that a delicious description?

The sweet climax is when the kids return and find the grandparents not in the least bit worried about them. Nicky asks if they’d had any extrordinatry adventures or ever seen any interesting creatures in the mountains. Her grandfather answers:

“Well now,” Gramps says, pulling off his cap and scratching the back of his head. “I reckon there are a lot of interesting creatures on this mountain, and me and your grandma have seen our fair share. As for the extraordinary, I’d say that just about describes every day we’ve spent together since the moment we got married.”

The next day Nicky thinks about their adventure and observes:

…maybe now that it’s almost over, we realize how extraordinary everything around us really is. Firefies dance in the twilight while sofft laughter drifts from the rocking chairs on the front porch. There’ so much magic right in front of our eyes, if we only take the time to notice it.

A Word From Stacey

I asked Stacey what her inspiration for this story and she said, “Actually, my son Jamie and I were passing Chimney Rock State Park near where we live, and I said wouldn’t it be fun if kids went hiking up there and ended up going through a portal into another world? And from there we just started dreaming and talking about all the fun things they could encounter, and then when I got home I started researching North Carolina folklore and that’s when it got really fun because several of the elements in the book really are straight from North Carolina folklore!”

Find out more about Stacey on her website.

Middle grade boys and girls will love this spooky-fun fantasy/adventure story.

HERE IS THE COVER!!!Giveaway

Stacey’s book is coming out soon. Leave a comment and I’ll enter your name in the giveaway. You’ll be one of the first to read it! Giveaway ends Wednesday February 5. U.S. addresses only.

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JUST ONE GIRL: An Inspiring Picture Book Review by Lori Keating

Just One Girl: A Fight for Equal Rights, authored by Trinka Hakes Noble and illustrated by Amanda Calatzis (Sleeping Bear Press), is a compelling and uplifting picture book that tackles the powerful themes of gender equality and the importance of standing up for one’s rights. The book is set in a world where social structures are still heavily influenced by gender roles, and it centers around the journey of young Jillian Parker, a girl who challenges these norms in order to create positive change. 

Jillian’s neighbor, Mrs. Purdy, explains the Equal Rights Amendment (ERA) to her, which aims to ensure that all American citizens have equal legal rights regardless of their gender. Mrs. Purdy recounts the challenges and victories she experienced during the Women’s Suffrage Movement, motivating Jillian to become more conscious of the inequalities in her surroundings.

The author creates a relatable protagonist who resonates with many young readers, especially girls, who may identify with her quest for equality. Noble skillfully intertwines historical context with contemporary issues, highlighting the enduring struggle for gender equality that spans generations. I particularly appreciate her choice of a Math Club, which emphasizes the importance of motivating young girls to engage in science and mathematics—areas where they have traditionally been underrepresented. My daughter excels in math, so I found this depiction especially relatable.

What makes Just One Girl: A Fight For Rights stand out is its honest portrayal of the difficulties that come with challenging societal expectations. The protagonist faces obstacles not only from external forces but also from her internal doubts and fears. This nuanced character development makes her journey feel authentic and relatable, and it encourages readers to reflect on their own roles in fighting for a more equitable world.

Noble brilliantly illustrates how the actions of a single individual can ignite a larger movement. The book motivates readers to become that “one girl” who can instigate change, regardless of how significant or minor their efforts may appear. The writing style is clear and straightforward, making it accessible to readers of various ages.

The Author’s Note is remarkable, rich with historical insights about the author’s lineage of women who have championed equal rights, adding context and depth to the narrative. It acts as a poignant reminder of the continuous struggle for gender equality and highlights the significance of every individual’s role in this important cause.

In summary, Just One Girl: A Fight for Equal Rights is an empowering read that delivers both educational and emotional insights. It’s an excellent choice for those seeking to understand the personal and societal challenges in the ongoing fight for gender equality, particularly for young readers who are starting to explore these vital topics. It would be a great addition to a school library and can be enjoyed in elementary, lower middle grade classrooms, and by reluctant readers.

Purchase your copy here: Amazon,  B & N, or BookShop.org

Lori Keating is an award-winning, multi-genre author with a unique talent for weaving tales that resonate with readers of all ages, blending humor, heart, and a touch of magic. Whether she’s penning a heartwarming children’s story, or an inspiring romance, her passion for storytelling shines through. She enjoys actively participating in the literary community by providing insightful reviews and is a frequent guest blogger on my blog.

GIVEAWAY

Sleeping Bear Press is generously giving away a copy of this picture book to one reader. If you are a librarian or educator, please that information in the comments for a second chance to win. U.S. addresses only. Giveaway ends January 29.

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Angels in The Sand: A Great MG Review by Kate Lundeen

REVIEW

Monarch Publishing welcomes a new middle grade novel to the reading repertoire called Angels in the Sand by Lori Keating. This novel is a touching story about a contemporary family choosing joy amid hard circumstances. 

Jess and her mother Darlene make the annual East Coast trek to Grandma’s house during the Christmas holidays. Jess and Grandma make lists of festive fun activities to do together and both treasure the memories. The list includes making gingerbread houses, caroling at the piano, soaking up festivities around town, and making lots of snow angels! Sadly, this year may be Grandma’s last Christmas due to her diagnosis of terminal cancer. To top things off Jess and Darlene cannot seem to move on in their grief over the passing of a beloved husband and father two years ago. Can three generations (Grandma, Darlene, and Jess) help each other bid sadness goodbye and sprinkle this Christmas with loads of joyful memories?

Keating expertly weaves her timeless message about finding joy during trials through Grandma’s wise quotes and actions. She often cautions Darlene and Jess to look on the bright side of life and not to dwell on the tough stuff.  At one point, Darlene gets into a worrysome tizzy over Grandma’s cancer. Grandma notes, “…You need to stop dwelling on what’s to come. Tomorrow has its own worries, and we are not going to focus on them. We are going to focus on living…” (p. 19). 

Grandma and Jess share a moment of wisdom over the future as they are making snow angels together. Jess breaks down in tears over not having the chance to make snow angel memories with Grandma after this year. Grandma comfortingly comments, “That is the wonderful thing about memories. You hold them in your heart, and when you need them, they are always with you. Just like I will be.” She encourages Jess to “Never lose hope my dear” (p. 31). On their last morning together before Jess and Darlene head home, Grandma cuddles with Jess and hugs Darlene for a long time just telling her family she loves them. This goodbye rings with finality but Grandma would rather spread the sunshine of her love instead of the rain of her tears at the closure of this family gathering.  

It is delightfully interesting to watch small hints of Grandma’s positivity leave marks in the lives of her daughter and granddaughter. I will leave it to the reader to discover the generational gems that follow in Grandma’s wake. Sometimes a story just speaks for itself (:  Finding joy in tough times is hard to do in today’s world but a read of Angels in the Sand makes it easier to nurture and cultivate joy in your heart. Thank you, Lori Keating, for showing us that grief is real but choosing joy during heartache adds a spot of sunshine that might chase the gray clouds away.

You can find the book on Amazon , Barnes & Noble, and Bookshop.

GIVEAWAY

Lori is giving away an autographed copy of ANGELS IN THE SAND to one fortunate reader. To enter, please request the book from your library. Comment by January 21. U.S. addresses only.

GUEST BLOGGER, Kate Lundeen

The Lord’s hand of watchful care and protection blessed my life from my start as a tiny premature infant. Doctors diagnosed me with cerebral palsy from birth complications which mainly affected my legs and motor skills.  I also have a learning disability that does not allow me to write down or process thoughts as fast as other people.  I am a former homeschooler and obtained an Associate in Arts degree from a North Carolina community college after five years of hard work! I discovered and developed a love for writing in college. Now I pen articles for my local church newsletter and write book reviews. I enjoy my current job as a part-time library assistant in a Christian library in Matthews, NC. I have a servant’s heart and a willing attitude to grow in old skills and develop new ones along whatever path the Lord chooses to take me.

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YOU CAN SEE IT HERE FIRST!

Every author can’t wait until they can reveal the cover of their forthcoming book. In the past, I have shared several of my friends covers: Linda Phillips’ new cover for CRAZY, Stacey Bartlett’s FREE SINGS THE SEA, and Vivian Elbee’s I WANT MY BOOK BACK to name just three.

NOW, IT’S MY TURN

But first, just in case you missed it, here is my announcement in Publisher’s Marketplace.

Over the last eighteen years I’ve learned a lot about taking a book from an idea to publication. I attended writing conferences and wrote drafts and more drafts. I received and integrated feedback from beta readers. I queried publishers and agents. Then, after signing with my publisher, Monarch Educational Press, there were more rounds of editing, getting the ARC (Advanced Reader Copy) ready for reviews, and participating in the creation of a book cover. Before my own publishing journey, I had no idea what it took to bring a book into the world.

NOW, I DO!

I’m thrilled to share the cover of my debut Young Adult/Upper Middle Grade novel, HALF-TRUTHS, with all of you–my faithful friends, supporters, and blog followers.

And if you’re in Charlotte, I hope you can join me and three other local authors on April 2 — National Reconcilation Day for a panel event sponsored by the Levine Museum of the New South.

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YOU ARE SEEING IT HERE FIRST!

Every author can’t wait until they can reveal the cover of their forthcoming book. In the past, I have shared several of my friends covers: Linda Phillips’ new cover for CRAZY, Stacey Bartlett’s FREE SINGS THE SEA, and Vivian Elbee’s I WANT MY BOOK BACK to name just three.

NOW, IT’S MY TURN

But first, just in case you missed it, here is my announcement in Publisher’s Marketplace.

Over the last eighteen years I’ve learned a lot about taking a book from an idea to publication. I attended writing conferences and wrote drafts and more drafts. I received and integrated feedback from beta readers. I queried publishers and agents. Then, after signing with my publisher, Monarch Educational Press, there were more rounds of editing, getting the ARC (Advanced Reader Copy) ready for reviews, and participating in the creation of a book cover. Before my own publishing journey, I had no idea what it took to bring a book into the world.

NOW, I DO!

I’m thrilled to share the cover of my debut Young Adult/Upper Middle Grade novel, HALF-TRUTHS, with all of you–my faithful friends, supporters, and blog followers.

And if you’re in Charlotte, I hope you can join me and three other local authors on April 2 — National Reconcilation Day for a panel event sponsored by the Levine Museum of the New South.

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HEARTSMITH: An Upper MG/YA Book Review by Kate Lundeen

Check out an older teen thriller from Monarch Books: Heartsmith by Stephanie Cotta. Be prepared to lose track of time with this mystery which is the first in a series.

Review

Aaren Lockett is a 16-year-old in search of a new start after life in an orphanage. He travels to the city of Rexanberg and plans to set up shop as a tinker. As he is about to establish his business, he gets caught in the crosshairs of some of the city’s upper crust. Aaren puts his life on the line for a woman named Aida during the fight. Afterwards, Aaren and Aida develop a magical bond. 

Aaren’s new ability allows him to repair a subject’s physical injuries or restart someone’s heart just as easily as he can fix a broken watch or a broken mechanical spring. Aaren becomes a Heartsmith. The Heartsmith craft stems from a rare, coveted magical tie which contains the power to heal or harm patients under its care. 

When local children go missing, Aaren and his pretty sidekick Sasha use their sleuthing skills to solve the mystery. Aaren and Sasha discover a gruesome solution involving illicit swiping of dead bodies and mistreatment of minors. To their horror, the teens discover that the black-market dealings were a cover for a plan so evil, they cannot even wrap their minds around it! The sinister plan contains twisted replications of positive Heartsmith qualities suitable for nefarious deeds. Halting this plan will prove to be a complex and dangerous mission for the teens.  

Cotta’s use of scene imagery and character descriptions highlight her artistry in the suspense category. Readers will feel like they are inside perilous scenes in the story. In one part, our sleuths find themselves ensnared in a burning building. Cotta writes,

The fire continued spreading through the room, spanning from wall to wall, and spilling into adjoining areas in the foundry. Flames shot from the support beams holding the rafters suspended above them. The fire, fueled by the accelerant, devoured every inch, and the beams snapped and popped as if in horrendous pain. Smoke whirled around the ceiling, billowing like a formless creature; the two glass skylights giving it a pair of moonlit eyes. Burning cinders rained down like torched paper.” (p. 116) ….  The beams supporting the rafters buckled. In a cacophonous, molten jumble, they crashed, spraying sparks and debris in a violent burst. (p. 117). 

The burning flames and sense of peril were almost real and made me want to escape the building too! 

Her description of the crime boss in Chapter 13 contains creepy vibes. [The crime boss’ visage contained], cold amber eyes, which lacked all luster of life…  [His long fingers jabbed]  five fast needle-like pinpricks[which] pierced [Aaren’s] skull. His eyes clamped shut in nail-grating discomfort as every hair on his body stood on end… the scrape of his footsteps a disturbing echo that grated every nerve in Aaren’s body. [the crime boss] released Aaren with a gruff shove and circled Sasha, like a wolf circling its prey” (pp. 108-109 and 112.).

This crime boss means business and is ready to go in for the kill when Aaren and Sasha invade his domain.  An exhaustive list of all foreboding scenes and creepy characters that Cotta sketches in her tale would spoil the story but many a shiver or thrill will go down spines as readers get delightfully lost in the twists and turns of Heartsmith. Do not read this book before bed!

One word of caution: Heartsmith contains some mature content in both the magic and mystery framework. The audience for this book should contain older teens who are able to exercise discernment. I work in a Christian library and our patron base contains many conservative homeschool families who might not receive this book well. Even though I would not choose this selection for my workplace, it is suspense worthy of consideration and enjoyment.

Beware that this book ends on a nail-biting cliff hanger! Cotta is working on the sequel, Heartwrecked (working title) which she hopes will be available in 2026. 

For more information about Stephanie’s other books, please visit her website.

Giveaway

Stephanie is giving away a signed copy of Heartsmith and swag to one fortunate blog reader. To enter, leave a comment by January 8. U.S. addresses only.

Guest Blogger, Kate Lundeen

The Lord’s hand of watchful care and protection blessed my life from my start as a tiny premature infant. Doctors diagnosed me with cerebral palsy from birth complications which mainly affected my legs and motor skills.  I also have a learning disability that does not allow me to write down or process thoughts as fast as other people.  I am a former homeschooler and obtained an Associate in Arts degree from a North Carolina community college after five years of hard work! I discovered and developed a love for writing in college. Now I pen articles for my local church newsletter and write book reviews. I enjoy my current job as a part-time library assistant in a Christian library in Matthews, NC. I have a servant’s heart and a willing attitude to grow in old skills and develop new ones along whatever path the Lord chooses to take me.

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You Heard it Here First: Lori Keating Signs with a Literary Agent!

Introduction

I love sharing my friends’ publishing news. This post is particularly special because it’s about my guest blogger, Lori Keating. I think you’ll agree that signing with a literary agent is a wonderful way for her to end 2024 and begin 2025!

Lori posted this picture on Facebook with the caption, “I just Docusigned something exciting.” I couldn’t wait to hear about it.

Lori agreed to share highlights of signing with literary agent, Sherry Wilson Johnson. So, take it away, Lori!

How did you discover your agent?

I first came across Gardner Literary on Instagram about a year and a half ago. I did some research on the agency and its agents. At that time, I didn’t have a story to submit since their website stated they do not accept children’s literature, which was what I was writing. 

How long did getting an agent take?

The entire journey from when I began querying to securing my agent spanned three years. For most of that time, I sought representation for my picture books and chapter books. Nearly every query resulted in a rejection. I did receive one request for additional picture books from a new agent, but that ultimately ended in a rejection.

Then, in November 2023, I noticed a Twitter post about NANOWRIMO and felt intrigued enough to participate. During that November, I wrote a draft of an adult romance novel, finishing it with 50,000 words. I decided to take my querying efforts seriously, hoping to find an agent within a year. However, I still thought this would involve children’s literature, so I set my adult novel aside and queried picture books.

By June of 2024, after facing several more rejections, I revisited my novel for revisions and edits. After a couple of months of work, I sent it to an editor to ensure there were no plot issues. Following that, I shared it with a few beta readers, made additional revisions, and prepared to query again.

Initially, I submitted my book to agents who were not well-suited for my work. My story is a sweet romance, rather than a spicy one, and most agents seek out spicy narratives. After receiving several rejections, I turned to QueryTracker to search for agents interested in “Sweet Romance.” That led me to two options. One was closed, but the other was Sherri at Gardner Literary. The agency name sounded familiar, and upon further research, I realized she would be an ideal match for my book.

I received a response from Sherri just a few days after she received my query. She appreciated my premise and recognized potential in my story, but pointed out that my word count was too low. She encouraged me to resubmit if I decided to make revisions. Initially, I was uncertain about how to approach this. However, after considering various options and spending some time in prayer, I woke up one morning with new ideas for an additional chapter and ways to further develop the storyline with two side characters.

These additions were the crucial elements that the story needed to make it “just right.” I sent the revised version to Sherri before Thanksgiving, and a few days later, she responded that she wanted to see the full manuscript! She mentioned needing a bit more time due to the holidays, so I honestly expected to hear from her after New Year’s. However, she reached out before Christmas, inviting me to a Zoom meeting to discuss my novel!

How did you know Sherri was the right agent for you?

Going into the meeting, I was unsure if Sherri would be the right fit for me. Instead of a “want this in an agent” list, I had more of a “don’t want this” list. From the moment Sherri appeared on the call, I would describe her in one word: delightful! Her warm smile and genuine enthusiasm immediately put me at ease. As we talked, it became clear that Sherri not only understood my story, but she was also passionate about it. She asked insightful questions that showed she had carefully considered my manuscript and was invested in its potential. Her feedback was both constructive and encouraging, which reassured me that she would be a supportive partner in my writing journey.

Sherri’s vision for the book aligned perfectly with mine. She had an exciting plan for how we could bring it to the right audience and shared my enthusiasm for exploring new themes and ideas in future projects. It was evident that she cared deeply about nurturing my growth as an author, which was exactly what I was looking for in an agent.

By the end of our conversation, I felt a strong sense of trust and camaraderie with Sherri. Her professionalism, combined with her warm and approachable demeanor, made me confident that choosing her as my agent was the best decision. I left the meeting knowing that I had found someone who truly believed in my work and who would champion my stories with passion and dedication.

What was Sherri’s reaction to your book?

Sherri’s response to my book was exactly what I had hoped for. She connected with my characters, and I loved hearing her praise the aspects I executed well. She highlighted the emotional depth and authenticity of the relationships I had crafted, which meant a lot to me, as those were elements I had poured my heart into. Her enthusiasm was contagious, and it was clear she understood the vision I had for the story. Her suggestions felt like a perfect fit for my writing style, and I appreciated how she struck a balance between recognizing the strengths of the manuscript and identifying areas for improvement.

During our conversation, Sherri talked about how she saw potential for the book to resonate with a wide audience, and she had some great ideas for marketing and reaching the right readers. Her passion and commitment to the project were evident, and I couldn’t help but feel that I was in capable hands. By the end of the meeting, I was more convinced than ever that Sherri was the right agent for me, someone who would champion my work and help me grow as an author. It was the beginning of what I believed would be a fruitful and inspiring partnership.

What future projects will you work on together?

Our upcoming projects will likely focus on more adult romances, as I am currently writing another one. However, I also learned that the agency represents children’s books as long as I remain a client! So there may be opportunities for those stories to develop as well! 

I’m excited about the possibilities that lie ahead with Sherri’s guidance. With her expertise and enthusiasm, I feel confident in exploring new themes and expanding my writing repertoire. My next adult romance, which I’m currently drafting, promises to delve deeper into the complexities of love and relationships, offering readers a fresh perspective with characters who are both relatable and inspiring.

At the same time, I’m thrilled about the chance to revive my passion for children’s literature. The idea of weaving enchanting tales for young readers fills me with joy, and I look forward to potentially revisiting some of my earlier works or even crafting new stories that captivate the imaginations of children.

This dual focus allows me to balance my love for both genres, creating a diverse body of work that can touch the hearts of readers across different age groups. With Sherri by my side, championing my stories, I’m eager to embark on this creative journey and see where it leads us. Whether it’s through tender romances or whimsical children’s tales, I hope to continue connecting with readers, bringing a little magic and heart into their lives.

What advice would you give to querying writers?

Take your time to find the right fit. The journey to securing an agent can be long and filled with ups and downs, but it’s important to stay persistent. Research agents thoroughly to ensure they align with your writing style and genre. Don’t rush the process; instead, focus on honing your craft and ensuring your manuscript is in the best possible shape before sending it out.

Embrace feedback and use it to grow. Rejections can be disheartening, but they’re also an opportunity to learn and improve. Listen to any constructive criticism you receive, and be open to revising your work to make it stronger.

Consider engaging with writing communities. Platforms like QueryTracker or writer forums can provide support, feedback, and a sense of camaraderie. Connecting with other writers can offer insights and encouragement that keep you motivated.

Finally, believe in your story. Your passion and dedication will shine through in your work, so stay true to your voice. Remember, finding the right agent is about building a partnership with someone who understands and champions your vision. Keep writing, keep querying, and trust the process—you never know when the perfect opportunity will present itself.

Congratulations, Lori! We’re excited for you!

Want to find out more about Lori? Check out her website and her new middle grade novel, Angels in the Sand, that comes out January 7! Remember– pre-orders help authors!

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