Ellie Marney's Blog, page 29
March 14, 2014
COVER REVEAL AND RELEASE DATE: Every Word
Okay – cue me, with the flailing hands again.
I swore black and blue that I’d get this up last week, but of course, I was distracted by the actual process of getting the book to the printers (yup, kinda necessary, that). But now I get to share the shiny cover of Every Word with you. Yes.
And here it is!

So lovely, right? Lisa White has done an amazing job. I can tell you at this point that the covers were designed by her well in advance – back when Every Breathwas being designed, before I even had a full manuscript for Every Word ready to go – and the only detail she knew about Every Word was ‘London’. So she has really been quite psychic about this cover, because it’s a great reflection of what’s inside (see how Mycroft’s looking all angsty? Well, there’s a reason for that…)
I can also tell you now that Every Word will be officially released on 1 June 2014. You can pre-order copies through the Allenand Unwin website, if you like, and feel free to drop over to Goodreads and add it to your list, if you have one.
What else has been happening? SO MANY THINGS. Oh my god, you know those weeks you have when you feel like the whirlwind has come to you, and everything seems to want to happen all at once? That has been me, for the past few weeks. I’ve been working other jobs, and writing grant proposals, and talking to folks in Canada about getting Every Breath released overseas in September, and writing Every Move, and doing copyedits for Every Word, and rewrites for Every Word, and, and…
Oh yes, my house! It is so messy! (oh, my messy messy house… *sob*)And my family! We’ve had a birthday, and a school camp, and parent-teacher nights…all the usual exciting stuff. My head has been just a little full lately. Last night, I had a dream about a haunted supermarket (say what?), so clearly I have a few too many plates spinning. Or maybe I’ll use it for a story, at some later point, who knows.
I’ve also got some events coming up. Lovely folks of Tintern College, I am coming your way on Monday 17 March, and then later again, in May. I’ll be at Carey Grammar in May too, for the literature festival there, and the Melbourne Writers Festival Schools Program is in August, and I’ll be there! I even bought some proper lady-clothes for all these things, yes indeed, so you won’t have to deal with the sight of me in my clean-out-the-chookhouse clobber.
In the meantime, I’m gonna keep working on Every Move. I’m really looking forward to April, when things will be quieter, and I’ll be able to really get into it. The weather here is cooling now, which is very conducive for working – it’s dark and quiet in the mornings, and not yet freeze-your-fingers-off temperatures, so I’ll be able to get up and make my thermos and sneak out to write into the cool, dim, quiet time before everyone yawns and wakens…
See you in the haunted supermarket J
Xx Ellie
Published on March 14, 2014 18:14
February 23, 2014
Fanning flames, and the Blog Hop
Summer is kind of a stressful time around here. It’s not that’s it’s not lovely to have a change from the long and freezing months of winter – it is, totally – but seasonal weather in this part of the country always seem to swerve from one extreme to the other. Winter is about snow on your car, frozen pipes, sleet in your face and whether you’ve got enough firewood to last until October. Summer involves heat so intense it could kill you if you sat in your car with the windows up, keeping water supplies up to the animals, monitoring the dam level, and bushfires.
The past month we’ve had three evacuation scares near where we live – one was literally down the road, when a 20 acre grassfire looked like it might threaten us depending on the wind change. Check out the pic of smoke haze near our washing line – nice, huh? (I’m being ironic, it’s nerve-wracking)

We’ve high-tailed it to Melbourne twice, when the heat got too crazy for the kids – it’s hard to sleep when your bed feels like it’s baking you. Most nights have involved a quick moonlight skinny-dip in the dam (watch out for the leeches!) to cool us all down enough to sleep. We don’t have air-con, so we just swelter, and turn the fans up high, and spray ourselves down with water bottles when it gets too sweaty.
Working in the heat has been difficult, you might say, but I’ve had my head down a lot over the past month, putting the final touches on Every Word. I’m happy to say that it went to typesetting last week. Phew and yay! The timeline for this second book has been rather tight, but I’ve been in a unique position to release this book quickly, as I wrote Every Word soon after finishing Every Breath. It was a very pleasant feeling, to be able to hand my editor a complete manuscript for book 2 while the ink was still drying on the pages of book 1. Of course, I wasn’t doing as much other work then as I am now. I hope I can stay ahead of deadline for every book I write – it’s a much more comfortable place to be than writing under pressure – but I guess we’ll wait and see…
Lots of you have written to me, asking about the publication date for Every Word. I’m going to give you an update on that in my next post, which will happen within a few days (a ‘double event’ this week, to coin Jack the Ripper terminology).
In the meantime, I’ve been asked to join in this Writing Process Blog Hop, answering a few questions about process below. My lovely mate, Kathryn Ledson (Rough Diamond, Monkey Business) is a writer of adult romantic crime fiction, and she tapped me on the shoulder to jump aboard. Kathryn's up on FB and on Twitter @kathrynledson. You can read Kathryn’s responses to the same questions here, and before her, the hop started with Jennifer Scoullar here.
So here we go…
1 What am I working on?
Currently multi-tasking – doing final touches for proofread/typeset of the second book in the Every series, Every Word. Also writing the first draft of Every Move, the third book. Also, getting lots of ideas for a new book (working title: The Circle Game) which I’m jotting down when they come - longing to get into that.
2 How does my work differ from others in its genre?
Well, there’s not loads of YA crime out there, although I have a sense it’s picking up. I guess, in comparison to other local (Australian) YA crime, my work is kind of gritty – I don’t really pull too many punches with descriptions of blood and the processes of autopsy and death. The characters focus on forensic detail during the investigation of the mystery, which I hadn’t really seen done before – forensic procedurals for YA, with a lot of humour and action and romance to balance out the grit!
3 Why do I write what I do?
Um, why do birds fly? The characters start developing personalities and talking, and I just write it down.
I guess…I did make a conscious decision to write YA crime. I had been looking for it in libraries and bookstores, and I realised it was in short supply. So I knew there was a niche there. But I already had the characters in my head by then, I think I still would have written it regardless. I’ve written in other genres, and the process is the same – these weird people start talking in your head, and you begin jotting it down just to shut them up! They could be part of a crime novel, or a lit fiction piece, or a space opera…the genre and plot and setting begin to take shape as the dialogue emerges.
4 How does my writing process work?
I get up and make a big cup (or thermos) of tea, take it into the study at about 5.30am, and then I just sit there and read through what happened yesterday – or the day before, or whatever – and then I put my fingers on the keyboard and kind of force myself to start typing. After a little while, I lose the feeling that it’s an effort. And on good days, I have to force myself to stop, so I can go get everyone ready for school.
But it’s not all dreamy-muse stuff. Sometimes I HAVE to finish a scene or I’m struggling with something. Then you need to have a stock of the old writer’s remedy that Stephen King heartily recommends – bum glue. Screw your bum to the sticking place and just keep typing until you’ve got something down, and worry about whether it works later. You can craft it later – the grammar, the poetry of it – but you have to get the material out of your head first.
I keep a series of notebooks, little school exercise books, where I jot down scraps of dialogue, or phrases, or beautiful words – things I try to incorporate during the writing, or later when I edit and pretty things up. I’m a big fan of rewriting. Some of my best work comes in the rewriting!
And that's the end of the Blog Hop! I’m passing the Blog Hop baton to Nansi Kunze, another YA writer and all-round cool chick – check out her responses to the questions on her blog very soon.
Can I say a big thanks, at this point, to everyone who’s encouraged me to keep going with the Every series – all of you who’ve emailed/texted/tweeted/FB’ed me to say how you loved Every Breath, and can’t wait for Every Word. It’s made working in this heat much more bearable!
Now that the weather is starting to change, things are looking up - keep tuned for Every Word release date info very soon! Stay cool, and stay safe this summer.
Xx Ellie
Published on February 23, 2014 04:53
January 19, 2014
Rachel and Mycroft go gangbusters…a post-Christmas post
I know! I said I would post before Christmas! And that didn’t happen!
Apologies in advance for Excessive Exclamation Mark Usage, but I’m very excited. I’ve had this secret for weeks, you see, and I haven’t been able to tell. But now the ink is nearly dry on the paperwork, and my agent Catherine Drayton has given me permission to spill the beans.
So I’m extremely happy to let you all know that Every Breath will be published in Canada and North America by Tundra, an imprint of Random House Canada, in Fall 2014.
Woot!
I can’t tell you how happy this makes me. Rachel and Mycroft are going travelling! I’m thrilled for them, and very proud. They’ll have a new family, and a new bunch of readers to love them. Yes, it makes me all teary just thinking about it! (my babies! *sniff*)
People from Canada have been in touch with me, and it’s all very exciting. Tundra is also the home of one of the sweetest books of all time, in my opinion – Anne of Green Gables, by LM Montgomery.
So it feels like kismet!
Anne, meet Rachel and James.
Rachel and James, meet Anne. (James, put that cigarette out and stop slouching.)
So that is my biggest and most delicious news of late. I’m sorry I didn’t get to put up a final 2013 post – after the interview with Barry Lyga, things got very busy. We went camping over Christmas (camping – we love camping. But some people take camping very seriously. There was a guy near our campsite who raked outside his tent. I kid you not. IT’S A NATIONAL PARK, FRIEND. If you’re bringing the rake, you may as well bring the leaf blower) and we had a lovely time with new friends (hi, Liz and Paul!)
Then two days after we arrived back home, Melbourne sweated through its most severe heatwave in a couple of hundred years – five days over 41 degrees Celsius (that’s ** Fahrenheit, for those of you from other climes). After a few scares with grassfires nearby – as in, down the road from our house – we decided that the bravest course was pragmatic cowardice and escaped to Melbourne with our dog, cockatiel and budgies.
We just returned on Saturday night, and that was when I heard from Catherine that I could tell you all the awesome news about the Canadian/US deal. Now we’re settling back into our last weeks of summer holidays - cleaning the house, washing mounds of laundry, watering all the dead plants… Alas, the garden was decimated in the heat, but our chooks were well-provided for and are still clucking around with their new babies, completely oblivious.
But here’s an abbreviated round-up of all the stuff I wanted to post before Christmas – a post-Christmas post, if you will. For instance, I wanted to tell you about my fave books of 2013. Here they are!
The Curseworker series – Holly BlackThe third and final book, Black Heart, was only released here last year, so I reread everything. Magic and the mob, with a distinct Grifters feel. Taut, sensual, hypnotic, not to mention smart and political.
The Madness Underneath (Shades of London #2) – Maureen JohnsonA supernatural mystery series of the highest calibre. Johnson never does the expected thing, and her writing of dialogue and character interaction is so succinct and tight it does my head in. The ending of this book nearly killed me.
Clockwork Princess – Cassandra ClarePretty much a case study in how to end a series, second only to Harry Potter. I totally blubbered my way through the finale.
The Fault in Our Stars – John GreenThe Perks of Being A Wallflower – Stephen ChboskyI put off reading both these books, intimidated by the subject matter and the reputation of the authors – I should never have waited.
The Rosie Project – Graeme SimsionOutright entertaining and sweet-hearted. No schmaltz, just fantastic characters and gorgeous writing. And Graeme is a lovely guy!
Dark Horse – Honey BrownA new discovery for me – she has four books out, this is her newest. Adult psychological thrillers and crime, this woman is the queen, for my money. Edgy, sensual, suspenseful – and Australian. Big tick.
Life in Outer Space – Melissa KeilGeek love. 80’s movies. Boy-nerds and girl-nerds and swoon. World of Warcraft. What, you need more? (Just quietly, I liked this more than Fangirl, by Rainbow Rowell)
Hate List - Jennifer BrownAn older release, and it knocked my socks off. Uncompromising, shocking, poignant. The ending left me in tears.
The Keepers – Lian TannerMiddle-grade fantasy adventure AWESOME. Beautiful writing and nuanced characters – my younger boys and I fell in love with these books.
I also wanted to tell you which books I’m most looking forward to reading in 2014 – here they are!
The Boy in the Smoke –Maureen Johnson(I'm super keen for this)The Naturals – Jennifer Lyn BarnesGame – Barry LygaThe Last Shot – Michael AdamsThe Murder Complex – Lindsay CummingsDr Sleep – Stephen KingDead Silent – Sharon JonesAnything new by Peter TempleThrough The Cracks - Honey BrownThe One - Kiera CassCinnamon Girl - Melissa KeilWinger - Andrew SmithLair of Dreams - Libba BrayRazorhurst - Justine LarbalestierThe Coldest Girl in Cold Town - Holly Black
‘And here’s what I read over my summer holidays, just for the heck of it!:
Fangirl – Rainbow RowellLooking for Alaska – John GreenPaper Towns – John GreenThe Left Hand of God – Paul HoffmanThe Good Daughter – Honey BrownAfter the Darkness – Honey BrownFall for Anything – Courtney SummersYou Don’t Even Know – Sue LawsonThe Waking Dark – Robin WassermanWhite Dog – Peter TempleSecret - Brigid Kemmerer
That’s it, I’m all book-listed out. Finally, before I go, a quick Every Word update:
Every Word is being copyedited and polished up, and will be going to the printers in March. It will be released in June. I’ll let you know more details as they come to light, but that’s all I can give you right now, except I’m seriously buzzed about showing you this book. I like it a lot. I think you will too.
Fingers crossed.
Xx Ellie
Published on January 19, 2014 22:34
December 16, 2013
YA Crime Report: GUEST POST – Barry Lyga
The other day I was casting around for suggestions about who we should have to visit on the YA Crime Report, and while a couple of people sprang to mind, I secretly knew who I really wanted to interview. This is someone whose work I’ve read and admired, and who I think is genuinely pushing the envelope in writing for YA. Someone whose books gave me serious chills and thrills – think Silence of the Lambs kind – and whose new releases I always keep an eye out for.
I didn’t think I could actually just cold-call this author and ask them for an interview. But, as Barry Lyga kindly pointed out, I totally could. This kind of generosity completely blows me away, I have to say, because y’know, authors are busy people.

So clearly, he’s already the mash-up-genre-and-audience master. But it’s his books in the Jasper Dent series that have me really excited. I read I Hunt Killers earlier this year, after hanging out for it for a while (you know how long it takes us to get some books here in the Antipodes…well, grr is all I can say to that). I Hunt Killers is the first episode in the story of Jasper ‘Jazz’ Dent, who suffers from a serious case of Daddy Issues. With his haemophiliac best friend, Howie, and kick-arse girlfriend, Connie, in tow, Jazz embarks on a desperate search for a murderer haunting the streets of his hometown, Lobo’s Nod.
But in Jazz’s case, nothing is at it seems. Because how do you deal with murder if you’re the son of Billy Dent, one of the world’s worst serial killers?
The whole thing is an amazing ride, and an extraordinary hook for a story. Jazz seems to be always walking a very fine line between determined investigation and creepy obsession, and he spends a lot of time worrying about whether he’s turning into a monster – another version of his old man. At its most fundamental, Jazz’s story seems to be about what it means to be human, to try to be a good person, against pretty staggering odds. The next part of Jazz’s story has just been revealed, with the recent release of Game, set in New York.
So I won’t give any more clues away, just ask you to please put your hands together and excuse my fan-girlish squee. He’s been called a ‘YA rebel author’ by Kirkus Review, but I am just going to call him a cool guy for agreeing to this interview by some random person from a country far away… I’m stoked to welcome Barry Lyga to the YA Crime Report!!
(I always think of Kermit doing these introductions, with the wide open mouth and the waving green hands…)
Hi Barry, how’s things going over your neck of the woods?Busy, busy, and busy! I have a slew of things in the hopper right now, including — of course — the final book in the I HUNT KILLERS trilogy, and my collaboration with Peter Facinelli and Rob DeFranco. And my e-published adults-only novel, UNSOUL’D. And other things that haven’t been announced yet.
Now last time I saw you, you were being interviewed by a toucan plushie, which has to count as a unique experience. Could you tell us something that nobody knows about Barry Lyga thus far?Yeah, that interview was…different. I’m not sure what there is about me that people don’t know at this point. I’m pretty boring, really, so there aren’t any amazing hidden stories about me. I mean, my wife recently wrote about our wedding on Huffington Post’s Weddings blog — short of being chased by paparazzi, I feel like I live a fairly public life, certainly more public than I’d like.
Congrats on your wedding! So do teenagers make good detectives? And how do you give them agency, and make their involvement believable, in a situation where adults seem to have all the authority?99.9999% of teenagers probably make shitty detectives. And Jazz isn’t really a detective, per se. He’s more a scattershot profiler and budding crime scene guy. And as the books prove, he’s fairly good at it, but he has a lot to learn.
As to providing agency and making it believable… Sometimes you have to take a leap of faith, the way Kafka says, “Oh, by the way, Gregor Samsa is a cockroach now — just trust me.” But also… Look, if you really read the books, you’ll see that I actually go to great pains to explain how all of this can be happening. I mean, in the first book alone, the cops specifically forbid Jazz from getting involved until the third act, when they’re so desperate that they — shock! horror! — let him look at some files and visit a crime scene. It’s hardly on the level of them deputizing him and giving him a sidearm, right? It’s a move made out of fear and despair, and I think a lot of things are credible in that context.

And as to creating the investigation — God, yes, it’s tough! Deciding what order to reveal what facts, figuring out how to pace the revelations… It’s difficult because ideally you don’t want the reader to know anything for sure until the moment he or she reads it. It’s OK if people suspect something, but even then… My preference is for the reader to be completely shocked and caught off-guard at every turn. But that’s a nearly impossible goal, so at the very least you want them uncertain.
Excuse me for getting deep here, but another author – I think it might have been Ian McEwan – once said that ‘Sadism, and the inability to empathize with others, is a failure of the imagination’. Do you think that’s accurate, in relation to a character like Billy Dent?You know, I’m not entirely sure. It SOUNDS good, right? If you can’t imagine what it’s like to be someone else, you won’t have much empathy for them and that can easily lead to doing horrible things to them. But it seems — to an armchair philosopher like yours truly — just as reasonable to assume the opposite, that an inability to empathize kills the imaginative process that would allow you to at least PRETEND to care.
Some of the info you use in the series, about mass murderers and their methods, is way creepy – I was both pleased that you didn’t make Jazz’s story ‘serial killer lite’ and amazed you got it past your editor! Clearly, gore and horror are not as shocking to teenagers as some people might think, but was some of that stuff a hard sell? Not really. I toned down a couple of things, but honestly, that’s like saying I mopped up a few drops out of a gallon. It’s a bloody, dark, intense, disturbing series and the publisher is behind it all the way.
Do you have a favourite crime author?There are many I admire, but one of my favorites for so long is the inimitable, late, lamented Ed McBain. Such an amazing writer.
What about when you get brain-strain – how do you recharge your batteries?When I figure that out, I’ll you know!
Barry, you’ve been an incredibly gracious guest! Thanks for coming on the YA Crime Report, and all the best for your writing!
If you’d like to catch up with Barry Lyga, which I recommend you do, the best place is at his website here http://barrylyga.com/ , and I urge you to check out both Game and I Hunt Killers – info about both books is available here http://barrylyga.com/novels/and specifically for Game, here http://barrylyga.com/novels/game/
You can buy the books where all good books are sold, or hit the links for online sales at the bottom of the page here http://barrylyga.com/novels/
Okay, I’m gonna stop squeeing...phew J Now the next thing I promised was the draw for the giveaway…

I’m also really chuffed to mention that Every Breath won the 2013 People’s Choice award for children’s and YA over at Allen & Unwin – which is a lovely way of saying that my publisher is excited about the book, and that makes me pretty happy.
The copyedits for Every Word, the second book, are happening over the next few months, so that’s really thrilling, to see the book finally start to take shape. I’m a big fan of editing, and I know this book is going to be gorgeous by the time me and Sophie are finished with it. Wow, the publication is coming up fast… I’m doing the Kermit thing again, at the idea of showing it to you J
And the first draft of Every Move is nearly complete! First draft stage is always kind of amazing and excruciating, but now I’m on the home strait, and I can see what the book is going to be like at the end. That always spurs you on, that feeling of being so close, and getting a clearer picture of where you’re going to take it all. Just like everybody else, I often have no idea of where the characters are headed when I first start writing – what, you thought I had a master plan? Heh heh…well actually, um, no – but now Rachel and Mycroft are really directed. It always makes the writing easier, when your characters give you some clues about what they’re up to…
Finally, I’d like to say thanks to everybody who sent good wishes for my health after the last post. The sinusitis is long gone now, thank god, and I’m a whole lot better, but reading peoples’ messages helped lift me out of the gloom. I sincerely hope you’re all healthy, and not going too crazy with seasonal madness – it’s a busy time, so stay sane! – and good luck with all your holiday plans and Christmas shopping. I recommend books as presents – books are extremely easy to wrap J
That’s it. I’ll try to put up one last post before Christmas, with the traditional list of recs, and then I’m going to sign off for a couple of weeks while I go camping with my family – ‘the family that camps together…’ yeah, etcetera!
Take care, all the best for the season, and see you soon.
Xx Ellie
Published on December 16, 2013 14:49
December 2, 2013
Sandpaper your way to Christmas CHEER
I’m going to give some stuff away today, but first, I have to tell you that I got sick last week.
I got sinusitis. Have you had this disease? A friend – a previous sufferer – and me were discussing that it should have a more appropriate name. Because ‘sinusitis’ seems like a really bland, innocuous name for the thing we both had.
We made a short list of potential names that we could submit to the medical fraternity to replace the harmless-sounding ‘sinusitis’ moniker – names like ‘Imminently Exploding Head Disease’, or ‘My Eyeballs are Hurting Now Career’, or maybe ‘Extreme Facial Agony Syndrome’.
Yeah, that was what I had. I confess that, when I finally dragged myself to the doctor, I cried in the doctor’s office. I was like, ‘Please don’t send me home with nothing! This can’t be normal!’, which was kind of embarrassing but also fruitful. I was given strong painkillers and antibiotics, and my husband was surprised that actually, yes, there appeared to be something genuinely wrong with me (because rolling around groaning is not, in our house, sufficient indication that there’s a problem).
So I took the painkillers and antibiotics, and then… Wow. Just wow. I’d been in pain for days, and now it was gone. I had not experienced that before, outside of childbirth. I think I laughed a little in the car on the way home, because it felt so amazing, and I was so relieved to be a person again (and the pain killers were a little spacey, yeah?).
I can’t say there are many things that throw writing completely out of my head. But this was definitely one of them. And since I got sick, and now in recovery mode, I haven’t had a chance to do any writing. In fact, that’s okay. It’s meant I’ve had a whole week of not setting my alarm for an early morning – actually, it’s meant a whole lot of not doing anything at all. And I am okay with that. I think, for the moment, recuperating is enough.
Because earlier this year I read a great article by Isobelle Carmody in The Victorian Writer*, about how you have to be quite exposed to write. Carmody expressed it a great deal more beautifully than me, but basically she said you have to be out of your comfort zone – you have to open yourself up, and be vulnerable. She described it as ‘having that safe smoothness rubbed off how you live your life’. She felt that generally people work towards giving themselves a comfortable life, that most of the time we walk around really unconsciously, not really seeing or hearing or experiencing things, especially the every day things.
But you can’t do that if you want to write. You can’t be unnoticing – or maybe you can be, but you’ll make rather dull writing. We are all, Carmody said, normally looking for ways to be comfortable, but writers have to seek outside their comfort zone, where ‘everything hurts and everything feels scary’. She referred to it in terms of letting life sandpaper its way over you, so you’re open and unsafe. And you have to have a certain amount of mental stamina to do that, to allow yourself to be open like that.
Last week I got sandpapered all to hell. I’ll remember that, but now it’s time to absorb and recuperate, and then I might be able to draw on that experience when I return to my writing (in a few days – a week is a long time for me not to be working). I’ll also be able to build myself back up for the next sandpapering, and the next. If I want to keep writing, and not burn myself out, I need to have that store of mental and emotional stamina. It’s something I’m constantly striving for – sometimes I feel like I have it, and other times I just feel exhausted. I just try to take it easy and remember that this is a long haul process.
So – recuperating! Yay. Recuperating, at this stage, seems to involve a lot of napping and reading. I mean, I’m still doing all the usual household things that you do within your family, and to keep the house running, but in between those things I’m napping and reading. Which is great – that’s a recuperation strategy I can totally get behind, you know? And Christmas is coming, which I’d almost forgotten about until now, when it’s a month before Christmas and I haven’t bought anything for anybody. So my plan is to recuperate, prepare for Christmas, and then cheer , because we got through this amazing year.
Would you like an early Christmas pressie? As I’ve been so slack with preparations this year, on account of books launching and so on, I was surprised to discover that I have actually got a special pressie for those of you who read the blog.

If you’d like to win this prize pack, then put your name in the hat. I don’t really do the rafflecopter thing, so I’m just going to ask people who would like to enter to either: 1) Comment here on the blog, or 2) Comment on my Facebook page, or 3) send me a Tweet @elliemarney. That’s it – just do one of those three things, with your name (your first name or Twitterhandle is fine), and then in 2 weeks, when I put up a new blogpost, I’ll draw somebody’s name out of the hat, and you might be the winner!
So – in my weakened state *cough*, that it is for today. Although it would be remiss of me not to mention that Every Breath features in the December issue of Dolly magazine, and has been getting lots of lovely new reviews…so now I’ve mentioned it. Next blog post, I’ll draw the winner of the Every Breath prize pack, and also interview a cool new YA Crime author. Until then, enjoy what’s been (for us) a late start to summer, with plenty of rain and not too many baking-hot days just yet. Take care, don’t get sinusitis, see you next time J
And now it’s time for my nap.
Xx Ellie
* The article is called ‘Fish Hook in my Heart’ from April 2013 and I recommend you look it up, it’s a ripper.
Published on December 02, 2013 02:20
November 16, 2013
YA Crime Report: GUEST POST – Sharon Jones
It’s a special event here on the Crime Report, because today we have our first overseas visitor. Please give a hearty welcome to English author of Dead Jealous, the incredible Sharon Jones!

Sharon has kindly agreed to step up and sit in the hot seat, after we bumped into each other online. We’re still getting to know each other properly, so I’m delighted that she agreed to drop by and indulge in some (completely imaginary) tea and scones.
I know that Sharon has studied politics and theology. I know she herds poodles. And I know she has worked in bookshops – which I used to do! – where she discovered her other true love, YA fiction. Sharon’s first book, Dead Jealous, came out in July this year, and it’s a ripper.
In Dead Jealous, sixteen-year-old Poppy Sinclair is a scientist and a skeptic, so she’s less than thrilled to be dragged along by her mum to a Neo-Pagan festival in the Lake District. But when a girl is found dead, Poppy has to fight through a fog of morris dancers and tarot cards to prove what she feels in her gut to be true – that it was murder, not mysticism. Meanwhile, Poppy’s finding it harder than ever to push down her feelings for her best friend, who’s dating someone else – and the hot older guy giving her the eye at the festival could provide just the distraction she needs…

Maybe Sharon can give me some helpful clues…
Hey Sharon, how are things going over your side of the world? Thanks for agreeing to come visit J
Hi Ellie, thanks for having me over! It’s certainly warmer here than it is at home!
Now I’m not going to ask how it’s been, seeing your first book come out on shelves, because I’m pretty sure I know the answer (crazy, exciting, exhausting!). What I’d like to ask is – when did you start self-identifying as a writer?
That would be the day my first book came out! Although I’d been writing quite seriously for about 6 years by then, I didn’t dare call myself a writer until the book came out, not even in my head. Writers were other people. I felt like I was just playing at it – a kid at the grown-ups table. I knew writing was my passion, but it felt wrong to call myself ‘a writer’. Still does, really!
I was also wondering if, like me, you still feel a bit like you’re refining your writing process. Do you feel it’s different now that you know a bit more about publication, and now you’re writing a series?
Definitely! I’m more confident in getting things wrong in the first draft. And I don’t really put meat on the bones of the story until I know the structure is just about right. I find it so much harder to cut a scene that has descriptions that I like, or bits of character development I feel strongly about, but if the scene is really just a sketch of what I think should happen, I’m totally ruthless! Luckily my editors seem to put up with me adding in lots of description and character development in the final draft.
I loved the idea of a Neo-Pagan festival as the setting for a murder mystery – can you tell us a bit about how the idea came about?
I’ve always been fascinated by religion as one of the building blocks of identity – one that most YA literature completely ignores. Yet when I was a teenager most of my friends had some kind of brush with one religion or another. For some it was part of what formed them, others reacted against it, particularly if it was the religion of their parents. But most people I knew had some kind of spirituality – even if that was humanism. So I was keen to write a character who genuinely struggled with spiritual questions.
Back when I was teaching, I ran a course on the development of neo-pagan religions – so I came to know quite a lot about the various strains of neo-paganism and it struck me that a pagan festival would be a really fun place to set a murder mystery. Remote… full of colourful characters… spooky goings on… And so the John Barleycorn Festival was born!
Do you have a ‘writing cave’ – a special place to call your own? What do you take in with you while you’re working? (I know I’m rather fond of gallons of strong sweet tea…)
I’ve just moved so I’m still creating my new cave! The truth is, if I’m into what I’m writing I can write anywhere. If I’m feeling distracted I need a special place and routine. Like you, I drink quite a lot of tea! But I will decorate my writing cave with objects or pictures that I hope will inspire me.
People often ask where your ideas come from (I always find that a hard question to answer!), but I was wondering what you feel inspires you and your writing?
My biggest inspiration is myth and folklore – I love everything from ancient legends to urban legends – but quite a lot of the time it’s a place that will inspire me. I set Dead Jealous in the Lake District because I think it’s one of the most mysterious and evocative places I’ve ever visited. Dead Silent is set in Cambridge – a town full of ancient institutions and misty, winding alleyways.
If you had to choose a top five, for a desert island stay, which books would you choose?
Ugh!!! Only five?? So mean!! OK… umm… The Wind in the Willows by Kenneth GrahameOne of the Wicked Lovely series by Melissa Marr (which one would depend on what mood I was in…)The Clocks by Agatha Christie (although Miss Marple is my favourite detective, I love the plot of this Poirot story!)The Magus of Hay by Phil Rickman (because I love the Merrily Watkins series and this one’s due to be published 7th Nov!)The Signature of All Things by Elizabeth Gilbert (because I’m part way in and I want to finish it! She writes so beautifully...)
And speaking of desert islands, any plans for a visit to Australia sometime? (We could catch up over a cuppa!) If not…do you have any idea when Dead Silent will be released in Australia?

My brother lives in Sydney and I have a whole tribe of relatives around Melbourne so you never know!
Dead Silent is out 6th February.
Sharon, thanks for answering my kooky questions, drop by anytime!
Thanks so much for having me over!!!
If you’d like to look Sharon up, you can find her online at her website here, or on Twitter @PoodlePowered - Dead Jealous is available in bookstores now. I’ll be staking out my local bookstore for my copy of Dead Silent next Feb.
An now, a couple of updates:
* I’ll be at Dymocks Camberwell on Thursday night – 21 November – from 6-8pm for their pre-Christmas author event. Loads of other authors will also be there, and we’ll be signing books and feeling chatty, so if you’re in the vicinity, feel free to drop by.
* Every Breath has been listed in the NZ Listener amongst their top YA picks for 2013, which is pretty thrilling! Thank you to Ann Packer for the shout-out :)
I’ve been rather blown away by all the good press Every Breath has been getting, and I’d like to say a hearty thank you again to everyone who’s read and enjoyed the book, and responded so positively. Anna Ryan-Punch wrote a fantastic review in Viewpoint (books for Young Adults)through the University of Melbourne, which is available here by subscription. And if you want to go check out Every Breath on the new Amazon Australia website, it’s up here.
And I was given a chance to recommend one of my favourite books, Life in Outer Spaceby Melissa Keil, over here on the Readings blog. I love that book to the nth degree, and it was great to be able to give it a good rap.
That’s it for the news. Meanwhile, life is good, spring seems to be coming on a little late, and I haven’t had hayfever so bad this year. I’ve had time to plant tomatoes, and read, and I went down to Melbourne to see George RR Martin (Game of Thrones) and Michelle Fairley (Catelyn Stark) speak at a Wheeler Centre gig, which was pretty awesome.

Next post, I’ll be having a giveaway for Christmas, so if you’d like to put your name down for a copy of the book and some swag, drop on by. Have a lovely week, and see you soon.
Xx Ellie
Published on November 16, 2013 15:45
November 10, 2013
One day, or ‘Ok, now I’m cranky’
I said I would have a YA Crime Guest post this week – yeah, sorry, that post is coming up next. Now I usually use this blog to bang on about writing and process and my books and other people’s books, but today I’m going to post about something else. Because I also started this blog to share some opinions. And I read something the other day about gender disparity in the New York Times Bestseller List, and I have an opinion about it. So there you go.
Now if you’ve been reading this blog’s past posts, you’ll know that a while ago I had a little chat about perceived notions of bias towards women in YA fiction – you might wanna go read that before you read this. I don’t want to rehash too much, but basically it came about because I was asked ‘where are all the male YA writers?’ during a panel (a panel I shared with Simmone Howell and Kirsten Krauth).
I found the question confusing, as I pretty much knew where they were (uh, at home writing YA books?), but since then I’ve been asked the question again and again, and I’ve also made a discovery. So now when people ask ‘where are all the male YA writers?’, I can answer with ease, because the answer is ‘they’re on the New York Times YA Bestseller list’.
Yes, that’s right. Recent number crunching in a post by Kelly Jensen – a librarian, researcher and blogger in the US – on the blog Stacked has revealed that according to the New York Times Bestseller list, male writers of YA actually out-sell female writers by a fairly wide margin.
Although there’s been some attention given to the NYT Bestseller list before (by Carey Wilson, here, in 2012), Jensen has done a thorough analysis of the data from 47 weeks worth of NYT Bestseller lists for YA, starting from when they began a YA list until 11/5/13. E-book sales are included in the NYT YA lists, and placement depends on the highest sales within a given week.
She noted a number of kooky variables that seem to be particular to the NYT list, including the time lag from sales reporting to list placement, and the way books in a series are shifted over to a separate ‘series’ list once the third book is released. She also took into account things like author teams (books written by two authors in collaboration), how long individual authors remain on the list, and whether YA is accurately defined. If you’d like to read her original posts on the issue (which are fascinating), I strongly encourage you to go here, and then on to part 2, here.
What she discovered was both startling, and curiously…not.
Now I’d like to point out, at this juncture, that a lot of hoo-ha has been made of the alleged domination of YA by female authors. People have blogged about it, and written articles about it, and talked about it, and generally made merry with the idea that women writers are disproportionately represented in YA. The NYT even published an article by Robert Lipsyte about how ‘YA is becoming too girly’ – there’s been much lamentation of the fact that boys are ill-served by YA, because of the lack of male YA writers.
I honestly cannot tell you whether the percentage of female YA writers is larger compared to male YA writers in any given year – I don’t have that data, and Googling doesn’t bring up any results. I suspect I’d have to subscribe to BookScan and crunch the numbers, in the way Jensen has, to come up with any genuine information (and it’s interesting that those stats aren’t available – if you do have the stats, let me know!). Anecdotally, female writers are considered to predominate in the field. And going by questions like the one I had, about ‘where are all the male YA writers’ , it appears that this perceived gender imbalance towards female writers in YA has become the ‘accepted’ understanding.
People genuinely believe that male writers struggle to get a foothold in YA. This all feeds into the ‘boy books vs girl books’ argument, the one that drives me so crazy – the argument that girls will read anything, but that we need more books for boys, written by men, to appeal to boys’ specialised tastes. Clearly there’s some idea floating around that male writers of YA languish in a kind of literary ghetto.
But if you look at the stats, a very different picture emerges.
In terms of sales numbers, it’s actually male writers in YA who hold the top spots. Don’t believe me? Go look at the raw data. Jensen first examined the top 15 spots on the NYT Bestseller list, to cast a wide net, and discovered that – on average – bestsellers were attributed to ten authors (noting that authors who appear more than once are only counted once). 7 of the authors were male and 3 of the authors were female.
In fact, going by the available data, it appears that there has never been a time when individual female writers have outnumbered individual male writers on the NYT YA Bestseller list. Ever. In the history of the list.
If you want to see it for yourself, go have a look – here’s the current NYT YA Bestseller list. There’s currently six male authors up there in the top ten right now, and their books hold eight spots in total. Are you noticing a trend?
Jensen goes into far greater detail in her analysis than I have here, of course. She looks at the average length of stay for books on the list, and breaks down information about publishers represented. There are also other variables to consider, including points raised in comments to the Stackedarticle – some of the most relevant ones included questions regarding whether some male YA authors already have a healthy readership in adult before moving to YA, and whether gender imbalance in the adult market has trickled down to the YA market; also whether adults buying YA (and that’s 55% of sales) have had a major impact on sales figures.
Authors themselves – if you follow Jensen’s links to the Twitter discussion – have called the NYT list ‘quirky’, and questioned whether the list might have more to do with prestige than with sales. They asked whether the NYT list is a true reflection of actual buying habits of YA readers.
But they also raised a few issues that it would be well worth following up: namely, is the path onto the NYT list different for the genders? What would now be an interesting discussion is what the marketing budgets look like for male writers of YA compared to the budgets of female writers. And how those books are marketed as a product (returning to Maureen Johnson’s analysis of gendered cover trends). And, y’know, because life isn’t busy enough, maybe we should check and see what the ratio is like for male/female readers (or maybe more relevantly, male/female buyers).
What kind of implications does an analysis of the NYT YA Bestseller list have? Well, I guess the most obvious implication is that as a society, we still buy men’s writing more than we buy women’s writing. And I mean ‘buy’ in both senses – we spend our money on it, and we continually return to it as the norm, or benchmark if you will, of quality writing.
Lots of people will say ‘well, what does it matter what the New York Times list looks like? JK Rowling sold millions - if female writers’ books are selling well, then the list is obviously not a reflection of trends, or even an accurate reflection of market share’.
But this is disingenuous - as Jensen points out, it matters.
Because publishers ostentatiously use the tag ‘#NYT Bestseller’ to plug their books.Because some retailers (eg big distributors like Target) won’t even pick up a title unless it has the ‘#NYT Bestseller’ label attached.Because writers themselves use the ‘#NYT Bestseller’ label as a draw for readers and (particularly, adult) buyers.And above all, because the ‘#NYT Bestseller’ label has status – it has become representative of what qualifies as a good book, a book that we recommend to our friends, a book that we buy as a Christmas present for a family member (see the Wikipedia article note that a Stanford Business School analysis found that the majority of book buyers use the NYT list for buying ideas), a book that we pick up ourselves to see what is going on inside .
It’s also a very visible ranking of sales, and consequently a great way for people to make assumptions about what’s going on in the world of literature. So if my husband really wants to yank my chain, he can make a comment like ‘So does that mean that male writers of YA are better than female writers of YA?’. He knows what happens when these jokes get made (‘honey, I love you, now just walk away’), but he’s also making a point: that these are the kind of value judgements that are made by the larger community.
If the NYT Bestseller list for YA is largely dominated by male writers, despite the preponderance of female writers in the field, then obviously there’s underlying social trends going on – well, d’uh. And if you couple that with VIDA stats and coverflip issues and inequality in award lists (see the Caldecott thing here) and so on, then you start to see a very glaring picture of where women still stand in the literary field.
None of this is new. None of this is unclear – saying there’s no gender disparity in literature is right up there with climate change scepticism, in my opinion. It’s a no-brainer. Gender inequality in literature is, after all, right on trend with gender inequality in all the other areas of life – domestic life, work, government, policy, agency, opinion.
I guess for me the question of literature is one of voice. Without women’s voices, women’s stories, women’s expression, then half of the population goes silent and unheard - and by extension, unseen, unvalued, ignored. Sure, some female authors have made it onto the list – and some (Suzanne Collins, Cassandra Clare, Stephenie Meyer, Virginia Roth, JK Rowling) have been hugely successful. Perhaps this has blinded people to the awareness that gender parity is still a long way off. Which, when you consider how much has been made of the presence of female authors in YA, is a real kick in the pants.
So I guess the question I have – the BIG question - is this.
Is it asking too much to think we could have real societal change on gender inequality in my lifetime?
Wow, that’s a big one. It’s only been about fifty years since the emergence of Second Wave feminism. My mother was still reading a completely male-dominated literary canon in school; my own experience was only one step removed. I was one of the first women to go through the officially-classified Women’s Studies major (now called Gender Studies) at my university.
Am I expecting too much to think that women should now have an equal slice of the literary pie within barely one generation? We have come from a very low base – in slow-moving political terms, fifty years is not a lot, and the fact we’re discussing and questioning it so openly is quite a big deal. At least we’re talking about it – as Jensen points out, this isn’t a discussion that’s ‘begun’ but rather one that has been raging for some time. And here in Australia, where our discussions on racism seem to have stalled to the point where we’re all now back somewhere in the fifties, discussions about gender disparity are still strong and ongoing.
But I’m impatient. I want more than talk. I want something to happen.
I guess for me, part of the impatience stems from having children of my own, who are now readers. In some kind of hilarious karmic smack-upside-the-head (for the woman who studied feminist literature and philosophy) I have four sons. They are my life, and they will grow up into amazing and vibrant young men, and I want something for them.
I want my sons to grow up reading books by men and books by women in equal amounts, to value their stories equally. I want them to be free of the ‘boy books vs girl books’ bullshit that restricts what is considered appropriate for them to read. I want them to see books by both women and men with covers that reflect the human stories inside. I don’t want them to grow up thinking that ‘mum just writes chick stories’. I want them to grow up believing that all stories are human stories.
I don’t want them to grow up thinking that half of the population is lesser.
So bear with my naïve logic here. Bestseller lists are about sales, right? Which means that more people need to buy more books by more female authors, in order to generate the sales that would create gender parity on the lists. Then we have a ‘quirky’ but nonetheless visible indicator that we’re valuing female voices as much as we’re valuing male voices.
If that’s the case, then I thought I might try a little experiment. In 2014, I’m going to buy only books by women.
I mean, why not? Who could it hurt? Well, I might irritate a few people who think I’m being self-serving, or just find my unsophisticated politics kind of annoying. I may well tick off a few of my male writer friends - although I’d like to emphasise that the statement above doesn’t say ‘read’, it says ‘buy'. So I will continue to read books by men – and I’ll promote them, and rec them to friends, and give them to my kids, and review them positively whenever I can. I’m always happy to promote good books, and great stories. Haven’t read The Fault in our Stars yet? – do yourself a favour and read it! Love Scot Gardner’s The Dead I Know? – go get a copy! Hanging out for the next book by Michael Adams, The Last Shot? – me too! I’m definitely gonna put it on my to-read list, and in 2015, I will go out and buy it.
But not next year. Next year, what I’m going to spend my money on is books by women.
It should be easy. Women writers already dominate my reading list, and there are lots of female writers out there who don’t get the acknowledgement (or sales) they deserve. This is just something I can do, on a small (miniscule!) personal level. Not a petition or a discussion – a backyard economic change. Just me. One year, one person, one wallet.
It may not count as a blip on the NYT Bestseller list. But maybe - one day - we’ll see those equal stats line up.
Published on November 10, 2013 16:22
November 4, 2013
The Newbie's Book Release Survival Guide
Hi again :) Before we get to the main show, just a few quick notes:
* The Every Breath Goodreads giveaway finished on 31 October. More than 1430 people slugged it out for three signed copies, but the comp was finally won by three lovely people from the US, the UK, and Canada. Congratulations! I’m posting out your copies of Every Breath this week, after the Melbourne Cup furore has died down.
If you’d like another chance to win a copy of the book, I’ll be having a Christmas giveaway on this blog very soon – stay tuned :)
* I’m going to be at the Reading Room of the Ballarat Mechanics Institute on Thursday 7 November (just after Melbourne Cup Day) at 7.30pm, talking to folks from Ballarat Writers Inc, and anyone who’d like to drop by, about process, how YA is awesome, and other things like that. If you’re in the neighbourhood, come along!
* I’m also going to be at an authors signing event at Dymocks Camberwell in Melbourne on 21 November from 6-8pm. That will be me, sitting with a glass of wine, wielding my big yellow pen. If you’d like to have your book signed, or do some pre-Christmas book shopping (er, yes, I have to do that too), come over and say hi.
I’ve posted lots of updates and things lately, so today I thought I’d try something different. Some of you out there are writers yourselves – awesome! I want to read your book! As Every Breath inched closer to publication, I picked up a few tips along the way. Now I know I’m a newbie to this business, so this might seem impertinent, but I figured ‘what the heck’, I may as well post up a list of tips on how to handle that crazy time when your book is ready to hit the shelves.
So here’s everything I know about surviving your book release. This applies primarily to traditionally published books, as I’ve never e-pubbed, but I’m sure a few of them would work well in either case. Some of these tips I’m still following up on – like thank yous, and things like that. Some of these tips are things I wish I’d known at the start, and some of them I’m still a bit crap at…but I’m getting there. Hopefully by the time Every Word is ready to go next June, I’ll have it all down pat (Hahahahahahahaha….okay, I’m gonna stop laughing now)
The important thing to remember is that, when your book is coming out, you don’t really know what’s going on. You feel like you’re making it up as you go along. Just run with it. If you don’t know how to deal with something, I suggest Googling. Seriously. Google is your friend.
You do wonder if you’re ticking the boxes, with your editors and so on. You don’t get a lot of feedback about that, so you just have to hope you’re not being a drip or a diva. I guess my advice is always to try to act professionally, and ask if you have any questions.
So here you go – my hot tips for getting a book out and living to tell the tale:
1. SleepYo, get some sleep. You’re going to need it.
2. Let go of your blushesWhen this first started, I used to get so embarrassed/shy when people asked me about the book, or congratulated or complimented me. Then I realised that these blushes weren’t serving any purpose. If you pay someone a compliment, don’t you want them to feel good about it? It’s even a little insulting if the person you’re complimenting goes red and starts stammering/trying to hide behind nearby furniture (not an actual example. you know what I mean).So I decided to stop getting embarrassed and return people’s enthusiasm. When they asked, I’d say ‘yes!’ When they complimented, I’d fall back on that old standby: ‘thank you.’It was a revelation. I think it really helped give people I met a sense of inclusivity about the book, and helped to swell the local community excitement – and it certainly made me feel good, and gave something back to those who were so supportive.
3. Invest in your bookLook at your advance – no, really, look at it. Consider how much better things will be if your book is successful. Calculate a percentage of your current budget that would help make that possible. Go and spend it on stickers, flyers, mailouts, badges, t-shirts or other promo swag (don’t forget to add the cost of postage and photocopying!). This is called helping your book out.Unless you are Stephen King, your publisher’s promotional budget will be small, and you may not see a lot of it. It’s good to have something of your own, so be prepared to help. If you can chip in financially, and make up your own promo stuff, then yay. Promoting your book in conjunction with your publisher (ie – doing stuff in addition to the publicity arrangements organised by your publicist) means you’re pooling forces. It’s a natural ‘follow through’ on the effort it took you to write the book in the first place. Anything that you can do to give your book a better chance at life is awesome.
4. Say yes to everythingWise advice, given to me by another writer, AngelaSavage. Say yes – to signings, to blog tours, to local promotion, to talking to classes, to interviews… Say yes to anything you think you can handle without destroying your marriage/mortgaging your house/getting fired from your job. You only get a very small window – 6 weeks before your book’s release, and 6 weeks after – so take on as much as you possibly can in the way of promotion, be it self or book promotion (the two are inter-related).
5. If you have a partner, be niceIf you have a life partner supporting you, you’re lucky. Keep up your end of the bargain. You will inevitably neglect your house and garden during this period, so let go of guilt – if the floor isn’t waxed or the car isn’t detailed, who’s gonna know? Small window of opportunity, remember? But do your hell-bent best not to neglect your family and your partner.Try to keep up a normal share of housework – you will probably fail, but give it a go. Give your partner lots of loves. Be kind and remember to give them a break sometimes. Your free writing day? You may need to sacrifice it for the greater good, so your partner can get some time away from the kids. Yes, you are incredibly busy, but life is busy. Don’t forget, your partner will be there for you after the book release is over6. Talk to your publicistIf you have any questions at all about this whole process, ask. Email often. Give them regular updates – you might be emailing daily, more than once, when things are really hot. Tell them about everything – every promotion, every communication with stores, every blog update. If you’re worried about spamming them, ask. This is their job, and they can’t do it well if you don’t keep them informed.When it’s all over, remember that thank yous are gracious but bottles of wine are awesome.
7. Talk to your agent and your editorYou will be right in the thick of it, but remember, your agent and your editor both need to know what’s going on too. Give them a regular update every week or fortnight (maybe more often, with your editor). Share the excitement you’re feeling! This is their glory moment too.
8. Stay on top of itYou will panic less (I won’t say you won’t panic – you’ll panic, get over it) if you keep daily lists of things that need chasing up. Emails, writing interview questions, contacting book stores and schools, phoning places, organising stuff for promotion, posting stuff out, online work… I have a list-compulsion, because I’m so forgetful. My list was sometimes the only thing that kept me from hyperventilating – when I’d wake up in the night, terrified, I could look at my list and go through all the stuff, and reassure myself that it was all organised. So little of your life at this time will feel organised – it’s good to have a list.Keeping a wall calendar is really good too – one of those ones that shows the whole year in advance. You can see it all there (all that craziness!) written up in black and white (and green, and pink, and blue…) and you can even mark off the days until things return back to normal.Keep up with your appointments – that’s only good manners. Your time is valuable, but so is everyone else’s.
9. Eat. Take vitaminsLook after your health. Eat properly, rest when you can, take vitamin B or whatever it is that helps you physically keep going. Try not to get sick – save it up for after this is all over!
10. Be politeThis is a stressful time, and you’re dealing with a lot of different people. I know it’s hard when you’re relying on other people to follow stuff up or stay organised, but you’re not surrounded by minions. This book business is just that – a business. Always stay polite and professional. People will remember this after the book release is over, and remember that you were good to work with.
11. Take a breakI know, your schedule looks like back-to-back everything. But you still need to maintain your sanity. Whatever works for you, if you have a spare moment, do it – take a 15 minute walk, read a book for a half hour (someone else’s!), sit down and have a glass of wine with your partner, talk to your kids. Your head may be all over the shop, but even a short break can help centre you.Retain your sense of humour. Remember, this is supposed to be fun! Haha… Seriously, take a break sometimes - you need to remind yourself what you’re doing and why, and to just draw breath.
12. Help each other outYour network of friendships with other writers is one of your most valuable assets. Share, attend, RT, link, congratulate, commiserate, compliment, applaud, support – remember to do unto others as you would have them do unto you. You should do this early, and do it from the heart. Writing is an isolating business, and we all need to give each other a leg-up sometimes, even if that just consists of moral support.My family and friends were incredibly excited for me, and spread the word about the book with their mates and through their work circles at home and interstate. But some of the people who helped me out the most were other writers – they helped with the launch parties, shared info about the book online, gave me encouragement and support, and shared my enthusiasm. Someone once said ‘You’ll never hurt your own career by helping another author’, and I believe that to be true.
And when it’s all over…
11. Be graciousSay thank you to everybody. They deserve it (for putting up with you, heh). Write thank you notes, give small gifts. All those people who supported you? They like to feel appreciated. And yeah, they worked hard too – it was a group effort. Remember to single out your editor and publicist and agent for special treatment. Be gracious, and people will be sure to feel happy about working with you next time. You want there to be a next time, right?
That’s it. I know I’ve left out a few things, like publishing schedules and all that stuff, but for me this is the nuts and bolts. And if you’d like to know more, do your research – there’s a whole lot of websites out there with info about the nitty gritty technical aspects of how to get a book published (Google! Google is your friend!)
Next blog post, I promise to stop talking writing and let someone else talk about it. I have a fantastic Crime Report post planned with our first international guest, English author Sharon Jones, whose debut murder mystery Dead Jealous is already in stores – I’m very excited about it :)
Until then, take care, especially to all of you dealing with the aftermath of the NSW fires. And I’ll leave you with a pic of our new family member: Caesar, the Wonder Bird!

Xx Ellie
Published on November 04, 2013 15:47
October 23, 2013
YA Crime Report: GUEST POST – Nansi Kunze

Nansi and I introduced ourselves, had a little chat. I admit I was a bit awed – Nansi was a published author, with two books under her belt. She talked about the juggle of family and writing life - her little boy was sick upstairs in the hotel, with her husband looking after him while she attended the panel. She was on speed dial. I talked about how I’d left my four kids at home with my husband for two days, and what a big deal it had been just to get out of the house and drive the two hours down to Melbourne to attend the festival. We hit it off right away.
So I’m rapt to be introducing Nansi as today’s guest for the Crime Report. Nansi’s previous books, Mishaps and Dangerously Placed, have had a definite whiff of the criminal about them too. But her most recent book Kill The Music launches right into Nancy Drew-mystery territory.

Please give Nansi your warmest welcome!
Hey Nansi, so good to talk to you again! How’s it going over your neck of the woods?
Hi Ellie – it’s great to be here! Things are going pretty well, thanks. We’ve been away for school holidays, so I’m about to get back to work on my new manuscript. I’m about half-way through the first draft, and I’m really looking forward to finishing it off.
So tell us a bit about your process. Once you’ve got an idea (or two, or three), how do you go about working it up?
I’m a major planner (which is another way of saying I’m a bit of a control freak about my writing!). When I come up with a basic concept for a novel, I write down a ton of things longhand in my planning book before I get anywhere near the computer. I usually start with a fairly detailed outline of the first scene, some basic information about my main characters and a plot summary. After that I spend pages and pages scribbling stuff about the themes and development I want the book to have, as well as one-liners and ridiculous situations I want to include. Only when I’ve got a pretty solid idea of what’s going to be in it do I let myself start typing the actual manuscript! Even then, I stop every chapter – sometimes more often – to plan what’s coming up next in close detail before I go on.
Now tell us about Kill the Music. In the book, Lorna gives us a wry glimpse into the world of super boy-bands – I couldn’t help but think that this is what it would be like on tour with One Direction! What gave you the idea, and how did you research it?
It sounds a bit ridiculous to use the old ‘It came to me in a dream!’ explanation, but this one really did: one night I dreamt that I was the manager of a boy-band, and the boys were so irresponsible I couldn’t even trust them to cross the road without getting themselves run over! I thought it was a fun idea, and while I was writing the initial outline for the book I realised that Turmoil, the four-member rock outfit who’d had a bit part in my first novel, Mishaps, would be perfect for it. A lot of the material I needed came from my own experiences: things like starting at a new school (I went to eight different schools in the UK and Australia), hanging out at gigs and rehearsals (my parents are musicians) and speaking German and Japanese (I taught foreign languages before I became a novelist). Some other parts, like the physics and technological elements of the plot, were just fortuitous finds gleaned from many hours on the internet!
Lorna is a great character – she has a dry sense of humour, she’s tenacious and loyal, and she has an old-fashioned integrity. Was she the easiest character to write? And did she pop into your head like that, fully formed?
I’m glad you liked her! I realised as soon as I had the book concept that Lorna needed to be strong, loyal and affectionate – despite being somewhat contemptuous of what Turmoil get up to – and that she had to be able to kick butt. So I had a pretty good picture of her from the beginning. I usually find that it’s the outrageous secondary characters who are easiest to write, but Lorna was easier than the protagonists in my previous books because she’s got so much of me in her, likeThe locations in Kill The Music are gorgeous, and give the book a cosmopolitan jet-setting allure. Japan, Vienna…are these all places you’ve been?
Yes! I’m lucky enough to have travelled to all the places mentioned in the book, except the fictitious island in the Great Barrier Reef where Turmoil hold a party. It’s based on Double Island, north of Cairns, which I’ve often seen from the mainland and wanted to visit, but you have to rent the entire island – a little out of my price range! I absolutely loved being able to include some of my favourite travel destinations in Kill the Music, and I plan on putting some more of them into my next books.
What sort of detective mysteries draw you as a reader? And were you an early aficionado of crime?
For me, mysteries are all about character. While I love an intricately-crafted plot and clever twists, if the characters aren’t fascinating in themselves, I don’t think any plot can make up for that. An early aficionado of crime? You know, I wouldn’t have said so. Actually, when I was invited to speak at SheKilda I was kind of surprised, because I hadn’t thought of myself as a crime writer up until then – even though Dangerously Placed was technically a murder mystery! But since then I’ve realised that I did read quite a lot of crime novels as a child. The ones that have really stayed with me are the ones with the most convincingly-drawn and charismatic characters, like Ellis Peters’s Cadfael and (of course) the superlative and ever-engaging Holmes.
Teen sleuths – they seem to be popping up all over the place lately! What do you think makes teenagers good detectives?
One of the awesome things about teenagers is that they’re old enough to be capable of the tasks investigating a mystery might require; a teen sleuth can plausibly follow suspects over long distances, go undercover while at work, and even get into places children aren’t allowed to be. At the same time, teenagers are often underestimated or overlooked by adults, so they’re in a unique position to find things out. More importantly, though, a teenage detective can look at a situation with an open-mindedness, idealism and willingness to challenge the status quo that a jaded middle-aged detective might lack.
And finally, how do you unwind at the end of a long writing day? (Are there any of Lorna’s luxuries that you envy?)
I love curling up with a good book … like all writers, I expect! Gaming is my other favourite form of unwinding, and I always look forward to a bit of time with my 3DS. I don’t envy most of Lorna’s luxuries – like her, I prefer the quiet life – but I must admit, I wouldn’t mind spending a day checking out the bakeries and eco-boutiques of Vienna like she does!
Nansi, thank you for being such a good sport and answering my questions J If you’d like to watch the cool trailer for Kill the Music, go here – or if you’d like to read the book, you can buy it in all good book stores, or maybe drop in here. Get in touch with Nansi at her website, or on Twitter.
Now before I pull the pin, here’s a couple of events coming up that you may like to know about:
* The Every Breath giveaway over on Goodreads is about to finish. I’m giving away three signed copies, open internationally, and it’s all over red rover on 31 October - if you’d like to put your name into the hat (and an astonishing number of people have already done so, thank you!) dropover to Goodreads here and put your name down to win. (Or, you know, just go over to the sidebar and click)
* I’m talking on a panel! Ooh, it is going to be very exciting… It’s for a Sisters In Crime event, and it will be me, Kathryn Ledson (Rough Diamond) and Jaye Ford (Blood Secret, Scared Yet?) talking about female protagonists dealing with danger, and how to make crime fiction sparkle. If you’d like to come along, you’re quite welcome! We’ll be at the Rising Sun Hotel, South Melbourne, at 8pm on Friday 25 October – for more details go tothe Sisters in Crime website.
* I’m also going to be visiting the Mechanics Institute in Ballarat on Thursday 7 November at 7.30pm, to talk at a Ballarat Writers Inc event. I’ll be talking about process, getting published, and why YA writing is the best (I just added that bit in). Come along if you’re around, and have a cuppa and say hi.
Have a good week, stay sane, and see you again soon.
Xx Ellie
Published on October 23, 2013 12:33
October 17, 2013
Wild bears ate my list
This week was not mega, awesome, super, massive, amazing or chockablock. This week was just normal.
Phew. The busiest time of my life (aside from the times I had newborn babies) has just passed. I’ve given you some idea how full-on the launch of Every Breathhas been over the last few months, but

If you’re from Avid Reader (Hi, Hannah!),Black Cat Books, Riverbend bookstore and café, Dymocks Brisbane, or Pulp Fiction, in Brisbane – hello again! *waves*.And the folks at Angus and Robertson Townsville (hey Janelle and Nick!) and MaryWho? bookstore made me feel incredibly welcome. I met Boori Monty Pryor in MaryWho?, which was amazing – we’ve been reading his new children’s book, Shake A Leg, ever since I got home.



I was especially flail-y to see that a great review of Every Breath was published in The Age on October 12 – so cool! The book seems to be slowing gathering momentum, which is awesome. People have even started sending me letters – some with lovely pics attached!
(see right-hi Eva!)

So I’m having a return to normal life. I’m entering that nice golden period, when everything starts to slow down and take on a more relaxed pace, and I become exponentially more chilled out as a result. My heart, which felt like it’d been racing at a million miles an hour, is easing back into its regular rhythm. My brain, for so long subsisting on a diet of stress and a multitude of organisational lists (‘OMG, MY LIST, WHERE IS MY LIST!?!’) is giving itself a good shake and starting to blink and look around again, even going so far as to occasionally gaze up at the stars or notice some small extraneous detail that it might like to incorporate into a narrative sometime…


Yes, I’ve started writing again. Thank god, is what my family is probably saying (actually they are saying it, and not behind my back either) right at this moment. Because living with a writing person when they’re not writing is a bit like living with a wild bear in a cage – only your house is the cage, and wild bears can be significantly less ferocious if you feed them things like raw fish, and I don’t eat a lot of raw fish… Anyway – what it means is that I’ve started work again on the third book in the Every series, Every Move. Diving back in has been like taking a big deep breath and let it out with a nice whooshing sound… I remember these characters, these feelings. I remember what it’s like to absorb myself in another universe for a little while every day. My body starts to unravel and relax and settle with each new word. When my alarm goes off at 5am, it’s a good thing – I’m keen to get back into it all over again.

In the meantime, you may want a little update on book 2, Every Word? Well, I’ve finished the revisions, and sent it off to my editors. Now we begin the process of picking it apart and putting it back together so it readers tighter, cleaner, prettier. This is always a bit painful – you feel like your insides are being picked apart in the process – but I know now not to fight it. I’m genuinely excited to see the copyedit, which will remove about 23,000 words from my manuscript and consign them to the dustbin. What will emerge will hopefully be a beautiful shivering butterfly of a book, something that glows. Every Word is due for release in June 2014, and I’m wriggling with the itch to read the finished product (I know, I’ve already re-read the manuscript about a hundred times, but still!)
So I’m writing, and I’ve had a chance to read some books by other people, omg – go check out The LastGirl by Michael Adams, it’s terrific (and scarily prescient – smoke pall over Parramatta? Michael, you are psychic guy), and then scoot on over and read Dead Jealous by Sharon Jones, for another delicious taste of YA crime.
A few events coming up – I’m going to be on a panel with Jaye Ford (Blood Secret) and Kathryn Ledson (Rough Diamond), talking about female protagonists dealing with danger, and how to make crime writing sparkle. That’s happening on Friday 25 October at 8pm at the Rising Sun Hotel, South Melbourne – all organised by the awesome Sistersin Crime.
I’ll also be in Ballarat on Thursday 7 November at 7.30pm, at the Reading Room of the Mechanic’s Institute, talking to members of Ballarat Writers Inc (and anybody who wants to come along) about YA, crime writing, and my path to publication. If you’re in Ballarat, drop by and say hello!
And I’ll be at Dymocks Camberwell in November for a Christmas signing party – I’ll let you know more about that soon.
In the meantime…I guess I just keep writing and chilling out. Talking to people (y’know, people. I guess I’ll start with my husband). Gardening some more. Working. Watching tv (wow, what a concept! Is that Agents of Shield show any good? No? Damn. Guess I’ll stick to Elementarythen). Hanging with my kids. Maybe even exercising again? (shock, horror) Anything could happen, now the wild bears have eaten my list…
Next time, please come by and meet my lovely friend Nansi Kunze, whose YA murder mystery, Kill The Music, came out this year – she’s a rockin’ chick, and I’m rapt that she agreed to come on the YA Crime Report. Until then – have a good week :)
Xx Ellie
Published on October 17, 2013 18:13