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The Visitors are here!!

The Warren brothers are here to save the day! or night. The brothers are known as The Visitors in their own fictional world but the places are based in real life, where as, some of the places in the story will be local and very fictional in terms of demon slaying, blood gutting scenes.

Okay, where do I suppose to start. I already released my pre-pilot, mask the header, type of story. It’s really short but I pulled out a scene of where all the things begin, shaping the brothers for the past ten years. As what you can see in the cover, it isn’t an official cover for a seasonal storyline. Oh I hope you’ll get it. After three weeks of thinking what will I do since I’m working as an English Instructor and it takes all my TIME, I decided to make this as my other easiest option! To write a 22 – 23 EPISODES PER SEASON. And when I say season, it means, Winter, Spring, Summer and Fall. Not the way television shows it.

Now, these characters are fan-ly based on the TV Show SUPERNATURAL, but all the aspect here are quite different. I am making my own move in the EVIL-LIGHT world. I also decided to create as much as many demonic symbol just to be original and some historical ones to make this piece of work worth enough. As I said, the brothers are based on the Winchester brothers, but mine is a lot more different in tone. I will try putting some emotional quantity in my characters especially Gabriel Warren, as the story goes he will be the point of the story. Though you see Nathaniel Warren as the cover, he will be the strongest ally, brother, savior, protector in the whole series. He is the one who fight most, and Gabriel will reflect to it and will use some sensitive kind of ability, much more in the zone than his brother Nathaniel. I will not speak all about their possible abilities since I want to highlight them in the whole 1st Season entitled KEYS of the ANGEL. You have to follow my stories if you want to know better.

Like Supernatural, the Warren brothers will go around places to places to help fend of evils and find answers along the way. And of course, I need to put one single theme in the story to fill the whole season and not just fighting and stuff. Well, I am a starter in this business, and I hope that when I do this it will open my mind of what I should do that will make this one hell of a good thing.

Well guys I hope you will love this piece of work.

And here it all begins: Midnight Visitors [Season One]

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Midnight Visitors

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Mansion

Fear the Bloodline

This could be the first I will ever try to write my so long planned novella, for a long time I tried to write one but fortunately I came to a conclusion that I really should.

So hear it goes, into my Microsoft Word, my Mansion could be the first I will self publish. Clandestine should wait.

The Horror Feels…

 

“…the shadow slowly creeps under the low light under the gap of the door, and that voice that curdles a million mind to insanity reverberates inside the room.“

Let’s talk about books that makes us fear the unknown, fear the vision that might appear in front of us, like the ghost of a woman walking down the stairs and that old woman’s ghost behind her daughter’s husband’s back. Or the way I sounded like Stephen King himself.

And since I slipped his name in my first official blog, I pretty much think that this is a good thing to open my personal attachment to the world.

Who hates horror? Who hates the thrill of going inside a broken down carnival where those smiling mannequins of clowns growl their faces into the night? Who hates the reality of scaring yourself? No one, besides, you love it yourself, it gives us an adrenaline rush and scientifically screaming is even healthy.

Well, everyone, maybe you should take my other free hand and let’s get on in this Trick ‘r Treat bus and go around the darkest part of the woods where Derry Maine is very popular…Shhh, did you hear that? Someone screamed. Come on, let’s get in before it gets here.

Who doesn’t know Stephen King? The new kids in town, why not. But no one misses his books and films around the stores everywhere. Now, I want this to go straight on the box as a special gift for you. Let’s not talk about psychological themed books of the known man in the hall of horror, but his scarier ones because I want to feel the horror itself.

One of the scariest books I’ve read from him is ‘Salem’s Lot which haunted me even after I read it. However; the book stayed with me for over a week because that’s the first book I read that I borrowed from our Campus Library. I bought my copy after a few weeks though. Okay. I will not review his works, which I do a lot on

 

Unwind

Unwind by Neal Shusterman

My rating: 3 of 5 stars


I didn't expected that...

I love how my interest swept from cool, fun to read to wait a minute, it's getting great! feeling. My first impression is not from the stars the book has garnered but by how the story tell its world. Honestly, I was unhappy that I haven't read the book since it has been released but waited until now when more books are coming out.
Centering my attention in the book, I might add that I could give few spoilers in this review. I gave the book three stars, that's enough for a genuine interest I got from this.

SOCIETY: The first chapter, which opens in the account of Connor, haven't gave me the exact local color of the place they are living. What is their state and or what is the place looks like after the Second Civil War. That is vital, yes? It gives an interest to the reader to either continue or stop without a second thought. One other thing, I still can't consider this a head on Dystopia just because there was a Bill of Life. It's just the war that happened but never changed the entire lifestyle of the society. Okay, so the first three characters: Connor, Risa and Lev are the essential ones but the others are given some lime-lights on how they do what they do. And most of all, I like the shift of the story in a way it turns out the story unexpected. The society, of course, is changed dully because of the Heartland War and the bracketing of rules that determine the fate of human kind. It becomes Totalitarian, advancements are given less points in here and the medical agenda becomes the center of this so-called New Age.

Connor: He is the lead of the story. Akron AWOL (absent without leave)

He's character defines a young boy who is persistent of what he chooses in his life. He is beyond a follower and he believes in the right of people to have their lives in their own hands. There isn't much of an intimate personal narration in him which could be more nicer if the narration concerns in a central voice, but his growth in the novel is understandable and less a bad example (the plot of the book is the evil one, if you might get it). He is a Hero, he is even called an Akron AWOL in a good manner by his co-unwinds in Happy Jack. He loves Ariana but we we're not given a definite feeling of loss when he turned down Ariana (or basically we are the ones who need understand that). He has a belief that makes us all want him, to be beside him, and to be around him. I love his character that he gives a lot of attention to the people around him, he has this caring heart that he doesn't know it was there. All through out the book we see less of what he was before, how bad he was, how angry he was. The story is quite minimal to the feelings of the characters but more on the purpose of each which gave Connor a highlights of his intention to safety away from the civilization of Transplanting Galore. Uh, I wonder if they Medical Stores in their time do have a Sale, or like a Buy One, Take One! scheme...) He has the most ratio of Physical Strength. He is the bearer of safety, and Risa depends on it. He became a replacement to the Admiral in his new place called The Purgatory. Hmmmm, I liked it. And the fact that he was transplanted with an eye and Roland's arm which becomes the great Irony of all. Now the fact that a big chunk of Roland is already a part of him. And you know, I do got that sympathy. I'll miss Roland. I want to see him again. Seriously. Some should have a full brain Transplant...

Risa:She is the likable one, and Connor's pie.

Neal Shusterman didn't fail to create a feminine voice in this book and that's what I thanked a lot. I mean, a man can create a female one. Likes! Her character shows one of the most favorable girls in a book, this isn't a Hermione aspect, but she is desirable and has a prospect to stay and prove things in front of the people meant to her. She is the typical girl, with less strength and a lot of fear, unlike the female protagonist who fights all through out what she believes in. She, too, has her beliefs but being a girl it's pretty limited and somehow she depends on the strength of the many. In all the things, she has a mental strength but not physically capable. I saw her pledge and belief in action when she decided not to accept a piece of someone's spinal cord. She is persistent and do everything to steal time and to steal away a chance and yes, she pretty did without using much of her physical prowess and that is real female aspect (though I love a Katniss and Beatrice effect...). I like her. Period.

Lev: Three words.
I love him.


I just love him, since the first time I see him (third chapter)- read about him. I got hooked when I started reading in his first chapter and that was when I saw the big picture, the difference between the Tithes and the ... sshhh, I like the term Troubles. Yes, there you go. He's character has the best twist of all, I love the fact that he isn't entirely at the party, but works secretly and independently. As we read his character, we could see a foreshadow that happened in the PART TWO: STORKED where Risa and Connor clapped their hands to distract people of something they knew, but the readers didn't. That is one of the best parts in the Novel that made you want to read more. The book is entirely a foreshadow and mystery, see? the fact that Lev - after the break up from Connor and Risa when the PART TWO is about to end - met with a guy called Cyrus Finch. And jeez, who would have thought? CyFi. But sadly to say, the book isn't. But hey, Neal got a good catch on naming his characters uniquely. "Humphrey" Dunfee is the BOOM!, same sound, different spelling, yet same situation.
Okay.
Lev. Here's the thing. His character is easily relates to that of Nico de Angelo of Percy Jackson and the Olympian Series and Heroes of Olympus. We see Lev as a targeted (the holy one, I might add), high-priced persona that shows only seldom parts in the story but has a bigger role when it comes to heroism. After bringing CyFi/Cy-Ty home, he moved on on his own in search of his own self and on the run. Before leaving CyFi he showed a stealthy ability , a treacherous kind of ability that makes him look...well, hot, when he tricked the old guy in the pawnshop...probably his hot encounter. I don't know, my feelings towards him is mutual. *laughs Back to the review. *clears throat Lev was a Tithe and it turned out he became a Clapper. I love the irony of that. And honestly, I want to have him, like, you know. He defines the words: Determination and Love. I felt him when he decided not to Clap or just rub himself (Whoop, did that sounded bad) that will explode him and turn him to a lesser version of Nuclear Bomb. I sympathize him more than any characters here and I just love him.

We will miss Mia and Blaine too, even their characters has a less light but they showed a fight. Some of the characters deserves an applause.

*clears throat "Yes, Peter..."

Well, I know I mustn't say more. Just outlined the three main Protagonist. I'll make some improvements in the Next Book!! *waves. Kudos guys!! Reymart Dinglasa



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Being Alone

It all comes down to being alone they say. But for the most people who have lost their four year companions, it is more of going through and along the facet of growing up.


Staying
Alone. The codex of everyone who think they are left out when their friends walk out from the Campus. But we must also realize that being ALONE doesn't mean anything, it is always our thought at first. Yes we do, but being alone means we have to work our way out and into the possibilities on our own. The problem is, in so many cases as this, that we find comfort, life, and color when we have our friends around. They do feel the same way, you can't see it because you find yourself stuck in the boundaries of your own fear and the feeling of loss. Yes, we will miss them, but always think that with you they overcame the College struggles that both of you have experienced. Bad times. Projects. Interviews. Thesis. But as an individual, stay on your feet and think. "Why am I still here?"
1. You haven't completed your course... (This one is the main reason why and sometimes we blame ourselves after. That's the common problem.)
2. You have been lazy... (For the most part, this is the very common problems of being a student. Even though you are smart or having a good grades being lazy will surface. It's inevitable.)
And yes, you will realize the fact that you've been a bad student. It is not about being betrayed that's why you are staying - students commonly complain that the feeling of betrayal is from the people who never trust them anymore. Seeing to themselves that they made so much mistakes that they will either make it again or make an example for it. Many individuals of the same type talks about being bullied not physically but socially and often times it triggers a mental effects to them.
And this happens:

You must:
As a student myself, I have been a lazy one. And honestly (I don't want to lie and give wrong impressions), I will graduate next year. It means I'll be alone by myself for the next whole two semesters of my College Life. In my case, I have brought myself to consequences I regretted later. "Oh my god. I should have gone like this and did like that. But I still keep to balance it. You must try to think positively because that's the last option that you have. Okay, back to where we were.
Alone means to get yourself to fight on your own, to think on your own and to continue on your own. It has all a purpose, (I consider such consequences a purpose, and that is one of the example of being positive) a purpose in which you have to piece in what you have done wrong and what you have done that people saw a lack in you. But they can't see it, they didn't see it. What you you must do is to strive in every subjects and keep it low, don't give an impression that you are trying to move up against whatever you have around you. The reminder of every rednecks that "In order to win a fight, set a cold light in your eyes." (Or I think I read it in one of the novels I read about a Redneck, something like that.)
STAY NEUTRAL

STAY FOCUSED

STAY OPEN / BE CLOSER TO NEW PEOPLE

AND DON'T DO THIS...


Alright. Just remember that time may pass and when you're done...

You will say then that.
YOU DID IT!!!!


AND WHEN YOU GUYS MEET AGAIN YOU'LL TELL EACH OTHER A STORY OF SUCCESS!

Website Up, Shoes Down

This is my debut as a Goodreads Author...but then before I could publish my first duo-series book I have to graduate FIRST before stepping up in this career.

So guys please check my official website for random Author's note and stuff I like the most - videos coming up - so please stand by and follow my contributed short stories in here and on my groups.

The Booklet Library is my still ongoing website so please like it and please follow and more importantly please be a fan.

Time after time (my common blahs), I will share my collection of short stories I have written (in full draft scale) and a small details of my soon-to-be self-publish duo-series.

Thank you

Reymart Dinglasa