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April 25, 2025
Another Review: Mockingbird
This week’s Story Spotlight is To Sing Like a Mockingbird by Jan Notzon. This book was kindly provided by the folks at Breakeven Books. Thank you!
About the Story:
Justin Kopekne’s faith in the power of education is in danger of being obliterated by experience. Until it closed due to the brutal murder of the one student who had depth and possibly genius, he was a teacher at a school/reformatory in Texas.
He takes refuge with his brother and sister-in-law, the latter considering him a potent threat to the peace of their household as it rests on a mutual pretense of cynicism.
In flashbacks, we are introduced to Justin’s estranged wife, Kathryn, his blindly idealistic principal and two bosom companions from childhood now on opposite sides of the illegal drug trade. The two come together when one accepts the “donation” from the cartel capo to save his reelection campaign.
Justin’s student prodigy, Míriam, is assaulted when she violates the student-assassins rule against class participation. Justin manages to get both perpetrators arrested, and the battle between Justin and his principal explodes.
With pressure from the drug cartel, the two thugs are reinstated, and Míriam learns that they have Justin in their sights. When Justin refuses to believe her warnings, she calls on her experience with men to try to seduce him.
Justin rejects her advances and her only resort is to sacrifice herself by insulting the two heavies, resulting in her murder.
Justin witnesses the brutal deed and will testify, prompting the cartel to plan his assassination.
His drug capo friend and the sheriff come together to try to save him.
Will they be successful?
About the Story:
Justin Kopekne’s faith in the power of education is in danger of being obliterated by experience. Until it closed due to the brutal murder of the one student who had depth and possibly genius, he was a teacher at a school/reformatory in Texas.
He takes refuge with his brother and sister-in-law, the latter considering him a potent threat to the peace of their household as it rests on a mutual pretense of cynicism.
In flashbacks, we are introduced to Justin’s estranged wife, Kathryn, his blindly idealistic principal and two bosom companions from childhood now on opposite sides of the illegal drug trade. The two come together when one accepts the “donation” from the cartel capo to save his reelection campaign.
Justin’s student prodigy, Míriam, is assaulted when she violates the student-assassins rule against class participation. Justin manages to get both perpetrators arrested, and the battle between Justin and his principal explodes.
With pressure from the drug cartel, the two thugs are reinstated, and Míriam learns that they have Justin in their sights. When Justin refuses to believe her warnings, she calls on her experience with men to try to seduce him.
Justin rejects her advances and her only resort is to sacrifice herself by insulting the two heavies, resulting in her murder.
Justin witnesses the brutal deed and will testify, prompting the cartel to plan his assassination.
His drug capo friend and the sheriff come together to try to save him.
Will they be successful?
Published on April 25, 2025 13:08
April 23, 2025
Review by Gina Rae Mitchell
To Sing Like a Mockingbird
Justin Kopechne, an idealist butting up against the real world fights for all he is worth to educate/rehabilitate juvenile delinquents in a reformatory in nowhere, Texas.
Two friends, one a minor capo in a drug cartel, the other a sheriff in Starmount County, cross paths with him as the capo tries to steer him away from getting involved while the sheriff succumbs to help from the cartel to win his reelection.
At home, Justin alienates his wife and locks horns with his cynical brother and sister-in-law.
four-and-a half-stars
Justin Kopechne, an idealist butting up against the real world fights for all he is worth to educate/rehabilitate juvenile delinquents in a reformatory in nowhere, Texas.
Two friends, one a minor capo in a drug cartel, the other a sheriff in Starmount County, cross paths with him as the capo tries to steer him away from getting involved while the sheriff succumbs to help from the cartel to win his reelection.
At home, Justin alienates his wife and locks horns with his cynical brother and sister-in-law.
four-and-a half-stars
Published on April 23, 2025 12:59
April 22, 2025
Gulliver's Review
Gulliver’s Travels
by Jonathan Swift
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Jan Notzon's reviewApr 22, 2025 · edit
really liked it
I feel kind of strange giving a classic less than a five-star rating. I did thoroughly enjoy it but to say it was amazing, I'm just not sure. It is incredibly creative and a fascinating read. I guess I'd say four and a half stars. I suppose I look for more depth for my five-star reviews.
by Jonathan Swift
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Jan Notzon's reviewApr 22, 2025 · edit
really liked it
I feel kind of strange giving a classic less than a five-star rating. I did thoroughly enjoy it but to say it was amazing, I'm just not sure. It is incredibly creative and a fascinating read. I guess I'd say four and a half stars. I suppose I look for more depth for my five-star reviews.
Published on April 22, 2025 14:23
Review: Mockingbird
©The Strawberry Post
My first impressions of To Sing Like a Mockingbird
This book is an interesting one and I have to say it was more than I was expecting from what I’ve read so far. The book begins with a deep prologue before the story proper begins, separated into six Acts with each chapter being called a scene. There are some important words to think about at the start of each chapter, called a Chorus, and then that chapter begins following different characters. The first character we see is Justin, a teacher at a school in South Texas which has closed due to something brutal happening with one of its students. Justin struggles with having lost his job due what has happened. He contemplates the life of the young student and we find out more about her and what happened a brutally honest way. The book then switches to the next chapter following another character, a former friend of Justin’s. While I read the blurb for this book and anticipated something more of a literary read anyway, and it does take some time to get into it from the beginning (it’s not a fast paced or easy book), however it feels like a visceral read as well as one that is deep and leaves you contemplating, and although I’ve only read a small portion of this book I am keen to see where it goes.
My first impressions of To Sing Like a Mockingbird
This book is an interesting one and I have to say it was more than I was expecting from what I’ve read so far. The book begins with a deep prologue before the story proper begins, separated into six Acts with each chapter being called a scene. There are some important words to think about at the start of each chapter, called a Chorus, and then that chapter begins following different characters. The first character we see is Justin, a teacher at a school in South Texas which has closed due to something brutal happening with one of its students. Justin struggles with having lost his job due what has happened. He contemplates the life of the young student and we find out more about her and what happened a brutally honest way. The book then switches to the next chapter following another character, a former friend of Justin’s. While I read the blurb for this book and anticipated something more of a literary read anyway, and it does take some time to get into it from the beginning (it’s not a fast paced or easy book), however it feels like a visceral read as well as one that is deep and leaves you contemplating, and although I’ve only read a small portion of this book I am keen to see where it goes.
Published on April 22, 2025 14:16
April 13, 2025
Promotion
I just had a marketing professional draw up a marketing plan for my latest novel "To Sing Like a Mockingbird", and my Lord, it will be a full-time job in and of itself.
With my writing and reading (research), I feel like I already have two full-time jobs in those endeavors. Will there be enough hours in the day?
Like most people in the arts, promotion is for me about the equivalent of having a root-canal without anesthetic. I feel like I'm back where I was in my youth, pounding the pavement in New York pursuing an acting career.
Ah well, I suppose they are much the same: trying to hawk my self or my novels and plays. May God have mercy on my soul!
With my writing and reading (research), I feel like I already have two full-time jobs in those endeavors. Will there be enough hours in the day?
Like most people in the arts, promotion is for me about the equivalent of having a root-canal without anesthetic. I feel like I'm back where I was in my youth, pounding the pavement in New York pursuing an acting career.
Ah well, I suppose they are much the same: trying to hawk my self or my novels and plays. May God have mercy on my soul!
Published on April 13, 2025 13:31
April 5, 2025
Aileen's Guesthouse- Eva Pasco
Since I have a pretty strict policy of only giving a 5-star rating to classics or books I think have the potential to become classics, I really struggled between 4 and 5 stars on this one. But all said and done, I did thoroughly enjoy it and highly recommend it to people who like honest stories about believable people that you can identify with.
It is a story of grievous loss, the guilt associated with honest mistakes that cost dear ones lives and how one tries his or her best to live with the loss and the guilt that comes with the sense of responsibility for that loss.
I think it a lovely tale and hope people will give serious literature like this a try.
It is a story of grievous loss, the guilt associated with honest mistakes that cost dear ones lives and how one tries his or her best to live with the loss and the guilt that comes with the sense of responsibility for that loss.
I think it a lovely tale and hope people will give serious literature like this a try.
Published on April 05, 2025 12:41
March 28, 2025
Deeply Skeptical
Really starting to smell like a scam. I replied that I will write the screenplay as soon as I have the 250K in my bank account.
Dear Jan,
I am delighted to inform you that your book "Suffer Not The Mole People" was among the 7 chosen from nine potential candidates during the recent presentation by your team for a book-to-film adaptation. This selection is a testament to the exceptional qualities we believe your work possesses.
Your project received favorable reviews from three out of five members of our selection panel, advancing it to the second phase of our adaptation process. Congratulations on reaching this significant milestone!
I would like to commend your team for the trailer, which effectively captured the essence of your book's narrative. Excellent work!
Moving forward, we are prepared to offer $250,000 for the film rights to your book. Additionally, you will receive 8% of the production costs and 5% of the gross sales. Payment will be processed six months after we complete the necessary production research, which is set to begin immediately.
At this juncture, we respectfully request that the team which presented your title submits a professionally certified screenplay. This screenplay will be crucial for the upcoming stage of production research and is an integral part of advancing the adaptation process.
Please confirm your acceptance of these terms and acknowledge receipt of this email at your earliest convenience. We are enthusiastic about the potential to bring your story to the cinematic screen and eagerly anticipate your prompt response.
Warm regards,
Louie Lopez
OPENROAD
12301 Wilshire Blvd
Los Angeles, CA 90025
www.openroadfilms.co
Dear Jan,
I am delighted to inform you that your book "Suffer Not The Mole People" was among the 7 chosen from nine potential candidates during the recent presentation by your team for a book-to-film adaptation. This selection is a testament to the exceptional qualities we believe your work possesses.
Your project received favorable reviews from three out of five members of our selection panel, advancing it to the second phase of our adaptation process. Congratulations on reaching this significant milestone!
I would like to commend your team for the trailer, which effectively captured the essence of your book's narrative. Excellent work!
Moving forward, we are prepared to offer $250,000 for the film rights to your book. Additionally, you will receive 8% of the production costs and 5% of the gross sales. Payment will be processed six months after we complete the necessary production research, which is set to begin immediately.
At this juncture, we respectfully request that the team which presented your title submits a professionally certified screenplay. This screenplay will be crucial for the upcoming stage of production research and is an integral part of advancing the adaptation process.
Please confirm your acceptance of these terms and acknowledge receipt of this email at your earliest convenience. We are enthusiastic about the potential to bring your story to the cinematic screen and eagerly anticipate your prompt response.
Warm regards,
Louie Lopez
OPENROAD
12301 Wilshire Blvd
Los Angeles, CA 90025
www.openroadfilms.co
Published on March 28, 2025 12:43
March 16, 2025
Justice?
They're Lying: The Media, The Left, and The Death of George Floyd
by Liz Collin (Goodreads Author), J.C. Chaix (Goodreads Author) (Editor)
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Jan Notzon's reviewMar 16, 2025 · edit
it was amazing
Oh, boy.
If you don't mind losing all hope in the United States "Justice" system and experiencing rank cowardice in the face of mob rule; if you can stand to watch perhaps the greatest travesty of "justice" since the O.J. Simpson trial, then READ THIS BOOK!
I do highly recommend it, however, for its value in teaching us how such cowardice on the part of those in positions of authority can undermine (and HAS undermined) the rule of law and the very foundations of this country. It is a potent warning of the possible future in store for us if those in charge behave as those in such positions in Minneapolis and Minnesota did in the face of the death of George Floyd.
Yes, it is depressing. But I cannot overemphasize its heuristic value about what the lack of backbone can do to a city, a state, the country and (the United States being the putative leader of the free world) the entire Earth.
I pine for justice. I pine for courage. I despair of the future.
by Liz Collin (Goodreads Author), J.C. Chaix (Goodreads Author) (Editor)
12121037
Jan Notzon's reviewMar 16, 2025 · edit
it was amazing
Oh, boy.
If you don't mind losing all hope in the United States "Justice" system and experiencing rank cowardice in the face of mob rule; if you can stand to watch perhaps the greatest travesty of "justice" since the O.J. Simpson trial, then READ THIS BOOK!
I do highly recommend it, however, for its value in teaching us how such cowardice on the part of those in positions of authority can undermine (and HAS undermined) the rule of law and the very foundations of this country. It is a potent warning of the possible future in store for us if those in charge behave as those in such positions in Minneapolis and Minnesota did in the face of the death of George Floyd.
Yes, it is depressing. But I cannot overemphasize its heuristic value about what the lack of backbone can do to a city, a state, the country and (the United States being the putative leader of the free world) the entire Earth.
I pine for justice. I pine for courage. I despair of the future.
Published on March 16, 2025 13:18
March 8, 2025
The Mind-Boggling Savagery of the October 7
If you have a strong stomach and are not easily depressed at absolutely intractable problems with no solution or even amelioration possible AND if you don't mind run-on sentences page-and-a-half paragraphs and hundred-page chapters, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS BOOK!
This work does not go into detail of what happened on 10/7/23 (which is actually what I was looking for) but it does cover the history of the hopeless knot that is the Middle East. If you care to find out why there will never be peace there (especially not as long as there is an Iran), this treatise will explain it all in copious detail.
Though truly depressing, I think it vital that we all understand the nature of the problem there. We need to be aware how we and all western nations are enabling the chaos and butchery to continue. All the trillions of dollars that flow into the coffers of Hamas and the Palestinian Authority simply enables them to spend the money on more and more destructive weapons and support terrorist leaders living in Qatar and other Arab nations. Meanwhile, their people are allowed a bare subsistence while they violate all the terms of the Oslo Accords.
It's not happy reading, but it is essential that we understand the true nature of the situation. Otherwise, we will be contributors and enablers.
This work does not go into detail of what happened on 10/7/23 (which is actually what I was looking for) but it does cover the history of the hopeless knot that is the Middle East. If you care to find out why there will never be peace there (especially not as long as there is an Iran), this treatise will explain it all in copious detail.
Though truly depressing, I think it vital that we all understand the nature of the problem there. We need to be aware how we and all western nations are enabling the chaos and butchery to continue. All the trillions of dollars that flow into the coffers of Hamas and the Palestinian Authority simply enables them to spend the money on more and more destructive weapons and support terrorist leaders living in Qatar and other Arab nations. Meanwhile, their people are allowed a bare subsistence while they violate all the terms of the Oslo Accords.
It's not happy reading, but it is essential that we understand the true nature of the situation. Otherwise, we will be contributors and enablers.
Published on March 08, 2025 13:44
February 25, 2025
William Godwin
An enquiry concerning political justice, and its influence on general virtue and happiness. By William Godwin. In two volumes. ... Volume 1 of 2
by William Godwin
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Jan Notzon's reviewFeb 25, 2025 · edit
really liked it
I found this to be a bit ponderous because of the 18th century style. It is an interesting read. I read it because Thomas Sowell takes Godwin to task for his, as Sowell would say, unconstrained vision of human nature, believing in its perfectibility. So, I thought it only fair to give Godwin a read.
I tend to agree with Sowell.
by William Godwin
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Jan Notzon's reviewFeb 25, 2025 · edit
really liked it
I found this to be a bit ponderous because of the 18th century style. It is an interesting read. I read it because Thomas Sowell takes Godwin to task for his, as Sowell would say, unconstrained vision of human nature, believing in its perfectibility. So, I thought it only fair to give Godwin a read.
I tend to agree with Sowell.
Published on February 25, 2025 14:33