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This is week three for my new feature and I have to say e...

This is week three for my new feature and I have to say everyone who has participated thus far has been awesome and really helped me define more about what this feature will be like and really it comes down to the title - What's Your Take. There are so many topics out there that all of you know about concerning the blogging network, publishing world, writing world, reading world. I love getting people's "takes," and so far I am learning a lot. Make sure to stop by every Thursday to see each week's feature and feel free to contact me to do a post!

Week three of What's Your Take is one that I learned a ton from. Steph from Word by Word did a huge post on critique groups. I have never been part of one, but a friend told me recently about a group of writers who get together at a local library. Her perspective has been super beneficial to me because I have an idea of what to expect when I walk in there and also I have some expectations. Thanks Steph!

Without further adieu, I give you steph!


I walked into the classroom on pins and needles. I had on my lucky writer gloves and a copy of my short story clutched toSo the critique started, and I sat in my chair and tried to affect an expression of bland distance, nodding and looking critically at each person as they discussed my story.  Scribbling down notes, crossing out or circling parts of my story.  It took a few minutes for me to realize that I was being critiqued, and it really didn’t hurt that much.  Even better, I learned a ton that day about my writing style. 
As a caveat, the critiques I received that day were very gentle.  The story I submitted had little description, little character development and a plot that was more suited to a B-grade action movie script.  I’m not sure why they were so easy on me. It was a college class, and we were all at different levels, but perhaps they sensed that I was really inexperienced. 
I’ve since gotten critiques that were the slap in the face I’d been told to expect.  When you’re in the game, you will be dressed down at some point.  But I survived those to, and so will you.If you ever have any hope of getting your work out and selling it, you will need to show it to someone you trust to be honest with you.  You will likely find that someone in a critique group, and I’m here to tell you how to go about finding a group that suits you.
These days, especially if you live in a moderately well populated area, finding a critique group is not difficult.  You can use websites like meetup.com, or talk to owners of local bookstores (yes they still exist) to find already established groups.  You can also start a group of your own, or use one of the many online critique groups available to you. 
Let’s start with face to face groups.  If you find established groups that are accepting members, you’ll have to determine if the group works for you.  The group should understand that, allow you to observe at least one meeting, and be respectful of the fact that you are still on the fence.  If they’re not, move on. 
Things to look for:-What gets critiqued?  What genres are accepted, and what length of submission?  This is big.  If you write historical romance, don’t settle for the fantasy and science fiction critique group because it’s the only one you could find.  Talk to the group members and see if enough of them are fans of your genre that they would be able to help you.  And make sure you’re comfortable with what they write, so you can help them in turn.  There’s usually a limit to length, which will be stated to you.  There may also be a rule about whether novels are allowed (chapter by chapter) or if the group only does short stories.  -When do they meet and how often?  Anywhere from once a week, to once a month is pretty normal.  You probably won’t find a group that’s perfect, but there will hopefully be one that fits your schedule.  They should also be flexible about missing a meeting.  Everyone gets sick, or has to work late, and you shouldn’t get booted because you missed one meeting.
How are the critiques scheduled:  Mileage may vary on this one, but I like a group with a set schedule.  Meaning, each person knows when they need to deliver a story and when that story will be critiqued.  Otherwise, one or two prolific group members will constantly be getting critiqued, and the shyer members will allow themselves to fade into the background.  A deadline is always a good thing, in my opinion. 
-What is the tone of the group?  How does the group interact?  Do one or two members monopolize the discussion?  Or does everybody chatter at once, so you can’t understand what’s going on?  There should be agreed upon rules to help guide the discussion, and give every member a chance to speak.  How are the critiques given?  Is it a free for all, where everyone openly states whatever ugly feelings they have about the writer’s work?  I hate that sort of thing, but some writers thrive on it.  Or are opinions stated as politely as possible?  Again, I prefer not to feel like I’m being attacked, but some writers get frustrated by the polite approach. 
Avoid any group that:
- Appears to be engaging in hero worship of one or two particular members, to the detriment of everyone else’s writing:  I.e. Everything Joe Blow and Susie Smith write is considered pure gold, and everyone else’s writing must be like theirs, or it stinks.
- Flat out states that only negative or only positive opinions be given:  Yes, there are groups that do this, and they are usually up front about it.  Only negative remarks gives you ego a solid beating, and few writers can take that week after week.  Meanwhile, only positives is like being showered with candy every week.  The sugar will rot your ego.  If I had to choose one over the other, I would go with only negative.   At least it will help you improve your writing. 
- Doesn’t actually do any critiquing.  No brainer, right.  This is a case where a group is good when you join, but flounders over time.  You are always free to leave.  There is no contract that states you will remain with the group for life.
Of course, if you can’t find a group that suits you, try to start one.  We live in the glorified days of internet, and getting in touch with people is easier than ever before.
Which brings us to online critique groups.  These are a slightly different animal than face to face, but very useful if you can’t find a group to join in your area, or afford the time to start one up.  There are many online critique groups, but I can only comment on the three I’ve used.  Shop around at the others, test out trial periods and see what their members say. 
- Critters.org:  This group used to be sci-fi, fantasy and horror only, but they have since branched out to every other genre.  You’ll get something like 5 to 30 critiques for any one story.  Longer stories, and later chapters of novels get fewer critiques, for obvious reasons.  There is also a really good system for getting full novels critiqued, so I highly recommend this one to novel authors.  Few online groups have a good option for getting novels critiqued.  Most of the critiques you receive will be good quality, little fluff, or deconstructive negativity.  You only have to critique one story a week to keep your membership active, and it remains to this day, a free site. 
Scribophile.com:  This is both a free and pay site.  Membership costs about $65 for a year, or $9 for monthly access, and you get all the bells and whistles, unlimited story postings, unlimited mailbox space and free contest entry.  Free membership means you can only post two stories at a time, you have limited mailbox space and you’ll be charged points for entering their monthly contests.  You earn points by critiquing posted stories, which allows you to post your own stories.  You’ll get more critiques the longer you’re a member because you will build relationships with other members, and trade critiques with them.  The point system is susceptible to abuse, with some critiques consisting of lots of fluff, but you can easily report that sort of thing.  There’s also a very active forum. 
Online Writing Workshop for sf, fantasy and horror:  Not the most inventive title, but it gets the point across.  This is a full pay site.  You get first month free, then, to remain a member, you have to pay $49 a year or $6 for monthly access.  I didn’t particularly care for this site.  You get very few critiques, and only about half of them were useful, in my experience.  There are a lot of stories posted, and generally the new or short ones get all the attention.  New stories offer extra points and critiques past a certain length offer nothing extra.  A lot of members will say they critique in return for critiques, but that’s hit or miss.  I found myself critiquing five people who claimed this, and maybe one would actually critique in return. 
Please feel free to ask any other questions you might have.  Being part of a critique group is a fun and rewarding experience if you go into it with an open mind, and find a group that fits you.    
I just want to thank Steph for this awesome post and giving me a ton to think about.
Hey bloggers, if you want to participate in What's Your Take, shoot me an email at mf060784 at gmail. I would love to hear your points of view on blogging, writing, trends, reading, YA, any topic goes. 

Goddess Interrupted by Amiee Carter

Kate Winters has won immortality. But if she wants a life with Henry in the Underworld, she'll have to fight for it.

Becoming immortal wasn't supposed to be the easy part. Though Kate is about to be crowned Queen of the Underworld, she's as isolated as ever. And despite her growing love for Henry, ruler of the Underworld, he's becoming ever more distant and secretive. Then, in the midst of Kate's coronation, Henry is abducted by the only being powerful enough to kill him: the King of the Titans. As the other gods prepare for a war that could end them all, it is up to Kate to save Henry from the depths of Tartarus. But in order to navigate the endless caverns of the Underworld, Kate must enlist the help of the one person whom she would really rather not meet. Henry's first wife, Persephone.

Kate returns to Eden Manor and finds it empty - until James actually takes her to the Underworld. She immediately has a vision that takes her to a battle scene involving Henry. Calliope is causing trouble and releasing Cronus, yeah the guy who created the Gods. She simply could not handle Kate's punishment for killing her.

Henry returns, Theo heals him, and he remains aloof, and not just aloof, cold. Kate is having a crazy internal conflict throughout the entire novel because of how Henry treats her. She is very insecure of his love for Persephone. I mean, she's not dealing with the typical four year relationship, we are talking 1,000 years. But we know from 1.5 that Henry does care about her, but he's just not the shout it from the roof tops  type of guy.

When Calliope gets her way and the gods come to her, she imprisons them and it is left to Kate and Ava to get them out, but where are they? Only one person knows Persephone. And man is she selfish. I mean it. I don't like her. And all this is only half way through the novel!

There is one scene that I really wanted to go through my NOOK and just strangle Henry and Persephone. While Persephone may have been trying to help Kate, I felt my heart drop out of my chest and I was pissed at Henry, to the point where I wanted Kate to leave him. Yeah, that angry.

A really important I wanted to make, is about the ending. The ending was so good, I read it twice. I finished it at 12:30 Am and read it again at 8 AM. THAT GOOD.

AND HOLY CLIFFHANGER! Anyone else shocked?

Team Henry.

PLEASE MAKE THIS A MOVIE.

The Goddess Hunt by Aimee Carter

A vacation in Greece sounds like the perfect way for Kate Winters to spend her first sabbatical away from the Underworld...until she gets caught up in an immortal feud going back millennia. Castor and Pollux have been on the run from Zeus and Hades' wrath for centuries, hiding from the gods who hunt them. The last person they trust is Kate, the new Queen of the Underworld. Nevertheless, she is determined to help their cause. But when it comes to dealing with immortals, Kate still has a lot to learn...

Amiee Carter's first book, The Goddess Test, took me a bit to get into, and then I was hooked. I read Goddess Interrupted by her, and it was the same situation. The Goddess Hunt was a quick short story that engaged me from the beginning.

James, (that rascal), and Kate go to Greece for her six months vacation from Henry. In this short story, we meet Lux (Pollux) and Casey (Castor) and hear their story, as the Gemini twins. I love mythology and it was here that I first heard of them. Sadly, I am a Gemini (old school - you know its crap they changed the signs) but never had I heard this story. When I finished the novel I did a search and learned more about them. Though it does portray Hades (Henry) as a jerk, I find books that inspire to do some sort or research the most worthwhile. They make me want to learn.

Kate stays true to being compassionate, especially to the ornery Lux.

James I think does it so he can sabotage his brother in Kate's eyes.

Henry makes a few brief appearances, showing his concern for Kate, showing his desire to be near her, even though he swore to give her this time. This aspect of the story helped me get through Goddess Interrupted. See my post on Wednesday to understand what I mean.

Short and sweet. Good read.

What's Your Take (2)

Today's What's Your Take is something I hold very dear to my heart, self-publishing. Recently I self-published and there were a lot of "ins and outs" that I had no idea about.  My blogging friend Bonnie is going to talk about (some of) her journey on this road. One I might add that is very up and coming.



Self-Publishing
I am self-published and proud.
I started the road to self-publishing in January of 2011. I won’t lie; I actually went back and forth with traditional publishing and self-publishing. A tug of war with my heart and in the end I went with doing it myself.
I honestly think it is the harder road to take and here are some reasons why:
I didn’t have a major publishing house backing me for anything. I had to write numerous drafts, edit numerous drafts, rinse and repeat six times. Sure, traditional published writers do the same thing, but I didn’t have a big time editor helping me out. Nor did I have an agent trying to sell my story in order to get that editor. Although, I did have great beta readers and two wonderful critique partners who helped with the multiple drafts and rewrite process.
I paid a professional artist to design my book cover.
I paid a professional editor to edit the manuscript, as well as copy edits, and proof reads. I had to spend endless hours researching the differences between Kindle Direct Publishing, Smashwords, Lulu, and various other indie author sites.  In the end I went with Kindle Direct, despite being locked into a ninety day exclusivity contract with them. They simply have the best exposure. And this first book has been all about exposure. I never expected (and still don’t) to make a whole ton of money off my first book. I simply had a story tell, took all the avenues as professional as possible to get to the end product, and hoped people fell in love with it as much as I did. 
Now that the book is out I have to do all my own marketing. I honestly think this is by far the hardest part of the self-publish industry. It is literally hit and miss. 
One day the book sells and others I see no downloads at all. That’s just how the self-publish business works. And trust me I have poured over sites and interviews of successful self-published authors. None of them have divulged secrets I didn’t already know. I’ve learned it’s a waiting game.
But, my story is published. My story. Not half of a vision that was changed by a major publishing company. My whole vision! When I was little my dream was to become a writer. As I grew into an adult that dreamed changed. I wanted to become a published author.
Two weeks ago I did.
I may never be the next J.K. Rowlings or Amanda Hocking success story, but I lived my dream. I am still living it every day.
I wish self-published authors got a little more credit. However, I think there is a new dawn on the horizon. I think our time is just beginning and I am embracing every moment I can.If you’ve been on the fence about self-publishing, give it a try. You can always query. Heck, I might still query one day. But for now I am perfectly happy telling my stories and sharing them with the world, my way.
And if you are thinking of taking the self-publishing route here are a few suggestions:1.     Get a good book cover! There are plenty of sites that do great graphic design work for a reasonable fee. Trust me; a nice cover can make a huge difference.2.     Get your manuscript professionally edited. I know this can be expensive, but it is well worth it. How many times have you downloaded a book chalk full of mistakes? You don’t want to be that author. Sure a few typos might slip through the cracks, that happens with big time published print books. But do your homework, find a good editor in your price range and really discuss what your manuscript needs.3.     Get the format right!! Amazon’s formatting for kindles can be wonky. I’ve submitted my novel in every way possible and it still finds a way to have a formatting error sneak in here and there. I just recently learned of a few formatting sites that for a small fee will do it for you, and make sure it is perfect. I am looking into that, and if you think you might have formatting issues, you should too.4.     Get social!! Twitter, Facebook, Goodreads. Google+, Instagram, Tumblr…ect.  Also – BLOG!! I can’t stress enough how awesome the online writing community can be!! I mainly blog, tweet, and facebook. But find what works best with you and run with it! This will also help later when you release your book, because blog tours are where it’s at people!5.     Have patience. Rome wasn’t built in a day. Remember why you write, and why you love it. Never lose sight of that, ever.

Now that folks is a crash course in self-publishing. I hope you take Bonnie's advice but more importantly, I hope you go pick up her book. You will love it! Stop by Bonnie's website and find all the links you need.  Bonnie thank you for being part of my "What's Your Take." I am later going to be working with her on some promotion and hopefully she joins my New Author Blog tour this fall!

I wanted to include Bonnie's summary of her book: Nether Bound

Seventeen year old Ava Walker has everything a girl could ask for. She's captain of the cheer squad, has tons of friends, and could easily have any guy she wants. Being popular is easy.Lying about her entire life, on the other hand, isn't.Since she was little, Ava has had a connection with the dearly departed. She knows seeing dead people is abnormal, but they never try to communicate, so she does her best to turn a blind eye. The older she gets, the worse her visions become. With more and more ghosts showing up, her secret is on the verge of driving her mad.The only person Ava ever trusted is her best friend, Devon. Only, she hasn't really talked to him in years and lately he hasn't been acting like himself.To make things worse, her evil stepfather, Mark, is hitting the bottle harder and harder. Ava hates the alcoholic psycho her mother married a few years ago. To him, beating women is a sport. Lately, the beatings are getting worse. Ava fears it won't be long before her mother is among the ghosts invading her life.She wishes Mark would just die. When he suddenly does, her life changes forever.Just when she thinks her family is safe, Mark shows back up.Not all ghosts are silent, and dear old Daddy wants some serious revenge.Be careful what you wish for …

I wanted to say "Thanks" to Bonnie for stopping by today!!!

Fracture by Megan Miranda

Eleven minutes passed before Delaney Maxwell was pulled from the icy waters of a Maine lake by her best friend Decker Phillips. By then her heart had stopped beating. Her brain had stopped working. She was dead. And yet she somehow defied medical precedent to come back seemingly fine. Everyone wants Delaney to be all right, but she knows she's far from normal. Pulled by strange sensations she can't control or explain, Delaney finds herself drawn to the dying. Is her altered brain now predicting death, or causing it?

Then Delaney meets Troy Varga, who recently emerged from a coma with similar abilities. At first she's reassured to find someone who understands the strangeness of her new existence, but Delaney soon discovers that Troy's motives aren't quite what she thought. Is their gift a miracle, a freak of nature-or something much more frightening?

I picked up this one because I thought that it was paranormal. It's not (ish?). Here is the basic run down - Delaney falls under the ice and literally dies for 11 minutes. She comes back as a miracle and everyone is happy, except something isn't quite right with her. Like how she should have some serious brain damage but doesn't. And then there is this whole thing that she is pulled toward the dead thing.

Delaney has a lot of problems in the life she is grateful for. Like her mom, struggles with ever letting her out of her sight. She has a best friend who is dating this awful girl and she is confused about it. She knows people are going to die and she can't do anything about it.

Then there is Troy - Troy's character was hard for me to understand. He seemed to start off like a nice guy, but I feel he was psychologically damaged and I needed more insight on him. I am still not sure if his issues are stemmed from the damage he got from his situation or is he was already like that. However, he does have violent tendencies in the book - and I find it hard to believe if Delaney was afraid of him, that she would continue to be around him.

Decker - I feel bad for Decker throughout the whole book. he watched his best friend die. He had several things happen indirectly to him and he find comfort in the wrong girl's arms. But I udnerstand it. his world was crazy and he needed something not.

Overall, it was a decent read. A good stand alone novel. I did feel like not everything was tied up at the end, some lingering questions were just left una

Half-Blood by Jennifer L. Armentrout

The Hematoi descend from the unions of gods and mortals, and the children of two Hematoi-pure-bloods-have godlike powers. Children of Hematoi and mortals-well, not so much. Half-bloods only have two options: become trained Sentinels who hunt and kill daimons or become servants in the homes of the pures. Seventeen-year-old Alexandria would rather risk her life fighting than waste it scrubbing toilets, but she may end up slumming it anyway. There are several rules that students at the Covenant must follow. Alex has problems with them all, but especially rule #1:Relationships between pures and halfs are forbidden. Unfortunately, she's crushing hard on the totally hot pure-blood Aiden. But falling for Aiden isn't her biggest problem--staying alive long enough to graduate the Covenant and become a Sentinel is. If she fails in her duty, she faces a future worse than death or slavery: being turned into a daimon, and being hunted by Aiden. And that would kind of suck
I immediately picked this one because I had fallen so in love with Obsidian. Jennifer L. Armentrout's craft is one I really enjoy. I haven't talked much about author's crafts much on this blog - I think it's because a craft is very hard to pin-point because every person's is different. It's like a finger print - identifiable to one person. I really enjoy hers.

On to the book - I am very much into the "forbidden love" situation and this story does not disappoint. Alex and Aiden are two different characters. He's older (early 20s - which is nice because it brings an understandable maturity - as opposed to the 17 year old boy being too mature) and Alex is a strong girl - trying to figure out the cosmic scheme of things. Aiden, because of his past situation, volunteers to help Alex train so that she can still attend school in the fall. It's kind of shocking to everyone because Alex is a half-blood. He's very aloof to her except when she does something wrong and then he just gets annoyed.
Slowly the love flames, fan.

There is another factor, the great Apollyon. He's this second-coming and positively arrogant - and likable. I can't say much about him because I don't want to spoil anything, but he is a very important part in the book - well - I think he is going to be more crucial in the second.

What's Your Take?

What's Your Take?
This is a feature I wanted to start where I have my fellow bloggers post about topics they want to talk about or have a specific interest in. I was lucky enough that when I sent out the call for bloggers, I had several friends sign up! If you are interested on doing a guest-post, please email me. This link will take you to my original call for bloggers. Let me know if you are interested.
Today, Ms. Arianne Cruz is going to my very first guest-blogger! I wanted to thank Arianne for being so kind as to go first. She is posting about the ins and outs about her review process. 

I’m excited to do a guest post for Michelle! Today, I am here to talk about the “how” and “why” of my review process.
HOW
Depending on what the review is for, my review posts varies.        For my personal reviews: In these reviews, I go right to it. I say whether I liked the book or not. I would usually start with what I didn’t like, and then proceed to gush about the book.        For blog tour reviews: I usually get media kits when I do blog tours so I have a blurb to post before the review. Once the blurb is pasted in the post, I proceed to do the same steps as my personal reviews.
Regardless of the type of review, I ALWAYS add my favorite quotes/scenes/excerpts at the end of my reviews. I think it’s a great way to introduce the book to the readers and help them decide whether they want to read the book or not.


WHY
I always start with the things I didn’t like about the book because I think it is important that authors realize that it’s not okay for me to read a book with spelling, grammatical, or punctuation errors in them. I don’t go and bash the author or anything. In fact, I try to be as polite, but honest, as possible. In my opinion, someone should not publish something and put their name on it if it still has too many errors. It takes away their credibility as a writer.
If it gets so bad AND the story itself is not something of interest to me, I just stop reading the book and I may or may not let the author know that I am doing so. It’s not fair if they are expecting a review from me that will never come.
After the constructive criticisms, I make sure that I gush about what I liked about the book. I think it’s just fair that I balance it out – or maybe write more about what I liked to make the author feel better. Besides, I wouldn’t have finished the book if I didn’t like the story, right?
So there you have it. Let me know how you write your reviews in the comments. If you would like to check out my reviews, feel free to stop by my blog anytime! http://ariannecruz07.blogspot.com
You can also follow me on twitter: @ariannecruz07
Thanks for having me, Michelle!I, personally, love when reviews have excerpts, quotes, or scenes. It gives me a taste for what I will be reading and if I will like the authors voice. Maybe I should practice what I like? What do you think? 
There you have it! The very first What's Your Take feature. Please stop by Arianna's website and see one of her awesome, honest, and fair reviews! I promise you won't be disappointed!

Obsidian by Jennifer L. Armentrout

Starting over sucks.When we moved to West Virginia right before my senior year, I'd pretty much resigned myself to thick accents, dodgy internet access, and a whole lot of boring.... until I spotted my hot neighbor, with his looming height and eerie green eyes. Things were looking up.And then he opened his mouth.Daemon is infuriating. Arrogant. Stab-worthy. We do not get along. At all. But when a stranger attacks me and Daemon literally freezes time with a wave of his hand, well, something...unexpected happens. The hot alien living next door marks me.You heard me. Alien. Turns out Daemon and his sister have a galaxy of enemies wanting to steal their abilities, and Daemon's touch has me lit up like the Vegas Strip. The only way I'm getting out of this alive is by sticking close to Daemon until my alien mojo fades. If I don't kill him first, that is.

If you read this book you will understand why I am using the following phrase to sum it up: sexually frustrating. Someone disagree with me; I dare you.

In my own, little, world - that sums it up. I don't feel the need to go any further, though I will.

So - hi, who knew aliens could be hott? Because there are two beautiful ones Dee and Daemon - and then some of their friends - DAMN - Alright I am going to get off that.

What I liked about this book - first - our narrator is a book blogger who participates in posts that I do! I loved it, as a blogger I appreciated that and I found it relate-able for me. Our narrator also has my favorite quality - a backbone. Daemon and a select few are horribly nasty to her at times and she doesn't just lay down and take it. She stand up for herself and retaliates. I loved the spaghetti scene because I think everyone has imagined doing that so someone at some time in his/her life.

Clearly, the love relationship was done really well and the extra scenes that I have read from Daemon's point of view I think really explains why he is such an ass. I mean, I figured, but it those few pages gave me clarity.

Dee is so damn likable. I feel for the girl because she just wants a friend but for things outside of her control, she is not supposed to and people don't like her. Like being an alien is a big deal?

On to the plot - Well-rounded - no big holes - the first book is completely summed up and could be a stand-alone, if that redic challenge wasn't at the end. I thought the heritage of the aliens was explained. The bad guys were pretty bad ass. The alien powers were also bad ass.

What I didn't like about this book

Insert crickets -


LOVED IT

Go get it. seriously get on it.

No Strings Attached Hop

Thanks to everyone who entered my most recent giveaway! I have contacted the winners and as long as they get back to me they are all set! If not, I will select a few more! 



I liked the idea of this hop because, lets face it, when you go to a hop/giveaway you have like a million options and all kinds of hoops to jump through. I mean, raise your hand if you are guilty of this. *Meekly raises her hand* So Kathy at I am a reader, not a writer. All you have to do is leave your name and email so I can contact you.

What can you win?


My book! Yes - there was nothing in the guidelines to say no self-promotion. Raise your hand if you are guilty for self-promotion *Waves hand dramatically in the air* I'll give away five ebooks.


Here is the cover and the synopsis for you!

When telepathic twins, Piper and Ryder Owens are dumped at Evermore Academy, they thought that the only thing they’d have to worry about was Piper staying out of trouble long enough for them to graduate. They will not, for any reason, be separated. But someone at Evermore knows about their secret and wants to separate them permanently.

But then Piper’s Achilles Heel shows up: a good looking guy. Victor Mira is everything Piper is supposed to avoid, yet she feels drawn to him in a way she never imagined. But Victor is hiding a dangerous secret too, and what he knows could be the one thing that could divide the sisters. Forever


OK - leave me a comment and hop on to the next person!


Here is everyone else who is participating.
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Need of movie titles - See post for specifics :)

I am starting a drama and film elective this upcoming quarter. I really want to focus on movies with similar plot lines and then I wanted to combine my love for Disney and WA BAM! I should do both! I know, genius.

So right now, for certain we are going to view Robin Hood (Disney) and Robin Hood: Prince of Thieves.
I am going to try and convince my principal to let me take the kids to see The Huntsman and then we will watch Snow White.


Are you waiting for more titles?
Don't. I don't have any more pairs :)

So that's what I would like you to help me with. If you can think of a pair of Disney movie and a non-cartoon movie that would be great! I have all the Disney movies - (Side Note: NO ONE HAS EVER BEAT ME AT DISNEY SCENE IT! I AM THAT AWESOME AT IT!)

But, I realize this might be hard to do, so leaving me ideas for different versions of movies, (classics preferably) I will graciously think about your suggestion and no doubt use it somewhere in my teaching endeavors.

Please leave me titles.