Lillian Francis's Blog, page 140
May 21, 2015
Fiction Friday - A fantastic discovery & much eye-rolling
Last Fiction Friday I pimped Foxe Tail by Hayley Walsh, which I described as gay Hardy Boys or a cross between QAF and the Famous Five. Since then I have finished the next two books in the series, Foxe Hunt and Out-Foxed. These three books complete the opening story arc of the series and bring all the events incorporated in these books to a satisfying conclusion. Each has a insular plot that is solved within the individual book as well as the main threat and the romance that straddle all thre...
Published on May 21, 2015 21:00
May 20, 2015
5 Heart review for Theory Unproven
A 5 heart review from Hearts on Fire reviews
...the story was well paced, with great main characters and secondary characters...
The chemistry between the two main characters has a great build up, with compassion for Tyaan..., and hope for Eric that he won’t get his heart broken, since you love him pretty much from the start of the story!
If you like animals, you are going to love these two characters! (Jack and Ianto, the elephants)
I would recommend this book for romance lov...
...the story was well paced, with great main characters and secondary characters...
The chemistry between the two main characters has a great build up, with compassion for Tyaan..., and hope for Eric that he won’t get his heart broken, since you love him pretty much from the start of the story!
If you like animals, you are going to love these two characters! (Jack and Ianto, the elephants)
I would recommend this book for romance lov...
Published on May 20, 2015 21:00
May 18, 2015
Snippet 4 & 5
These final snippets are for shinya_diey over on Dreamwidth. The request read, "May I ask about WIP of your choosing? 7, 19, 79"
Since I didn’t have any more manuscripts ready that ran to 79 pages I’ll can give you two snippets. Both are very rough and nothing more than partially written paragraphs in a vague layout.
The first is 19 lines from the 7th paragraph of something currently referred to as ‘cafe french’.
Opening his mouth to speak Adam realised that his mouth was inexplicably dry. He fl...
Since I didn’t have any more manuscripts ready that ran to 79 pages I’ll can give you two snippets. Both are very rough and nothing more than partially written paragraphs in a vague layout.
The first is 19 lines from the 7th paragraph of something currently referred to as ‘cafe french’.
Opening his mouth to speak Adam realised that his mouth was inexplicably dry. He fl...
Published on May 18, 2015 21:00
May 14, 2015
Damn, I knew there was something I was meant to blog about today...

JMS Books are having a One Day Flash sale at ARe. Today only all JMS Books are 25%.
Sounds like the perfect opportunity to pick up a copy of my short story, Waiting for a Spark.
Want to try before you buy? Here's an excerpt:
Across the bus, Gorgeous smiled encouragingly and his tongue flicked out to wet his lower lip. Could he read Jerome’s mind? Or was the fact he wanted to push the guy to his knees and urge those moist lips to his cock written all over his face?
Nav’s voice was loud in the...
Published on May 14, 2015 00:10
May 13, 2015
Snippet 3
Today's snippet is for Elin Gregory, author and all round good egg, who is always ready with words of encouragement and inspiration. This is for you my friend.
17 lines from the 4th paragraph of p.68 of my WIP, Under the Radar.
Emboldened by Gethin’s last response, Zach knew his next question would push all acceptable boundaries of behaviour, but the laughter had left him feeling light-headed. Reckless, even. He ignored the small voice in his head that told him to mind his own business and plou...
17 lines from the 4th paragraph of p.68 of my WIP, Under the Radar.
Emboldened by Gethin’s last response, Zach knew his next question would push all acceptable boundaries of behaviour, but the laughter had left him feeling light-headed. Reckless, even. He ignored the small voice in his head that told him to mind his own business and plou...
Published on May 13, 2015 21:00
May 12, 2015
Snippet 2
Another snippet, this time for Meredith Russell, she of the mad cover art skills. (If you don't believe me just take a look at the cover for Theory Unproven and tell me it's not bloody perfect.)
So, here's 12 lines from the 6th paragraph of p.57 of Lovers Entwined.
Meredith, I know you asked for a WIP and LE has been previously released, but it's in the process of being reissued and as you know I'm hoping you'll be having some input, so I thought I'd give you a little teaser.
“Thanks.” Tre...
So, here's 12 lines from the 6th paragraph of p.57 of Lovers Entwined.
Meredith, I know you asked for a WIP and LE has been previously released, but it's in the process of being reissued and as you know I'm hoping you'll be having some input, so I thought I'd give you a little teaser.
“Thanks.” Tre...
Published on May 12, 2015 23:35
May 10, 2015
Snippet 1
Last week I offered up the chance for people to request snippets from my work, either on-going projects or published manuscripts.
Here's the first one for one of my original online friends, idamus.
She gave me 9, 15, 82 and asked for something from a WIP.
Here is 15 lines from the 9th paragraph on p.82 of my recent submission, New Lease of Life.
A barrage of giggles from the next table broke through the palpable tension, ripping it asunder. With a grin, Colby turned toward the laughter and addres...
Here's the first one for one of my original online friends, idamus.
She gave me 9, 15, 82 and asked for something from a WIP.
Here is 15 lines from the 9th paragraph on p.82 of my recent submission, New Lease of Life.
A barrage of giggles from the next table broke through the palpable tension, ripping it asunder. With a grin, Colby turned toward the laughter and addres...
Published on May 10, 2015 23:54
May 7, 2015
Fiction Friday
The last FF post was 21st April. Looks like I've let this slip again. I gave my excuses yesterday, so let's not harp on. I'll get right down to the nitty gritty.
Foxe Tail (Skyler Foxe Mysteries #1) by Haley Walsh
Gay teacher Skyler Foxe thought teaching English Lit was murder. Wait till he falls into the real thing.
Skyler Foxe is a brand new English teacher in his hometown of Redlands, CA. He loves literature, loves his students, loves his friends, especially his best friend Detective Sidney F...
Foxe Tail (Skyler Foxe Mysteries #1) by Haley Walsh
Gay teacher Skyler Foxe thought teaching English Lit was murder. Wait till he falls into the real thing.
Skyler Foxe is a brand new English teacher in his hometown of Redlands, CA. He loves literature, loves his students, loves his friends, especially his best friend Detective Sidney F...
Published on May 07, 2015 21:00
Still more radio silence...
Since I haven't been blogging, what have I been up to?
Well, I've been reading, but more about that tomorrow.
Mostly I've finished up the WIP 'New Lease of Life', prepped synopsis and blurbs, and sent it off for submission. After all the additions and tweeking that MS is out of my hands at least for now. I'm not quite ready to say goodbye to Pip and Colby just yet. While the publisher decides yay or nay, I've had an idea for a promo piece which I might as well get written now because I'll forge...
Well, I've been reading, but more about that tomorrow.
Mostly I've finished up the WIP 'New Lease of Life', prepped synopsis and blurbs, and sent it off for submission. After all the additions and tweeking that MS is out of my hands at least for now. I'm not quite ready to say goodbye to Pip and Colby just yet. While the publisher decides yay or nay, I've had an idea for a promo piece which I might as well get written now because I'll forge...
Published on May 07, 2015 00:05
April 20, 2015
Friday Fail - Fiction Friday on a Tuesday
Damn, I appear to have gone into stealth mode and have failed to post anything to my blog for the last two weeks. I blame the Easter holidays, final (hopefully) edits on my WIP ‘New Lease of Life’ while I ready it for submission, and beta work with a tight deadline *side-eyes KH*.
That means I’ve missed two weeks of Fiction Friday. So let’s get the ball roll with that. Yes, I know it’s Tuesday.
My favourite read of the last two weeks, and much anticipated by me from the moment it was announced,...
That means I’ve missed two weeks of Fiction Friday. So let’s get the ball roll with that. Yes, I know it’s Tuesday.
My favourite read of the last two weeks, and much anticipated by me from the moment it was announced,...
Published on April 20, 2015 16:00