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Top Ten Tips for Painless Publishing on Kindle

Even the most reluctant technophone can become highly savvy when the motivation is to get your book out there. And by out there, I mean read by people who don't even know you.
In the last couple of months, I've put two of my earlier novels - No Angel and Call of the Falcon - up on Kindle. They say that the more books you have in your author profile available for purchase, the more you are likely to sell since people who enjoy one book can then go back and buy another. So I've done all the right things like put a request for a review at the end of the book (with an appropriate link) and put a list of my other books for sale at the front (with their own links too).  It takes time, of course, but the more you do the easier it becomes. I recall when I put In Her Mothers' Shoes on Kindle last year it took forever to get the formatting right and the cover the right size and the rights all allocated correctly. Now I've done it three times, I'm becoming a bit of an expert. In fact, I even ran a couple of classes on the subject of digital self-publishing for the local branch of the NZ Society for Authors earlier in the year. Who would have thought it?! 
So, if you're thinking of doing this yourself sometime, here are my summarised top ten tips for a comparatively painless way of publishing on Kindle: 
1. Get your book professionally edited - and that doesn't mean friends and family
2. Get your cover professionally designed by a graphic designer who knows about what works on a book cover
3. Write a promotional "blurb" for your book of up to 300 words that will make its target audience want to buy it (and you do need to work out what sort of people your readers will be). This is a vital sales tool, as are the 8 "key words/phrases" you choose to help your book be found. (Don't use words in the title).
4. Get ISBN numbers from (in New Zealand) www.natlib.govt.nz. You will need one for Kindle, one for e-readers and one for print. They are free.
5. Log onto Kindle Direct Publishing, create a password, click to create a new book.
6. Make formatting your friend. Follow what KDP tells you to do, set fonts (only 3 are available) at 11pt, delete any page numbers, and save the document as HTML (Save as: Type: Web Page Filtered)
7. Upload your book following the prompts. Then follow the instructions to see how it will look on Kindle. If it doesn't look right, fix the errors and upload it again.
8. Upload your cover according to the size limits, and add your "blurb" and your 8 key phrases.
9. Decide on your royalty option, pricing, tick it is not in the public domain (unless it's an old copyright-expired publication), worldwide distribution, Digital Rights Management and available for lending. Royalties (for those of us not US residents) will come in the form of a cheque mailed when the amount due reaches over 100 pounds or 100 US dollars.
10. Click Save and Publish and in a day or two you will see your book, its cover, and its blurb up in the Kindle Store.
Good luck! I'm looking forward to seeing what difference it makes having several books for sale now. I'll keep you posted - along with any further tips for getting sales.

Top writers are ignoring top writers' advice

In the last couple of weeks, I've read two of the most highly recommended female writers of our generation - Anne Tyler (Dinner at the Homesick Restaurant) and Rose Tremain (The Swimming Pool Season). There is no doubt in my mind that they are both exceptional writers; their prose is inspirational. But taken as a whole, their books - specifically their characters and their stories - leave me pretty cold. 
In neither book was there a single engaging character. In both books, the characters were either brittle and damaged, just plain difficult, or passive pushovers who never learned to stand up for themselves. In both books, there was at least one major character who was a nutjob. 
Both books also go into a tremendous amount of extraneous detail, building up as complicated a picture as possible. And the detail often lacks interest.  There are a lot of dream sequences (yawn) and several totally irrelevant scenes, with new, unusual characters added, that made me wonder if they came from a writing exercise or short story Tyler decided to throw in for good measure.
Dare I say it, AS Byatt does this too - adds page after page of diversion and detail - sometimes in the extreme.
Yet what about all that advice to writers - by some of the world's top writers - to make sure all your subplots and action contribute in some way to the overriding theme or story? Not to mention the advice about dream sequences - leave them out because they bore the pants off people.
Funnily enough, reviews in the Telegraph and Guardian often point out the extraneous detail and unlikeable characters in these books, but they still rave about how these writers are so good.
I don't get it!

Time to Write

What an unaccustomed luxury to have time to write. My first book, Dancing in the Wilderness, was published in 2001 and I wrote a lot of it after midnight, after the kids were in bed, after the after-hours work was polished off. From then on, writing was secondary to the day job, squeezed in between running a very busy business and looking after two equally busy teenagers. In fact it was the demands of those very teenagers, combined with the growing demands of having elderly, increasingly frail parents, plus the job, the community work and a badly behaved spaniel, that inspired me to write my fourth, fifth and sixth books, including the best-selling Sandwich Short of a Picnic. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00AM7FHCC

I was a fully fledged member of the Sandwich Generation - sandwiched between elderly parents, teenagers and a career, all making demands on my time and leaving no time for me, let alone for writing. 
But as all authors know, you just make the time. You're driven to. There's something about that laptop, those characters, the sudden plot twist that overtook you the last time you typed out a chapter. You just can't keep away. 
In July this year, as a long-planned bucket-list move, my husband and I spent three months in Menton, in the south of France, where I had plenty of time to write - as well as eat a lot of cheese, drink a lot of wine and swim in the sea every day. My eighth novel sped onto the page. And now that we're back home and waiting for the right job to come by, there's even more time to write. I can't believe how much fun it is, sitting down at the laptop every day. Now I can be just like Stephen King, who sets himself a 2000 word limit every day. And without another job to go to, it's not that hard to achieve.
Like all good things it can't last forever. Like most writers, I have to have a day job. Besides, how will I get that real-life experience I can write about at some later date? 

From a Distance issues look a lot clearer

http://www.stuff.co.nz/the-press/opinion/perspective/9089709/Performing-arts-precinct-will-suffer


The Town hall debate needs clarity of thinking instead of the current emotional knee-jerk reaction to supposed voter preferences or “architectural integrity”. What’s the point of architectural integrity if people have very little use for the buildings saved?
Save the Town Hall auditorium by all means for its iconic status, its world-class acoustics, its heritage, its wonderful Rieger organ, its place in our hearts. But now is the time, after 40 years use has revealed their inadequacies, to forget about the impractical James Hay Theatre, the unpopular Boaters Restaurant, and the unnecessary Limes Room and associated function rooms, which will be replaced in due course by function rooms at the new Convention Centre and local hotels.
The Council’s proposed vote in favour of keeping the lot will deprive Christchurch of the Arts Precinct it not only deserves but badly needs. It was all there in the CERA Blueprint – a new, purpose-built concert auditorium, a new Court Theatre, a new Music Centre, and a home for the CSO and for the city’s other resilient arts organisations that have managed to thrive despite events of the last three years.
How has this come about?The Council “consulted” on saving the Town Hall during consultation on its Annual Plan (LTCCP). The heritage lobby was vocal in saving the Town Hall in its entirety, without really understanding what they were demanding, other than preserving an iconic building. The arts community - those most affected – were not vocal and have not been able to have their say on using a large chunk of the planned Arts Precinct money to save the James Hay Theatre, which they rarely, if ever, use. And it’s difficult to dissent anyway when the Council is one of your funders.
The Council tells us it has looked at all the options and saving the whole Town Hall complex has been agreed as the best option. But has it really looked dispassionately at the other options? It seems that the best option of all – retaining the Town Hall auditorium with an iconic new foyer designed by original architects Warren and Mahoney (or by Sir Miles Warren if he would agree to it) – has not been afforded the public discussion it deserves.
This option was considered by councillors late last year and was recommended by the staff, but later in the committee meeting an impassioned plea by Sir Miles Warren to save the whole thing to preserve its architectural integrity won over the councillors’ hearts. I’m not sure if the auditorium and grand foyer option was ever considered by the full council.
It’s hard to know why the council is so in thrall to Sir Miles Warren’s pleas. His iron will is going to leave the city’s arts community with half the precinct they need. The full council has the opportunity this week to decide if they’re giving the arts a fair go.
They’ve only got this one chance to get it right and, even though many of them won’t be councillors next year to see their legacy fulfilled, such a significant decision should not be rushed through without due consideration of all the alternatives – especially alternatives that would provide significantly more benefit to the arts.
The $80 million win-win optionOften when there’s a major conflict within an organisation or a community over an issue, the most sensible solution is to look for a compromise, preferably one where everybody wins to some extent.
Last year, council staff proposed such a solution – an overwhelmingly sensible proposal that, for a preliminary estimate of $70 to $80 million, would save and fully restore the Town Hall auditorium, provide it with a fitting foyer, and thereby allocate the remaining $80 million (out of a total budgeted now for the Arts Precinct of $158 million) for music and theatre venues for the city’s major arts organisations.
The Council commissioned Warren and Mahoney to design and report on the aesthetics and practicalities of retaining the auditorium only, with a new entrance and gathering space that would have sufficient grandeur and design impact to provide “a sense of place”. Included in the proposal was advice from structural and acoustic engineers. The design, published in a committee report on the council’s website, kept part of the foyer in its existing location and created a new entrance to the east (Colombo Street) that gave it, according to the report by Warren and Mahoney managing director, Peter Marshall, “a sense of arrival in conjunction with existing” [structures].
“We are also of the opinion that the Auditorium could function alone, with modifications that we have suggested previously, and still have a strong architectural and urban presence,” Peter Marshall wrote. “This opinion is shared by Sir Miles Warren.”
Sir Miles obviously changed his mind because he turned up at the meeting and pleaded with councillors to retain the whole complex.
What is wrong with the James Hay Theatre?With 1006 seats, the James Hay is similar in size to the 1250-seat Isaac Theatre Royal, which is currently being restored. However it has none of the grandeur, it has a number of flaws (such as acoustics, raking of the seats, backstage layout, fly-towers, staging) and is generally disliked by theatre and music companies. The Royal New Zealand Ballet, the opera and Showbiz have all rejected it in favour or the Isaac Theatre Royal.
A city this size does not need two auditoriums of almost the same capacity. Keeping it means that the sort of music and drama venue we do need (around 500 to 600 seats) is unlikely to be built.
What will the Arts Precinct look like?So far, as far as I’m aware, the only agreement on tenants of the new Arts Precinct (possibly because it’s so restricted by the small $32.5 million budget) is that it will include a new Court Theatre and a Music Centre. Proposals for it to be the home of the CSO and other arts organisations have yet to come to fruition.
The Arts Precinct is supposed to extend, under the council’s plan, from the Town Hall to the Isaac Theatre Royal and suggestions are that the buildings will be located close to each other, on or near Armagh Street, at the rear of the Isaac Theatre Royal building.
The Court Theatre building will be used – like the current one – almost every day of the year. It has been estimated to cost around $32 million, plus the cost of the land. This, like all proposed projects and costs in the precinct, is by no means definite but it is indicative of the size of a complex The Court currently has and will need in future: a 400-seat theatre plus a smaller studio theatre, a joint foyer and booking office, at least one rehearsal room, as well as the other theatre essentials like space for set design, wardrobe and offices.
The Music Centre building is proposed to include studios, music rooms and storage, and a 350-seat concert chamber.
There has also been talk of an outdoor performance space in the Arts Precinct.
The city’s music, theatre and other performance people have often said that there is a desperate need for a smaller music/drama/dance venue. About half the size of the Isaac Theatre Royal and James Hay Theatre, the theatre would be a purpose-built, 500 to 600-seat auditorium suitable for both “plug-and-play” bands and amateur theatre groups in search of a venue - rock bands to Repertory.
The Arts Precinct is also supposed to house facilities for the CSO that could include offices and storage, but probably not a rehearsal room because of the very large size requirements. Before the earthquakes, the CSO had acquired a rehearsal room and office space in the Salvation Army Citadel near the Town Hall, but this is no more.
It is also hoped by some that the Arts Precinct will become a hub for the city’s thriving arts, such as Showbiz, local ballet, The Body Festival, the International Buskers Festival, The Press Christchurch Writers Festival, the Arts Festival and SCAPE. Galleries and fine arts could stretch around the corner as far as Christchurch Art Gallery.
Arts organisations are always short of money, so the sort of subsidised rent that a council-owned Arts Precinct hub could provide for them should help drive the sort of creative ambience that would thrive with activity and ideas.
And where the arts go, cafés, bars and restaurants follow.

From a Distance

Two weeks and twelve thousand miles away from home and what was so important before is much less important now. No more scraping frost off the car, no more traffic queues to work in the morning, no more work!
But some things do not fade away with distance. Such as the ongoing media nastiness about Bob Parker’s situation. Intense pressure these past few days and weeks (maybe even years!) has got too much for him and he’s exhausted. Who can blame him, new revelations every day about some fresh communication breakdown inside the council? Combined with continued media attacks, relentless, enough to wear anyone down. He’s borne it all with the sort of statesmanlike leadership we saw after the earthquakes – calm authority, telling us what he has been told is the truth. From what I’ve seen of Bob, he’s straight up. He wouldn’t lie.
But The Press continues to be unrelenting. The day after his announcement not to stand for election, there were two pages of “Mainlander” criticism of Bob and the council they chose not to pull. And now, whenever they refer to his decision, they imply he stood down because early indications The Press poll results showed his popularity had declined. And there’s a whole lot more nastiness that doesn’t bear repeating.
A lot of people asked me ‘Why don’t you stand for the council? We need people like you.’
You’ve got to be kidding. Who would want to be a councillor – let alone a mayor – when everybody, from the local rag to the local whingers, see you as fair game for snide remarks and downright slander. I’ve always stuck up for The Press, it was my training ground after all, but it seems to have become a source of major negativity in our town. How long before the honeymoon’s over and Lianne gets the same treatment? Six months? Less?
I had a very small experience of this negativity when I carried out the council audit. I was fair game for the naysayers, The Press and its many columnists included. But what I went through then was nothing compared to what the Mayor has had to put up with lately.
True, he’s not perfect. True, his decision to trust his management team may have come back to bite him. But for heaven’s sake, let the whingeing stop!
There is a small glimmer of hope: you kick a man when he’s down and people go to his rescue, stand up for him even. And the online nastiness eventually self corrects. I hope that’s soon.

Overcoming the rejection spiral

No sooner had I received a nice little cheque from Amazon for sales of "In Her Mothers' Shoes" and was thinking all was well with my writing world, along comes a double whammy: not one but two rejections in just over a week. Applications for two mid-career writers' awards had both come to naught. Of minor consolation was that I had been short-listed along with some very illustrious writers for one of the awards - so illustrious in fact that I knew I was unlikely to win. But just the same, rejection, when it comes, hits you hard. 
But then, with timing that looks almost like karma, I came across a link to a restorative piece by Rose Tremain about how over the years she had plenty of time to perfect the art of not winning a prize. Written a couple of weeks ago when she didn't win a prize for her novel about Merivel, the piece described how she has learned to frame her smile at awards ceremonies for the moment she learned someone else had won, and how she tried to console herself that the book itself should be all the solace she needs: "It's still there, after all. It hasn't even suffered the wounding that can sometimes be inflicted by critics. It has just "not won". It has almost won, but not quite. It is evidently vain to see this as a catastrophe.Some measure of depression, however, almost always creeps in. A "non-win" is of course a loss." 
You can find it at http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2012/nov/08/art-of-not-winning-literary-prizes
About the same time, I came across a passage in a book of Kate Granville's which was equally timely and made me, for the time being, abandon thoughts of giving up writing forever and bring the persistence to bear that I am so well known for: I never give up.
Like Kate Granville, who was amazingly persistent, it's going to mean a lot of rewriting. Hopefully also like Kate Granville, it will result in a much better next novel. 

Publicising your book - how far do you go?

The lengths an author will go to to have the front cover of her book published in one of the country's top magazines... This is from the current issue of NZ Listener magazine:

October 27-November 2 Issue 3781COVER STORY
The Secrets of e-Book SuccessFelicity Price and Rebecca Macfie report on e-books and how they are revolutionising the literary world, with advantages for both readers and writers. Also in this issue, Carroll du Chateau reports on New Zealand’s first Social Entrepreneurs School and how it is helping grass-roots people build businesses out of their ideas and passion; and Diana Wichtel talks with Downton Abbey’s Hugh Bonneville who says he hasn’t let period-drama fame go to his head.

Last month I wrote a story about e-books and self-publishing - surprise! - and it was published in the NZ Listener for this week's edition. It included this piece on self publishing:



Print is still prized above digitalDespite the rapid rise in e-book popularity and the rush to self-publish online, every author I’ve come across still prefers to see their book in printed form, to have and to hold, to bury their nose inside the fold and inhale that wonderful combination of new paper and printer’s ink.In July, I published “In Her Mothers’ Shoes” – a novel about the adoption triangle and mother-daughter relationships – up on Amazon Kindle as an e-book. But I couldn’t quite come to terms with not having a real book. When a growing number of people said they couldn’t access it because they didn’t have an e-reader, in August I had it printed as well. As an e-book, it joins the one million others apparently published for the first time in the last year alone, along with the 20 million e-books available online worldwide, many of them classics scanned and available free, many more on sale for under $5.That’s the expectation we have of the internet – most stuff is free or extremely cheap. Which begs the question: how can readers expect to receive a quality product when it’s written by amateurs with little or no editing and none of the quality control a professional publishing house would impose?The answer is simple: the market decides. Currently, the market is deciding it wants paranormal and erotic fiction and it doesn’t care if it’s not terribly well written. And the market is coming full circle. Authors of this hugely popular stuff, who couldn’t get their books published a few years ago and self-published online instead, are now being offered eye-wateringly lucrative publishing contracts by traditional publishers so they can sell the printed version in the high street bookstores.Increasingly, established authors like me are learning not only how to get your creative masterpiece into a professional-looking e-readable book form with an attractive cover, but how to price it and then promote it, so it sells more than the usual 100. Self-publishing has become a huge industry, with hundreds of companies offering services to design and publish your book. My initial foray has so far been limited to Amazon Kindle – it offers special deals for short-term exclusivity, it covers the majority of the e-book market, it already has my last three books listed, and Amazon makes the experience (which is full of pitfalls and complexities) comparatively easy. Amazon also offers a service called CreateSpace that allows you to self-publish your book in printed form and buy as many copies as you want, complete with barcode and glossy colour cover.
[image error]Photo Caption: Rejected by my publisher, “In Her Mothers’ Shoes” is now on Amazon and in bookshops. It tells the fictional story of two mothers – my teenage birth mother who never even got to see me let alone hold me before I was taken away for adoption, and my adoptive mother who had waited for a baby to call her own for over ten years of marriage. And it traces the adoptive child’s constant need to fit in, to find a sense of belonging.

Self-publishing is damn hard work!

For all my brash enthusiasm for self-publishing, I'm beginning to discover the downside of it: distribution.It's a complete pain. I've just packaged up and sent off over 100 books to about 10 different addresses and I'm totally pooped. There's got to be an easier way. Tomorrow I'm phoning up Nationwide distributors and seeing if I can fob it off to them. Paper Plus has embraced my book but each shop is an individual franchise and you have to post small orders to each shop instead of to one central warehouse. So what started as a delightful gesture by Paper Plus Merivale to take on big quantities for sale has leapfrogged into a nationwide distribution nightmare with heaps of other Paper Pluses wanting copies too. Not that I'd ever want to look a gift horse...Meanwhile Whitcoulls is thinking about selling it into their stores. At least they have a central warehouse point. I don't think I was ever meant to be a postie. Give me a pen or a laptop any day.

A real writer like Joanne Harris and Nicky Pellegrino

Yesterday, I took part in a session at the Christchurch Writers' Festival, chaired by the delightful Graham Beattie, that looked at how fiction both embellishes and reflects the "stuff of life" - a subject that is increasingly close to my heart. It was a wonderful experience, up on the stage with Joanne Harris and Nicky Pellegrino, pretending I was a real writer like them, talking about writing and even, at the end, getting asked some questions ( I thought they'd all be for Joanne Harris) and to sign some books (ditto). As my fiction has become closer and closer to reality, I’ve become interested in what Chris Cleve said at the festival: the blurring of the line between fact and fiction, the blending of make-believe with what really happened – yesterday or years ago. I think it’s a very interesting development in fiction – making us think about how real life informs the best fiction and fiction mirrors real life. Because it’s in fiction – in the way that characters behave and react to an issue – that stimulates us, often unconsciously, to form our values about that issue.I was heartened to hear Kate Grenville say that “the reality of life is so fascinating – you could never make it up!” And that anything we could imagine is still not as interesting as life itself”. And I found this when writing “In Her Mothers’ Shoes” – that some of the things that actually happened to my mothers make the book far more quirky and interesting than anything I could have made up.I think it’s this sense of reality – that the events in a novel could actually have happened – that people like about a book. They’re not expected to suspend disbelief interminably while vampires and changelings and all sorts of other incredible beings do weird things to each other. I’ve become an avid advocate for good old-fashioned realism in literature. I don’t care that all this fantasy fiction is selling by the billion. I’m all for the stuff of life we can believe in – the sort of fiction where the reader recognises the situation, but it takes them a little bit further than reality into realms of imagining, so that they can identify, but they are also transported out of themselves to inhabit, for a few hours, somebody else’s world… to live through somebody else’s seemingly mundane but nevertheless gripping problems and recognise, in the pages of the book, their own world – and make it seem all the better for it. 
 

An elephant in the writers' room

Today at the Christchurch Writers' Festival I was able to enjoy the rare experience of being a writer for a whole day, and the feeling will continue over the weekend, talking to other writers and editors and publishers and booksellers. But the elephant in the room that no one has mentioned so far is the future of publishing under the onslaught of the internet.  That aside, the festival represents a bit of a turning point for me, being an accepted writer now compared to my first writers' festival when I'd just had my first novel published by a small local publisher and was overwhelmed by all the famous literati. Now I feel I can stand among them, at least to some extent. Now I have an online presence, a website, a twitter account, and this blog.Now I am part of the onslaught of the internet. Outside the writers' hall (well, it's actually a giant blow-up igloo), in the coffee shop, they're keen to ask how the books sales are going, how I did it, was it difficult to publish online, to get copies printed too. Inside the writers' hall, ebooks aren't part of the conversation - not yet anyway - and they aren't mentioned in the programme. They weren't even mentioned during the special session yesterday on how traditional books and social media might exist together. Why wasn't it part of the conversation, I wonder? Have they buried their collective heads in the sand on this big, scary subject? Does it actually not matter? The festival's focus is definitely on writers, their craft, their inspiration and this is how it should be. But something in me stirs. Surely the product of their labours should be considered too - the printed word in the printed book. The conversation needs to be had. Because if we don't advocate for the printed word, we might lose it.