Toni Aleo's Blog, page 22
June 13, 2012
Writing Wednesday!












Rawr.....
mmm...
oh yeah....
OH! excuse me! back to the post!




I am on Chapter 24!
The ending word count is: 121,562

When I get to Chapter 25, the beta readers will get chapters 16-20.

Critique partner is right there with me, and probably wants to kill me cause I havent sent her 23 yet...opps :P Love ya Tara!
Last line I wrote:
“I love you, too.”

Music from this chapter:
Fix a Heart - Demi Lovato
Lightweight - Demi Lovato
As long a you love me - Justin Bieber (yeah, I listen to Justin Bieber! So!?)
Gone - Ioanna Gika
The Wind - Zac Brown Band
I really do love the song Gone, its beautiful, check it out!

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Published on June 13, 2012 11:33
June 12, 2012
Get your Swag on Giveaway!

An Assassins Jersey - Brooks or AdlerA signed copy of BOTH Taking Shots and Trying to ScoreA swag pack!and the best one:AN ARC OF EMPTY NET!
Thats right, you have the chance to read Empty Net before anyone else!! I will be picking four different winners for this! Its gonna be awesome, so please go leave a review and then come back and enter!!
Good luck!!
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Published on June 12, 2012 12:48
June 6, 2012
Wednesday Writing








But first, lets discuss the real movie I am waiting for......




Now on to the fun stuff!!!
I have big news!!!!!!
I only have 9 chapter left! plus, the epilogue and I am done with Empty Net!!!!!




The book is going AMAZING!
Here is what some of the beta readers are saying:
Sweet Jesus lady! :) I didn't want to stop reading! GRRRRRRR. - Tabby
I can't decide if I love Audrey or want to slap her or both! lol. You definitely have a way of sucking people's emotions in to your books! - Kaci
OMG I LOVE IT - Mary
I can't get to excited because I know something bad is going to happen! They are too happy!! - Althea
Toni, people are going to love this story!!!! Tate is just awesome. - ShannonOh and what does my critique partner think you may ask?
What Tara Thinks of Empty Net:So in other words, I am extremely confident in this book! Its gonna be epic! I wrote some hockey scenes the other night and my husband was like, "Wow, you've been paying attention, I might think you were a guy if I didnt know you wrote this." So yay me! Things are going great, and again I can't wait for the cover to be done and to know exactly when I am releasing! Y'all will be the first to know!!!
I want to climb Tate like a tree and hump his face.
I want murder Levi.
I want to witness first hand, Lucas' attempt to be the construction worker from the village people (preferably the sexy stripper version!)
And I need to buy more AWWWW"S cuz i keep using them up.
Toni is truly blooming into an amazing author and this book is her best yet. The characters are fantasimal and you will instantly fall in love with Tate and Audrey.
So on with the stats!
I am on Chapter 21!
The ending word count is: 107,000
My goal is to have Chapter 23 done by next Wednesday.



Last line I wrote:
“Not telling you. The whole point of presents is the surprise.”
Music from this chapter:
You my only shorty - Demi Lovato
Unbroken - Demi Lovato
We are young - Fun.
Now, everyone knows who Fun. is and everyone has heard We are young, 3927584857407 times, so I'm not going to post that video. I'm gonna post the other one, Some Nights, because it is my FAVORITE song off the album! So awesome!


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Published on June 06, 2012 12:40
June 4, 2012
ACR of Empty Net Maybe?
So I have some BIG news. I am a big supporter of book blogs, they are amazing, and I have made some BEST friends from the ones I follow. One of my favorite blogs is Tater's Tail Tails and my girl Tara, has hit 500 followers! Great job to her! To celebrate her awesome blog, she is having a freaking huge giveaway, it makes my giveaway look like peanuts! lol. Apart of her giveaway is a Signed Copy of Trying to Score and a swag pack, but that's not all. If she hits 700 followers, I am giving one lucky winner an Advance Copy of Empty Net when I am done. This could be the only copy I give out, I dont know if I will do what I did with TTS, so EVERYONE should go to http://www.taterstalltails.com/ and follow her blog! Thanks so much everyone!
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Published on June 04, 2012 16:29
June 3, 2012
Reading Addiction Blog tour!

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Published on June 03, 2012 15:27
June 2, 2012
20,000 Views!!!
I hit 20,000 hits!!! Celebrate with me by entering to win a signed copy of Taking Shots!!!
a Rafflecopter giveaway
Thanks everyone!! Good luck!!!
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Thanks everyone!! Good luck!!!
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Published on June 02, 2012 08:50
May 30, 2012
Writing Wednesday!










Now, onto book stuff. Taking Shots and Trying to Score are going to be all over the place this summer. I am signed up for two different blog tours. When I get the banners, I will post them in the Tour section. Taking Shots is up to 121 reviews with a 4.3 star rating. Trying to Score is at 56 reviews with a 4.4 star rating both on Amazon. We only need 44 more reviews for the first chapter and cover of Empty Net to be revealed. So PLEASE GO LEAVE ME A REVIEW! :) The only bad thing that happened this week with my book was that I got a horrible horrible review and it hurt my heart but I promise guys, I've gotten better. I used to cry and omg it was horrible, but now I just shrug my shoulders. Its all I can do. People arent going to like me all the time.






The ending word count is: 90,732
My goal is to have Chapter 20 done by next Wednesday.
When I get to Chapter 20, 5 more chapters will be sent out to my beta readers.

Last line I wrote, its a text and it says:
I seriously: Can. Not. Wait.
Music from this Chapter:
Thinking of You - Dierks Bentley
Only Girl - Boyce Avenue
Thats all so far!!!
I am a BIG Dierks Bentley fan. He plays hockey with my husband and I've met him a few times. This is my ALL TIME FAVORITE song, and when he had his daughter come out and sing it with him, I bawled my eyes out. Just a little spoiler, it is for Shea and Elli in this chapter. Its a special song, and I love it so much, so here is the video!

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Published on May 30, 2012 12:53
May 23, 2012
Winners pick!!!
The winners have been chosen!!!
Copy of Trying to Score goes to: Maria Fasano-Palminteri
The winner of the $20 amazon gift card goes to: CarolinaSpain - please email me at toni.aleo@yahoo.com
The winner of the biggest prize ever goes to: Corinne
Thanks everyone that entered!!!!
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Copy of Trying to Score goes to: Maria Fasano-Palminteri
The winner of the $20 amazon gift card goes to: CarolinaSpain - please email me at toni.aleo@yahoo.com
The winner of the biggest prize ever goes to: Corinne
Thanks everyone that entered!!!!
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Published on May 23, 2012 16:45
Writing Wednesday!


Hello all my Assassins' fans! How are you? How is the start of your summer going?
Mine is positively insane! hehe!
I feel like I am losing my mind, honestly!

When I wrote Taking Shots this time last year, my schedule at work was different, now I work 12am to 8am, and I am always tired. Mix that with two rambunctious children, a writing process, and keeping a house hold going...yeah, I really don't know how I'm gonna make it! I've seemed to put myself in a bubble, only letting the kids in. Its my Empty Net bubble, where Tate and Audrey are living their story. While trying to entertain my kids I find myself stopping, and writing stuff down in my notebook or my computer, if its close. When I'm driving, I'll stop and write, its insane. I am also starting to find out who my friends really are too. The ones that understand my insanity tend to be there when I need them, the ones that don't have wrote me off.
This time around its worst, I dont know if its because of the pressure of wanting to write a great story or what, but like always I find myself second guessing my work. Like this:

Will people connect with Audrey?
What about Tate? Am I writing them right?
Crap! Am I making them believable!
Freaking A, do men do that?
Does that happen in Hockey?
For the love of God, please let people love this book.



Now thats I'm done talking about my life kind of stuff, lets go onto Empty Net. There are no spoilers or anything like that, I dont want to spoil the the book for anyone, I'm just letting y'all into my life.

So here we go!
I just finished Chapter 13.
The ending word count is: 67,380
My goal is to have Chapter 16 done by next Wednesday.
When I get to Chapter 15, 5 more chapters will be sent out to my beta readers.
I think the editors are done with chapter 1-8 and my critique partner is right there with me, waiting on 13. I havent finished reading it over yet, so she hasn't gotten it yet.
I don't know if you could consider this a spoiler but this is the last line I wrote:
“Yeah, Audrey, I know. Friends.”


I hope you enjoyed this post. If you have any questions or suggestions for next weeks Writing Wednesday please let me know! I feel like I've done nothing but bore y'all! Sorry if I have!
Thanks so much!
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Published on May 23, 2012 11:18
May 18, 2012
busy, busy, busy
I havent had a blog post in a while, so here I am!Things are well in Toni Aleo land. My son is a second grader now, and my daughter is kindergartener, yes I cried all morning. hehe. The end of school year has came really quick and now I have two little people to entertain while trying to write Empty Net. I know, exhausting right? Since I know I am going to be beyond busy, I wanted to see what everyone would think about a Writing Wednesday. I thought of it the other day while I was writing..it was a Wednesday, anyways, I thought I could post what I'm doing with the book. Like what chapter I'm on, or something like that. I really dont have anything else to post but reviews and links to other blogs when stuff comes up. With Preds hockey season over...a moment of silence please.....I really have nothing, I promise I'm a really boring person. lol! So what do y'all think?
Thank so much, and enjoy your weekend!Don't forget to enter the contest! It ends tomorrow!
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Thank so much, and enjoy your weekend!Don't forget to enter the contest! It ends tomorrow!
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Published on May 18, 2012 07:30