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September 7, 2018
BOOK REVIEW: THE MOUSE WITH THE QUESTION MARK TAIL

Richard Peck
Puffin Books
For ages 8-12
The tiniest mouse in the Royal Mews is such a mystery he doesn’t even know his own name! He scampers off on a epic adventure in and around Buckingham Palace with a plan to seek the advice of Queen Victoria. The exhilarating journey takes him to strange and wonderful places, but will it help him discover who he is and where he came from? This delightful follow-up to the acclaimed Secrets at Sea from Newbery Medal winner Richard Peck is full of laughs, surprises and excitement.
MY REVIEW:
The story, while certainly cute and adventurous, fell kind of flat. There are simply so many mouse stories out there, and this one just didn't stand out. Nothing wrong with it. Just wasn't anything special, in my opinion. And the ending was too predictable.




Published on September 07, 2018 05:00
September 6, 2018
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Published on September 06, 2018 05:30
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Thomas longs to escape the drudgery of farm life, dreaming of adventure and running away from his demanding parents.
Planet Remeon is on the brink of destruction, fighting a crippling disease that threatens to wipe out their civilization.
Thrust into their world, Thomas is caught in the middle of telepathic mind games between the Day Watchers and the Night Dwellers.
Alliances will be broken. Thoughts will be controlled. Will anyone survive?
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Published on September 06, 2018 05:00
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME!

I haven't been this excited about a birthday since I turned 40. I love birthdays. Not just mine, but I love celebrating my kids' birthdays and friends' as well.
I believe every year we are alive is a blessing, a gift, from God. Whether we know it or not, our days upon this earth are numbered. Life is meant to be an adventure! We are here to learn and to experience what it means to be human. We are here to love, to laugh, to cry, to mourn, to hope, to feel gratitude, to forgive, and to be forgiven.
I wake every morning with a determination to make that day count. I'm a list-maker. Each day begins with a list of what I want to accomplish. Often, I don't complete everything on that list, but I feel a sense of pride when things are checked off, even if it's just getting a load of laundry done or writing 500 words of my latest book.

I've woven together a lifetime of wonderful memories and have great relationships with all five of my children. That alone has made my life worthwhile.

But at 50 years old, I'm only halfway done. What do I still want to accomplish?

I'm not worried because my #1 goal is to live to 100! So I have plenty of time to get all this done. Mostly, when my life finally does come to an end, I want to look back and feel satisfied that I've done something good in the world, that I've made a difference somehow, not only in the lives of my kids but for other people as well. I hope to be able to do that with my books, but God's not finished with me yet. He may have some things planned for me that I haven't foreseen.
I'm grateful for every day, every hour, I draw breath. I'm grateful for the experiences, good and bad, that life has given me thus far. And mostly I'm grateful for my family. I'm grateful to love and to be loved.
God bless, and here's to another 50 years!
--Laurisa
Published on September 06, 2018 03:14
September 5, 2018
WRITER 2 WRITER: 3 WAYS TO MAKE YOUR WRITING POP!

Congratulations! You’ve written an amazing book. The story is exciting, the characters are memorable. It’s the best work you’ve ever produced. But for some reason, readers just aren’t getting into it. It falls flat. Sales are low. Reviews are disappointing.
The problem might not be with the story but with your writing. Like any talent or craft, writing well takes a lot of practice. Successful novels are not just good stories, they are good writing . Readers get sucked into the words and can’t stop turning pages. So, how can an author transform mediocre writing into a tale that shines?
Here are three techniques that can help:
1: Kick Your Vocab Up a Notch – It doesn’t matter whether you write for fourth graders or adults, romance or horror— words matter . Some literary works relish using elaborate language, while other authors prefer the infrequent use of such words. The key is to locate mundane vocabulary in your text that could be replaced with something more effective. Consider this excerpt from Billy Lynn’s Long Halftime Walk by Ben Fountain:
“That same heaviness, the same torpor and melancholy, a kind of sickly-sweet emo funk that’s almost pleasurable, in the sense that it hints at something real. As if sorrow is the true reality? Without ever exactly putting his mind to it, he’s come to believe that loss is the standard trajectory.”
Throughout his book, Fountain chooses to balance the straightforward speech patterns of a Marine with language that reveals Billy’s intelligence and deep emotions. He uses torpor, for example, instead of its more commonplace synonym, apathy.
2: Repeat, Repeat, Repeat – Repeating a term or phrase is a powerful poetic device that draws the reader into a narrative and allows him to connect emotionally with the story. Don’t overuse it because then a text can become tedious, but occasionally repeating a word can emphasize its value. Think of Martin Luther King Jr.’s powerful “I Have A Dream” speech, or examples from other works such as Snow by Orhan Pamuk:
“Every person had a star, every star had a friend, and for every person carrying a star there was someone else who reflected it, and everyone carried this reflection like a secret confidante in the heart.”
Here, the repetition of the words star and reflect communicates the significance of this particular metaphor and signals to the reader that this is something he should pay attention to.
3: Vary Sentence Patterns – While it’s tempting to make every sentence a work of art, to plug in impressive words at every opportunity and make your entire book sound like a long poem, the truth is varying the styles and lengths of sentences is much more effective. In Everything I Never Told You, the author, Celeste Ng, masterfully utilizes variation:
“Hannah’s body knows all the secrets of silence. In the dark, her fingers slide back the bolt, then grasp the safety chain and unfasten it without rattling. This last is a new trick. Before the funeral, there was no chain.”
Notice that there are no fancy words here. Ng relies on stark, simple language to take us inside five-year-old Hannah’s head. The author pairs longer, complex sentences with short, concise ones resulting in a compelling rhythm for the reader to follow.
If you want your writing to catch and hold readers’ attention, try upping the quality of your writing with vocabulary, repetition, and variation. For more on these and other literary devices that can improve your writing, check out University of Toronto Press’s A Dictionary of Literary Devices.
Published on September 05, 2018 05:00
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Elena looked around the business her dad had built—a thirty-six-hundred-square-foot legacy with iron bars on the windows called Treasure Mountain Pawn, that had passed on to her. “Elena, I got ya something I think ya need.” Tug walked toward the back of the store. “We agreed. No presents,” she called over her shoulder, but he continued toward the storage room as if he hadn’t heard her. Something I need? I need a huge inheritance from a long-lost relative. Or a millionaire business partner. Or to win a lottery as soon as possible. The bell on the front door jingled again, drawing Elena out of her wishes. Tug had turned the sign to “Closed” when Lucas left, but apparently, he’d forgotten to lock it. Glancing up, she found herself looking into turquoise eyes. Not blue, not green, but somehow both. His brown hair was perfectly tousled, and there was a shadow across his jaw, not like he forgot to comb or shave, but like he knew he rocked that look—complete with rolling a guitar pick between his fingers. His sleeves were pushed up, revealing muscular arms ribbed with veins. He walked toward her in a black button up—tight across his broad shoulders and obviously muscular chest, and then tucked into slim blue jeans behind a large belt buckle. He wore western boots, expensive but not flashy. She couldn’t help taking him in. Oh, my gosh! She could hardly breathe. Everything she found attractive in a man was wrapped up in one neat package.


















Published on September 05, 2018 05:00
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Published on September 04, 2018 05:00
September 3, 2018
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This movie script for the full-length feature film, Hell Hole, is based on Donald Firesmith's novel, Hell Holes: What Lurks Below.
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By night and on weekends, his alter ego writes modern paranormal fantasy, apocalyptic science fiction, action and adventure novels and relaxes by handcrafting magic wands from various magical woods and mystical gemstones. His first foray into fiction is the book Magical Wands: A Cornucopia of Wand Lore written under the pen name Wolfrick Ignatius Feuerschmied. He lives in Crafton, Pennsylvania with his wife Becky, and his son Dane, and varying numbers of dogs, cats, and birds.
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Published on September 03, 2018 05:30
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Published on September 03, 2018 05:00
September 2, 2018
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Silver Dagger Book Tours is now 2 years old this month!

Believe it or not, Silver Dagger Book Tours was created and is mainly operated by just one person! I used to be just an internet crawler looking for new books and giveaways and stumbled upon book tours. After indulging in many dozens of tours, I decided I'd like to try my hand at blogging in my spare time (with absolutely no blogging experience at all!) I was a book blogger for several companies (and still am) and stuck with it for over 3 years. In that time, I learned all the ropes and became a pretty efficient blogger, but there was still something missing- I wanted to make my posts stand out a bit! So, I started creating small graphics like “about the book” and the other standard graphics that you see in all my tours nowadays and started jazzing my posts up. I became pregnant with my second child in the fall of 2015 and me and my hubby decided to try to purchase our first home finally, so I quit my waitressing job to pack up everything for the move and never looked back! It took several months of trying to get the ball rolling and was quite difficult at first to get authors to tour with me. Thus, I had an idea to let everybody pay what they can comfortably afford instead of set rates as I thought what some other companies charged were just outrageous!Since then, I have done over 1000 tours and worked with hundreds of amazing authors – many who come back for repeat tours! I have 2-3 tours kick off every weekday with occasional tours on the weekends and EVERY tour is required to have a giveaway so readers can gain a little something and have fun while they enjoy learning about new books.I have an absolutely amazing group of bloggers that share my tours on their sites and really couldn't have gotten this far without their continued support and would like to thank each and every one of them! Ya'll are amazing! I also have two assistants that help me check links and keep up with blogger activity – Janet, who's been with me over a year, and Laurie, who is a new addition. Ya'll ladies are spectacular and I couldn't do it without you!Absolutely everything else is completely run solely by me though and I really enjoy organizing tours and helping new authors get discovered. I don't discriminate and host ALL fictional genres in ALL age ranges as me and my bloggers have a broad range of readers that enjoy many different genres. After two years of astronomical tours, I am going stronger than ever now and growing on a daily basis with plans to continue hosting tours for many many years!
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Published on September 02, 2018 05:00