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Now Available!

Osric's Wand: The Wand-Maker's Debate, the first novel in the Osric's Wand series by collaborating authors Jack D. Albrecht Jr. and Ashley Delay, is now available!
Welcome to the world of Archana… full of enchantment and wonder, where magic is a way of life but has only begun to be explored.  Join Osric and his companions as they attempt to prevent a world war.  Travel with them to distant lands, unravel the mysteries of new magical abilities, and meet the unique characters along the way.  Be the first to discover the secrets behind the prophecy, the intrigue and Osric's wand.
Available for Kindle on Amazon.com, all other E-readers on Smashwords.com, and soon to be in paperback from all major retailers.

In Conclusion

I love the feel of a new book.  I am not referring to the book in and of itself, but rather the way you feel when you first enter a new world and meet new characters.  When you pick up a book and you cannot stand to put it down until you have absorbed every last word.  How you go through your day wondering what will happen next to the intriguing new people you have met in its pages.  When the struggles they face in their adventures mean something to you on a personal level, and you see part of yourself in each character.
Last night, at 12:38 AM, we wrote the final three words of our first novel!  It was an emotional moment for me, as I identify with several of the characters we wrote about (not the ones you might think, either).  The end of the book was a complete surprise to us.  I know it may sound strange for an author to be surprised by how their own book ends, but it was as though the words wrote themselves.  We had a plan; we brainstormed, we argued, and when we finally agreed and put it down on paper, it was nothing like we had said it would be.  We both stared at those last words for several moments, and we reached the same conclusion; we could not end it any other way.  It was perfect; the plan be damned.  
When we completed the novel, I was so proud of the characters.  I connect with them all on an extremely personal level.  That is no small task, since it is a collaboration between two authors, and we are such very different people.  
Eighty Thousand words; born of boredom and impatience from a lack of reading material.  80k moments of joy and frustration; beginning with a sleepless night writing the first few chapters, and culminating in a late night finale of dialogue and discovery.  We have been truly blessed by this journey.  We are thankful for all of the relationships that we have built with our beta readers, as well as the strangers who have stopped by to offer encouragement and advice.  I love waking up to an inbox full of comments and questions regarding the book, and we thrive on the criticism as well as the praise.  We have certainly come a long way, and we are proud of our accomplishment, to say the least. 
So, the good news is that we are finally done.  Don't get me wrong, our work is far from over.  Our next task is to make sure that you will enjoy the time you spend reading it, as much as we have enjoyed the time spent writing it.  Thank you all for your words of encouragement, as well as your instruction and guidance.  We will do our best to make you proud.

In Conclusion

I love the feel of a new book.  I am not referring to the book in and of itself, but rather the way you feel when you first enter a new world and meet new characters.  When you pick up a book and you cannot stand to put it down until you have absorbed every last word.  How you go through your day wondering what will happen next to the intriguing new people you have met in its pages.  When the struggles they face in their adventures mean something to you on a personal level, and you see part of yourself in each character.
Last night, at 12:38 AM, we wrote the final three words of our first novel!  It was an emotional moment for me, as I identify with several of the characters we wrote about (not the ones you might think, either).  The end of the book was a complete surprise to us.  I know it may sound strange for an author to be surprised by how their own book ends, but it was as though the words wrote themselves.  We had a plan; we brainstormed, we argued, and when we finally agreed and put it down on paper, it was nothing like we had said it would be.  We both stared at those last words for several moments, and we reached the same conclusion; we could not end it any other way.  It was perfect; the plan be damned.  
When we completed the novel, I was so proud of the characters.  I connect with them all on an extremely personal level.  That is no small task, since it is a collaboration between two authors, and we are such very different people.  
Eighty Thousand words; born of boredom and impatience from a lack of reading material.  80k moments of joy and frustration; beginning with a sleepless night writing the first few chapters, and culminating in a late night finale of dialogue and discovery.  We have been truly blessed by this journey.  We are thankful for all of the relationships that we have built with our beta readers, as well as the strangers who have stopped by to offer encouragement and advice.  I love waking up to an inbox full of comments and questions regarding the book, and we thrive on the criticism as well as the praise.  We have certainly come a long way, and we are proud of our accomplishment, to say the least. 
So, the good news is that we are finally done.  Don't get me wrong, our work is far from over.  Our next task is to make sure that you will enjoy the time you spend reading it, as much as we have enjoyed the time spent writing it.  Thank you all for your words of encouragement, as well as your instruction and guidance.  We will do our best to make you proud.

Osric's Wand: Chapter 2

Today is Ashley's birthday, and as we released chapter one for my birthday, today we are releasing chapter two. Please wish Ashley a great day, and leave a comment below as well. Don't forget that chapter 1 is also found here, just look at the may postings if you want to read that first.


Gus was not much for celebrating in his old age.  There was no need for him to go to the ratification ceremony, so he would leave it to the young to socialize and celebrate.  He felt that a better use of his day would be searching for wand materials.He preferred to spend his time pondering wand theory as he walked in the meadow, his favorite wand at his left side in a leather pouch that Lady Carrion had made for him.  He wasn't carrying anything except for a sack for the sticks he collected.  Gus was serious about his work; best to carry light and lengthen the time of productivity.He had a large family to provide for, after all.  His species was known for having many offspring, and he was no exception.  Gus had lived a very long life, especially for a prairie dog.  He had survived three wives, the succession of two Turgents, and a brief yet terrifying excursion in an elven prison cell.  Years of gathering raw wand materials had left him slightly kyphotic, and he moved a little slower than he used to, but even hunchbacked he stood taller than any other in his colony.  His coat had lightened over the years, and was mostly gray, except for a few dark patches on his shoulders and legs.  He stretched his aching back as he placed a perfect stick in the satchel at his side.It was getting late and his bag was full.  The meadow was not far from his colony, but there was one more stop to make before he went home.  It was only a short detour, and his empty stomach would thank him for it.  He hoped that he could catch Lady Carrion at her evening meal.  He did love her food, so much that he made it a regular habit to arrive around meal times.  Like all prairie dogs, his typical menu consisted of a variety of plants and insects.  However, over time he had developed a taste for other foods.  He was frequently invited to dine with his customers, but he had yet to find a chef that could top Lady Carrion's chicken stew.  His youngest son, Pebble, shared his love for a variety of fares, and he often brought him home remnants of his dinner.He had grown quite fond of Lady Carrion since she had arrived in the meadow, and thus, for her he had made an exception to one of his foremost rules.  For the first time in his life, he had made a wand out of a spatula.  She had wanted one so badly, and he had taken advantage of her generosity many times.  She could not afford an Eni spatula wand, so he had fashioned one for her.  It was a fine wand, but it drove him to fits to see her carrying it in her belt for all to see, with his bolt on the handle.  There was no end to the amount of pestering he had to endure because of that one moment of benevolence.  "No, no, no!"  He thought out loud.  That was the one and only spatula wand he would ever make.Sticks were the only material to use to create a wand.  All that other fancy stuff seemed pointless to him.  Why you would want to make a wand out of something that already had a purpose was beyond him.  Sure, he made exceptions on special occasions; a high paying request, a ceremonial sword, or things of that nature, but those were really just novelties in his eyes.  Sticks however, had no purpose, and he thrived on giving them new life.  The throngs of admirers that begged him to make a wand out of a hammer or a quill were merely looking for something to show off.  They could patronize his competitor, Eni, for all he cared.Creating a wand from a stick was easy.  Interlacing the magical strands to make the constricted shaft for the power to be propelled through was the difficult part.  Of course, you had to use sticks that were sturdy and had an appealing shape, then clean and polish them before creating the magical structure within, but that was all just pointless aesthetics to please the buyer.  The raw structure of a stick could easily contain the magical strands that those gifted with the ability of wand making manipulated.  Wand-Makers were the only ones able to see the magical strands, and they could draw them from Archana, mold them, and bind them to create a wand.Gus and Pebble where the only ones in his colony who could see into that realm.  He had devised a game to train his son in the art of wand-making.  He would locate an item or a creature with a specific pattern of magical strands, and Pebble would have to guess what it was he had chosen based on clues.  Pebble was young, however, and he often tried to play the game with his siblings who could not see what he saw.  Gus had to remind him often that it wasn't fair to make them guess something they couldn't see.He was heading south, parallel to the tree line, in the direction of Lady Carrion's cottage.  He thought perhaps she would be preparing a potato soup, as the young tubers were most succulent that time of year.  Suddenly, a noise from the woods caught his attention, and he turned his head to the left and stood upright in fear; just in time to see an arrow released from a bow.  Gripped with anxiety, he was rooted in place by his terror.  This is going to hurt, he thought.  The arrow struck his leg on the back side of his thigh, nearly severing the muscle.  He screamed out in pain and then fell to the ground, swearing at the hunter."You imbecile, have you ever shot a bow before today!?"  He shouted, as he reached for his wand and began to heal his wound."I am sorry, sir!"  He yelled, as he ran up to Gus.  "I beg your forgiveness.  I am so hungry that my arms are shaking at the tension of the bow.""Well, that will happen if you are stupid enough to hunt this meadow!"  He frowned up at a very apologetic man.  "May Archana place many obstacles in your path as you hunt."  He continued to work on his wounded leg.  "How long have you been hunting this meadow anyway?""'Bout three days now, sir.  I fell asleep, and I awoke just moments ago and saw you.""And you had to bloody miss, didn't you?!"  Gus interrupted."Well, sir, you don't present a very large target.""I am a full eighteen inches, as you can easily see.  I didn't even move!""Yes, sir, but you only weigh about three pounds.""I was eighteen inches!"  Gus interrupted again.  "Now I'll be seventeen and three quarters and lean to the left, thanks to you!"  He had stopped the bleeding and was working with his wand to end the pain.  He mumbled under his breath as he worked.  "They will have to change my name to Eileen.  I've never seen a worse hunter in my life.  I could have fed a starving man, my pups would have been proud; but no, this idiot had to miss a perfectly easy shot."He did fear dying, as anyone in the sights of a hunter would; though he feared aging to decrepitude more.  In all of the stories told, very few had made it to that sort of an end.  The tales of those who had lived to old age all spoke of the pain they experienced.  Some of them lost their mental capacity, or control of their bodily functions.  There were terrible tales of disease, and the sadness of seeing all of their children die before them, loss of eye sight and being dependent on their family and friends to survive.  Gus wanted to die nobly, to nourish an honorable hunter, but he feared it would not happen. Gus was aware, due to an encounter with a See-er in his younger years, that he was destined never to be hunted.  He was determined not to die a sad, lonely death of age and incapacity, and although it was an honorable goal, when a See-er showed a person their death they rarely escaped it.When a hunt had been botched, there was nothing left for the hunter; honor would not allow him another shot, at least not at the same target.  So, all that one could do was hope that his attempted prey would point him in the direction of a food source."My apologies sir, I assure you I would have honored you if I had bested you in the hunt.  If you were incapacitated, I would have."  He tried to appeal to Gus."Yes, you proved that by not killing me after your display of incompetence!"  Gus yelled back."Once again, I beg your forgiveness, sir.  I will leave you to heal and be on my way."  He roused himself to leave.Gus watched as he gathered his belongings, still healing his leg with his wand.  Healing a severed muscle took time, even with a great wand like his.  His anger had finally begun to subside as the man headed back into the trees.  Honor got the best of him, and he hated himself for giving in to it."Wait, hunter!"  He watched as the man came striding back."Sir?"  He halted about half way back, afraid he would be verbally assaulted again."You are the world's worst hunter!"  Gus barked at him.  The man looked thoroughly annoyed, and Gus knew he should be happy to have survived their encounter.  After a long moment, each staring hatefully at the other, Gus began again with less anger in his voice.  "But you showed honor in your hunt."  He paused again.  "If you travel in that direction you will go another three days without food.""I will be in your debt, indeed, if you tell me which direction to travel."  The hunter approached, and knelt in front of Gus.Gus took a deep breath, angry at himself for giving up the information.  The hunter did not deserve it after the terrible way he had performed with his bow, and yet he felt pity for the young lad."A short walk to the northeast," he shook his head, not believing he would help the fool that had put him in such a foul mood, "there is a meadow, slightly larger than this one."  He got up, testing his weight on his leg and wincing.  "There are about four hundred prairie dogs living there."The man stood, looking in the direction he had indicated, eager to leave yet aware that Gus had not finished."Listen up, boy!"  Gus was angered by his inattention."But the light is almost gone!""Yes, and sight is only one of your issues.  That lousy aim of yours is another.  So listen to me!"  Gus paused and pointed at the ground for him to kneel again.  The hunter shot him an irritated look, but he did as he was told.  "Twenty minutes in that same direction you will find a raspberry bush.  Stop-there-and-eat!"  He gritted his teeth with very pronounced pauses between the words.  Then Gus walked close to the man and kicked him in the knee with his newly healed leg.  "Then rest!  You will hunt much better if you can handle the tension of the bow, you fool!""Yes, you are right, thank you, sir.  You honor me."  He bowed to show respect.  "May I have your name?"Gus looked at the man, weighing in his mind if he should tell him.  Deciding it would be more torturous if he did, he quickly replied, "Gus."The man's face went white, and he asked, "The..."Quickly Gus replied, interrupting the man again, "Yes, that is me," as he shook his head, "and no, I'm not going to be making you a wand today!  You have gotten quite enough out of me already, haven't you?"The man backed up, nodding his head in agreement.  "Yes, sir!""Now, be off with you."  The man began to walk north east.  "You might be able to curry some favor by ridding me of another mouth to feed, mighty hunter!"  He called, with a snort of bitterness as he resumed his walk south toward Lady Carrion and her wonderful food.He hoped that he would catch her making dinner for herself, although she would gladly make him dinner if he asked, it did not feel the same as showing up just as she pulled a minced meat pie out of the oven.  She was a talented cook, and he knew she loved to be appreciated for it, so they both benefited from the arrangement.  Besides, the minced meat pie was well worth the gas it gave him.  After the incident with the pathetic hunter, he could use a warm, home cooked meal.  It was shortly after eight, by his reckoning, and that was about the right time.  His evening might still have a high point left.Time passed quickly as he complained to himself while walking toward her home.  As he approached, he could smell fresh baked bread and beef stew, and could see the smoke coming from the brick chimney as he made his way to the cobblestone path that led to her door.  His mouth watered in anticipation of the meal.A bright flash in the western sky, in the direction of Stanton, stopped his progress.  That's odd,  he thought, he did not see any clouds, perhaps they are setting off some more fireworks.  As he approached the steps, he felt a strong gust of wind that set in the chill from an already cold day.  He could not wait to step inside and feel the warmth of the fire, and eat some of the delicious food he could smell.  At last, he came to the door and pulled on the rope she had dropped down for when he visited, and he heard a bell chime within the house."Come in, Gus."  Announced a delighted voice from inside.  Gus walked in through the small door she had hinged especially for him.  "You are just in time, I was pouring a bowl of stew.  Would you like some?"  She asked knowingly, as she ladled soup into a second bowl.  Her light blue dress and white apron swirled around her ankles as she gathered dishes and bread to accompany the stew.  Her long brown hair was tied back in a tail to keep it out of her way while cooking.Not wanting to give his intentions away, and acting his role in their mutual arrangement, Gus spoke with an affectionate flare."Why, Miss Carrion, I was just in this area and wanted to see if I might borrow your sink to wash my sticks before I brought them home."  He swept one paw out before him and bent his small body in an exaggerated bow as she turned toward him.  "However, I would be a fool to turn down such a delightful smelling meal from a beautiful lady such as yourself!""Oh, Gus, you are such a flatterer."  She said with a genuine smile, as she moved to make sure her spatula wand could be seen in her belt ."My days of being a Miss are long since over, as you well know," shaking her finger playfully at him, "but I am delighted to have your company, as always."  She turned back to cut bread for them both.  Gus set his satchel of sticks on the ground in front of her sink and climbed up to the table while she finished preparing their meal.He heard a commotion outside, and stood erect on his hind legs to allow him to see past Lady Carrion out the window.  There were several men running through the meadow.  One man stopped, catching his breath, and spoke to her nearest neighbor out for an evening stroll.  His arms waving wildly, and pointing in the direction of Stanton, he appeared to be in a panic.  Lady Carrion cast a confused look at Gus as they watched a second man run up to her house, his breathing labored from the distance he had covered, and knock frantically at the door."Come in."  She said timidly, not knowing what to expect.  Gus remained standing to better see him as he entered.The man opened the door only enough to stick his head in, and reported, "Something occurred at the palace during the ratification ceremony.  The palace collapsed in on itself.  We are asking all able to lend aid to report immediately.  The situation is dire."  Then, just as quickly as he had arrived, he fled, running toward the tree line to continue spreading the news.  The door slammed shut where his head had been.  Lady Carrion looked baffled, but Gus patted her hand and then jumped down to the floor."Do you still have the wands I left here for safe keeping?"  Gus asked, thinking quickly."Yes, of course.""Give me a lift to the sink.  I'll rinse these sticks while you grab the wands and your bag."  She lifted him gently, and went to find the wands he spoke of.  When she returned, he had a pile of clean sticks sitting on the edge of the counter.  "Put the wands in at the bottom, and make sure they are covered; I don't want to mix these up."  She did as he said and held her bag at the edge of the counter so he could push in the sticks and jump in himself.  "You will pardon me for hitching a ride?  My left leg isn't what it used to be and I would just slow you down."  He kept speaking as she grabbed her cloak and the bag and headed out the door.  "I'll have these made into wands by the time we arrive in Stanton.""Why so many?""Because today, I am giving them away."

Final Cover!

This is our cover for the E-book. I told you a while ago that we were looking for an artist, and I think that is exactly what we found! Feel free to leave a comment and tell us what you think.
We still have some work to do to finish the Novel, but we are working almost every day. Things are moving along quite nice, and we are still comfortable with a fall release. Although, we are not yet ready to give an exact date. This is, afterall, our first experience in writing, and we want to make sure it is as good as you can get from anywhere else.
With that in mind, we are going to go back to writing. We are happy with this amazing work that Rebecca Treadway @RT design has done for us. Please follow any of the links to her site if you are looking for work. Or you can visit http://otherworldartist.blogspot.com/. She has extremely reasonable prices, and gives you more than what you pay for!

Jack and Ashley

Osric's Wand: Chapter 1

A large explosion ignited the sky in a vibrant display of color.  Osric looked up and smiled as he walked into the market district.  A crowd of upturned faces surrounded him, all with expressions of awe and excitement at the sight.  Three giants were hurling boulders a hundred strides into the air, while an enchantress waved her wand to trigger the eruption of the rock into light and ash.  Osric took a few more steps toward the square and felt a tug from under his boot, accompanied by a loud squeal."Hey, watch where you are stepping!  Damn humans!"Osric looked down in embarrassment and lifted his foot off of the tail of an angry squirrel.  It took a swig from a thimble of mead and staggered away, obviously intoxicated."My apologies, with all that is going on, I allowed myself to be distracted for a moment."  He would have to pay more attention to where he was walking through the remnants of the merriment.The morning parade had left remains of jubilation on the ground.  Food vendors wheeled their carts wherever a crowd could still be found.  The entertainment and creativity displayed at such an unprecedented occasion were spectacular.  The duels and displays of unique magical gifts were awe inspiring.  The noise could be heard for miles, and crowds here and there were amused by the activities still taking place.There were wizards and witches trying to make a name for themselves with their most impressive feats of magic, giants arm wrestling, and kids playing carnival games.  A crowd of children surrounded the most popular game which involved levitating a shaking bucket full of water and trying to fill up a moving bottle.Near the end of the market district on the way to the palace, Osric slowed to watch as a lion demonstrated his ability of fire telling.  His deep voice rumbled as it captured the imagination of the children watching his story come alive in the flames of the nearby fire.  He was walking around the fire pit near the middle of the square, placing his massive paws carefully to avoid the toes of the children that eagerly awaited his words.  The inflections of his voice guided the figures and images created by the flames, and shadows played on the buildings and shops surrounding the show.  The lion was telling a traditional story of how men and lions learned to respect each other from witnessing the hunt that each performed.Osric had been captivated by fire tellings since he was a child, and it was one of his favorite stories.  He had loved watching it each year at the start of hunting season.  As young boys, he and Kenneth had been taught by the traditional fire tellings to always behave honorably in a hunt and to respect the last wishes of their prey.  They had loved to sit for hours watching the figures of flame act out the narration in the fire.  Then they would sneak away with their fathers' spare bows, and practice until their mothers called them in for bed.  His childhood had been fun and carefree, although brief.The scene brought back memories of his parents, who had both been killed when he was fifteen by a lion hunting to feed his family.  They had been traveling to Lothaine, the small town just a day's walk from Stanton where Osric's parents had been raised.  Once a year they had traveled back to the Lothaine Temple to give thanks to Archana for their blessings, and confer an offering of gold to the Temple Attendants.That year, they had left Osric behind in Stanton, and prey had been scarce on the grasslands.  Osric had been in the training arena, sparring with Kenneth at DuJok; a form of unarmed combat that all Vigiles had to be proficient in, when the lion had come to thank him for his sacrifice to feed his family.  He had brought Osric his father's short sword and returned the gold that they had planned to leave in tribute at the temple.  It had been a considerate gesture, maybe, but a devastating moment for a young Vigile recruit.  Osric had acknowledged the lion's gratitude stoically, while inside he wailed with the agony of being left alone to face the world.  His parents would never see him achieve his goal of becoming a Vigile, or be there to guide him when he had children of his own.  Osric was glad he had been training in DuJok, for if he had been armed he may have given into the temptation to avenge his parents, rather than afford the lion the respect of a grateful hunter.Osric had mourned his parents in private, then poured his grief and frustration into his training.  He had quickly become the best swordsman in his class of recruits; and with his best friend Kenneth training with him, he soon had his sense of humor back, along with a sense of purpose.  Kenneth's skills with bow and arrow always surpassed Osric's, and they made a formidable pair.  Later that year, they had both joined the force of Stanton's Vigiles.Osric had matured under the guidance of his Vigile superiors in the absence of his parents.  Mid-way through his twenties and half a head taller than most people in his town, Osric was the Contege; the leader of the Vigiles.  He swept his sandy hair back from his jade green eyes and paused to watch his favorite part of the tale dance through the flames.  Resuming his patrol through the square, he stretched his arms behind his back.  His lean muscular build from years of DuJok and swordsmanship, paired with a personable smile, made him stand out in the crowd.  The eyes of every available young woman followed him as he crossed the square to the outpost, and he nodded his head to the lion as he walked by.His promotion to Contege had come abruptly.  Contege Thamas had gone missing just after Stanton's Ryhain, Domnall, announced the Ratification Ceremony would be held in their palace.  Osric was contacted by the Hain of Domnall's staff, and informed that he was being promoted to Contege for his outstanding performance and loyalty to the Vigiles.  As Ryhain, Domnall was the highest authority; it was an honor to be called into his company and accept the position directly from him.He did, at times, feel as though the position was a bit much for a young man to handle, but his concern was quickly dismissed by his superiors.  They assured him that he would grow into the job.  Still, he sometimes wondered why they had chosen him to lead an elite team of security officers.Osric had been serving with the Vigiles, in one form or another, for ten years.  Although he felt confident in the performance of his job, the leadership was not something he was accustomed to.  The Vigiles were professionals, and they carried out their duties relentlessly.  Commanding men more than ten years his senior was not an agreeable feeling, and Osric would rather be taking the orders than giving them.  His skill in sword play and hunting had contributed, yet if promotions depended on skill alone, they would have chosen his friend Kenneth.  There was, of course, his innate magical ability to consider.  It had certainly served him well as a Vigile.His magical gift was of great use as a security officer, and he was superb in its execution.  Osric was a Portentist.  He had the ability to know when something was about to happen; something momentous, or dangerous.  He could even feel the threatening intentions of others.  A Portentist was a rarity and most often they were found in security of some sort.Several murderers had been caught due to his diligence and an attempted assassination of the Chancellor of the Wizardly Union had been foiled by him, just months before.  That, more than anything else, had led to his new position.  He was proud of his advancement, even if he couldn't quite shake the suspicion that his superiors weren't telling him everything.The night was cold, but that was to be expected in early fall.  He wondered if he would wake up to snow the next morning.  Osric was looking forward to warming up after his rounds with a hot mug of rulha.  His broad shoulders fit well in his new, dark brown tunic.  The ornate letter V stitched on the upper right breast indicated his rank, and paired with his standard issue tan breeches, he cut an impressive figure.  His heavy, leather boots crunched on gravel as he skirted the crowd, preferring to scan the shadows with both his gift and his highly trained eyes.  Most criminals could easily blend into a crowd, but they tended to slink along the perimeter where there were multiple escape routes and less people to bring attention to them.  That kept them isolated and made it easier to pin-point them as the source of a potential threat.Passing by the cart of a young Wand-Maker, he ran his finger along the hilt of his short sword.  He had gotten into the habit of making sure his stick wand was still securely bound to the hilt.  It was an Eni wand; a gift from the Chancellor for saving his life.  He had been meaning to buy a leather pouch to carry it in, but since the promotion, he had been tied up with all of the preparations and had neglected to buy one.  So, he bound it to the hilt of his short sword by winding leather cord around them both.  Unfortunately, it had a habit of coming unbound.  He made a mental note to seek out a leather vendor after the signing; the new wand was too expensive to risk losing.  His wand securely in place, Osric felt the pride of the day coursing through him.  He walked into the last security outpost on his way to the palace and warmed his hands at the fire by the door."Report!" He demanded with a stern look.  Osric watched as the two Vigiles, dressed in light tan tunics with a small brown V on the breast, jerked around with wide eyes.  They had been watching the lion's fire telling out a back window, across the small room from the door."Archana's bones!"  Gordyn's voice rumbled from his barrel chest as he swore at Osric.  He had been standing guard since before his new Contege could draw a bowstring, but Osric knew he meant no disrespect.  Gordyn had never been one to hold Osric's age or inexperience against him.  "You shouldn't sneak up on new recruits, sir, they may wet themselves."By the nervous look on the other Vigile's face, Osric was afraid that may have been more truth than jest.  He allowed a smile to return to his face and let out a warm laugh.  Slapping the young man on the back, Osric felt a pang of pity for the harassment the recruit likely suffered from Gordyn."Relax gentlemen; it's been a long day.  It won't hurt to enjoy the last few hours."  He kept his hand on the young man's shoulder.  "What is your name?""Dru, sir, from Dangsten."Osric hadn't heard of the town, but he imagined it must be small.  He got the impression that Dru wasn't used to the city yet."Well, Dru from Dangsten, if Gordyn gives you too hard of a time, you just let me know and I will deal with him.  It wouldn't be the first time.  He may have helped train me in DuJok, but it's been years since he could beat me."  Gordyn's only retort was a loud grunt and an exaggerated roll of his eyes."Yes, sir," Dru replied, grinning shyly.As Osric crossed the room to warm his hands near the hearth, he heard Gordyn grumbling under his breath to Dru."Don't believe that dribble, I let 'im win to build his confidence.  I could pin 'im with one hand behind me back.  Taught 'im everything he knows, and look where it got 'im.  He should be thanking me for that pretty new tunic."  Dru laughed, and they went back to watching the celebrations out the window, both with one eye on the door.  They wouldn't be caught off guard again.Running the security for the peace ratification was a great endeavor.  Osric was proud of his men; they had done a superb job.  Thankfully, there had been only minor issues.  One irate woman had caused a scene when she caught her large, hairy husband looking at another witch.  It took five Vigiles to get her off of him.  The witch's wand was confiscated until the next morning, when she could pick it up after paying her fine.There was a theft of herbs at one of the shops, as well as a stolen wand at another, but both crimes had been resolved quickly.  The culprit had been discovered when an odd limp was witnessed by an observant Vigile.  It turned out to be a man with an umbrella wand stuffed down his pants.  In a strange turn, he had stolen the herbs as well.  Massive puss filled boils covered half of his body as the result of an anti-theft charm at the herb shop.  He had then stolen the wand from the esteemed Wand-Maker Eni, because his own wand would not channel magic well enough to heal himself.  Yet, why had he chosen an umbrella wand?  Osric thought he would have been better suited stealing a quill, spatula, or knife wand; he may have gotten away with the theft if he had.  Osric could understand the man's desire to have an Eni wand.  He had owned a wand from an unknown maker; no wonder he could not heal himself.  It looked as if it were a child's attempt at a wand; just a stick by any true way of measurement.  No finish, no style, and no autograph.Most of the best Wand-Makers liked to leave their autographs or initials on their product so people knew who made them.  Well, except for Gus, of course.  Though Gus didn't need to sign his wands, one could tell a true Gus by the bolt symbol.  A few peddlers here and there claimed to sell them, but the bolt never looked quite right.  Everyone knew that a true Gus wand could only be purchased from Gus himself.  He could afford to be that picky, as he was the world's best Wand-Maker, and his wands were quite valuable.Osric had spent enough time by the fire.  His hands were warm and he needed to be to the throne room before the signing took place.  All was well at the outpost, so he would leave the men to enjoy the story.Gasps of excitement and awe came from the crowd, which Osric guessed was due to a display in the fire.  He pulled his leather gloves on tighter, hoping to keep the warmth in longer on the last stretch up to the palace.He approached the cart of a portly man he knew well; James had red cheeks and big brown eyes with more eyebrow than mustache.  He waved and smiled at Osric, drawing attention to a disproportionately small chin for such a large man.  He had an odd looking cart that he had made himself years before.  It didn't look terribly sturdy, but James liked to brag about how he had reinforced the corners and walls with metal bars.  That had allowed him to make a larger cart, and have it be much lighter than that of his competitors.  The sign, however, simply said "MEAT".  When Osric had asked about the sign several years back, James told him he had made the sign as a child with the help of his father.  It was out of sentiment that he had never replaced it.Frequenters of his cart knew that James sold a whole lot more than meat.  His four course meals were  known to be the best in the region.  James was, in fact, also a trustworthy source of intelligence for Osric.  He had provided him with a great deal of information on the assassination attempt that led to his promotion to Vigile Contege.  Nobody is afraid to talk to a man behind a cart."I'm not used to seeing you so far from the dragon platform, James, but a scent that enticing can only come from one cart.  How are you my friend?""Thriving, sir!  I haven't seen a crowd this merry, or this hungry, in years.  It was well worth rolling this beauty to the market.  Have you time for a meal?"  James motioned to a large slab of meat and a pot of vegetables.  Osric's stomach grumbled at the scent of succulent tubers, sweet young corn and earthy green beans mingling together in the pot, with the subtle aroma of thyme and rosemary, and just a hint of lemon."To my despair, not now.  It's about time for the signing, so I gotta head up to the palace."  Osric smiled back and leaned in to appear to examine the food, and he whispered, "Have you heard anything of note?"   In a city the size of Stanton there was always a criminal population.  Most of them were rather boastful of their intentions unless there was a Vigile nearby."Not a peep, good sir, are you sure you are not hungry?"  James was a great salesman and had worn down many customers with tenacity alone, as if the food was not good enough already.  "As you can see, I have one of the best cuts of meat I have had in some time, as well as greens.  I'll even throw in a honey cake.  For you, free of charge; for the cake that is.""I never said I wasn't hungry."  Osric shook his head while speaking.  "To be truthful, I am famished.  However, I don't have time, that is the issue.  Would you mind coming up by the palace in a bit?  I am sure there are more than enough customers up there for you, and when I am done with my rounds, I will be one as well.""Thank you, Osric, you are a good man.  I will be there.  You can count on me."  James put a thick hand over his heart in a dramatic display, and smiled his most thankful smile.  After all, no carts had been allowed up by the palace all day; just another layer of security added for the occasion.Osric said his farewell and began to walk to the palace, his stomach objecting to leaving behind such impressive fare."Good sir!"  James shouted after Osric.  When he turned around, James tossed him a piece of dried meat; a thank you for the business he knew awaited him at the top of the hill.  None of the food would go to waste that night."Thank Archana, and thank you."  Osric said as he walked away and took a bite."And thank you, my friend!"  Said James from behind the meat cart.Osric was starting to feel as though he should be at the palace.  Something was not quite right, but the feeling was not urgent, so he thought it must be nerves.  It was, after all, a very important day.  Ambassadors from every tribe, tongue, and species in the world were attending.  The Ratification Ceremony had been almost a thousand years in the making, and he was in charge of the safety for everyone in attendance.  Osric was taking the responsibility seriously.He had personally met with each of the representatives gathering for the signing and had sensed no danger.  If any one of the ambassadors had any desire to bring an end to the treaty signing, he would have known.Osric took a bite of the meat James had thrown him, and savored the texture and taste as he walked.  It had a rich, smokey flavor, and he looked forward to seeing the man again later for a real meal.  The rough gravel path would soon turn to gray stone and be easier on his tired feet.  Right then, he would welcome any comfort.The night was not yet over and Osric had a nagging feeling, something isn't right!  His pupils contracted, and his muscles tensed as he slowed down and looked around.  He tried to focus with his gift to locate the source of the feeling, but it was vague, and he saw nothing out of the ordinary.  The feeling passed and he felt his muscles relax and his heart rate slow.  Maybe it had just been his nerves, as the time for the signing was fast approaching.  He would stay alert for anything unusual, but he hoped nothing would go wrong so close to the conclusion of the day.He passed an old witch, and overheard her teaching a group of children, "We are all granted the same measure of magic.  It is how well you use it, and your wand, that make you a better witch or wizard!"  She put much emphasis on the word 'wand', and continued to explain that each of their magical gifts were different, "The gift is what separates everyone, and you are born with your ability; a Wand-Maker is the only one who can make wands."  She went on describing different gifts as Osric trailed out of earshot.He had to dodge out of the way of a woman chasing her children, shouting, "If you don't get back here right now, I'm going to sick a paun on you!"  Osric laughed.  The boys must have really been misbehaving for her to say that.  To imply the threat of a supernatural beast was the way of most mothers, and even Osric's mother had attempted to scare him into good behavior on occasion.The paun were something of a myth; nobody had ever even proven their existence.  They killed quickly, regardless of the size of the group, and never left survivors; or so the story went.  The trouble was, nobody had ever actually seen one.  So anytime someone came across a gruesome scene of unexplained death, they blamed the paun.The truth of the matter was that not every creature lived by the Hunter's code.  It was popular, and most societies upheld the practice, but there were the occasional offshoots that killed more than they needed and left the remains to rot in the sun.  They killed without honor, and refused to thank families for their sacrifice.  It seemed unnatural, but it happened.Shortly afterward, he passed by a heated scholarly debate on why unicorns could not, or would not, speak.  Two elderly gentlemen had strong feelings on the subject; it was a common topic at any celebration.  Only one fact was known and agreed upon by all; unicorns could not be killed.He took a short detour around a scuffle over a game of lucky dice.  One man felt that the other had used his wand to influence the roll.  His Vigiles had that in hand quickly, however, impressing Osric with their prompt response.At last, he could see the door to the palace.  Osric's best friend Kenneth stood to the left side of the entrance.  His Profice, Toby, second in command to the Contege, stood on the right.  They saw him approaching and quickly ended their conversation, squaring their shoulders and gazing straight ahead.  Osric was looking forward to the warmth of the palace, and he had to school his expression to hide his eagerness as he walked the last few yards on gray stone worn smooth over the years by the passage of many feet."Toby, Kenneth, is it safe to assume that you haven't had any trouble up here?"Kenneth casually waved his hand in the air, and leaned back against the cool stone of the palace wall.  "A couple deliveries are all we have seen in the last three hours, Os.  Not even a dancing lady or a fire teller.  Could you move a meat cart up here at least?  We're withering away to nothing while you enjoy the festivities."  He indicated the meat in Osric's hand with a nod of his head, wiping imaginary drool from his chin.Kenneth was lean with dark features and brown eyes, and his corded muscles were a little too close to the surface of his skin.  He kept his long, black hair tied back, and he usually had enough weapons on him to arm a small army.  Between the sharp blades and his thickly veined, broad neck he could appear dangerous when he chose.  His fellow Vigiles would fear him if it were not for his disarming smile and quick sense of humor.Whoops and gasps could be heard in the distance where the crowds were gathered.  Osric looked at Kenneth with feigned sympathy and took a big bite out of the meat in his hand."It's true, it's been all dancing girls and feasting for me today.  I'm sorry you missed it."  Then with a wink, "Toby, how do you put up with this guy?"Toby was several inches shorter than the other two men, but his intimidating presence made up for what he lacked in stature.  His smooth shaved head was oiled to a high sheen, in stark contrast to the thick mustache and beard that shadowed his jaw.  A thin scar crossed his cheekbone just below his right eye and two thirds of his first finger was missing from his left hand.  He liked to tell new recruits an elaborate tale of how he lost his finger, and nearly his eye, hunting drogmas in the swamps east of Catrain, but an Empath friend of Osric's had discovered it had really been a drunken brawl with an angry dwarf.  An empty bottle of spirits is no defense against a sharp axe.  Around his neck was a twist of colored thread his son had made for him, and a gold unity chain adorned his left wrist.  Toby's skin may have been hard as nails, but he had a soft spot for his family.Toby shot Kenneth a sarcastic grin.  "After years of listening to Old Thamas grumble about his aching bones and tired feet, Kenneth's immaturity is a refreshing reminder of his youth, sir."  Toby had been Contege Thamas' Profice for seven years prior to his disappearance.  After his promotion, Osric was afraid that Toby would resent him for passing him up in the chain of command.  Toby was more than qualified for the position, and would have been the obvious choice for Contege.  Osric's first day in his new post, Toby had stood across from him, placed his palms flat on the surface of the desk, and looked intently at his new Contege.  Osric had tried to appear less nervous than he had felt, but after a few moments of regard, Toby had smiled and said, "I am sure you are wondering why I am not sitting in that chair.  They offered me the position, and I declined.  I would much rather leave the joy of dealing with our superiors, and the responsibility for any failure, on your young and capable shoulders.  I would be happy to advise you, but let there be no doubt, I do not envy you this promotion."  Osric wasn't sure if he had meant it at first, but Toby had been an able and willing source of advice on everything from new recruit training to social etiquette."Well gentlemen, it won't be much longer and you will be able to go chase off the last of the fire tellers and head home for the night."  Osric said, with a slap on Toby's shoulder, and he couldn't help adding, "This is the end of my rounds and my feet are killing me!"  Then he walked through the large oak doors, standing open to let the crisp evening air inside.  "Hey Kenneth,"  he turned back and motioned up the path, "James will be here soon.  I made arrangements for after the signing for myself.""I knew I could count on you, sir." Kenneth laughed."How many times do I have to tell you; don't call me sir.""Sorry, sir!"  Kenneth said with feigned fear in his voice.  The men laughed as Osric walked into the entrance hall, shaking his head.The sound of Osric's footsteps echoed back to him from the arched ceiling high overhead.  In the short time it took him to cross the room, he took in each detail around him.  Smooth white granite walls climbed thirty paces into the air to meet the unique stone ceiling.  Pale colored stone was intricately layered to create an elaborate scene of wooded hills, yet the stone was so delicate that the sun illumined the scene, adding depth and shadows to the detailed carvings, and its path could be traced across the ceiling to mark the time of day.  At mid'day, sunlight streamed in through a great domed skylight, casting a halo of golden light upon the throne on the raised dais in the next room.Behind him, to either side of the wide oak doors, hung elaborate tapestries.  Each told its own story with richly dyed threads.  One had been woven by the women of Stanton to depict The First Hunt; Braya with his head bowed and a drogma at his feet, offering its heart to his blade.  The other was woven by elven hands and had the haunting illusion of movement in its pastel depiction of Er'amar entering the Grove of Unicorns.Directly in front of him, a wide staircase led up to a balcony that spanned the width of the room and overlooked the adjacent throne room.  The brown marble stairs were wide enough at the top that four men could walk abreast, and they widened gracefully to three times that at their base.  Oak hand rails curved majestically alongside the steps, anchored by twisted columns of white marble.  The wall behind the stairway, separating the entrance from the throne room, was punctuated by four arching doorways; two on either side of the staircase.  A massive crystal chandelier was suspended in midair above the stairs, holding hundreds of lit candles, and torches lined the walls, casting a golden hue to the air itself.  Servants went about their business, whisking platters full of food between the throne room and the kitchens.He ascended the steps to get a good look at the throne room and oversee the Vigiles from the balcony.  He noticed a discreet couple standing in the shadows on the far side of the balcony, exchanging whispered endearments over goblets of mulled wine.  A young boy sat on the bench before an elegant grand piano.  It took a second glance for Osric to realize that the boy was not playing the piano, but rather watching entranced as the keys danced before his eyes of their own accord.As Osric approached the railing to view the proceedings, he again felt an alarm within him.  His muscles tensed, his eyes focused, his hearing sharpened, and it was as though his skin was on fire.  Something was not right, and the Portentist gift ignited within him.  All the joy of the few moments with friends at the door disappeared.  As the banquet went on, preceding the greatest peace treaty signing the world had ever seen, Osric gave hand signals to the Vigiles to begin subtly searching the room.  He would not be a good custodian of this new post if he did not act when he felt his gift surge within.  Having them search in a non-invasive manner would hardly be noticed by the high-society guests.He watched the ambassadors' tables as they went about eating and drinking.  The magical harp in the corner behind the head table was producing a soft, soothing tune, but it grated on Osric's nerves.  He needed all of his senses focused on finding the source of the warning that kept building within him.  His men were busy searching now, and he could not get their attention.  He knew there was a threat, and he must stop it.  Something dangerous would happen any moment.Time seemed to stop in that moment as he took in the scene.  The faces of every ambassador showed joy; representatives of the irua and weasels; who always seemed to side with each other, the councilors for the elves, lions, Wizardly Union, dwarves, and the groundhogs; who had stayed united as long as stories had been told.  Down the line, every face, every voice filtered through his gift; no danger was present.  He needed to get down into the room and search himself.  His Vigiles did not have his gift.  They could look right past something, and it had to be small.  He made the choice; there seemed so little time. His Portentist gift prodded him along with an urgency he had never experienced.  His heart raced as he approached the stairs at a run and jumped.  His legs slid over the highly polished oak railing.  Lightning fast, his body propelled down the length of the rail as he tore off his right glove.  He slid along on his right hip until he was near enough to the ground for his legs to have a chance to carry him on after the drop.  He gripped the railing hard with his right hand, his momentum swinging his body around to face the doors to the throne room.  His feet hit the ground smoothly and quickly propelled him through the opening.  He could hear a gasp from Kenneth back at the entrance, and his gift enticed him in that direction, as well.  Two pulls?  That's a first.  Osric never hesitated, he knew he needed to continue toward the threat.  The pull from behind him was peaceful, but the draw from the throne room was danger, and it was his job to deal with it.  The strength of his gift was just as great in either direction, and his head felt like it was splitting in two.The crowd was loud as he entered the room, and many people looked up in response to the way he ran in.  He allowed his gift to guide him toward the danger, and it led him straight toward the head table.  The pull from behind him was getting closer, and he thought he heard hoof beats coming up the path.  Panic rose up inside of him as he rushed deeper into the room.  There were so many people there, all joyously awaiting the signing of the treaty.  He felt the danger rising, but could not locate the source.  The faces of the seated crowd to each side of him lit up with amusement and they began to gasp and point.  It all seemed to move so slowly, as he finally spotted the danger.  A soft glow was coming from a goblet full of pearls on the head table.  The crowd erupted in applause."The pearls!"  Osric yelled as he slid to a stop and reached for his wand.  The exclamations of awe continued from the crowd.  He had no time to see why.  His Portentist gift told him it was important, yet non-threatening; it would have to wait until he dealt with the threat.  He planned to cast the pearl out of the windowed dome, high above their heads.  As his hand felt for his wand, despair filled his heart.  His wand was gone!  He looked down at his side to see if it had fallen.  He heard the sound of hoofs seeking purchase on the slick marble, and saw the tip of a ringed horn just miss his shoulder.  He was propelled forward a few feet as something collided with his right hip.  Light filled the room from the direction of the pearls, and a concussion wave ripped through the palace.  Osric felt the cold marble floor, smooth against his cheek, as the blast forced him down.  This can't be the end, Osric thought, as he felt consciousness fading.  Panic, frustration, pain and fear overwhelmed him as everything went black.

On the eve of chapter one's release

I was hoping that by this time I would be able to share that I am contracting someone to make a cover for the book…

It seems impossible to get someone who makes covers to write you back. I have written 15 queries to different E-Book cover designers, trying to get one made. For two weeks now, there has been absolutely no response from even one of them. With that in mind, if you have an E-coverer designer that will contact me, please send them my way. I have done my research, I know what I will spend, send only legitimate designers, no spammers looking to make more money than is typical.

I was trying to have a cover ready when we released chapter one. This is turning out to be tougher than I thought. The one reply I received was asking 1500 bucks, and this is more than three times what is normal for an E-book cover; and mine is a simple design for a fantasy cover!

Just wanted to vocalize a frustration I am having right now. Sorry, I used all of you to vent. It has been a long two weeks of sending out queries…

Logline

We put some thought into a logline (hooklin) for our novel, and this is what we came up with. Let us know what you think!

When a historic peace treaty signing is interrupted by the threat of war, the unproven leader of an elite security force must set out to save his homeland from an unknown adversary, and discover how magic and his fate will evolve together.