Mindee Arnett's Blog, page 14

How Getting a Book Deal Doesn't Change Everything

Don't get me wrong, finding an agent and then selling a book does change your life. For sure. How much? I can't really say. It's still too early on my path to publication (waiting on my edit letter, in case you were wondering) for me to know.
But what I can say, for me at least, is that it hasn't done diddly about decreasing anxiety, fear of failure, and overall writerly neurosis. If anything, it made them worse. Yep, that's right. This might be because the stakes are higher now than ever before, but I'm not entirely sure.
To give you an example, I recently completed the second draft of a YA sci-fi novel (not under contract) and sent it to one of my critique partners. Lori read it and sent me her comments just like she did with The Nightmare Affair. Based on some tweets, I had a pretty good idea that she liked the story, but even still I had to force myself to open the document and face her comments.
Seriously. I really did! Even though I knew she liked it, and I knew that what she had to say would be completely invaluable for my next revision, this terrible, paralyzing dread came over me. One so strong, it took me more than 24 hours to work up the nerve to read through it.
WTF, right?
Of course, I'm now completely over it and am delighted by all the great feedback, but that initial dread was so darn hard it was literally painful. Actually, the entire process of writing the book has been hard. I threatened to quit multiple times, and I barely even liked the story when I finished the first draft. I was afraid of it, afraid of the genre, afraid of it being a complete dud, of discovering the book deal was just a fluke and I'm nothing but a hack, and so on.
Fortunately, I have people like Lori and my sister who make facing that fear worth it by being both supportive and helpful. My sister and brother-in-law read the very first draft of the YA sci-fi, and by following their revision suggestions, I ended up really loving my book by the end of it. After Lori's feedback, I'm a bit over the moon. (Side note, this of course doesn't mean the book will be successful in a publishing sense, but let's not stir the neurotic stew too much right now, okay?).
Moral of the story – find good people to give you the right kind of support. One that is honest, tough, and also encouraging. Oh and then be brave enough to read those comments, process them, and incorporate them. And most importantly of all, just keep writing.

The Hook Writing Game

First off, big welcome to my new followers *waves*. Glad you're here. Hope you stick around!
So a week or so ago, I shared my query letter with you guys, but as my agent's super-awesome, could-not-be–better assistant, Sarah Goldberg pointed out, the query is only the beginning. The sample pages have to be pretty rock-on, too.
This got me thinking about opening hooks. Like what makes them good? And how do you write one?
I have no idea what the answers are to these questions. The best I can offer you is an analysis of some of my favorite hooks as a reader and then tell you about the hook game, aka a writing exercise for honing your hooking skills (say THAT 3 times fast, why don't you?).
HOOK ANALYSIS
"Mr. and Mrs. Dursley, of number four, Privet Drive, were proud to say that they were perfectly normal, thank you very much." J.K. Rowling, Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone
This one has two things going for it for me as reader. (1) Voice. This is the voice of a storyteller, the kind that makes you want to lean back on your pillow, close your eyes, and get lost inside this world. (2) Surprise. The fact that the Dursleys are proud to be normal surprises me as reader.  I usually expect the opposite.
"The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed." Stephen King, The Gunslinger
This one is easy. It's got conflict, right from the beginning.  It also creates an immediate goal for the reader — I want the gunslinger to catch up. Right away, I'm rooting for the hero.
"They shoot the white girl first." Toni Morrison, Paradise
This one has conflict and surprise, but it also sets an immediate mood. It warns me this is going to be dark and difficult. It almost dares me to continue reading.
"There are some men who enter a woman's life and screw it up forever. Joseph Morelli did this to me—not forever, but periodically." Janet Evanovich, One for the Money
Yowzers. This one hooks me in three ways, voice, mood (funny in this case), and conflict.
THE HOOK GAME
So from this little analysis, I've identified five ways to a hook a reader, through  voice, surprise, conflict, goal, and mood. And I would argue that most successful stories use all of these techniques some way or another in the opening pages.  
Now, I'm not going to claim even for a minute that I'm an expert on writing hooks. I'm really not, but I can say that I've spent a lot of time practicing how to write hooks. And no matter where you're at in your writing career, practice will always help you improve.
So for practice, I recommend a little game that should be played with a writing partner (for the record, I didn't make up this game but learned it from another writing colleague who'd learned it from someone else, etc).
Here's how it works:
1.   For the first week, you and a friend decide on the number of hooks you will write as potential starts to stories over the next week. (When I played the game, my writing partner and I chose 10 lines).2.   At the end of the week, share the lines with one another.  3.   For the second week and all that follow, continue to write 10 brand new hooks, but also write 3 opening paragraphs, using any of the hooks written the previous week, no matter who wrote them.
Make sense? So every week after the first one, you'll come up with 10 new hooks and 3 new paragraphs, all of which, if you're lucky, might turn into genuine stories. And feel free to lower those numbers if it seems intimidating.
Now the game might sound silly, but it works. It's both fun and challenging at the same time. Your partner will show you things you've never thought of before and vice versa. You'll inspire and challenge each other.
You'll find yourself wanting to write an opening hook so good that your partner will be unable to resist writing an opening paragraph from it. And if you play it long enough, you'll begin trying new types of hooks, ones which employ a voice you've never used before or which are so strong, an entire novel might spring out from it.
Oh, and just in case you're wondering, my current favorite hook is this one from my fabulous critique partner Lori M. Lee's current WIP: "Death lived in a high-rise penthouse at the center of the South District."
Yowzers…you got me there, babe.

So what's your favorite hook? And if you're in a sharing mood, feel free to post some opening lines. I'd love to read them.
As always, good luck and happy writing!

Ban My Book? Why, Yes Please

That's right boys and girls and all you people in between and on the edges. It's Banned Books week, one of my favorite literary weeks of all time. It's a week when us creative, free-thinking types can peruse lists of banned books (like this one here) and go, really? Stuff that this still happens?
Yep, it surely does. And I'm here to say I dream about it happening to me, too. Why you ask? It's simple, as a reader —well, as a person really— nothing makes me want to do something more than when somebody tells me I can't. I'm rebellious by nature. It's a flaw, I know, but I can't help, at least not when it comes to intellectual freedom (Side note 1: I have no trouble whatsoever in obeying the laws as they exist today, i.e. no stealing, murdering, or any other such issues here). And I have a pretty good idea that a lot of readers, especially those interested in YA, feel the same way. So yeah, I would love to have a banned book, please oh please (side note 2: while having a banned book would make me feel rock star cool, I despite the attitude behind the idea of book banning and the people/organizations responsible for it).
With this in mind, I've thrown together a simple checklist of subjects/content which may help any writer eventually end up with a banned book. (Side note 3: A lot of these subjects are in The Nightmare Affair, too — yah!)
Here it goes, in no particular order:
WitchesDemonsMagicHomosexualityAny sexualityViolenceAnything Anti-establishment (i.e. government, church, military, school system, media, etc)Drug useSuicideDiversity of Belief SystemsEthnic DiversityOffensive Language
Well, that's all I can think of at the moment, but I'm sure there're lots more. What do you think? Have you read any good banned books lately? Oh, and aren't you happy we live in a society where this post and discussion is even possible? I know am. Let's keep it that way!
Happy Writing

Query Letter Example and Tips

So a couple of people have asked about the query letter for The Nightmare Affair, which helped me in my quest to sign with my agent of awesome, Suzie Townsend. (Note: I refuse to use the phrase "land an agent," because Suzie totally isn't a fish. Seriously, she's more of a rockstar. Maybe I should use the phrase "become a professional groupie"…but I digress).
Here it is folks, a copy of the email I sent to Suzie:
Dear Ms. Townsend:
16-year-old Dusty Everhart might make a regular habit of breaking into houses late at night, but she's no criminal. She is a Nightmare, a magical being who must feed on the dreams of others, and in doing so experience those dreams, too. But when her latest dreamer, Eli Booker, the hot guy from her old high school, turns out to be dreaming about a murder which shortly comes true, she goes from non-criminal to reluctant crime fighter.
Dusty learns that together she and Eli posses the rare ability to predict the future through dreams. They are soon enlisted by the magickind government to help identify the person killing students at Dusty's high school, Arkwell Academy, a secret school for magickind. Now Dusty and Eli must follow the clues both within Eli's dreams and out of them to stop the killer before more people turn up dead. And before the killer learns what they're up to and marks them as the next target.
Complete at 76,400 words, The Nightmare Affair is a YA contemporary fantasy, which I like to think of as Veronica Mars meets Hex Hall. Per your submission guidelines, I have included the first 10 pages below.
My short stories have appeared in various semi-pro magazines, including Happy, and I have received an honorable mention in The Year's Best Fantasy and Horror 2008. I have a Master of Arts in English Literature with an emphasis in Creative Writing. On a personal note, I follow both your blog and twitter account and thoroughly enjoy both. I think your First Page Shooter endeavor is invaluable.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Mindee ArnettAddressAddressPhoneEmail
I hope this letter is self-explanatory, but as always, feel free to ask me questions. Also, here's a list of some things I think considered important in my agent submission process which you might find useful too:
Know and understand the individual guidelines for EVERY agent you query.Unless those guidelines say otherwise, put the pitch paragraphs first in the query. Agents are short on time. Don't make them wade through the BS unless they specifically want to.Send yourself test emails to make sure the formatting comes through properly. Be sure to view them on your iPhone or other device as this is how a lot of agents view them.Add a personal note so long as it's honest and relevant.Follow the agents (twitter, blog, etc) you want to work with, and be sure to mention it. (Not long after Suzie had full manuscript of TNA, she started following me on Twitter, and WOW, was that a GREAT feeling.)Keep the pitch short and precise. Trust me, there's a whole lot more to The Nightmare Affair than what's suggested in this pitch. But I resisted the temptation to try and tell the whole story in two paragraphs. Just razzle-dazzle with as little as possible (i.e. the heart of the conflict and who it's happening to).Query in small increments. I sent out only 5 queries at 1 time. If everyone gets rejected, take another look at the query.
Good luck and don't give up!

Time is a Fickle Thing (or why writing can keep you sane)

Let's see, on the subject of time, I haven't updated this thing in like forever. Lots has been going on to keep me distracted, the most pressing being my compulsive need to finish the first draft of my latest WIP. Which I did. On Saturday. Wee-hee, throw the confetti and pop open the champagne, or in my case the strawberry margaritas I've been diggin' on so much lately.
That being said, I need to issue an apology to my wonderful critique partner Lori (if you're not reading her blog, you really ought to) for not thanking her sooner for giving me this very cool Liebster blog award. Fortunately, I know Lori will understand the lure of finishing a draft! (More info on the award below)


But my purpose in writing this blog is pretty much summed up in the title (see you didn't even have to read this far). Writing really can keep you sane, especially when you're waiting for something big. Which for me, of course, is waiting to start real revisions/edits on The Nightmare Affair. When you hear other writers say that everything takes a long time in publishing, they really mean it. Fortunately, writers have an excellent weapon in their arsenal to combat the long waits — and that's to keep on writing. And the best thing is that finishing a first draft never gets old.
Anyway, in accepting the Liebster award, which is intended to connect bloggers with less than 200 followers (totally me), I must: Mallory over at Lil Red's Hood

• Show my thanks to the blogger who gave me the award by linking back to them (thanks Lori!)
• Reveal my top 5 picks and let them know by leaving a comment on their blog.
• Post the award on my blog.
• Bask in the love from the most supportive people on the internet—other writers.
• And best of all – have fun and spread the karma.

I'm passing the award onto these fantabulous bloggers:Mallory Hayes over at Lil Red's Hood Kathy Bradey at Once Upon a Time in Writer LandTori Scott Katherine Hazen at Scribbles in InkAshley Aynes at The Work I Love
Coming soon on the blog, I plan on posting the query letter which helped me sign with my awesome, totally on-fire agent!

Book Rec — Anna Dressed in Blood by Kendare Blake

Read this!!!

Nuff said.
Just kidding. But seriously, this book is astoundingly good. It's got everything you could want in a horror tale: scariness, humor, action, love, you name it. Oh, and in case you're too much of a bum to click on the link to the description on Amazon (…kidding…). Here's the description:
Cas Lowood has inherited an unusual vocation: He kills the dead.

So did his father before him, until he was gruesomely murdered by a ghost he sought to kill. Now, armed with his father's mysterious and deadly athame, Cas travels the country with his kitchen-witch mother and their spirit-sniffing cat. Together they follow legends and local lore, trying to keep up with the murderous dead—keeping pesky things like the future and friends at bay.

When they arrive in a new town in search of a ghost the locals call Anna Dressed in Blood, Cas doesn't expect anything outside of the ordinary: track, hunt, kill. What he finds instead is a girl entangled in curses and rage, a ghost like he's never faced before. She still wears the dress she wore on the day of her brutal murder in 1958: once white, now stained red and dripping with blood. Since her death, Anna has killed any and every person who has dared to step into the deserted Victorian she used to call home.
But she, for whatever reason, spares Cas's life.

Cool right? Although, even the description doesn't do this one enough justice.  Sounds a bit like Supernatural, yes? Well, it definitely has the same kind of sassy feel, but bled through with Tim Burtonesque imagery that is as beautiful as it is startling (and awesomely gruesome in parts). I dare you to go here and read the first chapter and then NOT want to read the rest. Go on, give it a shot, but be warned, the book doesn't come out until the end of this month!

Really, my only complaint is that I wanted Anna Dressed in Blood to be about a zillion pages longer. And yet it was the perfect length with a perfect story arc and a homerun ending. Did I mention it was perfect?

So yeah, lucky me (and definitely lucky you, dear readers), the sequel to Anna is already in the edit stage. That's great news. Trust me, Kendare Blake's is a writer whose stories you'll want to get lost in (even if those stories might eat you alive). Or maybe because of.

Happy Reading

The Scorpio Races, a Horsewoman's Perspective

First of all, this is not a review of The Scorpio Races by Maggie Stiefvater. It's more of a love letter. Because I LOVED this book. The premise of this YA Fantasy is pretty simple: set in the contemporary world circa 1920s or thereabouts, there is an island called Thisby whose waters (and at certain times land) is inhabited by magical flesh-eating seahorses. And once a year some of the more courageous of Thisby's inhabitants, capture, train, and ride those horses in the Scorpio Races, a huge tourist-attracting event. The story, told in two alternating first person points-of-view, focuses on two of those riders who both have desperate and heartbreaking reasons to win the race.
Now, as a horse woman with years and years of experience both in the saddle and on the ground, I was a little concerned about the idea of flesh-eating monster horses — as in why would I want to read about that? I mean real life horses can sometimes be scary enough without razor-sharp teeth and a craving for meat and blood. Horses are big and often unpredictable. They have minds and personalities of their own. It hurts when they bite, kick, run you over. They can even kill you.
But then I started to hear good things about the story and decided to give it a try. I'm so very glad I did. Not only did the story blow me away with its beautiful setting, fierce/wonderful/fully-real characters, and a tension that builds like a slow scalding fire, but it also moved me on a deeply personal level, the level where my love of horses resides. When I finished it, I felt as if Maggie Stiefvater had reached inside me, captured my love of my horses, and wove into her story like magic. It was as if she'd written it just for me. It's the story version of my love for this guy and his love for me:
First as a baby…
And now today…
You don't have to be a horse lover to love this story, but being one makes the experience all the richer. Horses are more than pets. They're trusted friends and partners. When you climb on a horse, you must trust it to carry you and to take care for you. You ask it to submit and to give, even as you submit and give back. There's no feeling quite like it in the world — and The Scorpio Races embodies it.

P.S. Be sure to come back in the fall. I plan on holding a contest to give away the book (unfortunately, the ARC I read isn't mine, and I wouldn't be able to part with it even if it was, I love it that much)

And We Have a Deal — A Book Deal!!!

That's right folks. After a long time of wishing, hoping, dreaming, striving, I'm so happy to report that this announcement appeared in Publishers Marketplace today:
Yes, not one book but 3 books! To say my head is spinning with how fast everything has happened and how excited and honored and humbled I am would be the understatement of the year. There's a whole lot more I want to say and that probably should be said, but for now, I leave you with this:
 Yah baby!

Furry Friday — Just for Smiles

That's right folks. I don't have anything special or profound to write this week (I know, I know, like I ever do, right?). But nevertheless, it's been a good, wonderful, happy week, the kind where you just want to smile and look eager, like my furry friends below (and no, they're not all mine, at least not technically):


Have a great weekend. Happy reading and writing and everything else you might get up to!

HUGE Recommendation For Divergent by Veronica Roth

I think this summarizes my feelings about this book best: Veronica Roth has found a permanent fan in me. I plan on reading everything this girl writes that I can get my hands on. I loved her debut novel Divergent , which I just finished reading this morning. I won't give a review or even a summary here because it's not really my thing and because there are far better reviews/summaries available elsewhere.
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Divergent is a YA Dystopian in the same vein of Suzanne Collin's The Hunger Games , a series I very much enjoyed as well. But I have to say, I like this one better. It's not perfect, and I have lots of questions I hope will be answered in the next book, but whereas The Hunger Games is a blatantly political novel (which is pretty par for the course with Collins) Veronica's novel is more of a morality tale. And Veronica's message seems far more honest to me and far truer. By the end of Divergent I didn't feel as though I'd been manipulated into seeing the world from someone else's point of view. It didn't make me feel ashamed of who I am. Just the opposite. Now it may be that I feel so strongly about this novel because the morality of it is my morality, the things I believe in, but I can't tell you for certain. In the end, it doesn't matter.All I know is that Divergent is a good story with a strong, fascinating female protagonist. And it's the type of story that needs to be told more often, one about love and self-sacrifice and what it truly means to be brave. And I also know that its author, Veronica Roth, is truly brave.I need to say a huge thank you to my agent, Suzie Townsend, for recommending Divergent to me. Otherwise, I might have overlooked this fantastic story. And man of man, I can't wait for the next one!