Augusta Scattergood's Blog, page 7
July 16, 2018
DIFFERENT
It's Monday and what am I reading?
I've been re-reading a review copy of my friend Janet McLaughlin's new book. It's available for pre-order (see link below) now and will be published in August.
I think middle-grade readers will find this novel so very appealing.
What's inside may surprise you-- and them. I don't know of many books for kids this age about Tourette Syndrome.

This is such an important book. But it's also fun and complicated and beautifully written in Izzy's appealing and spot-on voice.
Books written from the heart can take a long time to percolate, get written and revised many times over!- and find a home. Janet was not about to give up on this book. I'm so happy that DIFFERENT is now ready for the world.
Here's a little of what she says in her very helpful Author's Note about what inspired her to write about Tourette Syndrome-- a family member she's calling Madison:
What was going on in Madison’s head when she couldn’t walk down the street without stopping and touching the ground every few minutes? When she couldn’t leave a room unless she flicked the light switch on and off at least three times. How did she feel when she lost control and went into a screaming rage? I could only guess.
And that’s what I wanted to contribute to the world with this book. I wanted to let the world know about this neurological condition on an intimate level— what it’s like to actually live with the condition.
This is the link to the publisher's website. You can order the book, read more about it, and see this great endorsement from a long-time educator:
“As an educator for more than thirty years, it is wonderful to find a text that promotes an understanding of differences. I have had several students with Tourette Syndrome... This book lends itself to class discussions about what it means to be ‘Different.'”
Lora Netherland
M.ED Special Education Teacher


(I love the It's Monday! What Are You Reading? meme, and I usually am reading a ton of middle-grade books. But now I'm on vacation in a very quiet place and I've also been reading a bunch of grownup books for a change. I'm particularly loving Anne Tyler's newest novel, hot off the press, CLOCK DANCE.)
Published on July 16, 2018 05:49
June 28, 2018
Arkansas Connections
Thank you to the fabulous organizers and to all the teachers who came to my sessions. As promised, a few links and book titles from my workshops at the Eastern Arkansas Literacy Conference. What a great day!
Have a fabulous summer, and enjoy lots and lots of books.
•http://revisionisthistory.com/episodes/24-free-brian-williams(Malcolm Gladwell) •https://www.npr.org/podcasts/510200/storycorps•(Great tool for sharing oral history interviews) ••https://thewritelife.com/writing-podcasts/–(Podcasts about writing) http://www.usads.ms11.net/bjm.html(My friend Bobby Joe Moon's essay) https://chineseheritagemuseum.org(Excellent source of photos and artifacts) Knowing and Not Knowinghttps://www.nais.org/magazine/independent-teacher/spring-2018/knowing-and-not-knowing-through-writing/
Books and authors mentioned:
Katherine Marsh (Nowhere Boy)
Kirby Larson (Hattie Big Sky, Hattie Ever After)
Linda Williams Jackson (A Sky Full of Stars)
Barbara O'Connor
Ruta Suptys
Jacqueline Woodson
Published on June 28, 2018 15:32
June 25, 2018
Another Big Book Week
I'm excited to be presenting at a gathering of teachers on the campus of Arkansas State University this week. I'll share MAKING FRIENDS WITH BILLY WONG and the story and history behind my book. Set in Arkansas, my novel shares a bit of immigration and civil rights history that's not widely known.
Whenever I talk to teachers I like to share books-- not just mine.
So I've been doing a LOT of reading this week!
First up, A SKY FULL OF STARS.
Linda Williams Jackson and I grew up in neighboring Mississippi Delta towns, and we've both incorporated memories into our middle-grade novels. They are very different memories. Set against a backdrop of the Emmett Till murder, her story takes place in the mid 1950s, and young Rose Lee is discovering a world outside her small, insulated life. I frequently share MIDNIGHT WITHOUT A MOON with young readers when I talk about growing up in Mississippi during the civil rights movement, and now I have this. The characters are the same, but this is an even more powerful story, beautifully told.
(side note: I'll be moderating a panel at the MISSISSIPPI BOOK FESTIVAL in August and Linda is one of the featured panelists. Can't wait to hear more about this story.)
I can't remember who told me to read SATURDAYS WITH HITCHCOCK. I've never read a book by Ellen Wittlinger, but I now look forward to reading more. This middle-grade novel kind of sneaked up on me. It seemed to be a sweet story of the love between a girl and her grandmother, and then it turned into so much more. Wittlinger masterfully handles several sensitive issues (dementia, emerging sexuality, friendship, adult siblings) in ways that are age-appropriate and caring.
My current (can't-put-it-down but need to do a few other things!) read is an Advanced Readers Copy of a book coming in August. Two friends highly recommended NOWHERE BOY , or I might have missed it. I'll share this with the Arkansas teachers because of the connection to the author's inspiration. (Be sure to click on that link and go to Katherine Marsh's excellent website, with such good information.)
This middle-grade novel (but truly, it spans a lot of age groups) is set in Brussels and involves a young Syrian immigrant. So appropriate to our times.
Put this on your list. Don't miss it!
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That's my Monday in books.
Oh! Almost forgot- I'm re-reading parts of MAKING FRIENDS WITH BILLY WONG to pick out passages to read with my new friends in Arkansas.
I know so many of you- and your kids- are finally enjoying the wonderful leisure of summer reading. What's on your list?
Whenever I talk to teachers I like to share books-- not just mine.
So I've been doing a LOT of reading this week!
First up, A SKY FULL OF STARS.

(side note: I'll be moderating a panel at the MISSISSIPPI BOOK FESTIVAL in August and Linda is one of the featured panelists. Can't wait to hear more about this story.)

I can't remember who told me to read SATURDAYS WITH HITCHCOCK. I've never read a book by Ellen Wittlinger, but I now look forward to reading more. This middle-grade novel kind of sneaked up on me. It seemed to be a sweet story of the love between a girl and her grandmother, and then it turned into so much more. Wittlinger masterfully handles several sensitive issues (dementia, emerging sexuality, friendship, adult siblings) in ways that are age-appropriate and caring.
My current (can't-put-it-down but need to do a few other things!) read is an Advanced Readers Copy of a book coming in August. Two friends highly recommended NOWHERE BOY , or I might have missed it. I'll share this with the Arkansas teachers because of the connection to the author's inspiration. (Be sure to click on that link and go to Katherine Marsh's excellent website, with such good information.)
This middle-grade novel (but truly, it spans a lot of age groups) is set in Brussels and involves a young Syrian immigrant. So appropriate to our times.
Put this on your list. Don't miss it!
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That's my Monday in books.
Oh! Almost forgot- I'm re-reading parts of MAKING FRIENDS WITH BILLY WONG to pick out passages to read with my new friends in Arkansas.

I know so many of you- and your kids- are finally enjoying the wonderful leisure of summer reading. What's on your list?

Published on June 25, 2018 05:12
June 11, 2018
So many books...
Recently, I was on a reading frenzy. And there were so many great middle-grade novels that needed reading!
Some were reviewed for a Christian Science Monitor spring round-up.
HERE'S THE LINK.
(Click if you'd like to know more!)
And here are the books. Loved them all. Can't wait to catch sight of young readers under a tree, by the pool, on a bus or a plane, sitting on the front porch, at the public library- reading all summer long!

It's Monday. (Is it summer yet?) What's everybody out there reading?
Some were reviewed for a Christian Science Monitor spring round-up.
HERE'S THE LINK.
(Click if you'd like to know more!)
And here are the books. Loved them all. Can't wait to catch sight of young readers under a tree, by the pool, on a bus or a plane, sitting on the front porch, at the public library- reading all summer long!




It's Monday. (Is it summer yet?) What's everybody out there reading?

Published on June 11, 2018 02:38
May 29, 2018
Happy summer to my teacher and librarian friends!
This is the time of year when I get a lot of kids' letters. I know the end of the year is hectic, so I'm amazed at the teachers who have time to help students with this project, bundle a stack of letters up and get them to the post office.
A few of them are priceless.
Like these from a school in Minnesota:
(Sorry about the boring parts, reader. But glad you appreciated my use of HOGWASH.)
(True confessions: I used to like being sneaky, too!)
Also this:
"I like the book because Glory is like my friend. She is a good friend. Like me."
Be still my heart...
Another take on the book: "I liked it because it has exciting dialogue. Glory and Jesslyn were always fighting and talking."
(Note to self- write lots of exciting dialog.)
Some send photos. How can an author resist an entire third grade reading her book, holding it high!
I'm still waiting for one class's letters, but they emailed and wanted to know about my dogs. So I sent photos of our most recent sweet pup-- ole Barley, and my two grand-dogs, Ellie and Rocky the Rock Star.
Thank you, teachers and librarians everywhere, for reading to your students, for sharing your love of books, for instilling a lifetime of curiosity and reading for pleasure. I hope you all have time to read exactly what you love- all summer long!
Ellis is the newest addition to our family.
Sweet Barley. We miss him a lot!
Rocky giving me the evil eye for not reading faster. My To Be Read stack is very high.
A few of them are priceless.
Like these from a school in Minnesota:
(Sorry about the boring parts, reader. But glad you appreciated my use of HOGWASH.)

(True confessions: I used to like being sneaky, too!)

Also this:
"I like the book because Glory is like my friend. She is a good friend. Like me."
Be still my heart...
Another take on the book: "I liked it because it has exciting dialogue. Glory and Jesslyn were always fighting and talking."
(Note to self- write lots of exciting dialog.)
Some send photos. How can an author resist an entire third grade reading her book, holding it high!

I'm still waiting for one class's letters, but they emailed and wanted to know about my dogs. So I sent photos of our most recent sweet pup-- ole Barley, and my two grand-dogs, Ellie and Rocky the Rock Star.
Thank you, teachers and librarians everywhere, for reading to your students, for sharing your love of books, for instilling a lifetime of curiosity and reading for pleasure. I hope you all have time to read exactly what you love- all summer long!


Sweet Barley. We miss him a lot!

Rocky giving me the evil eye for not reading faster. My To Be Read stack is very high.
Published on May 29, 2018 13:19
May 20, 2018
Naming Names!
I think long and hard about a character's name. I've even changed a name or two when it wasn't working and suddenly the true nature of that character emerged.
In MAKING FRIENDS WITH BILLY WONG, I had fun naming the characters. Maybe more fun than with any of the folks who peopled my first two books.
Azalea, for example. A line from something- who knows what at this point- stuck in my brain from way back. A baby named Azalea by her daddy when he saw the pink flowers from her mama's hospital window. Azalea it was! From the beginning.
How about Sergeant Steele for a policeman? That came to me when I remembered my high school classmate, Donna Steele. But I have NO idea how the name Miss Jane Partridge appeared, attached to a goody-goody social worker. Not my friend Joan Partridge. Not my sister Jane. Just a name that had the right ring to it.
I have a huge collection of saved names. If I created a zillion more characters, I could never use them all.
Maybe it's a southern thing? I adore
Here's an excerpt:
It didn’t end up mattering much because both boys were almost always referred to as Brother or Bubba, and to this day no one in my immediate family or its orbit has ever called me anything but Sister. Which leads us to another Southern phenomenon. There’s Tennessee Williams’s Sister Woman, of course, and a character in a Lee Smith short story is named Uncle Baby Brother.
When I first started writing THE WAY TO STAY IN DESTINY, I called my tap-dancing, fun-loving character "Miss Sister" just plain Sister. She was a tribute to two much-loved dance teachers in our town, Sister Cockersole and Ruth Hart. At a first-pages critique session early on, a young editor remarked that she liked the story, but she didn't understand why a former nun would be wearing red tap shoes...
Since I knew actual people who added the "Miss" in front of names all the time, changing her to Miss Sister was easy.
If you're still reading, here are the previous posts I've written about character names:
This, with a link to Dorian Cirrone's excellent post
(my rejected names notebook)
How do you decide what to name a character? Have you ever (mistakenly perhaps?) named a villain for someone you actually know? What are some of your favorite book characters' names?
In MAKING FRIENDS WITH BILLY WONG, I had fun naming the characters. Maybe more fun than with any of the folks who peopled my first two books.
Azalea, for example. A line from something- who knows what at this point- stuck in my brain from way back. A baby named Azalea by her daddy when he saw the pink flowers from her mama's hospital window. Azalea it was! From the beginning.
How about Sergeant Steele for a policeman? That came to me when I remembered my high school classmate, Donna Steele. But I have NO idea how the name Miss Jane Partridge appeared, attached to a goody-goody social worker. Not my friend Joan Partridge. Not my sister Jane. Just a name that had the right ring to it.
I have a huge collection of saved names. If I created a zillion more characters, I could never use them all.
Maybe it's a southern thing? I adore
Here's an excerpt:
It didn’t end up mattering much because both boys were almost always referred to as Brother or Bubba, and to this day no one in my immediate family or its orbit has ever called me anything but Sister. Which leads us to another Southern phenomenon. There’s Tennessee Williams’s Sister Woman, of course, and a character in a Lee Smith short story is named Uncle Baby Brother.
When I first started writing THE WAY TO STAY IN DESTINY, I called my tap-dancing, fun-loving character "Miss Sister" just plain Sister. She was a tribute to two much-loved dance teachers in our town, Sister Cockersole and Ruth Hart. At a first-pages critique session early on, a young editor remarked that she liked the story, but she didn't understand why a former nun would be wearing red tap shoes...
Since I knew actual people who added the "Miss" in front of names all the time, changing her to Miss Sister was easy.
If you're still reading, here are the previous posts I've written about character names:
This, with a link to Dorian Cirrone's excellent post
(my rejected names notebook)
How do you decide what to name a character? Have you ever (mistakenly perhaps?) named a villain for someone you actually know? What are some of your favorite book characters' names?
Published on May 20, 2018 12:13
May 7, 2018
Monday Reading
It's about a month till the Orlando-- Disney World!-- SCBWI weekend.
(If you hurry, you can still register with the early bird special price. CLICK HERE FOR the LINK.)
I'm signing up for Erin Entrada Kelly's Saturday workshop. All day to write. Yay.
Now that I've read two of her books, I'm beyond excited!
Check out all the stickie notes in my library copy of
YOU GO FIRST.
I tried to read this book like a writer. I wanted to learn some of the tricks, some of the tips, some of the fabulous ways Erin tells her stories.
But had I reviewed it as a reader, as a librarian, as someone recommending books to young readers, I couldn't have done better than this SCHOOL LIBRARY JOURNAL starred review:
"VERDICT Heartfelt and hopeful, this novel will encourage young readers to offer their hand in friendship to kids who, just like them, might be struggling."
Both of the books I read by Erin are truly heartfelt. BUT, they're also funny as everything. One of my writing goals is to be funnier. It's not so easy to write humor and also create a story that tugs at kids' hearts.
A few observations:
I adore the Rabbit Hole thoughts at the beginning of Charlotte's chapters. Rabbit Hole because that's what happens when you start researching one thing and end up elsewhere.
We've all been there, but did anybody else see it as a way to develop a character?
And they're not just random. They're connected, they have flow, they sometimes lead to very funny observations.
The way she writes about how two friends pull apart- ingenious! At one point, Charlotte hides in the library and eavesdrops on her former friend who's now gone over to the other side, the popular kids. But does Erin write long boring passages of exposition to let the reader know what Charlotte's feeling? Nope.
How about this:
"Charlotte wanted to sweep all the stupid nonfiction books off the shelf and scream." (p. 141)
And then Charlotte goes on to muse about her rock collection. Yes, introspection. Yes, often longer than one of those writing rules that say a young reader won't sit still for this. Ha. In Erin's hands, the passages are beautifully written and, again, often funny.
Funny, nervous, filled with guilt. All the emotions, in a lovable narrator.
I just love that about Charlotte.
The book is a lesson in crafting perfect characters and their arcs.
Ben is so wonderfully flawed. And does he really know it? Perhaps my favorite line of his-
"Ben carried his shirt to the boys' bathroom knowing the medium would be too big. But it's not often that you're given a choice of what you want to be, and Ben decided he didn't want to be small." (p. 152)
This might be the most perfectly-written book about friendship I've read in a very long time.
Here's my copy of HELLO, UNIVERSE. I bought it after it won the Newbery and have now read it a couple of times.
True confessions, if a book is mine and I don't plan to send it elsewhere, I write in it. Don't judge! Hey, I love finding notes in books.
(Aside: One of the coolest recent things to happen in the book world is the various journeys teachers send new ARCs on, sharing and leaving notes in them, then returning them to the author. We love reading your notes!)
By now, everybody in the universe has probably read HELLO, UNIVERSE. So I'll just say that if you haven't, what are you waiting for?
Your turn. What are you reading on this lovely Monday in May?
(If you hurry, you can still register with the early bird special price. CLICK HERE FOR the LINK.)
I'm signing up for Erin Entrada Kelly's Saturday workshop. All day to write. Yay.
Now that I've read two of her books, I'm beyond excited!

YOU GO FIRST.
I tried to read this book like a writer. I wanted to learn some of the tricks, some of the tips, some of the fabulous ways Erin tells her stories.
But had I reviewed it as a reader, as a librarian, as someone recommending books to young readers, I couldn't have done better than this SCHOOL LIBRARY JOURNAL starred review:
"VERDICT Heartfelt and hopeful, this novel will encourage young readers to offer their hand in friendship to kids who, just like them, might be struggling."
Both of the books I read by Erin are truly heartfelt. BUT, they're also funny as everything. One of my writing goals is to be funnier. It's not so easy to write humor and also create a story that tugs at kids' hearts.
A few observations:
I adore the Rabbit Hole thoughts at the beginning of Charlotte's chapters. Rabbit Hole because that's what happens when you start researching one thing and end up elsewhere.
We've all been there, but did anybody else see it as a way to develop a character?
And they're not just random. They're connected, they have flow, they sometimes lead to very funny observations.
The way she writes about how two friends pull apart- ingenious! At one point, Charlotte hides in the library and eavesdrops on her former friend who's now gone over to the other side, the popular kids. But does Erin write long boring passages of exposition to let the reader know what Charlotte's feeling? Nope.
How about this:
"Charlotte wanted to sweep all the stupid nonfiction books off the shelf and scream." (p. 141)
And then Charlotte goes on to muse about her rock collection. Yes, introspection. Yes, often longer than one of those writing rules that say a young reader won't sit still for this. Ha. In Erin's hands, the passages are beautifully written and, again, often funny.
Funny, nervous, filled with guilt. All the emotions, in a lovable narrator.
I just love that about Charlotte.
The book is a lesson in crafting perfect characters and their arcs.
Ben is so wonderfully flawed. And does he really know it? Perhaps my favorite line of his-
"Ben carried his shirt to the boys' bathroom knowing the medium would be too big. But it's not often that you're given a choice of what you want to be, and Ben decided he didn't want to be small." (p. 152)
This might be the most perfectly-written book about friendship I've read in a very long time.

True confessions, if a book is mine and I don't plan to send it elsewhere, I write in it. Don't judge! Hey, I love finding notes in books.
(Aside: One of the coolest recent things to happen in the book world is the various journeys teachers send new ARCs on, sharing and leaving notes in them, then returning them to the author. We love reading your notes!)
By now, everybody in the universe has probably read HELLO, UNIVERSE. So I'll just say that if you haven't, what are you waiting for?

Your turn. What are you reading on this lovely Monday in May?
Published on May 07, 2018 04:30
April 17, 2018
Long-term Careers
Cynthia Leitich Smith's blog is a treasure, a gift for writers, readers, and especially aspiring writers.
Have you read this excellent series of posts from authors with long and productive careers?
You can find them all HERE.
This morning, I caught up with a few.
HERE IS SOME of what K.L. Going says about changes she's seen.
The last line of this passage is worth contemplating (the "bold" for emphasis is mine):
When I first started out, it was a big deal that I simply had a website. I had certain fun features I’d update periodically, but there was not any expectation that there would be new material every week or every few days. There was no Twitter or Instagram. It took very little of my mental energy.
(Beach Lane, 2017)But over the years, social media venues have bred like rabbits and it’s hard not to get caught up in each new trail, not knowing which ones will pan out in the long run.
It’s too easy to spend all of your creative energy on coming up with clever or prolific posts instead of writing new books.
These days, there’s a much higher demand to do marketing well.
Also, feedback on your books comes instantly from many sources and it’s detailed. It feels personal.
In the past, there was a general sense of a book’s reception, but there wasn’t that kind of instant reaction from Joe Smith in Washington, D.C. who gave your book a certain number of stars.
General feedback is wonderful because it can help improve your writing skills for future books, but specific feedback can feel disproportionately important even when it shouldn’t really have any impact at all.
Have you read this excellent series of posts from authors with long and productive careers?
You can find them all HERE.
This morning, I caught up with a few.
HERE IS SOME of what K.L. Going says about changes she's seen.
The last line of this passage is worth contemplating (the "bold" for emphasis is mine):
When I first started out, it was a big deal that I simply had a website. I had certain fun features I’d update periodically, but there was not any expectation that there would be new material every week or every few days. There was no Twitter or Instagram. It took very little of my mental energy.

It’s too easy to spend all of your creative energy on coming up with clever or prolific posts instead of writing new books.
These days, there’s a much higher demand to do marketing well.
Also, feedback on your books comes instantly from many sources and it’s detailed. It feels personal.
In the past, there was a general sense of a book’s reception, but there wasn’t that kind of instant reaction from Joe Smith in Washington, D.C. who gave your book a certain number of stars.
General feedback is wonderful because it can help improve your writing skills for future books, but specific feedback can feel disproportionately important even when it shouldn’t really have any impact at all.
Published on April 17, 2018 04:51
April 3, 2018
Laura Lippman's newest
I love her novels. And not just because she sets a lot of them in Baltimore, a place I spent a few fun years. (Yes, that Baltimore...)
I don't listen to as many books as I'd like. I really prefer holding the book in my hands.
But this audio is amazing.
Great reader -and such a compelling story.
I downloaded a PODCAST, via the NY Times, of the author talking about her book.
Tomorrow's walk will be very interesting!
You can read the post HERE that I wrote about meeting Lippman at the Writers in Paradise conference.
And a review that I'll wait to read till I finish! (I have one disc left. Then I may just have to borrow the actual book from the library.)
Writers can learn a lot from this book. Tightly plotted, great characters and their backstories, authentic setting. Super book!

I don't listen to as many books as I'd like. I really prefer holding the book in my hands.
But this audio is amazing.
Great reader -and such a compelling story.
I downloaded a PODCAST, via the NY Times, of the author talking about her book.
Tomorrow's walk will be very interesting!
You can read the post HERE that I wrote about meeting Lippman at the Writers in Paradise conference.
And a review that I'll wait to read till I finish! (I have one disc left. Then I may just have to borrow the actual book from the library.)
Writers can learn a lot from this book. Tightly plotted, great characters and their backstories, authentic setting. Super book!
Published on April 03, 2018 13:41
March 19, 2018
Monday's Reading

I want to encourage my teacher and librarian friends everywhere to rush right out and get your own copy. I can practically hear the discussions, the projects, the thoughtful poetry it will inspire!
There are so many memorable moments in the exchanges between these two poets that it's hard to single out one line, one verse, even one poem. But there was something about Charles's words in DINNER CONVERSATION, that really made me smile. Perhaps it was that wink from Grandma.
Irene's poem, APOLOGY, tugged at my heart.
I swallow.
I want to say
I'm
sorry,
but those words are so small for something so big.
If you haven't listened to the podcast, you must! Here's a link to Travis Jonker's excellent interview via his School Library Journal podcast. (You can also find the Teachers' Guide on this site.)
And the Kirkus review= a star!
A word on the paint, pencil and collage illustrations by Sean Qualls and Selina Alko.
Perfect.

Published on March 19, 2018 06:33