M. Edward McNally's Blog, page 9
May 1, 2012
Beltane Freebie from the Eclective
Now FREE for ye olde Celtic New Year, six Celtic-themed stories from six authors, crossing genres. Mine is about the Irish Brigade at Fredericksburg in the American Civil War, which will come as a shock to absolutely no one who knows me.
Free May 1st and May 2nd
http://www.amazon.com/The-Eclective-Celtic-Collection-ebook/dp/B007FFJVGW








April 27, 2012
Ed’s Casual Friday, Get a helmet.
Today on Ed’s Casual Friday over at Indies Unlimited I humbly suggest that – while we of course all love the endless whining and moaning – sometimes a writer may be better served by just shutting the hell up and getting back to work.
http://www.indiesunlimited.com/2012/04/27/eds-casual-friday-get-a-helmet/








April 23, 2012
Tag Line Tuesday with Jess Mountifield
Today, Tag Line Tuesday is pleased to (virtually) sit down with a writer from “Across the Pond,” so if any of my fellow Yanks are confused by a “u” that doesn’t seem to belong, or an “s” that should be a “z,” that would be why. It’s a big planet and a big language, get used to it.
Let’s get started.
Ed: As I hear writers are creative folk, please answer each of the following twice, once with the truth, or some version thereof.
Name?
JM: Jess Mountifield or Night-Sword Girl, actually both of those are kind of untrue. Jess is short for Jessica but I always feel like I am in trouble when people use that.
Ed: Where you from, Night-Sword Girl?
JM: Originally a little Viking town called Woodbridge in Suffolk, UK, but I think I must have really been born in some kind of Ninja Pirate academy. I dream of it all the time.
Ed: Day job?
JM: Writer/company director by day and superhero the rest of the time.
Ed: Dream job?
JM: Writer/Film Producer/Singer/Clothes designer. I like to do lots of things and the perfect job wouldn’t ever be one thing. I’ve always wanted to be a scientist that comes up with some super cool drug that makes people psychic or gives people x-ray vision or something like that.
Ed: And the inevitable, Why do you write?
JM: Because if I don’t I go whacko and start swinging swords at things. Apparently it’s better for humanity if I write. Mostly though, I just get so many characters and imaginary people in my head that I just have to write about them and their lives. They are a little like children and I tell people all the good (and sometimes bad) things they get up to.
You many know return to full honesty (if you want) for…the LIGHTNING round (thunderclap!)
Quick! Favorite:
Band – Jessus and The Wailers, the Rockband game band I sing with.
Actually in all seriousness I don’t really have a favourite band. I listen to so many different types of music and just pick a few songs I like from so many different people. The only bands I’ve followed for more than an album or two are Bon Jovi and Boyzone, and one is just so shameful compared to the other.
Food: Pie! Chicken and Mushroom Pie is the best.
(Ed: Proof positive you’re in the UK)
Game: Geocaching! Though I’m not sure it’s a game actually. It’s a modern day treasure hunting thingy that involves walking, outdoors, and finding hidden things.
Album: Another tough one, probably one of the Lord of the Rings soundtracks.
Word: Smoosh, I’m not sure it’s even a word but I love it anyway. Something is satisfying about sticking fruit in the blender or cracking and egg and going ‘Smoosh!’ at the same time.
Color: Black – everything looks better in black, including me.
Animal: Dog, they are such faithful creatures.
Piece of clothing: Torn between corsets and dresses, of course corseted dresses are pretty epic.
Movie: Beauty and the Beast because I love how fairytale-like it is, yet how it also raises some interesting psychological questions on what love really is.
TV show: Sherlock, the new BBC series with Benedict Cumberbatch. It’s so true to the books, yet modern, and I’ve always thought brainy was the new sexy.
Drink: Hot chocolate though pink milk is good too (strawberry milkshake).
Song: I know it’s really old and odd but I absolutely love “Amazing Grace.” I loved it long before I even knew what it meant or what it was on about because I wasn’t brought up in church or anything but something about that song always makes me feel better.
Line from a song: “We all rise when we all stand together, each and every one, somewhere we belong.” From a Boyzone song. I’ve always thought people are stronger and achieve more when they are banded together to fight for something and give people a sense of family and community.
Pizza topping: Mushrooms. In fact I like mushrooms on a lot of things.
Crime: Speeding. I really do like fast cars.
Place: Anywhere out at sea where I can see the world going on for miles.
Quote: ‘If you think you are too small to make a difference you’ve never spent the night with a mosquito,’ I saw that written on a wall at school when I was about 12 and never forgot it.
Three random things about yourself, please.
1). Even though I’m pretty slender now I was so large as a child I couldn’t walk properly, and my nickname was “Bumble Bee” because my mum didn’t know how I got off the ground.
2). I have no middle name making my name entirely unique. I’m the only Jess Mountifield alive today.
3). My hair is so long I can sit on it.
[image error]Ed: And now on to the “Book Chat” portion of the festivities.
What’s the biggest consideration when you are deciding what book to read?
JM: It used to be genre and mood, but lately it’s a bit more author requests and mood. I get asked to read and review a lot of books now that I run a blog, so I have a tbr list that easily grows faster than I can read them before I’ve even added any books I personally would like to read. My mood tends to decide what I’ll take off the pile next, but to get added to the pile and not be a request it’s usually some kind of adventure book, encouraging tale or other book that’s been recommended to me.
Ed: You are looking at the back of a book in a bookstore, reading on online blurb, or whatever. What sort of thing makes you say “yes,” what sort of things makes you say “pass?”
JM: I don’t like a book to be too dark unless it’s a good-triumphing-over-evil sort of book, so dark books and most horrors make me pass by default. I’ll read anything that’s light, good for a laugh, or got a good sense of adventure to it. Mostly it’s characters I think I can relate to, however.
Ed: What genre do you enjoy most?
JM: At the moment probably sci-fi and fantasy as long as there isn’t too much paranormal or witchcraft. I have had some bad experiences of those kinds of things when young and don’t really want any reminders. The rest of sci-fi and fantasy is all good though, including all the heavy science based stuff.
Ed: What genre would you read only if you lost a bet?
JM: Probably plain romances. I tend to find they seem too unrealistic for me unless blended with a bit more real life.
Ed: Do you have a favorite author, and do you think they influence your own writing?
JM: I have lots of authors I like from the oldies like Tolkien and C. S. Lewis to more modern ones like Francine Rivers, Bernard Cornwell. I think everything I read impacts my writing to some degree, as with everything I watch, it all goes into a big melting pot of experiences I draw on and create from.
Ed: Do you have a favorite book, and how many times have you read it?
JM: Definitely Lord of the Rings. I think I’ve read it 11 times now but to be honest I’ve lost count. It could be more.
Ed: What’s the first book you remember buying with your own money?
JM: I can’t remember exactly what book but a local bookshop had a few years where they stocked a lot of the old classics and they really weren’t very much. I used to pick them up with my pocket money when I was about 10. Things like Treasure Island, Robinson Crusoe, Alice In Wonderland and all sort of others
Ed: Any books you have been told you should read, and know you probably never will?
JM: Not at the moment. I didn’t ever think I’d read The Da Vinci Code but I ended up finding it on the shelves of a holiday cottage I stayed in a few years back, so I flicked through to see if it was really any good or not.
Ed: Ever lied about reading, or not reading, a book?
JM: Yes but I can’t remember what book now. It was one of those situations where I was young and everyone had read this great teen book, and I had spent several minutes listening to some other friends go on about it so I blagged pretending I’d read it to the ‘cooler’ kids by repeating what the other people earlier had said to me.
Ed: I do that with The Bible all the time.
Ever read a book you were sure you were going to like, and not liked it?
JM: Actually it just happened to me. I’ve got my first did-not-finish review to do after a long time of enjoying pretty much every book I’ve read. I won’t say who or what but I thought it was going to be a great spy-style mystery thriller and I found it wasn’t that well researched, and there was too much jargon for me to understand what was going on. It also had the Prime Minister in it, and he spoke like he was American. As a Brit it drove me up the wall and I just couldn’t carry on reading.
Ed: Ever grudgingly read a book, and loved it?
JM: Thankfully, no. I don’t tend to bother reading if I don’t think I’ll enjoy it. This might change with all the books I’ve been asked to review lately.
Ed: What’s your favorite line from a book? (not your own)
JM: “When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, no matter how improbable, must be the truth.” – Sherlock again but there is just something I love about that guy’s logic.
Ed: Now let’s move over into chatting up the books you did happen to write…is “chatting up” one of those things that has different meanings on either side of The Pond? Well, anyway:
How, and when, do you tend to come up with titles?
JM: It varies. With two of my books I’ve got right to the end and deliberated the title for ages. In both cases I went for something that conveyed what the characters had learnt. In both cases, I also hadn’t intended for it to be a theme of the book, it just was. With others, they’ve just come to me at some point while thinking over the plot, and I’ve known what it’s called.
Ed: How do your characters get their names?
JM: In a few cases they’ve sort of come with them, and their names have already been in my head. With all the others I’ve picked names with meanings that match their personalities and roles in the story.
Ed: If you could live in the world / with the people of one of your stories, which one would it be and why?
JM: It would be in my newest one, Sherdan’s Prophecy. Lots of exciting superhero style stuff happening in their world, and some great characters to have a natter with about all sorts of philosophical topics.
Ed: What do you think your books say about you?
JM: I honestly don’t know. Probably that I’m quite adventurous. I do often have quite action-packed books, but also despite my dislike of pure romance books, I always seem to find some relationships sneak their way into my plots. I think it’s letting people know I’m a bit of a romantic at heart, though shhhh, I don’t let too many know.
Ed: Is there anything you have written which you would now like to change or revise, wish you had written differently, etc.?
JM: All of it! I tend to find I really dislike my work about 6-8weeks after finishing it (though sometimes I get a surprise and still like parts). I think it’s the perfectionist in me. I want to edit again and tweak it all a bit more, but I’d never get anything published if I did. I do a set number of edit runs and then just let go.
Ed: Tell me about your favorite character.
JM: My favourite character changes often, but at the moment it’s Sherdan Harper, the main character of my third book. He’s a scientist and leader of an organisation. Quite serious and not the nicest of people, but he is one of those bad guys you love anyway.
Ed: Have your favorite character tell me about you.
Sherdan Harper: Jess is a control freak. She wants to know everything we get up to as well, and it’s sometimes infuriating. I think she should trust me more, and just chill.
Ed: Back over to Jess, what’s your favorite line which you have written?
JM: ‘Oi, dirt-sniffer, get out of bed.’
It’s from the story “Learning to Fly,” in my Innocent Hearts collection.
Ed: Now down to the Nitty Gritty Dirt Band aspects of writing, nuts and bolts, soup and nuts.
Plotter or Pantser?
JM: A bit of both, actually. I do a rough plot which gives me an idea of what’s going to happen, and then write without it and it invariable doesn’t match up by the time I’ve finished writing.
Ed: What’s the Best and Worst advice you ever got as a writer?
JM: Best advice was to just keep writing, and that my writing was the best advertising for my writing. Worst advice I’m not really sure about. There’s nothing bad that I’ve followed yet.
Ed: Best/Worst thing about being a writer?
JM: The best thing is getting to spend all day hanging out with imaginary people who are always worth hanging out with. The worst is being thought crazy for spending time with the people in my head.
Ed: Why Indie?
JM: I like to have the final say in things and a higher royalty percentage. I think traditional publishers are also playing things too safe with what they will publish these days.
Ed: Is being a writer what you expected? How so or how not?
JM: Mostly yes, although I never expected quite so much marketing to be involved. In terms of the writing and editing, it’s pretty much as I thought it would be.
Ed: Have you, or would you ever, collaborate on a story?
JM: I’ve collaborated on film scripts and a twitter fiction thing I did last year, but not a full book yet. I’m not sure I would at this point unless I felt the other writer was a perfect fit. I’ve started too many different projects only to be let down by the other person when halfway through to want to collaborate too much anymore.
Ed: If you were starting to write for the first time, what would you do different?
JM: I’d learn a little more about writing first. My first novel was edited so many times because I’d realise I had done something really basic that was wrong and it needed changing. It’s weaker as a book because of it.
Ed: What is the most important thing you have learned about writing?
JM: That it’s important to do it often, even if you don’t feel like it. The more disciplined the process is, the easier it seems. Also, not worrying about how good it is while writing the first draft has been the most releasing thing ever. I worry about how good it is right before it’s all sent to my editor.
Ed: What’s the moral of the story?
JM: Be realistic but don’t give up.
Ed: And finally, a few actual answers to hypothetical questions.
Your computer is smoking, wheezing, and sparks are shooting out of the back. You can save one thing off the hard drive. What is it?
JM: My current WIP, everything else will be backed up on my kindle.
Ed: You have one perfect day of free time, no obligations, needs, or responsibilities. What do you do?
JM: A mix of things. Some singing, some writing, lunch with a friend and dinner with my other half. Probably a little filming in there, too.
Ed: Someone “in the business” suggests you change something you feel is a critical part of one of your books, and guarantees it will increase sales. What do you do?
JM: Ignore them. There are no guarantees on that kind of thing. If my editor said it, I might consider it, but not anyone else.
Ed: You are offered just enough money to live comfortably for the rest of your life, if you will just stop writing. What do you do?
JM: Keep writing. I tried that other one working at a day job that was enough to live on, all I wanted to do was write.
Ed: What question do you wish I had asked?
JM: How much time goes into each book. The answer, far too much. I think I clocked well over 1000 hours in my first book.
Ed: Thanks for stopping by, Jess. Or, let me see if I can get this right: “Cheers, Mate.”
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Please do take a gander at Jess’s novels, for which she has provided a Five Word Synopsis. I only ask authors to do that ‘cuz I know how much we all hate it.
Two girls on big journey.
http://www.amazon.com/Innocent-Hearts-ebook/dp/B006PEPI0W
http://www.amazon.co.uk/Innocent-Hearts-ebook/dp/B006PEPI0W
Marie, Captain Hayes, and swashbuckling.
http://www.amazon.com/With-Proud-Humility-ebook/dp/B004EYUEKY
http://www.amazon.co.uk/With-Proud-Humility-ebook/dp/B004EYUEKY








April 20, 2012
Ed’s Casual Friday, An Indie Prayer
Today over at Indies Unlimited, humble supplication.
“Grant me the serenity to just let that idiotic comment on facebook pass by,
Lo, though it is the stupidest thing anyone has ever said, ever, and it vexes me sorely,
And though I have typed a long, witty rejoinder that no one with half a brain could possibly argue,
Just let me hit delete instead of post this one time, and return to my labors.”
http://www.indiesunlimited.com/2012/04/20/eds-casual-friday-an-indie-prayer/








April 18, 2012
Norothian Cycle Fan Art (squee!)
Big thanks to Tara West (aka Tamra Westberry) for hosting an interview today, and particualrly for creating some “fan art” which is absolutely amazing. All three banners, featuring Tilda and Deskata as well as Nesha-tari, along with my interviewee yammering can be seen over at Tara’s place, http://tarawestauthor.wordpress.com/2012/04/18/im-a-mcnally-fantasy-fan-girl/








April 14, 2012
Map: Ay and Martas Peninsulas, political, 1396 NC

Ay & Martan Peninsulas as of early 1396 NC
Some version of this map will accompany the second part of Devil Town (Book IV of the Norothian Cycle), still shooting for a summer release on that one, hopefully June. Much like Book II (Death of a Kingdom), the narrative is likely going to be divided into three “parts” as various characters are sort of off doing their own thing. As readers may guess from the map, Part II will be picking up and combining Nesha-tari’s plot line in Ayzantium from the end of Book II, as well as John Deskata’s, last seen in Thubas on the Martan peninsula at the end of Book III (The Wind from Miilark).








April 13, 2012
Ed’s Casual Friday: …………….
Today on my Ed’s Casual Friday column over at Indies Unlimited, I write a column about the fact that I have nothing to write a column about today. Don’t try this at home, I’m a professional.








April 11, 2012
Map: Noroth & Kandala, political
By reader request, a map showing the full extent of the two continents where most of the first three volumes of the Norothian Cycle take place, Noroth to the north and Kandala to the south, divided by the Norothian Channel.
The size of the map means a great deal of detail isn't possible, but hopefully it will serve to give some perspective. The date would be early 1396 NC, after the fall of Daul and its division by Codian ("The Province")and Tarthan/Kantan ("The Protectorate") forces. Additionally, the Martan Peninsula on Kandala is shown after conquest by the Gunnakka, and the division of the historic kingdoms into five areas of control by the dragons.
For the record, the Miilarkian Islands are located roughly a month (by sail) due west of the Western Strait separating the two continents, in the midst of the Interminable Ocean.








April 9, 2012
Tag Line Tuesday with Kevin Tomsett
Today, Tag Line Tuesday sits down with author Kevin Tomsett, who was too shy or perhaps "politely Britiish" to want to have a line he wrote head the interview. So let's just get right to it, and meet Kev.
Ed: Where you from, Kev?
KT: Buckfastleigh Devon UK
Ed: For some reason, that sounds to an American like a place Hobbits might live. You have a day job there?
KT: My day job is working for my local Co-operative.
Ed: And how about a Dream Job?
KT: My dream job would to be a full-time author.
Ed: Now for the inevitable question, Why do you write?
KT: I'm writing because I so many ideas inside my head that I want to share with the world
Ed: And now for THE LIGHTNING ROUND! Quick, what is your favorite:
Band – Take That
Food – Pizza
Game - Skyrim
Album – "Sittin' on top of the world" by LeAnn Rimes
Word – "Ace"
Color – Neon Green
Animal – Cat
Piece of clothing – My red jacket
Movie – The 40 Year Old Virgin and Tangled
TV show – Star Trek: Voyager
Drink – Coke,Tea or JD and coke
Song – "Pray" by Take That
Pizza topping – Ham and Pineapple
Place – My home town of Stubbington
Quote – "Do unto others as they would do to you, but do it first" - Sid Justice in WWF
Ed: Three random things about yourself, please.
KT: 1.) I'm a former pro wrestler. 2.) I'm part Welsh, Part Irish (Republic), and Part English. 3.) I can't spell
Ed: Now, onto the "book chat" portion of the festivities, staring with books which you did not happen to write yourself.
What's the biggest consideration when you are deciding what book to read?
Ed: What genre do you enjoy most?
KT: Sci Fi
Ed: What genre would you read only if you lost a bet?
KT: Romance
Ed: Do you have a favorite author, and do you think they influence your own writing?
KT: My favorite author is William Shatner, as of right now no he does not have any influence on my writing
Ed: Do you have a favorite book, and how many times have you read it?
KT: Generations by William Shatner, and I've read it about 5 times
Ed: What's the first book you remember buying with your own money?
KT: Generations
Ed: Any books you have been told you should read, and know you probably never will?
KT: No, not yet. My Kindle is full of books like that, but I will read them one day
Ed: Ever lied about reading, or not reading, a book? Read a book you were sure you were going to like, and not liked it? Grudgingly read a book, and loved it?
KT: No, never. Not yet, no. No, not yet.
Ed: What's your favorite line from a book?
KT: Don't have one….Yet
[image error]Ed: And now, on to books which you did happen to write.
How, and when, do you tend to come up with titles?
KT: Anytime, they just seem to pop into my head.
Ed: How do your characters get their names?
KT: From things in the room I'm in at the time.
Ed: If you could live in the world / with the people of one of your stories, which one would it be and why?
KT: Can't really answer that one yet, as the book hasn't been written and it would be giving away info.
Ed: What do you think your books say about you?
KT: I have twisted ideas
Ed: Is there anything you have written which you would now like to change or revise, wish you had written differently, etc.?
KT: Yes, but I'm already doing it
Ed: Tell me about your favorite character.
KT: Daniel from Revenge, because I have based him on me and something that happened to me in the past.
Ed: Have your favorite character tell me about you.
Daniel: Kevin is a misunderstood person with a lot of anger hidden underneath.
Ed: Back to Kevin, and "writing" questions.
Are you a "Plotter" or a "Pantser?"
KT: Plotter.
Ed: What's the best advice you ever got as a writer?
KT: Best advice was from a fellow indie author Kristina Jackson who told me about showing the story, not telling it.
Ed: What's the best and worst thing about being a writer?
KT: Best thing is it's fun. Worst thing is still having a day job.
Ed: Why Indie?
KT: Because I/we have control over our books.
Ed: Is being a writer what you expected? How so or how not?
KT: It has its ups and downs but I am enjoying the process and I get a little thrill whenever I sell a book.
Ed: Have you, or would you ever, collaborate on a story?
KT: My short stories are co-written with my partner Kim, and I'm also writing with another author to rewrite The Game.
Ed: If you were starting to write for the first time, what would you do different?
KT: Make sure my book is as good as it can be, and not repeat the mistakes I made with The Game.
Ed: What is the most important thing you have learned about writing?
KT: It's not a race, and make sure you learn as much as you can and take all the advice you get.
Ed: What's the moral of the story?
KT: Writing isn't easy but its rewarding
Ed: Finally in closing, some real answers to HYPOTHETICAL questions.
Your computer is smoking, wheezing, and sparks are shooting out of the back. You can save one thing off the hard drive. What is it?
KT: My boy's baby photos.
Ed: You have one perfect day of free time, no obligations, needs, or responsibilities. What do you do?
Ed: Someone "in the business" suggests you change something you feel is a critical part of one of your books, and guarantees it will increase sales. What do you do?
KT: I listen to them and take their advice on board.
Ed: You are offered just enough money to live comfortably for the rest of your life, if you will just stop writing. What do you do?
KT: Reject the offer as writing is too much fun.
Ed: What question do you wish I had asked?
KT: This one. lol
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Kevin Tomsett's novel Revenge is available on Amazon in the US (link on cover) and UK.








April 6, 2012
Ed’s Casual Friday: When good research goes bad.
Today over at Indies Unlimited, my Ed’s Casual Friday column deals with the perils of book research causing law enforcement to get involved.







