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May 15, 2011
Divergent Faction Challenge, Week Two: AMITY
We're on week two of our DIVERGENT Faction Challenge, where participants tackle Veronica Roth's factions from her amazing YA debut, DIVERGENT-–one faction at a time. Last week we tried Abnegation. Now, let's be honest. Abnegation week did not go so well. In fact, based on the blog posts I read, Abnegation was kicking un-selfless butt all across the country.
This week, I'm choosing an easier faction. Something…fun. Something…banjo-y.
(No, NOT the Deliverance type of banjo. Which is totally stuck in my head now. Awesome.)

Meep!
Those of you who've read the Divergent know I'm taking about AMITY, The Peaceful. The faction that got to ride around in farm clothes in the back of a truck, eating apples and strumming tunes while everyone else tried not to croak.
From the DIVERGENT fansite:
AMITY:
1. friendship; peaceful harmony.
2. mutual understanding and a peaceful relationship, especially between nations; peace; accord.
3. cordiality
It's not just about banjos and apple-picking.* It's about cultivating strong relationships and trying to understand each other.
*Whoa, wait a second. This faction isn't just about banjos? CURSES.
Here's what else Veronica says about Amity:
–Dresses in Red or Yellow
–Seem Kind, Loving and Free
–Understanding counselors and caretakers
What do you think? Will this faction be easier than the last one? Check back on Friday to find out!
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Amity Cat
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May 13, 2011
Divergent Challenge Week One: Abnegation Fail
It's Friday! Which means…I get to tell you all how Abnegation kicked my butt in the DIVERGENT Faction-of-the-week Challenge, inspired by Veronica Roth's amazing book! (Don't know what the challenge is? Read about it here.)
(FYI–Blogger's been super wonky, so I expect many participants will be late with their posts. Just keep checking back in!)
So, I don't know about you, but I definitely learned something this week.
I'm not cut out for Abnegation.
It's not that I didn't like doing nice things for other people. It's that I liked it too much. Every time I did something nice, I actually felt a sense of gratification. Whether I donated items for a charity auction, added a dollar to my grocery bill to benefit a good cause, gave extra time to my kids instead of working, or even performed the common courtesy acts I try to do on a daily basis—hold open doors, let people in while driving—they all served the same purpose. They made ME feel good. And since Abnegation is sort of like the anti-me faction, I'm not sure I can consider any of that a success. This past week really made me think hard on the nature of selflessness, and if there IS a truly selfless act.
Oh, and the vanity thing. HOLY COW. If you'd asked me prior to this challenge how I rated on a vanity scale, I probably would have said on most days, low to moderate. I mean, I almost always pull my hair back in a ponytail, spend about three minutes slopping on some make-up, rarely bother with lipstick, and throw on whatever clothes are convenient (i.e. easy to find in my disaster zone of a closet).
So yesterday, thinking it would be no big deal, I went without make-up. And for the first hour afterwards, THAT'S ALL I COULD THINK ABOUT. It got better as the day wore on—I'd forget for stretches—but OMG, every time I passed a mirror, I stared. And fretted. Will everyone see the circles under my eyes? Do my eyebrows look freakish?

Is this my color?
You know what was REALLY weird? In a way, going without make-up made me vainer than actually wearing it. Because on a typical day, I spend my fifteen minutes getting dressed and then I don't think about my appearance again. Whereas yesterday, I thought about it. A LOT. I guess that either makes me: a) vainer than I thought (eyebrow pencil! EYEBROW PENCIL! MY KINGDOM FOR AN EYEBROW PENCIL!) or b) very comfortable with my usual appearance and very uncomfortable with change.
And I was. Very. Uncomfortable. At least, when I remembered to think about it. Which made me pause to consider how utterly miserable it must feel to be uncomfortable with how you look on a daily basis.
But that's another story.
(We won't even talk about how I also gave up flat-ironing my bangs. Which I only bother with when they're overgrown. Only—they're seriously, seriously overgrown. So they were basically sticking out from the side of my head about two inches, waiting to stab the dude in line next to me at Starbucks in the eye. But we won't talk about that. Meep.)
So, sadly, I'm a giant Abnegation Fail. How did others fare? Read about their experiences here (I'll keep updating the list as posts pop up!):
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May 10, 2011
COVER REVEAL and Road Trip Wednesday: Celebrity Voices
Let's kick off Wednesday with a cover reveal—fellow Apocalypsie Leanna Renee Hieber just got her cover. Isn't is AWESOME???
YAY Leanna–can't wait until it comes out!
Next–let's finish the post by tagging along with YA Highway on Road Trip Wednesday! This week's question is:
If you could have any celebrity read the audio version of your WIP or favorite book, who would it be?
My books: For Demon Guard, I think it would be Kristen Bell. Summer just has this sort of chip on her shoulder, and it often comes out via snark. I think the voice of Veronica Mars would be perfect.
MILA…wow, that's a tough one. It's a totally different book. In my head, I hear someone a little more precise in her speaking, someone a little less humorous. And even though Blair Waldorf is nothing at all like my MC, I think Leighton Meester's voice could really suit the story.
Favorite books: You know, I think I'd listen to Chris Hemsworth narrate just about anything. *sighs*
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The perseverance to published blog series: Jenn Rush
I'm curious—what do you think is the biggest key to getting published? Talent? Timing? Luck?
Early on, I probably would have said talent. I mean, it makes sense, right? You write a good book, you get published. Simple.
Except…that's where timing comes in. Because as most struggling writers know by now, you can write a good book, but if your timing is off, you still might not get published. For example—you might have recently written a vampire book. And your vampire book might be darn good. But, the timing is such that vampire books are a tough sell these days, especially those featuring bloodsuckers of the sparkly variety. So yes, bad timing can definitely throw a bump in the road to publication. Or even a mountain.
As for luck, well…I think it's basically just a matter of talent and timing coming together. Like, you might call it lucky if you happened to write a fabulous dystopian book and got it on sub at the very beginning of the big dystopian craze.
And while I still think all of these things are important, I'm going to argue that a fourth quality crushes the first three when it comes to predicting who will get published and who won't. And that quality is…
…PERSEVERANCE.

Nobody ever said perseverance was easy...
Yep, good old-fashioned stick-with-it-ness. Think about it.
The more you write, the better your writing gets, and the more likely you are to write an outstanding book. And not only your writing improves; your craft improves—things like your ability to plot, to up the stakes, to create three-dimensional characters. Also, the longer you write, the more likely you are to eventually hit that perfect timing.
What this boils down to? Basically, if you keep writing, you radically increase your chances of getting published.
But don't just take my word for it. Every Tuesday for the next several weeks, read the stories of many Apocalypsies—debut 2012 YA and MG writers—who did not just whip out their very first books and get publishing contracts on the spot.. No, these authors ended up with publishing deals because of their perseverance. Hopefully, they will inspire you and remind you that, no matter how many rejections come your way, there is one key element to being a successful writer that trumps all the others: You Never, EVER Give Up.
Kicking off the series is the amazing Jennifer Rush, whose YA book ALTERED debuts from Little, Brown in Fall 2012:

Author Jenn Rush
I've been writing my entire life. I wrote my first book in the fourth grade for one of the young author's contests and won second place. My prize was a Mickey Mouse pencil. I was hooked. That was 1993. Fast forward twelve years. I sent out my first official query letter in 2005-2006. It was for a contemporary YA called Sherbet Skies. I got a lot of great feedback from agents and editors, but no offers. I felt like I was moving in the right direction. So I worked on something new. That book bombed with beta readers. I cried ate a lot of chocolate. Nearly two years after Sherbet Skies, I finally went out with something new—a paranormal YA called Possession.
My request rate was good. Partials were turning into fulls. This was it!
But then it wasn't.
Just one more book, I told myself. I'm this close. Writer friends were landing agents and getting book deals. My turn was coming. But then I had a baby. And my husband went back to school full-time. Unsurprisingly, writing got pushed to the back burner, which was probably for the best. Looking back, I know I wasn't ready. I still cringe when I read Sherbet Skies. And Possession had its hokey plot moments. I'm so very glad they weren't published, but at the time, I was devastated.
Spring of 2010, when my daughter was a year old, the writing bug hit again. I wrote a younger YA I called The Loom and when the rough draft was completed, I set it aside for the recommended couple of weeks. I had planned on taking a writing break while that book sat, but I couldn't stay away from the computer. So I started playing around with some ideas. And suddenly this book—this new kickass book!—consumed me. I wrote like crazy. I lived, breathed, dreamed New Book. I finished the rough draft in six or seven weeks. I took another six weeks for revisions. And finally, in October, I sent ALTERED out into the world.
That first week, I received five requests. All the partial requests turned into full requests. And my agent, Joanna, read and offered rep within two days. A part of me couldn't believe it. To have an agent read that fast and offer representation after so many years seemed like a dream. Like if I poked it too hard it'd pop.
I accepted Joanna's offer that following week and we immediately started revisions. Because of the holidays, we waited to submit to editors. Altered went out January 17th and we had our first offer February 11th.
It took five years and fourteen books to get an agent. And only a few months to get a book deal. I couldn't believe it. I couldn't believe I'd survived the journey! What if I would have given up after the first book? Or the fifth? Or the thirteenth? That's why you can't quit. Ever. If you love it enough, if you can't imagine doing anything else with your life, keep writing. Or making music. Or whittling wood. Whatever your talent/passion is!
Because you never know when this close will turn into a YES.
Thanks so much, Jenn, for sharing your story! If you get a chance, check out Jenn's blog and her amazing book ALTERED (Dollhouse meets Prison Break? I'm all over it!) Make sure to tune in next week, when another Apocalypsie will share her inspirational road to publication tale!
And remember, no matter what you do: Don't. Give. Up.
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May 8, 2011
DIVERGENT Faction-of-the-week Challenge!
OMG! OMG! OMG! DIVERGENT IS FINALLY IN STORES!!!
Do you know how long I've been waiting to say that about this book? NOW EVERYONE CAN SHARE IN THE BRILLIANCE THAT IS VERONICA ROTH'S BRAIN! (Only, you know, in a non-creepy, non-brain eating way.)
DIVERGENT by Veronica Roth is a book that makes you think, a book that stays with you long after you finish reading. A book that makes you question: which faction would YOU choose?
DAUNTLESS—The Brave
CANDOR—The Honest
ERUDITE—The Intellectual/Knowledgeable
AMITY—The Peaceful
ABNEGATION—The Selfless
One of the many things I took away from the book is that while sticking to one virtue might sound simple, ultimately, it's probably better to branch out a little bit. So guess what? I created the DIVERGENT FACTION-OF-THE-WEEK CHALLENGE, where some of my writer friends and I are going to take on all five of them!
THE CHALLENGE:
Every Monday for the next 5 weeks, I'll announce the faction/virtue of the week. Over the next four days, we'll be trying to perform at least ONE ACT that embodies that virtue/faction. It doesn't have to be fancy; just something in everyday life, something we might not usually do. Then, each Friday, we'll all blog about our act.
THE GOAL:
TO SPREAD THE DIVERGENT LOVE–and maybe find out a little something about ourselves in the process. Tell your friends, get them involved—the more, the merrier!! If you plan to join us, leave a link in the comments section each week, and I'll make sure to add them to the bottom of the posts.
And, in honor of the main character Tris's upbringing, our kick-off virtue is…..
WEEK ONE: ABNEGATION!
According to the Divergent fansite, Abnegation means:
To refuse or deny oneself (some rights, conveniences, etc.); reject, renounce.
To relinquish, give up
Basically, Veronica says the faction is about selflessness; stripping unnecessary things from life in order to help people forget themselves and do away with vanity, greed, and envy.
So, this week–GO FORTH! Step outside of your "you" zone and perform your selfless act in the wild. If you like, tweet about your trials and tribulations with an #abnegation hashtag. Then, on Friday, blog about your experience and share your Abnegation-ness with the rest of us!
(Pssst! If you haven't read DIVERGENT yet, you can still join us. Plus, what are you waiting for? DIVERGENT is available at Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and IndieBound)
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May 2, 2011
Prom do-overs–would you change YOUR dress?
It's that season again, and guess what? I have prom on the brain.
I love looking at prom dresses. I can't help it; it's a sickness. A time-gobbling, taffeta-ogling sickness.
In fact, some of you might remember one of my prom-related tweets from last week:
(In case you're wondering: tweeps voted almost unanimously for the cute-yet-short prom dress. Awesome undies, for the win!)
Then I asked this question:
Which made me wonder…if I could do senior prom all over again, would I change my dress?
Maybe. See, for my senior prom, I went all out, and chose something very ball-gown-esque. And while I really liked it, I kind of wish I'd chosen something a little more daring. Not slits and cutouts and oh-my-god, will-or-won't-her-boobs-stay-covered? daring, but, you know, more…visually interesting. I mean, you can only get away with those crazy dresses for so long.
Below is a photo from my senior prom, in what I dubbed my "Grecian Virgin look." Yes, that is baby's breath in my hair, and those are elbow length white satin gloves. Don't judge:

My hair. MY HAIR!
And here's a better view of THE GLOVES:

And still...MY HAIR!!
If I had a dress do-over? I'd like to think I'd chose something like one of these:

Betsey Johnson = AWESOMESAUCE

More Betsey!

Jovani
Or, if I just HAD to have that floor length gown, this (and look, you could even sneak an EXTRA prom date in under your skirt!):
Also, this dress really has nothing to do with anything, but OMG, isn't it gorgeous?
So, what about you? Did you love your prom dress, or would you chose a dress do-over? Or, if you're just getting ready for prom now—how do you feel about your dress?
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March 31, 2011
Write Hope: Kidlit Auction of Awesomeness
Over at Write Hope, there's an auction going on, featuring all things Kidlit. Proceeds go to Save the Children for disaster relief in Japan.
The four wonderful ladies putting this on are all writers: Rachael Harrie, Amanda Milner, Luna and Marieke.
There are tons of writing related goodies up for grabs, including ARCS, signed books, critiques, phone chats with agents, etc. My lovely agent Taylor Martindale and I donated a package that went up for bids today–a full manuscript and query critique by me, and a full manuscript read by her. And tomorrow, I'm donating an ARC of the amazing IMAGINARY GIRLS by Nova Ren Sum, who has graciously volunteered to sign it!
Buying an auction item is the ultimate win/win–you get something great, and your money goes to a good cause! So, please, stop by Write Hope, bid on one of the auction items, and avoid a pesky case of buyer's remorse–so you don't end up like this guy:

Baby Got Crab.
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March 29, 2011
Interview with author Liz Michalski and Evenfall Giveaway!
I'm so excited to share an interview with debut author Liz Michalski, whose adult novel EVENFALL just recently hit stores!. Read through the interview, then comment to win a free copy of Liz's book!
Here's the EVENFALL cover:
Isn't it gorgeous? And here's the book description:
In life, Frank could've had any woman he wanted.
In death, he'll try to win back the one that mattered…
Frank Wildermuth always regretted a mistake he made as a teenager: choosing Clara Murphy over her sister Gert. And like a true Murphy woman, Gert got on with her life, never admitting to heartbreak. Not even now, decades later, with Frank dead-dead, that is, but not quite gone. Now, Frank's niece, Andie Murphy, is back in town to settle his estate, and she sees that things have changed in Hartman, Connecticut. Aunt Gert still drives her crazy, but Cort, the wide-eyed farmboy she used to babysit, is all grown up-with a whole new definition for the word "sleepover." Even freakier are the whispers. Either Andie's losing her mind, or something she can't see is calling out to her-something that insists on putting right the past.
Now for the interview!
D: Evenfall is written from three points of view: Aunt Gert's, Andie's, and Frank. Did you know going into this story that you'd be using multiple perspectives, and can you tell us some of the difficulties associated with that?
L: I knew early on that Frank would tell his story in the first person but that he wasn't omniscient — there were too many gaps in the way his story came to me for him to 'know' everything. Originally I had Gert in first person as well, but her voice was so strong that way I felt it would take over the book and overpower everyone else. With Gert in third person, it made sense to have Andie tell her story from that perspective too.
The most difficult part, for me, was choosing which characters to leave out. I toyed with having two other perspectives in the book — that of Clara and Cort – but I felt five would be too unwieldy for me to manage. Since Clara's choices truly influence the arc of the book, I tried hard to let her tell her story through the other characters, and to make her sympathetic through them as well.
D: Was Evenfall your first book, or do you have some hiding in the trunk, clamoring to get out?
L: In my twenties I did write another novel. I sent it out to one agent, who rejected it with a very nice personalized note. I put it away after that. : ) I think, looking back, that it really never would have found a home, but it was a very good learning experience.
D: A ghost plays a prominent role in your novel. Do you believe in ghosts?
L: I would like very much to believe in ghosts, especially benevolent ghosts like Frank. I have had very, very vivid dreams featuring people I love who have passed on, and would like to believe that they aren't only the product of my subconscious, but am not quite convinced.
D: Since you know I'm a dog nut, you won't be surprised that I glomped onto the dog in your story, Nina. Did you base Nina on characteristics of your own dogs?
L: The story of Nina is actually one of the 'secret pages' on my website. (For people who come to a book reading or send me a picture of themselves with my book, I'm giving out codes that let them access those pages and learn more about the backstory of Evenfall.) But all of my dogs have been big-hearted, protective beasts.
D: Name the naughtiest thing one of your own dogs has done:
L: Oh, the list is long and illustrious, and I'm not sure there can be just one thing. (Debra: I know the feeling) It has to be a toss-up between the time one dog concussed me (accidentally, of course) and the time the same dog decided that a horse counted as 'big game' and attempted to take said horse down by the neck. The counter-surfing incidents in which they ate entire cakes, loaves of bread, a 120 count bag of Dum-Dum lollipops (just the wrapper and candy — they spit out the sticks) and an entire bucket of Kentucky Fried Chicken aren't even in the same league.
(While Liz didn't have photos of her dogs caught in the act, I just happened to have a few of my Fergie–aka: The Ferganator. In honor of naughty dogs everywhere):

Sprinklers Taste Just Like Chicken

So do toothbrushes.....

What this backyard needs is more cardboard pieces....
D: Nina seems to have an awareness of what's going on above-and-beyond what many would attribute to a dog. Do you believe dogs understand and sense more than we realize? Do you have any personal examples?
L: I do believe dogs are often more aware than we give them credit for. My current pup, Harley, is particularly sensitive to moods. There have been times when I've found him sticking especially close to me, and when I've thought about it I've realized I'm particularly stressed that day.

Harley kicking up his heels
Another dog I had loved absolutely everyone, and barked maybe 10 times in his life. I was hiking in the woods one day with my daughter and that dog, who had rambled off on his own. All of a sudden he bounded down from a hill, got directly in front of my daughter and started to growl. A moment later a very unsavory gentleman emerged from the woods. He'd been hiking on a separate path and started to cut across the uncleared woods toward us. When he saw the dog, he immediately got back on his own path and disappeared.
D: I know you're writing another book. Can you tell us a bit about it, and also—will there be dogs in that one, too?
L: My next book is about a family in which in every generation, one daughter is born with the power to make things disappear — to literally wish them away. Those wishes don't always work out as planned, however.
Like Evenfall, this book has very strong ties to the natural environment. And there are dogs — a small furry pack of them.
D: Describe your ideal writing environment:
L: My ideal writing environment would have shelves lined with the colorful Waldorf toys my children are outgrowing, and maybe a few fish bowls with beta fish in them. It would have white walls, but plum, hydrangea blue, raspberry, and canary yellow chairs and throw pillows, and a beautiful pine desk.
My most productive writing environment is an unheated beach cottage with no television and no internet connection and no phone. I go there in March, when it is still quite chilly, and walk in the morning to warm up. Then I write for four hours, break for lunch and short walk, write for a few more hours, go for a run, eat, edit, and go to bed.
D: Sweet or salty treats?
L: BOTH! Popcorn with dark chocolate, or a Snickers bar.
Thank you so much for having me on your blog!

Author Liz Michalski, photo by Elizabeth Sullivan Photography
And thank you, Liz, for stopping by!
Remember—comment to win a copy of her fabulous book! Share your favorite pet or ghost story, if you have one (but not necessary to win). Winner will be chosen this Friday, April 1st, at noon PST.
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March 15, 2011
Total Non-Blogfest Blogfest for Kirsten Hubbard's Like Mandarin and a Like Mandarin Giveaway!
This weekend, I was lucky enough to attend writer friend slash YA Highway girl Kirsten Hubbard's Like Mandarin book launch in La Jolla. Such an awesome gathering, complete with homemade iced cookies that looked like cowboy hats and Jackalope cut-outs decorating the walls. Kirsten even sported a Jackalope dress she ordered just for the occasion.
Also, I got to hang with a bunch of my fave local YA writers:
So of course I wanted to participate in the Total Non-Blogfest blogfest today to support Kirsten! In the beginning of Like Mandarin, MC Grace would have given anything to be like exotic, wild girl Mandarin.
And when I was in high school? I was like this (the blond sitting in front):
BUT
Yes, I was the kid who desperately wanted to be a rebel, but was too terrified to try. So I lived vicariously through those who did. And who symbolized rebellion better than Madonna in her early days, wearing whatever bits of ratty clothing she could throw together, writhing around on the ground in a wedding dress and thumbing her nose at the idea of being "proper," and generally giving conservative adults everywhere heart attacks?
So, I would have given anything to be THAT girl in high school: confident, unconventional, and completely unconcerned about what others thought of me.
It's okay, though. I'm still a work in progress. (Also, in the interest of complete disclosure, I could not have dealt with Madonna's hairy armpit phase AT ALL. I have this neurosis about freshly shaven pits. And enough with the over-share.)
Go, buy Like Mandarin, if you haven't already!

Must. Have.
Oh, and I'M GIVING AWAY AN EXTRA SIGNED COPY of Like Mandarin that I bought at the launch, just for the occasion! Simply tell me in the comments who YOU would have given anything to be like in high school (or WOULD give anything to be like, if you're still in high school) and I'll select a winner. Contest ends at noon this Friday, March 18th.
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March 7, 2011
Win an ARC of Chime by Franny Billingsley!
And the (very, very belated) winner (one day I promise to do these thing on time) of the Where She Went ARC (but maybe it just makes you savor the anticipation even more) by Gayle Forman (or probably you find it utterly annoying. I'll shut up now) is…..
ALEEZA!
Yay! Please email me at houndrat at yahoo dot com to claim your ARC, WOOT! I hope you enjoy it as much as I did!
Now for a quick announcement! Do you see that Goodreads button on the right? Do you? That actually LEADS TO MY BOOK! Yes, I realize it's still titled Book One, but still—IT'S MY BOOK! SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!
I can't tell you how thrilling it is to see my name next to that poor, empty rectangle featuring that poor non-title. Even the tiniest thing makes my book deal feel a little more real, you know? Some day, I might actually be 100% convinced that's it's going to happen.
Anyway, I planned to follow up that announcement by blogging about Important Things. Except, the only Important Things I can think about at the moment are asiago bagels and where I can find a sparkle cowboy hat for Kirsten Hubbard's book release this weekend. (if you know, please tell me…I'm flailing here. FLAILING.) But it's kind of hard to carry an entire blog post with those topics. Okay, that's a lie. I could totally carry an entire blog post about those topics…it just wouldn't be one you'd want to read.
So instead, I decided to embrace the easy path and give away another ARC instead. YAY!
This one is Chime by Franny Billingsley, which earned a starred review from Booklist. If you enjoy dark fantasy, this is your kind of book! Here's the blurb:
Before Briony's stepmother died, she made sure Briony blamed herself for all the family's hardships. Now Briony has worn her guilt for so long it's become a second skin. She often escapes to the swamp, where she tells stories to the Old Ones, the spirits who haunt the marshes. But only witches can see the Old Ones, and in her village, witches are sentenced to death. Briony lives in fear her secret will be found out, even as she believes she deserves the worst kind of punishment.
Then Eldric comes along with his golden lion eyes and mane of tawny hair. He's as natural as the sun, and treats her as if she's extraordinary. And everything starts to change. As many secrets as Briony has been holding, there are secrets even she doesn't know.
And here's the cover, which I totally love:
To win, follow me on Twitter, and leave a comment telling me which power you would want the most if you were a witch. Personally, I'm kind of a fan of the classic turning someone into a newt. Or maybe a banana slug. Seriously, how entertaining would that be? Well, as long as you could change them back.

I Need This Sign.
Contest ends this Friday at noon, PST and I will TRY MY BEST to notify the winner that same day. Feel free to poke me in the comments if I forget! GOOD LUCK!
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