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January 13, 2012
Friday Five -- Random Thoughts
Today's Friday Five is going to be totally random because I woke up late and have to enter the revision cave as soon as possible. So, here we go, in no particular order:
1. This is one of the best posts on the business I've seen in a long time. With what is one of my favorite quotes: "The prize in this pie-eating contest is more pie."
2. I've been reading James Scott Bell's book Revision and Self-Editing (while in the revision cave), and talking with the Boys in the Basement every night. Stephen King coined the term, but Bell goes so far as to suggest leaving little suggestions for the "Boys" to work on overnight while you sleep. I think of my "Boys" as the Untouchables -- kick-ass Treasury-types, smoking cigars and doing good. Last night they brought me a dream in which I went out to lunch with John Green. Sure, it didn't do anything for my Book 2, but it gave me a little ego-boost...
3. I hear it's snowing in parts of the US. Rumor has it that snow will come to California next week. I can't tell you how happy this makes me.
4. Viking, the imprint publishing GILT, is part of the larger Penguin Group. BORN WICKED, A debut by a Penguin sister, Jessica Spotswood, will be on shelves next month. It's a great read, with a wicked twist on history, and I'll be giving away an ARC next week (come back!). In the meantime, check out the trailer.
5. Happy Friday, everybody! I'm completely out of random, because I need to go writing a kissing scene like that one...

2. I've been reading James Scott Bell's book Revision and Self-Editing (while in the revision cave), and talking with the Boys in the Basement every night. Stephen King coined the term, but Bell goes so far as to suggest leaving little suggestions for the "Boys" to work on overnight while you sleep. I think of my "Boys" as the Untouchables -- kick-ass Treasury-types, smoking cigars and doing good. Last night they brought me a dream in which I went out to lunch with John Green. Sure, it didn't do anything for my Book 2, but it gave me a little ego-boost...
3. I hear it's snowing in parts of the US. Rumor has it that snow will come to California next week. I can't tell you how happy this makes me.
4. Viking, the imprint publishing GILT, is part of the larger Penguin Group. BORN WICKED, A debut by a Penguin sister, Jessica Spotswood, will be on shelves next month. It's a great read, with a wicked twist on history, and I'll be giving away an ARC next week (come back!). In the meantime, check out the trailer.
5. Happy Friday, everybody! I'm completely out of random, because I need to go writing a kissing scene like that one...
Published on January 13, 2012 07:09
January 11, 2012
The Gift that Keeps Giving
My husband's birthday has finally passed, so I can now talk about the amazing gifts I gave for Christmas (and his birthday).
Every year, my friend Mona Dougherty and I go up to Ashland, Oregon, to the Oregon Shakespeare Festival. Our first trips were in high school, with the Drama Club. When I returned to the US from living in England, we decided to continue the tradition. We see a play. We eat far too many (or maybe not enough) fish tacos at Agave. We talk.
And we buy photographs.
We first visited Dan Elster's booth at the artists and crafts fair along Lithia Creek three years ago. His images are so startling, you can't help but stop. A barn owl, sitting on a fence post, its right wing spread out to dry. A hummingbird taking a nip from a purple flower. A raven, standing ragged and alone on a beach.
Elster photographs nature in nature. None of his shots are staged. None of the animals are in captivity. He has spent hours, waiting for a family of foxes to come out of what he thinks is their hiding place. (A little like writing, right? Sitting, waiting for the right image to come and conquer the blank page. Only I'm probably warmer and more comfortable.)
Every year, for the past three years, we have bought photographs. In 2010, I had just signed with my agent. Mona told Dan, "Next year, we'll come back after Katy's book has sold. And she'll buy more." So I did. I bought large format photos of a peregrine falcon and a coyote for my husband. I bought smaller photographs for each of the YA Muses, choosing each image carefully for its recipient. I have a series of ravens near my desk -- one for each year we've visited Ashland.
I wish I could post a sample of Dan's work here, but that would be copyright infringement, and I would never do that to him. So you'll just have to go to the portfolio page on his website. You won't regret it.
Every year, my friend Mona Dougherty and I go up to Ashland, Oregon, to the Oregon Shakespeare Festival. Our first trips were in high school, with the Drama Club. When I returned to the US from living in England, we decided to continue the tradition. We see a play. We eat far too many (or maybe not enough) fish tacos at Agave. We talk.
And we buy photographs.
We first visited Dan Elster's booth at the artists and crafts fair along Lithia Creek three years ago. His images are so startling, you can't help but stop. A barn owl, sitting on a fence post, its right wing spread out to dry. A hummingbird taking a nip from a purple flower. A raven, standing ragged and alone on a beach.
Elster photographs nature in nature. None of his shots are staged. None of the animals are in captivity. He has spent hours, waiting for a family of foxes to come out of what he thinks is their hiding place. (A little like writing, right? Sitting, waiting for the right image to come and conquer the blank page. Only I'm probably warmer and more comfortable.)
Every year, for the past three years, we have bought photographs. In 2010, I had just signed with my agent. Mona told Dan, "Next year, we'll come back after Katy's book has sold. And she'll buy more." So I did. I bought large format photos of a peregrine falcon and a coyote for my husband. I bought smaller photographs for each of the YA Muses, choosing each image carefully for its recipient. I have a series of ravens near my desk -- one for each year we've visited Ashland.
I wish I could post a sample of Dan's work here, but that would be copyright infringement, and I would never do that to him. So you'll just have to go to the portfolio page on his website. You won't regret it.
Published on January 11, 2012 06:52
January 9, 2012
On Making Mistakes
Anyone who knows me well knows that I worked hard to make GILT as historically accurate as I could. I read books. I did as much online research of transcribed primary sources as I could. I scouted locations.
But I will always feel I didn't do enough. Because I know I made mistakes.
Let me backtrack. I wouldn't knowingly leave obvious mistakes in my manuscript before it went to print. Well, one. But the evidence of it only came to my attention after the galleys were printed and I had to let it go. However, I recently read something by Hilary Mantel (author of WOLF HALL, one of my favorite all-time novels, and probably my favorite Tudor novel ever) on historical accuracy. She said (This is not a direct quote, just the gist of it) that she would invent the thoughts in a character's head, but not the color of his wallpaper.
Whoa.
I don't know the color of my character's wallpaper. I also don't like to make mistakes, so this freaked me out a little. In the meantime, I've been doing more reading in order to add detail to Book 2 (still haven't found any wallpaper references, though.) and have discovered little details that I got wrong. Not things that are glaring, like my characters talking about texting or anything. Just little things that someone very, very familiar with the times would notice. And say, "That isn't accurate."
It kills me. I could think of all kinds of excuses (I don't have access to lots of primary sources. I'm 6,000 miles away from the British Library and the Ashmolean and the Bodleian.) and defenses (I didn't use Wikipedia as my main research source!) and qualifiers (most of my readers won't be Tudor historians). But it still kills me. Even if they're not Ph.D.s in 16th Century England, my readers deserve the best. Maybe I could have rented a place in England and spent hours (months, years) scouring primary sources. I should have known more.
But with all writing, as we move onto the next book, we realize that we could have known more with the first book. Could have done things differently. And all we can do is move forward.
And say -- I'm sorry for my mistakes. I'll try to do better next time.
But I will always feel I didn't do enough. Because I know I made mistakes.
Let me backtrack. I wouldn't knowingly leave obvious mistakes in my manuscript before it went to print. Well, one. But the evidence of it only came to my attention after the galleys were printed and I had to let it go. However, I recently read something by Hilary Mantel (author of WOLF HALL, one of my favorite all-time novels, and probably my favorite Tudor novel ever) on historical accuracy. She said (This is not a direct quote, just the gist of it) that she would invent the thoughts in a character's head, but not the color of his wallpaper.
Whoa.

It kills me. I could think of all kinds of excuses (I don't have access to lots of primary sources. I'm 6,000 miles away from the British Library and the Ashmolean and the Bodleian.) and defenses (I didn't use Wikipedia as my main research source!) and qualifiers (most of my readers won't be Tudor historians). But it still kills me. Even if they're not Ph.D.s in 16th Century England, my readers deserve the best. Maybe I could have rented a place in England and spent hours (months, years) scouring primary sources. I should have known more.
But with all writing, as we move onto the next book, we realize that we could have known more with the first book. Could have done things differently. And all we can do is move forward.
And say -- I'm sorry for my mistakes. I'll try to do better next time.
Published on January 09, 2012 07:18
January 6, 2012
Follow Friday -- Jackie Pynaert Garlick

I can't wait for the rest of the world to see them.
Let me amend that, I can't wait to see them myself. Because I've seen snippets, but never read the full deal (though I'm waiting to beta read her most recent).
I know Jackie through a round-about route -- SCBWI, the Nevada Mentorship Program, Bret Ballou and Veronica Rossi. We've shared a room at national conferences, shared more than one meal and several confidences. She sat beside me while I made a fool of myself rocking out to Billie Joe Armstrong during the Broadway stage production of American Idiot. I feel very lucky to count her as a friend.
Now, not only is Jackie a great friend and a brilliant writer, she's planner and coordinator for one of the most intriguing children's literature conferences in North America. The Niagara SCBWI conference is small, intimate, and pulls in some of the biggest names in the industry (this year: Tracey Adams and Nancy Conescu).
And she's Canadian, eh?
Best of all, I get to see Jackie tomorrow at Veronica Rossi's book launch.
You can read Jackie's blog.
You can follow her on Twitter.
But it's best to get to know her personally. I'll introduce you sometime.
Published on January 06, 2012 04:00
January 4, 2012
Why I Love My Local Library
As a soon-to-be-published author, I know I should be encouraging all of you to go out and buy books. And I, myself, should be supporting my fellow writers by contributing to their royalties. (And now that I'll actually be earning, I can.) But patronizing your library isn't about not buying books. It's about loving books. And so much more. So here is my shortlist of why I love my local library.
1. Lest this post end up being completely selfish, let me begin by saying that my library makes unfathomably generous contributions to the community. Literacy programs. Free Internet and computer access. Children's programs. Activities. Shelter. Books. Let's not forget the books, magazines, music CDs, DVDs, audiobooks, research materials, etc., etc., etc.
2. Libraries are great for children. I've been taking mine since they were chewing on board books. The library is where we discovered Harry the Dirty Dog, Ed Young's Seven Blind Mice and then graduated to every single Magic Tree House ever written. My library has story time and summer reading programs. Several times a year they do educational shows – we've been to see a program on wolf rescue twice. With real wolves. Gorgeous.
3. Research. You knew I would get here eventually, right? When I wasn't sure if I could write an entire book on Catherine Howard, I went to the library. And through interlibrary loan, I got a fabulous, 40-year-old biography of Henry's fifth queen that had been sitting quietly in a sister library in the sleepy little town of Colusa, California. It still contained an old-fashioned check-out stamp card with stamps from the 70s on it. How the book got to Colusa, I don't know. But I'm glad it did. And I'm very thankful for interlibrary loan. (The book, by Lacey Baldwin Smith, has just been revised and reprinted, and I now own a copy, but I read the one from Colusa twice.)
4. Libraries buy books. Hardcover and paperback. Sometimes multiple copies. And not just mine (I hope they buy mine!) My local chain bookstore carries a seemingly infinite variety of paranormal YA. But little-to-no historical. And minimal contemporary. I do my browsing at the library.
5. Librarians. Not only can they help you find the book you want, they can help you find the book you didn't know you wanted. They know who just won the Printz and who wrote "that book about the vampire." They're friendly. Helpful. Knowledgeable. And cool.
Originally posted on the YAMuses blog, December 2010. But I still feel exactly the same.
1. Lest this post end up being completely selfish, let me begin by saying that my library makes unfathomably generous contributions to the community. Literacy programs. Free Internet and computer access. Children's programs. Activities. Shelter. Books. Let's not forget the books, magazines, music CDs, DVDs, audiobooks, research materials, etc., etc., etc.
2. Libraries are great for children. I've been taking mine since they were chewing on board books. The library is where we discovered Harry the Dirty Dog, Ed Young's Seven Blind Mice and then graduated to every single Magic Tree House ever written. My library has story time and summer reading programs. Several times a year they do educational shows – we've been to see a program on wolf rescue twice. With real wolves. Gorgeous.
3. Research. You knew I would get here eventually, right? When I wasn't sure if I could write an entire book on Catherine Howard, I went to the library. And through interlibrary loan, I got a fabulous, 40-year-old biography of Henry's fifth queen that had been sitting quietly in a sister library in the sleepy little town of Colusa, California. It still contained an old-fashioned check-out stamp card with stamps from the 70s on it. How the book got to Colusa, I don't know. But I'm glad it did. And I'm very thankful for interlibrary loan. (The book, by Lacey Baldwin Smith, has just been revised and reprinted, and I now own a copy, but I read the one from Colusa twice.)
4. Libraries buy books. Hardcover and paperback. Sometimes multiple copies. And not just mine (I hope they buy mine!) My local chain bookstore carries a seemingly infinite variety of paranormal YA. But little-to-no historical. And minimal contemporary. I do my browsing at the library.
5. Librarians. Not only can they help you find the book you want, they can help you find the book you didn't know you wanted. They know who just won the Printz and who wrote "that book about the vampire." They're friendly. Helpful. Knowledgeable. And cool.
Originally posted on the YAMuses blog, December 2010. But I still feel exactly the same.
Published on January 04, 2012 07:21
January 2, 2012
Confessions (and a Challenge)
I don't do resolutions -- at least I try not to. Number one, they make me feel guilty. And I can generally find enough stuff to feel guilty about without adding more. Number two, any day is a good day to change behaviour and bad habits -- not just the first of the year. Or so I keep telling myself.
So instead of my resolutions, I'm going to share with you two confessions. And offer a challenge. Ready?
Confession # 1. I read NEVER EIGHTEEN by my 2k12 Classmate, Megan Bostic, a long time ago. As soon as it appeared on Net Galley, I sent in a request. I love contemporary YA (I know, crazy, because I write historical stuff) and this book had all the elements -- love, fear, friendship, tragedy. There's nothing I like better than being so moved by a novel that I cry. Not only this, but it's set in the Pacific Northwest, an area I haunted on and off for a year in my 20's, and still feel an enormous connection with. Reading the book was like revisiting my youth. The confession part is, that I haven't said a word about it until now. Mostly because if I'd blogged about it back in May, it wouldn't have that much impact. However, now the book will be out in two weeks (January 17). And I'm hoping it will make a huge impact.
You see, it's the story of a boy, Austin Parker, who is doing what he can to change the lives of the people he loves. He can't do much -- he doesn't have time. But he does what he can. He reaches out. And sometimes, this is the most any of us can do.
Which brings us to Confession #2. Until this past holiday season, I hadn't sent Christmas cards in nine years. Nine years. I have friends in many diverse places. And, unfortunately, I've lost touch with many of them (not everyone can be found on Facebook). But I want to be in contact with them. So this past year, I had to try. Thanks to Megan and Austin Parker.
It's hard to reach out into the void, not knowing if you're going to connect. I knew I'd lost some people forever. People move. And move on. I've already got one letter back -- Return to Sender. But I also received a very sweet e-mail from an address in England telling me that the people I sent the letter to had moved. That letter may never have been returned, and it felt good knowing that someone had the decency to let me know that I had it wrong. So I could start another search.
Megan has kindly allowed me to participate in her Project Pass It On. Not only is this a way to get the word out on her book, it's also a way to encourage readers to connect with others. Check out the web page. It's wonderful. And think of ways you can connect.
Now I just need to find the perfect place to pass my copy on.
So instead of my resolutions, I'm going to share with you two confessions. And offer a challenge. Ready?

Confession # 1. I read NEVER EIGHTEEN by my 2k12 Classmate, Megan Bostic, a long time ago. As soon as it appeared on Net Galley, I sent in a request. I love contemporary YA (I know, crazy, because I write historical stuff) and this book had all the elements -- love, fear, friendship, tragedy. There's nothing I like better than being so moved by a novel that I cry. Not only this, but it's set in the Pacific Northwest, an area I haunted on and off for a year in my 20's, and still feel an enormous connection with. Reading the book was like revisiting my youth. The confession part is, that I haven't said a word about it until now. Mostly because if I'd blogged about it back in May, it wouldn't have that much impact. However, now the book will be out in two weeks (January 17). And I'm hoping it will make a huge impact.
You see, it's the story of a boy, Austin Parker, who is doing what he can to change the lives of the people he loves. He can't do much -- he doesn't have time. But he does what he can. He reaches out. And sometimes, this is the most any of us can do.
Which brings us to Confession #2. Until this past holiday season, I hadn't sent Christmas cards in nine years. Nine years. I have friends in many diverse places. And, unfortunately, I've lost touch with many of them (not everyone can be found on Facebook). But I want to be in contact with them. So this past year, I had to try. Thanks to Megan and Austin Parker.
It's hard to reach out into the void, not knowing if you're going to connect. I knew I'd lost some people forever. People move. And move on. I've already got one letter back -- Return to Sender. But I also received a very sweet e-mail from an address in England telling me that the people I sent the letter to had moved. That letter may never have been returned, and it felt good knowing that someone had the decency to let me know that I had it wrong. So I could start another search.
Megan has kindly allowed me to participate in her Project Pass It On. Not only is this a way to get the word out on her book, it's also a way to encourage readers to connect with others. Check out the web page. It's wonderful. And think of ways you can connect.
Now I just need to find the perfect place to pass my copy on.
Published on January 02, 2012 08:16
December 30, 2011
Friday Five -- My Favorite Books of 2011
I hesitate to say the "Best" books of 2011, because the word is so subjective. When thinking of "best" I encounter a difficulty choosing between a story I adore, a concept that is truly unique and simply stellar writing. Plus I know I've read too few books really to be able to suggest that I know which books of 2011 were the "best".
Caveat over. On to the books! In no particular order.
1. Between Shades of Gray by Ruta Sepetys. I blogged about this book back in June over on the YA Muses. And I can't stop thinking about it. It covers a segment of history about which I knew nothing, follows the story of a strong and compelling protagonist and tells a story of such poignance and power that it lingers many months in the mind.
2. Lola and the Boy Next Door by Stephanie Perkins. If you haven't read Anna and the French Kiss or its companion/follow-up, Lola, walk away now and go find a copy. Feel-good romance and detailed characters you feel you know. I was so glad to see Anna and St. Clair in Lola, but equally glad that it really told Lola's tale. She's a character you need to meet.
3. Stupid Fast by Geoff Herbach. I wasn't sure I would like this book at first, but it ended up being another one that seized me and wouldn't let go. An somewhat unreliable narrator who knows he is unreliable but who the reader can look past and see the truth before the character himself can. So cleverly done, I need to read it again to see how Herbach did it.
4. Out of Shadows by Jason Wallace. I love boarding school books. And this one is set in the 80's (my favorite decade? No, I guess the 90's were better) and in Zimbabwe. I felt attachment to this novel before I even read it, and since reading it, I feel I know Zimbabwe better. History -- only 30 years old -- that few people know or understand brought to life in a novel that could be contemporary.
5. What Happened to Goodbye by Sarah Dessen. I love Dessen's novels, and this one did not disappoint. Beautifully rendered, with fully-developed characters each with quirks and faults and truth.
There are many more books out there that deserve to be on this list. And I'm always on the lookout for recommendations from others! Let me know what you've read this year, what's surprising, what made you cry, what changed you. And, of course, what you're looking forward to next year!
5.
Caveat over. On to the books! In no particular order.

2. Lola and the Boy Next Door by Stephanie Perkins. If you haven't read Anna and the French Kiss or its companion/follow-up, Lola, walk away now and go find a copy. Feel-good romance and detailed characters you feel you know. I was so glad to see Anna and St. Clair in Lola, but equally glad that it really told Lola's tale. She's a character you need to meet.
3. Stupid Fast by Geoff Herbach. I wasn't sure I would like this book at first, but it ended up being another one that seized me and wouldn't let go. An somewhat unreliable narrator who knows he is unreliable but who the reader can look past and see the truth before the character himself can. So cleverly done, I need to read it again to see how Herbach did it.

4. Out of Shadows by Jason Wallace. I love boarding school books. And this one is set in the 80's (my favorite decade? No, I guess the 90's were better) and in Zimbabwe. I felt attachment to this novel before I even read it, and since reading it, I feel I know Zimbabwe better. History -- only 30 years old -- that few people know or understand brought to life in a novel that could be contemporary.
5. What Happened to Goodbye by Sarah Dessen. I love Dessen's novels, and this one did not disappoint. Beautifully rendered, with fully-developed characters each with quirks and faults and truth.
There are many more books out there that deserve to be on this list. And I'm always on the lookout for recommendations from others! Let me know what you've read this year, what's surprising, what made you cry, what changed you. And, of course, what you're looking forward to next year!
5.
Published on December 30, 2011 04:00
December 28, 2011
Best. Present. Ever.
I have a very dear friend -- we've known each other since we were fifteen -- who is always a breath of light and happiness when I see her. We tend to fall into the same kind of chat and banter that we always have, even though we only see each other a couple of times a year. We catch up -- "How's your dad?" "What are your kids up to?"and then we just are.
Wilathi is an artist, a gardener, a healer and a philosopher. She is one of those people you love to know. And she is also one of those people who treasures her friends and family. I'm glad to be one of them.
Yesterday, Wil gave me a holiday gift. When she handed me the square-framed, lensless glasses, I didn't get it at first. She had decorated the temples and the rims, but the original rosy color shone through. I put them on, asked, "Do these make me look more intelligent?"
And then I got it.
In our twenties, Wil delightedly accepted the fact that she sees the world through rose-colored glasses. She wants to be the optimist. The Pollyana. The one who sees the good in the world. "There's already so much negativity," she says. "So much darkness. Why shouldn't we put these on to help us remember that there is also positivity, goodness and light?"
So I have my rose-colored glasses. When things seem to be too much for me, when the fact of my father's illness or the snarky reviews or the weight of my responsibilities get to me, I can put them on, and remember the good, the positive and the light. And Wil.
Wilathi is an artist, a gardener, a healer and a philosopher. She is one of those people you love to know. And she is also one of those people who treasures her friends and family. I'm glad to be one of them.
Yesterday, Wil gave me a holiday gift. When she handed me the square-framed, lensless glasses, I didn't get it at first. She had decorated the temples and the rims, but the original rosy color shone through. I put them on, asked, "Do these make me look more intelligent?"
And then I got it.

In our twenties, Wil delightedly accepted the fact that she sees the world through rose-colored glasses. She wants to be the optimist. The Pollyana. The one who sees the good in the world. "There's already so much negativity," she says. "So much darkness. Why shouldn't we put these on to help us remember that there is also positivity, goodness and light?"
So I have my rose-colored glasses. When things seem to be too much for me, when the fact of my father's illness or the snarky reviews or the weight of my responsibilities get to me, I can put them on, and remember the good, the positive and the light. And Wil.
Published on December 28, 2011 04:00
December 26, 2011
Merry Christmas
Published on December 26, 2011 04:00
December 23, 2011
Follow Friday -- Santa
'Tis the Season, right?
Several Christmases ago, I heard a story on NPR about how back in the dark ages, before Internet, a Colorado Springs Sears and Roebuck printed an add for kids to call Santa. Unfortunately, the number was misprinted, and kids were directed to CONAD (the Continental Air Defense Command). But the confusion gave the commander-in-chief a brilliant idea. They track airplanes, right? And other flying objects? Why not Santa?
So from then on, they have. And you can, too. Through the present day North American Aerospace Defense Command.
Check out NORAD tracks Santa
And @noradsanta on Twitter.
Where is Santa right now? Go find him. And tell your kids.
Several Christmases ago, I heard a story on NPR about how back in the dark ages, before Internet, a Colorado Springs Sears and Roebuck printed an add for kids to call Santa. Unfortunately, the number was misprinted, and kids were directed to CONAD (the Continental Air Defense Command). But the confusion gave the commander-in-chief a brilliant idea. They track airplanes, right? And other flying objects? Why not Santa?
So from then on, they have. And you can, too. Through the present day North American Aerospace Defense Command.
Check out NORAD tracks Santa
And @noradsanta on Twitter.
Where is Santa right now? Go find him. And tell your kids.
Published on December 23, 2011 04:00