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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Rabbet

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Rabbet: noun - rectangular channel cut on the edge, face, of a piece of wood, stone, etc., usually to take the edge or tongue of another piece, beam fixed so it causes the rebounding of a steam hammer. verb – to join or fix using a rabbet or rabbets.
'Dorothy formed the rabbet and its matching tongue so accurately that the joined wooden structure held without the need of glue.'
'You'll need to rabbet that more precisely, Fred, if it's going to stand any chance of making a secure joint.'

Editing Slowly Progressing

Image via WikipediaEvents, happenings, and the sheer fact of life, seem to be combining to slow down this process I am in such a hurry to complete.
As I read aloud to perform the edit, and we live in a bungalow, I don't feel it's fair for me to do so whilst others are asleep. Daughter was up late, partying last night, and we were therefore also late in bed. So I had to wait until both were awake before I could begin. As it happens, I decided to work on a short story and did 2,000 words of that before there were stirrings from the bedrooms. After breakfast, it became clear we must recycle some of the stuff that was starting to take over the garage, so the cardboard and glass was disposed of at the local facility. Then, Sunday is our usual time for a walk in the country, so a 3 mile brisk excursion took us up to lunch. After the food, I managed another chapter, replied to several emails, finished reading my writing magazines (including The Author, which I received on Saturday, along with my membership of the Society of Authors).
Valerie reminded me we'd decided we would go to see The King's Speech this weekend and we had to travel to the nearby city of Hull to do that (25 miles away). A worthwhile trip to see a very good film: I can see why it won the awards it was given.
Now it's a little late to do any more, so, with chapter 49, page 468, awaiting, I shall call it a day. Tomorrow night is dancing, of course, so it'll be Tuesday before I get more done.

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: QED

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QED:  abbreviation – in particle physics; quantum electrodynamics; Latin Quod erat demonstrandum: which was to be demonstrated, but often - as has been demonstrated.
'As Miriam surveyed the devastation left by the teenagers who'd partied in her parents' absence, she bridled at Gordon's smug expression that reminded her he'd told her what would happen, and, when he smiled, shrugged and mouthed "QED, my dear.", she picked up an empty wine bottle and demonstrated how hard it was against his skull.'

Some Free Books & 50% Discount off Another

For all those who have been curious about my work but been reluctant to 'risk' their money by making a purchase, here's a chance, for one week only, to obtain two books without cost and the novel at half price. Interested?
Read on.
The offers apply to eBooks. Okay, I know, you don't have an eReader. This is no problem. You can read eBooks on your PC or Mac as PDF documents, or, if you prefer you can visit the Amazon sites and download free software to allow you to download Kindle books and read them on your PC. For UK readers, the link is here.  For US and the rest of the world, try here.
Of course, if you have an eReader, you can read it with ease on that, whatever make it is, as the Smashwords site supports all the eReader formats.
To get a copy of my own speculative fiction anthology, Ten Tales for Tomorrow, free, please follow this link.

For a free copy of the writing group anthology I edited, A Sackful of Shorts, please follow this link.


And to get your hands on a half price copy of my romantic thriller, Breaking Faith, please use this link.

You'll have to be quick to take advantage of this offer, as it lasts only one week, starting today.

Having recently invested in a Kindle for myself, I'm going to post a piece about the different experiences to be had from reading from paper and electronic devices later this week.

Editing in Progress

Image via WikipediaTonight's television seduced me with promises of features about books. So, two hours of goggle-box watching have shown me that best sellers are not literary novels, which came as a great surprise, of course. I've also learned that literary novels are necessarily obscure, plotless and rarely linear in structure; something else that shocked me to the core. But I'm being unfair. It was interesting to watch a presenter steeped in literary works take a voyage of discovery around the world of best selling books and realise that, actually, some of these were not only very well written but actually had something interesting and enlightening to say about the human condition. The false premise for the snobbery in the world of 'literature' exposed for all to see. And, in watching the piece on the next generation of British literary novelists, I found stimulus toward the idea of actually writing such a volume. For fun? For recognition? No, simply because I'd like to see whether it's something I can do.
However, I digress.
The edit continues. This afternoon saw me complete 2 chapters, so I'm now ready to start chapter 48, page 457.  The two chapters, in common with those preceding them, have needed little alteration. Of course, this is not the first edit; I've read and visited the MS at least four times previously. But this is supposed to be the final before I present the piece to professional eyes for their scrutiny.
Also, today, I've updated the competition page of this blog. This is a task that takes longer than the result might suggest. If you're interested in entering writing competitions, have a look at the tab above and see if there's anything there that takes your fancy. I try to keep it up to date, but it's by no means comprehensive and the sites I include on the page will take you to many more contests, if you care to do a bit of surfing there.

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Pacesetter

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Pacesetter: noun - someone who sets a pace, trend, or fashion; the leader in a particular field.
'Elvis was considered by some as a pacesetter, leading trends in fashion as well as music and dance styles.'

On With the Edit, in Spite of the Kindle.

Image via WikipediaFinally, the laptop and PC are in synch and everything appears to be working as it should. But, this morning, my Kindle arrived. This was a surprise, as I ordered it only yesterday afternoon and opted for the free delivery option, which is supposed to take 3 - 5 days. Needless to say, I spent some time having a play and downloading some books to read. Of course, this means that the edit was once more delayed. However, I did manage another couple of chapters, so I'm now on chapter 46, page 439, and all continues to go well.
Even the spreadsheet that shows the timeline has required little alteration. So, I'm pretty pleased with the progress so far.
Now, having just taken up the Kindle after it has had a software update, I discover that it no longer wants to connect to my Wi-Fi, even though it was happy to do so before. I've entered the password about four times and it simply doesn't want to make the connection. It doesn't appear to be the password that's at fault, so I'll leave it until tomorrow and hope it feels more co-operative then. But I am pretty impressed with it as a reading device. How it compares to a paper book I will leave for the moment as I plan to do a post on that very topic in a short while.
Tomorrow, all things being equal, should see me editing a few more chapters. That's certainly my intention.
And now, at a little before 22.00 hours here in UK, I'm going to join my wife on the settee and watch some telly, relax and drink a spot of red wine.

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Oak

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Oak: noun – A tree of the genus Quercus, with acorns and lobed leaves; common oak, English oak, pedunculate oak, sessile oak; timber of the oak; wooden outer door, usu. of university rooms; in some Bible translations, the terebinth tree; leaves of the tree worn as a wreath; a shade of brown; flavour or aroma given to wine from oak casks; something made of the wood.
'It's said that the English oak, used as timber for ships of the fleet, made England into the mighty nation it was in days of empire; whether that was a good or a bad thing, depends on your point of view, of course.'

The Edit Continues

Image via WikipediaSo; the last few days have been busy, but in a manner that didn't exactly enhance the edit.
My daughter is studying for A levels and my wife was using her PC. The call on the computer was becoming too difficult, so we bought an Acer Laptop for my wife to use in the sitting room whilst my daughter continues with her studies in her bedroom. Of course, the laptop will also serve me well by being available for my writing on the summer days when I take my wife to her bowls matches; I can write under the sun.
Because the laptop was running Windows 7, and needed MS Office fitting, version 2010 made sense, I also had to upgrade my PC to match. In between the purchase and the finalisation of the set-up, I've had to be at my day job. So, today, I finally completed the process so that the laptop runs my wife's files and she can print wirelessly from my printer.
Those of you who have been following this particular thread on my blog will know I thought I'd reached a point in the adult fantasy where I could end the first book. Reflection has meant that I realise this is not the case. I need to add a few more chapters before I can properly conclude all three story threads.
Today, after all the other jobs, I managed one further chapter. Now on chapter 45, page 429. And still going well. Using the new OS and the updated Word program has made things a little less simple than they were, but I guess I'll soon get used to the new systems.
Tomorrow, given a bit of luck, I'll get a few more chapters done.

Author Interview with Elena Dorothy Bowman

Elena Dorothy Bowman, an Honors graduate of Fitchburg State University earned her BS Degree in Engineering and Management. She has held the offices of State President, Treasurer, and Letters Chairperson of the Massachusetts Chapter of the National League of American Pen Women and is currently President of the Merrimack Valley Branch. Her published science-fiction mystery/romance novel Sarah's Landing-I, won the coveted APA award for its audio book. Credits include: By-Line Magazine, Parentguide Magazine, regional newspapers, and organizational newsletters. She has co-written and co-produced a Musical Workshop Production, and her prize winning short story was published in The Lowell Sun. A Software Engineer turned author, she has completed ten full-length fiction novels, 3 non-fiction books, thirty-five short stories, and has recently published her latest novel, a Historical Romance Mystery. The mother of four, Elena resides in Chelmsford, Massachusetts with her husband James, her four children and her daughter's three cats.
SA:  Tell us about Catherine's Ring in a few sentences.
EDB:   Catherine's Ring is a Historical Romance Novel with a bit of mystery to it: -- In a small fictional town in the northeast corner of Massachusetts a mysterious package from out of the past had the residents buzzing.  The original recipient had long since passed, and the sender of the package had died at sea in a tragedy that stunned the world. Where had this package been all these years, and why, even if it was postmarked the year it was sent, was it never delivered? When the present day recipient received the mysterious package, he wondered if he opened it, would he be opening a Pandora's Box. But, neither he nor his wife were aware that his thoughts would ring true, or the strange events and entities that would envelop his family and the family of the original sender. 
SA:     How did you come to write this particular book?EDB:  Well, that's difficult to answer, because I'm not sure why this particular novel came into being.  I know the reasons for writing my other novels and series, but for this one…I guess a thought that crossed my mind, or an incident I heard about triggered my creative energy and brought this one to fruition.  What can I say? All I can tell you is that this one came from out of the blue.  SA: If you have a favourite character in your novel, why that particular one?
      EDB:  In this particular novel, it is Catherine. Even though she died at an early age, her spirit remained throughout the novel and had an impact on everyone in it.
SA: Where and when is your novel set and why did you make these specific choices?
EDB:  My novel is set in a small town in the northeast corner of Massachusetts in present time. But there are flashbacks to the 19th century, to this town and to an ancient Village in the East Indies. It also includes a visit or two in present time to a place in Britain because the characters involved in the story stem from these time periods and places.
SA: How can people buy your books?EDB: All of my novels are on Amazon.com in ebook, Kindle and Print Format and on Barnes and Noble in ebooks and Nook formats.      The Sarah's Landing Series: Consists of Four Science Fiction Novels Contact – Book I
The Telepaths of Theon – Book 2
The Barbarians – Book 3
Genesis – Book 4
The Legacy Series: Consists of Three Romance, Mystery, Paranormal Novels The House on The Bluff – Book 1
The Gatekeeper's Realm – Book 2
Adams Point – Book 3
Four stand alone novels are: 1. The Odyssey – Space Fantasy Novel
2.  Time-Rift – Science Fiction
3. The Imposter – based on a true story is only in ebook and nook formats…this one has not yet been posted on Amazon.com.
4. Catherine's Ring – Historical, Romance, Mystery – ebook and Kindle Formats. The print edition of this novel will be released sometime this year.
SA:     What qualities make a successful writer?
EDB:  Perseverance, believing in yourself and in your work. Being able to accept criticism in the way it was intended and to use that criticism to the best of your ability to improve your work.
SA:  What is your working method?
EDB:  I don't plan or use an outline.  I discovered to my dismay that neither I nor my characters can follow an outline to any degree. Therefore, I do what comes more natural to me, let the words flow and see where they take me.  Sometimes, I am just as surprised at the outcome as any bystander might be.
SA:  Beginning writers make many mistakes; what do you think is the most harmful?
      EDB:  Thinking that the world is waiting to read what you have written, warts and all.  Not being able to take rejections from publishers and agents thinking they are missing out on the greatest story ever told, and not paying attention to what they are attempting to tell you. 
SA:  To what extent are grammar and spelling important to a writer?
      EDB:  It's important in some respects for the author to attempt to be as accurate as one can be, to try to spell the words correctly, and to be grammatically correct as possible. But mainly it depends on the visual you are attempting to create.  Sometimes it is difficult to put into words the picture you see in your mind's eye.  You want to transfer that image to the computer screen just as you see it, and in that respect may not pay as much attention to being grammatically correct as one should.
SA:  How much revision of your MS do you do before you send it off?
      EDB: Quite a bit.  I go over my MS several times and always find an area that might need to be more defined or expanded. And there are times when I go back to the beginning because something has turned up in the later pages that needed to be introduced and/or explained earlier in the story.  A new character may suddenly appear, and to justify that appearance a word or two of explanation may be needed.
SA:  To what extent do you think genre is useful in the publishing world?
      EDB: I believe very important.  How else can publishers or readers categorize the books that come to them? Publishers have to know how to market them, and readers have to know where to go in a particular book store, even on the internet, to obtain the book or books they want.  Not everyone reads the same genre. Therefore, it is important to know where each category is being displayed in order for the sales of these books to be realized.
SA:  How do you know where to begin any given story?
      EDB:  I could say at the beginning, but that is not always so. There are times when I think I am at the beginning of a story only to learn later that I am somewhere in the middle of the story and have to backtrack. That only makes it more interesting to see where the story actually began before it reached the point where I was at. 
SA:  What sort of displacement activities keep you from actually writing?
      EDB:  It used to be my day job, but since I've retired it is the constant interruptions from the inhabitants in my home.
SA:  Do you have support, either from family and friends or a writing group?
      EDB:  Yes, I have a great deal of support from my family and my friends even when they want my time for something else.  As well as from the writing group I belong to. Actually, I am President of the Massachusetts Chapter, Merrimack Branch of the National League of American PenWomen and as a group, we do critique each other's work.
SA:  Is presentation of the MS as important as most agents and publishers suggest?
      EDB:  Very much so!  No publisher or agent wants a messy, unformatted manuscript delivered to their offices.  From what I have heard from agents, manuscripts that come to them disheveled, unformatted, stained and dirty just get tossed into the wastebasket.  The attitude is if the author isn't interested enough to deliver a presentable document to them, why should they waste their time looking at something so offensive when there are dozens of other well-prepared manuscripts waiting for their perusal?
SA:  How long does it normally take you to write a novel?
EDB:  Depends. With my first novel, it was six months.  The rest of the series took a bit longer, but I was also working full time then and writing only at night.  Also, along with co-writing a musical play during my lunch hours with another author took up a great deal  of my time as well.  As to the other novels, I would say, with all the interruptions six months about covers it. 
SA:  Who or what inspires you?
      EDB:  Everything!  A word, a thought, a look, a child's cry, an animal's antics, or even a conversation at dinner.  Things I've read, heard.  Sometimes a dream can inspire a story, a plot, or characters that make up a story.  Really, it can be anything and everything. 
SA:  If there's a single aspect to writing that really frustrates you, what is it?
      EDB:  Being interrupted when I'm on a roll, when the words are flowing so fast and furious that I'm afraid if I stop I'll lose them.  I used to write late at night when the kids were all in bed. And in the quiet evening hours, the words seem to come from out of nowhere and I tried to get as much done as possible before my husband turned the lights down on me.  His reasoning? I only had a couple of hours left for sleep before getting up and ready for work.
SA:  Is there any aspect of writing that you really enjoy?                  EDB:  Yes, I love it when the words just seem to flow from out of nowhere and seeing them appear and come alive on the computer screen.  It's as if I'm just a bystander watching these letters rapidly appearing before me and I love it.  As well as to the writing itself, being able to complete a story whether it's a short story or a novel is astounding to me.
SA:  Do you think writing is a natural gift or an acquired skill?
      EDB:  It's probably both.  To be able to string words together to tell a story to completion has to have some natural gift to it.  And yes, there are rules that must be learned in order to make a story comprehensible.
SA:  What single piece of advice would you give to writers still hoping to be published?
      EDB:  Never give up.  It only takes one person to love what you write. It can be frustrating waiting for that one person, but if your work is good, someone will see it.  There is always the self-publishing route, but in most respects, that way can be just as frustration and far more expensive.
SA:  What are you writing now?
      EDB:  At the moment, I am taking a break.  Catherine's Ring was just released by my publisher and I am now waiting for it to be released in print.
SA:  Do you have a website or a blog that readers can visit?
      EDB:  Yes.  Readers can visit my websites and read excerpts and reviews of all my novels.http://elenadb.home.comcast.net      http://www.carjan.com/edb       And my blog is: http://elenadorothybowmansbooks.blogspot.com/
SA:   Given unlimited resources, what would be your ideal writing environment?
      EDB:  Somewhere in a cottage along the ocean where I can listen to the waves crashing up against the rocks and hear the whisper of the breeze as it gently flows through the trees.
SA: Where do you actually write?
EDB:  In front on my computer which is set up against the wall in my dining room since my youngest daughter has moved back home and confiscated more room in my home than I could have dreamed possible.
Thank you for inviting me.