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September 19, 2018
Contrasting Different From vs. Different Than
Sometimes
writers struggle over which of these two phrases to use. One definitely is better than the other ��� usually.
Different from means ���to contrast two things.��� For example, if you wanted to show how one football team is strikingly dissimilar to another team, you might write The Los Angeles Rams play an offensive scheme that is different from the New York Giants.
Different than also means ���to contrast���; the two words in the phrase often are split, as in Steve took a different approach to his science project than Mike did.
Traditionally, most editors prefer different from over different than if only because the latter phrase is split. Because of this, different from is far common in writing than different than. Sometimes though, different than actually results in a shorter, more clear sentence. For example, if the above example sentence for different than were written with different from, it would read as, Steve took an approach to his science project different from that used by Mike.
I recommend using different from, but in cases where you can avoid clunky sentences, go with different than.
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September 18, 2018
8 Tips For Creating a Great Protagonist

��� Constructing your story���s main character
��� How to create a memorable protagonist
��� How NOT to create a protagonist
��� How to make your main character likable
��� Create main character that readers bond with
��� Hint at protagonist's intentions on opening page
��� Allow main character to experience crisis of faith
��� Always involve main character in story ending
��� BONUS: "First, find out what your hero wants, then just follow him!" ��� Ray Bradbury
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September 17, 2018
7 Alternative Ways to Plot Your Story

��� Ways to break story structure
��� Episodic fiction
��� Diary form
��� Search for a "macguffin"
��� Fate plot
��� Three-act structure
��� The Journey for a mythic plot
��� Frame story
��� BONUS: "If they give you ruled paper, write the other way." - Juan Ramon Jimenez
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September 16, 2018
5 Great Quotations about Passion for Writing
���Ink, a
Drug.��� - Vladimir Nabokov
���I���m only really alive when I���m writing.��� - Tennessee Williams
���It seemed to me that if I didn���t write, I would disappear.��� - Frederick Seidel
���I read the way a person might swim, to save his or her life. I wrote that way too.��� - Mary Oliver
���You need the devotion to your work that a priest of God has for his.��� - Ernest Hemingway
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September 15, 2018
Every success story begins with a dream. If you dream of...

Every success story begins with a dream. If you dream of being a professional, published author, that success story requires believing in yourself and in knowing that your efforts will lead to triumph. Read the motivational blog entry this quotation came from by clicking on the quote card.
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September 14, 2018
What You Must Know to Write an Author's Bio

��� How to write an author's bio
��� Pay attention to your author's bio pic
��� BONUS: ���The biggest threat to authors in this age is not plagiarism or poverty, it���s obscurity.���
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September 13, 2018
13 Tips on Setting up a Self-Publishing Business

��� To self-publish or not to self-publish?
��� What is an "imprint" in self-publishing?
��� You've self-published? You're a sole proprietor!
��� Do self-published writers need a business plan?
��� Elements of creating a successful book business
��� Value of creating your own publishing company
��� What to name your publishing company
��� Does a self-published author need to incorporate?
��� When to file Fictitious Business Name Statement
��� Do self-published writers need business mailbox?
��� Should you ever co-write your book?
��� Co-authors can form "general partnership"
��� Should you buy publisher's insurance?
��� BONUS: Five Great Quotations about Business of Writing
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September 12, 2018
Getting the whole answer: Comprise vs. Compose
Writers often
confuse words with closely related meanings and similar spellings. Comprise and compose are among them.
Comprise is a verb that means ���includes��� or ���consists of.��� For example, Canada comprises 10 provinces.
Compose also is a verb and means ���to make up the parts of.��� To wit, Ten provinces compose Canada.
You���ll notice that in both of the given examples, the sentences are in active voice. You can create a passive voice structure for compose through is composed of as in Canada is composed of 10 provinces. The active voice version of the verb, however, makes for tighter writing.
And while some writers use is comprised of (Canada is comprised of 10 provinces) , it���s generally frowned upon. The Chicago Manual of Style calls it poor usage while The AP Stylebook forbids the structure.
A way to remember the difference between the words is comprise follows the structure of ���whole to parts��� while compose is ���parts to whole.���
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September 11, 2018
9 Common Writing Pitfalls and How to Avoid Them

��� Laugh track
��� Countersinking
��� Summary over scene
��� Rear-view mirror descriptions
��� Verb tense shifts
��� Mime conversations
��� Perception fallacy
��� Passive voice
��� Answering-the-phone clich��
��� BONUS: "There are many rules of good writing, but the best way to find them is to be a good reader."
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September 10, 2018
12 Plot Pitfalls - And How to Rescue Your Story from Them

��� Chase out rhinoceros in the room
��� Delete authorisms
��� Crack a joke ��� but only for a good reason
��� Avoid writing concealed identity story
��� Cut here-to-there action
��� Eschew dead narrator plot gimmick
��� Clip deus ex machina ending
��� Stop dumping backfill into your story
��� Don���t end novel with cliffhanger
��� Speed up story by curtailing dramatic narration
��� Remain wary of using fast-forward
��� Destage dramatic action that slows story
��� BONUS: ���I try to leave out the parts that people skip.��� ��� Elmore Leonard
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