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8 Ways to Know Your WIP is Going Well

8. ��You have an outline for your writing project. ��Even if it is only a rough sketch with only an emotional arc written on the back of an envelope, or on a napkin. ��Having some inkling of what you want to do helps to keep writer’s block at bay.

7. Have a character questionnaire completed for at least your main character/POV character. ��This questionnaire can be as simple as the POV character’s name and physical description. ��Or, it can be a full biographical sketch complete with major childhood events and any psychological issues.

6. Have a very thick skin. ��Yes, you need to begin developing a��thick mental skin right now. ��Even if you have never completed any writing project you must protect your inner Muse by taking critique well. ��Meaning, hear what is said about your work and��not take it personally. ��You may need to put down your work for a couple of days and come back to it once you’ve digested the critique. ��You may also need to turn to a trusted writer friend and bounce the critique off of them to ensure that you received the message you think you did from the critique. ��Why is this #6? ��Because if you don’t have a supportive circle of writers around you you will need to create, or find one.

5. Create/find a writing circle. ��In these new and revolutionary days in which publishing is no longer ‘kind and gentle’ (if it ever was), your manuscript needs to be as perfect as you can make it��before an agent, or a publisher reads it. ��Meaning, your story arc is honed and sharpened to the specifically right one that works for your book, characters and setting. ��That your characters’ voices are clear and distinct from each other. ��That your theme is clearly depicted throughout the book. ��That your story has complexity with added sub-themes and/or plots that support the central theme of the book. ��A supportive writing circle, or group, can help you do just that without the cost of a structural book editor (which can be costly; sometimes as much as 20 – 40 cents per word depending upon the length of your document).

4. Be prepared and know that your first-draft is not your masterpiece. ��The first-draft is just that…your first pass at telling this story. ��Think of your story in terms of a human pregnancy — it has 3 trimesters — just like your story. ��The first one is your first-draft. ��The second trimester is the phase where you REST. ��You move entirely away from the story for as long as a month before going back to it (this applies to longer works such as a novel). ��This resting time is to give you distance from your work so you can look at it objectively. ��While you may��never be able to be completely objective giving yourself time will allow you to see things you may not have seen shortly after completing the first draft. ��The third trimester is the editing phase where YOU go over your work and add in scenes to more fully develop and flesh out characters, or the plot. ��Where you add in characters (or remove them) to make the story more realistic. ��You may need to go in and re-work your theme as you see holes you left, or red herrings that go nowhere (because you may have been rushing through the first pass as getting the story out). ��This is the stage where you identify your book’s team.

3. Every great book took a village to bring to market. ��You need an editor. ��You need a book cover designer (if you’re Indie), you need a book formatter (if you’re Indie). ��You need a fact-checker (if you’re with a publisher this generally is embedded in the several editorial passes they conduct for your book. ��[Publishers usually have 4 – 5 editors go over your book to ensure there are no typos, grammatical errors, wrong facts, etc. ��Indie authors — you’ve got to find a team that will help you have the same types of checks on your manuscript.] You need beta readers; people you trust to give you an honest opinion. ��You don’t need to know your beta readers personally but you do need to feel comfortable with them and how they process what they read. ��So, research online folks whose book reviews you appreciate. ��You should also be mindful of the types of genres your beta readers usually read. ��You ideally want beta readers who currently read the types of books you are asking them to read — unless you want someone totally outside of your genre’s opinion. ��That has value also. ��People who don’t read the genre will generally pull out things that are story/plot holes, or character flaws. ��They read the��story. ��People who read the genre you have written will do that as well (usually) but they tend to focus on things that make, or break, the genre rules. ��These beta readers will keep you��true��to the rules of engaging your readers in your work’s genre.

2. You must have discipline. ��Without a writing ethic of writing on a regular basis (at least once a day), it will be difficult to finish a project in any kind of timely manner. ��‘Nuff said.

1. You have no idea how tomorrow’s scene will turn out.�� Putting your characters’ collective backs against the wall is the best thing you can do for your readers, and therefore, your story. ��No one likes a predictable story. ��If you, the writer, cannot figure out how to get your characters out of the mess they’ve created for themselves you are doing great! ��You may need to do some research online to figure out how to pull yet another rabbit out of your writer’s toolbox. ��But hey, this is what you signed up for when you decided to become a writer!

A Very Quick #WIP Writerly Update

I am feeling a bit better about my current WIP. ��I have revised the outline and added in some additional details to flesh out the story. ��Additionally, I have become more calm about the book and the writing of it. ��No longer is there abject terror when thinking of this book! :-)

There is still a certain level of anxiety but it is manageable. ��I can see that this book is asking the writer in me to go to the next level; to mature.

So, I will not pressure myself with hardcore deadlines as I have done in the past. ��I will still follow my outline which is five pages long and over 2100 words in length. ��Funny, my outline is now��longer than the actual novel! :-)

Thank you all for your tweets, RTs, faves and comments. ��I really appreciate the support of the Twitter writing community.

All the best in your writing this week! ��And…

HAPPY #WRITERWEDNESDAY!!

My Word Counter Broke…Or, Maybe I Did.

After a torturous journey on what I should write next. ��I came to a conclusion. ��Write the thing I am running way from fastest and hardest because��that’s the one.

So, I am writing the ancestor generational book as I like to call it. ��I started it on January 1st of this year — 2015. ��I wrote some more on January 10th and haven’t touched it again until today. ��But, in the meantime, I wrote, edited and proofed a nonfiction book,��Making Dollars & Sense Work. ��So, I guess I wasn’t slacking…ahem. ��But, you and I know very well that while I was still writing that in-between book was to give me room to “work” while still running away.

My subconscious mind at play trying to run away while I stay still and…do no writing.

 

So, my first step was to review my outline and make sure I have it at the forefront of my mind what I am setting out to do. ��I have a full outline of over 6 pages. ��I know what the story arc is and the major emotional and plot points. ��But that’s the scary part, some of the emotional beats are not quite what I want them to be. ��My writing mentors, Jacqueline Lichtenberg and Jean Lorrah, have helped me to flesh out the reasoning behind the actions in the outline. ��Jean specifically said my subconscious��was feeding me all the right beats but my brain was misinterpreting the whys and the motivations making the story muddled. ��So, Jean helped me sort that out. ��However, she made it that much more scary for me to write it out. ��Why? ��Because the emotional arc is overwhelming to me as a person.

So — I ran.

But, my second mother asked me if I was writing. ��Answer: NO.

A new tweep asked what I was writing. ��I gave an evasive answer about promoting my new book just published last month.

A new comment on my About page encouraged me to��keep writing.

Are you sensing the pattern here??!?

Yes, I am slow but goodness. ��Not that slow.

This meant��write. ��The what was easy when I looked at it. ��What am I running from? ��The why was not so easy but I get it.

So, I write this AM. ��Revised what I had and added 486 words. ��Went to my counter Excel doc from my last book (finished in March, mind you).

Pasted it over, like I’ve done several times before. ��The damned thing��DOESN’T WORK. ��What the hell?!?#@_!!?

Try it again. ��Same problem. ��I enter my word count for today and it gives me a negative number! ��A message? ��Nope. ��Faulty formula. ��Which my brain cannot fix right now. ��It seems tracking my word count as diligently as I used to is not something I am��supposed to do for this book. ��I am to write it and let if flow. ��I don’t need to know how many words I’ve done. ��I don’t need to obsess over how I’m doing. ��It seems this book does not have a timeline.

Actually, this book was already a book that I published in 2012 but it was the wrong POV character. ��I pulled it down and revised the outline and realized a character I have showing up in the middle of that other book was the POV character in actuality. ��That was 2012. ��It’s 2015. ��Timeline? ��What the heck is a timeline?? ��This book clearly has its own emotional arc. :-)

So, yes. ��My Excel counter is broken and I will not attempt to fix it today, tomorrow or any other day. ��I will just feel out how this book wants to be tracked. ��All books are different. ��This birthing is difficult. ��We’ll see how this book-baby will emerge. ��It will probably be many moons before this one’s born.

Have a very bookish week!

Ta-ta for now.

NB

Book Thoughts on Madame Lilly: Voodoo Priestess by Dormaine G.

 

Dormaine G’s Madame Lilly: Voodoo Priestess��is a captivating novella that grabs you by the throat and doesn’t stop squeezing until you reach the end — which is a cliffhanger.

Odara is a beautiful young girl who is Creole and is being groomed to be a mistress to a married Frenchman who can pay a decent dowry; money which her parents could use. ��Odara does not want that life. ��She wants to be a seamstress. ��She knows she’s talented and her designs are sought after. ��However, her mother knows the ways of their world best. ��She pressures her daughter to learn the genteel lessons needed for the life they were grooming her for.

Yet, Odara is different. ��She has a special talent that her mother begs her to never speak of — Odara can see and speak with the deceased.

Even Odara’s grandmother encourages her to ignore that special side of herself as it is dangerous and could bring harm to Odara and those around her. ��The cryptic but vague warnings sail over Odara’s head. ��She has other things to think about including a handsome young man vying for her attention. ��After a year, he succeeds in sweeping the lovely Odara off her feet and she marries him when she’s 18 years old.

Shortly after her marriage, she finds out her husband is not the man her purported to be. ��Not only is he married she realizes that he is cruel masochist. ��After 12 hard years of physical and mental abuse as his mistress (even though she has her own home with him), Odara snaps and that long-forgotten side of herself rears its mystical head. ��This is truly where the story begins!

Warning:��This is not a story for the feint of heart. ��There is graphic violence depicted along with ceremonial sacrifices.

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Book Thoughts: The Mind Readers by Lori Brighton

I’m not sure what prompted me to download��The Mind Readers by Lori Brighton. ��It could have been the ephemeral cover with the girl appearing almost to float among the waves of the sea. ��It could have been the title alone —��The Mind Readers. ��Wouldn’t I love to read minds. ��I mean, who wouldn’t?

Whatever it was, I’m glad I followed my impulse. ��From the first page of this young adult paranormal novel I was drawn into the well-rounded character of Cameron Winters. ��She’s a senior in high school and resides in freezing cold Maine who just didn’t fit in. ��I could relate to her plight. ��But then, we find out she overhears her fellow students’ thoughts. ��That clinched this particular reading deal for me.

Pretty early on we find out that Cameron befriended Emily, her alleged BFF, to keep the rumors at bay. ��What rumors? ��That Cameron is some kind of a freak and not the sexual kind. ��Being Emily’s friend, a rich popular girl, shields Cameron almost completely. ��But, things are beginning to sour in Cameron’s mind about her friend. ��Emily’s family life is devolving affecting Emily’s behavior; she’s becoming a bitter young woman. ��Cameron is not happy with how Emily is behaving.

That’s just about when the murder happens and the new boy — Lewis — appears! ��(There are more twists and turns in this wonderful yarn than on a roller coaster! ��This is a definite page-turner.)

I do not wish to spoil this story for any who choose to read this book (and, hopefully the series!). ��Suffice it to say, that there are chase scenes, small victims in need of saving, first kisses, and some second and third ones and betrayal. ��The Mind Readers has it all! ��You will not be disappointed with this read.

[Did I mention that��The Mind Readers (Book 1) is a free read??]

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Jewel Me Crazy: My Love Affair with Alexandrites

A long, long time ago (when I was a kid), my mother showed me a ring that I feel in love with. ��It was a golf-ball sized rock of a ring — at least to my young eyes it was. ��At first blush, it was a deep aquamarine-y bluish color. ��The fabulous thick gold mounting swirled upward in sculpted bands of gold to form a cone of gold around the base of the large stone that was multi-faceted to show the beauty and depth of color. ��Mind you, I was about 8, or 9.

Many months later, I saw my mother wearing another ring with the same setting. ��I was floored! ��My Mama was rich! ��I must have said something to that effect and I remember her trying to smother a guffaw. ��And then, she corrected me. ��She let me know we were not rich and that it was the same ring. ��The stone in her ring changed color depending upon the light. ��It was called an��Alexandrite.

Even though it is decades later I still remember that ring fondly. ��I��love��the alexandrite gemstone. ��I re-discovered my love of this stone about a week ago when I saw a color change man-made stone available for sale.

After a little research, I began to realize that the stone my mother owned was now a collector’s rarity — Alexandrites have become very rare. ��Originally mined in the emerald mines of the Ural Mountains of Russia in the 1830’s, the alexandrite gemstone is now available in other countries such as Sri Lanka, Brazil and Africa. ��However, the quality of the stones mined in these other countries are not of the same clarity of the Russian alexandrite gemstones.

The Russian Alexandrite is green in the natural daylight and when the sun sets it turns to a bright purplish-red color. ��Simply goregeous! ��(My mother’s ring had so many shades of color depending upon the light! ��It was breathtaking! ��Sometimes it even looked like a Smokey Quartz!)

Over the years, I always looked for an Alexandrite stone for myself and could never afford it…until I found this color change man-made stone alexandrite gemstone. ��This lab created stone was said to change from green to pink in the advertisement I read. ��I shrugged and said,��What the heck?! ��So, I purchased it.

My color change stone arrived earlier this week and I was sorely disappointed. ��While it was a decent sized 10×10 mm cushion cut stone that was beautifully faceted — it did not change color! ��No matter what room I went into in my home it stayed a very lovely soft pink. ��Darn it!!

I decided to take the ring with me to work to see if the light there would do the trick…it did!!!! ��Oh my! ��The colors of this stone!!

 

People — this is the SAME gemstone in all four pictures! ��Finally, I have my��own color change gemstone! ��The fun part? ��I am going to be able to design my own mount for it! ��I may even sell some of them on my jewelry Ebay page RiRi’s Pearls ‘N Baubles!

The absolute best part is how affordable these gemstones are! ��Even the average person can afford to have something that will bring a smile to their faces when they catch a glimpse of it on their hand, ears, wrist, or neck.

Of late, I have been fascinated by jewels, gemstones, rings and baubles. ��I forgot how much I loved jewelry! ��However, since I finished my last book��Making Dollars & Sense Work: A Financial Primer for Single Moms & Dads Plus College Kids, Too! I have been trying to remember what I used to love to do — to find my passions. ��Well, other than writing! :-) ��Why? ��Because if you find your passion you usually can create a stream of income from it due to your undying love for that thing.

I’ll let you know my findings…

Ta-ta for now,

NB

 

 

Book Thoughts: When the Real Thing Comes Along by Faith Simone

When the Real Thing Comes Along

by Faith Simone

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jacelynn is in a coming-of-age moment except her existential crossroad is a religious one. ��Jacelynn has lost her faith and is not quite sure when it faltered. ��She’s very sure when she noticed it fully — when her ex-boyfriend Taylor showed up at her church one Sunday.

Even though Jacelynn’s in a stable, safe and loving relationship she is still unfulfilled and searching for what she did not know.

This well-written love story by debut novelist Faith Simone is a story that puts the Christian faith front and center. ��Simone created unforgettable characters going through trials and tribulations that on the surface may seem trivial but just below the surface the full depth and dimension of the need and desire for a close-knit��relationship with God is germane to every plot point in this well-crafted story.

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Twitter Badass Challenge…Are you In??!?

My good buddy @KayCWise tagged me in a tweet earlier this week about a contest that was perfect for me. ��I shrugged and rolled my eyes. ��This lady has a lackluster love/hate relationship with Twitter! :) ��Me? ��I LOVE Twitter. ��Anywho, she sends this link to join the #TwitterBadassChallenge.

Win up to $2,000 in Amazon gift cards daily for simply sending out badass tweets? ��Totally doable for me! My chica friend is right! This one’s made just for me.

This is a 10-day challenge to tweet whatever is sent to us by the Badass Crew at Crowdfire (the folks behind this awesome contest). ��So, you have NO IDEA what they will ask you to do.

Well, the first day was to cuss in a tweet and tag two of your best Twitter buds. ��The second day was to tweet and tag two celebrities and get a selfie in the mix somehow.

It took some thought from me but here are my first two badass tweets.

Day 1:

‘Yo, what up, Shemar? Wanna hang with me? #Day2 #TwitterBadassChallenge @KayCWise pic.twitter.com/U6U0ktFWHp

��� TheNotebookBlogairy (@NotebkBlogairy) March 26, 2015

Day 2:

Hey Jennifer @IAMJHUD! Like my impression of the #MonaLisa?? #Day2 #TwitterBadassChallenge BTW, luv Whatever song! pic.twitter.com/KnqIDahckY

��� TheNotebookBlogairy (@NotebkBlogairy) March 26, 2015

What are you waiting for? ��We’re already on Day 3!!!! Join in on the fun!

In addition to being a badass, The NoteBook Blogairy is the author of several books. Check out her Amazon author page.

Her latest book,��Making Dollars & Sense Work, is available in both digital and paperback formats.

Three Months After Non-Celiac Diagnosis

Back in December followers of my blog will recall I went for an upper endoscopy to do the ‘final’ test in being diagnosed with Celiac Disease. ��Of the six biopsies they did 3 were within normal range and 3 were not therefore the diagnosis was I do not have Celiac Disease.

For about 5 weeks, I ate all types of food containing gluten. ��By mid to late February, my nasal passages were swollen and I got sick — very sick. ��I had to take antibiotics as I went into the normal sick pattern (when I’m on gluten, that is). ��It was at that moment that I realized that no matter what the medical establishment says I��know my body. ��Eating gluten was not helping me in any way shape or form. ��So, I stopped the gluten around February 20, 2015. ��It’s now just about a month later and I feel��so much better! ��My stomach is not bloated any longer. ��My sinuses are clear. ��I feel��normal again.

After 18 months of being off of gluten, then going on a gluten-filled diet for the endoscopy from November 17, 2014 – February 19th, 2015 has shown me that I don’t need someone else’s opinion about what my body can deal with effectively.

Since this last experiment of eating gluten, I have read many reports of others who have had to take the endoscopy test over 10 times in order to get a positive result. ��However, each time you do the endoscopy, you have to ingest at least 4 slices of bread every day for at least a month in order for you to have enough gluten in your system.

But, no one told me how much gluten you were supposed to ingest during the test period! ��I found this out afterwards. ��I listened to my doctor and had a bit of gluten every day. ��But, not 4 slices of bread every day!

Since I have decided to follow a gluten-free diet��anyway I figured I might as well get better at GF baking so I can eat things I like.

First, I wanted fried dumplings. ��A staple of the breakfasts my mother used to make when I was young. ��Using the flour found at Walmart I keep raving about this was the dough that came together quite nicely.

Here’s the flour from Walmart – Gluten Free Cafe! ��It’s only sold in stores.

The dumplings are easy to make. ��I used 1 1/2 cups of the Gluten Free Cafe flour, water and a bit of salt. ��I also added a 1/2 cup of coconut flour which give the dough (and the finished product!) a nice flavor and a bit more color than normal for gluten free items. ��You knead it until it is firm like the picture above. ��You can add a bit of baking powder to the mixture as well to make them rise just a bit.

You roll them into small balls and drop them in hot oil to fry until they are golden brown.

I fried these dumplings for about 12 – 15 minutes (depending upon the size). ��They came out very golden brown!

The rest of the breakfast was straight forward, codfish with a bit of potato to stretch it and fried green plantains with a nice spicy hot chili garlic sauce.

See? Nice and golden brown!

Making my life more interesting by finding and making gluten free foods is something that I have decided I am just going to do. ��The Gluten Free Cafe flour is a big part of my decision because I do not have to mix 4 – 5 flours together as many gluten free recipes require. ��This flour is a��straight substitution! ��Woot woot!!

I even added this Gluten Free Cafe flour to the Gluten Free Bisquick mix (I was running low on the Bisquick pre-packaged flour). ��I followed the biscuit recipe on the Bisquick GF box. ��I basically used 1 cup Bisquick GF flour and 1 cup Gluten Free Cafe flour, margarine (or, butter if you prefer) and almond milk (I tend to stay away from milk products). ��The result?

You see? ��I’m having a lot more success with my baked goods using the Gluten Free Cafe flour. ��It’s such a same it’s only sold at Walmart. ��And my nearest Walmart is over 20 miles away.

Well, that’s my story for today. ��Thanks for reading. ��I would love to hear your comments about the gluten free lifestyle, or some issue in your dietary journey.

Ta-ta for now,

N.B.

 

Let Your Passion Lead You to Passive Income

To continue the conversation, my latest book��Making Dollars & Sense Work is a book that is geared to helping single moms and dads plus young adults get a firm handle on their finances. ��This book gives the initial steps in setting up a monthly spending plan (aka: budget) as well as a step-by-step guide on how to understand and FIX your credit report.

This book also helps you get out of some sticky financial situations like the vicious cycle of PayDay Loan Hell, or judgments (where you have to appear in Civil Court to deal with old bills).

While the book helps give you that firm handle, it does not take you to the next level which is to find and bring in passive income. ��Why? ��Because one has to crawl (learn the basics) before one can walk, or run.

So, at this point in my life, I have been searching for passive income. ��I did MLM’s. ��All types of sales/product type companies. I’ve done Tupperware. ��I can sell stuff (yeah, yeah; bad english). ��But, those things were not creating��passive income. ��I had to��work at these things.

I’ve decided to look into that word��passive income. ��To me, it means that I put work into a project upfront and there may be maintenance but it’s not stressful to do…to me. ��Okay, so that definition is not exactly the true definition of “Passive” but it works for me.

I’m a writer. ��I write books. ��That’s not passive. ��I have to market said books. ��That is most definitely not passive! LOL. ��But, I enjoy it tremendously! ��I meet great people and now count as friends several people that I have met virtually. ��Some of them are closer to me than people that I have met IRL (in real life). ��So, for me, the entrepreneurial writer thing is a great way to go for me for passive income.

One of my other loves is jewelry. ��I’ve always wanted to wear pretty things. ��This could be because I’m a girl (Yeah, yeah, I’m being sterotypical but hey, this is my blog post; I can do that!). ��It could also be because my mom loves jewelry and I took in the love by osmosis. ��Who knows? ��Either way, after years of the obvious staring me in the face I decided to use my Ebay account (of which I was a very early adopter; I joined in Nov 1999!!) as a seller account for the first time in the history of my account!

Guess what I sell? ��Yep. ��Jewelry! ��Yes, it is a bit of work. ��I have to acquire the jewelry. ��Photograph each piece from several angles. ��Post each piece and write about each one. ��Work; so not passive, right? ��But guess what? ��I love jewelry! ��So, it’s more like play to me.

And my Ebay store name? ��RiRi’s Pearls ‘N Baubles Shoppe! ��The RiRi is my daughter’s nickname. ��I am striving to do my best to help her��know that she can do anything she chooses to do. ��You can check out my store here.

18-karat rose gold over silver champagne CZ Ring (Size 6)

 

This is one of the items in my store and it is one of my favorites! ��It is a Champagne Cubic Zirconia Cocktail Ring (size 6) with lots of bling in 18-karat rose gold over silver. ��It’s stunning! ��See? I love this stuff!

Making Dollars & Sense Work: A Financial Primer for Single Moms & Dads Plus College Kids Too! has taught me that there are several steps in becoming a responsible stewart of the family’s coffers. ��In addition to having positive cash flow every day and from paycheck-to-paycheck, one has to have several streams of income coming in to help with those unexpected expenses that pop up when you have a child, or children.

So, if you decide to read��Making Dollars & Sense Work know that this book gives you step 1 but there are other steps beyond the ones offered in the book. ��However, you will be more than ready for the next steps once you master what is in��Making.

Love you guys tremendously for reading, commenting and following me on my various social media outlets! ��If you don’t know my Twitter handle it is @NoteBkBlogairy. ��I am on it very frequently (it’s my favorite social media platform!).

Let me know where your passions direct you when it comes to passive income!

Ta-ta for now,

NB