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October 30, 2013

Mask (an 800-word Halloween flash fiction horror story) by Oren Shafir

Halloween_mask_horror_story There were no mirrors, but Frank could feel that the cut in his cheek was both wet and deep.

Lou’s words were running around his head: 'There is no right and wrong, just winners and losers.  When you understand that, you'll be free.'


“I dunno.”

“Well what day is it?”

“I dunno.”

“Well, look at your phone, for fuck sake.”

All Bojo had on was a pair of Fruit of the Loom underwear, but his cell phone was perched between his hip and the elas...
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Published on October 30, 2013 08:18

October 17, 2013

The Pretender (a 100-word flash fiction horror story ) by Oren Shafir

Distraught woman flash fiction suspense
How could I prove that I wasn't crazy when I was the only one who could see it -- the only one who could see that it was something alien: a parasite, an imposter, a pretender. And I had to get rid of it.

I went through it all in my head again as I hiked to the remote spot where I would abandon it. They had tried to tell me that something was wrong with her, but I knew it wasn't her at all. Something had taken her place. Still, as I left it there underneath the cypress tree I had to look away b...
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Published on October 17, 2013 13:26

October 11, 2013

Love letter (a 500-word flash fiction suspense story) by Oren Shafir

Celia my love,
If you’re reading this now, then I am dead. Since you were blocking my calls and emails, I had to
figure out a way to get through. You see that whenever I put my mind to something, I can make it happen.
I built an Aston Martin DB4 engine using my computer and my father’s 3D printer. I solved the world’s hardest Rubik’s Cube, which has 975 individual parts, not including the one thousand twelve hundred and twelve stickers that had to be attached by hand.  And I seduced my Dad...
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Published on October 11, 2013 15:29

October 4, 2013

Learning to count (a 700-word) flash fiction suspense story by Oren Shafir

suspense_flash_fiction_nurse_with_needle Miss Chandler hears herself counting and the numbers dance before her own eyes.The bed begins to spin. She wants to steady herself, but she is not in control. The IV in her arm pulls her back.
“Good honey. This is just something to help you relax before the anesthesiologist gets here,” the nurse says.
Miss Chandler must regain control. She closes her eyes and sees herself: young again, in charge, in her classroom, helping one of her young students learn to count.“Stop, stop, stop. Now Jemma hon...
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Published on October 04, 2013 07:27

September 27, 2013

3 depressions and a suicide (a 350-word flash fiction story) by Oren Shafir

Flash fiction story: A lonely highway road I can just see it: a 17-year-old boy going into the pharmacy and asking for tampons, and then asking some woman to explain how to use them so you would know what to say to me. Goddamn. But I’m not going to go through all the millions of things you did for me over the years. Even though we live on opposite sides of the country now, I know you know what you mean to me. And the other way around too - that’s actually what this is about - what I've done for you.Only once growing up did you call on...
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Published on September 27, 2013 03:07

September 21, 2013

The Geek (a 700-word flash fiction story) by Oren Shafir

Flash-fiction-horror-suspense-story-the-geek They knew I didn’t do it because I was in Phoenix with my Dad that week and didn’t get back till the day after vacation ended. In other words, the day after the locker bomb went off, and Schuler and Davis were killed. But they think I’m the next geek who might get inspired and decide to blow up some jocks, or even worse, some cheerleaders. They knew what the jocks almost did to me, and after what I said at the assembly, they were all over me.
Before the assembly I had been invisible; after it,...
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Published on September 21, 2013 09:47

September 18, 2013

The Closed Door (a 400-word freaky flash fiction story) by Oren Shafir


A cloud covered the moon, and the room darkened. I’d been so busy trying to clean up before Mom got home that I hadn’t had time to reflect. But the adrenaline rush was completely gone now, and it seemed like it was someone else earlier and not me. Part of me wished Bob were still alive, and we could all be a family together. Part of me knew that was right, the way it was supposed to be. But I had an image of myself with my feet hanging over the edge of my bed listening to Mom and Bob behind h...
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Published on September 18, 2013 08:19

September 15, 2013

Murder for Breakfast (a 300 word flash fiction story) by Oren Shafir

Originally published in Dead by Dawn Vol 3, Edited by Adele Hartley

Ed crashes into his chair – waves of body fat jiggling from the jowls of his neck and arms down to his belly, thighs and calves – and demands coffee; Janet thumps a mug of the scolding liquid next to his plate.
Ed opens the Herald with great fanfare, Janet discretely opens the cabinet drawer behind her.
Ed slurps loudly into his coffee mug as if making rapacious love; Janet moans murmurs of affection to the Smith and Wesson i...
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Published on September 15, 2013 03:29

September 7, 2013

Nickie (a 500-word freaky flash fiction story)

”We have to eat the dog.”

Danny just stared at Hans like he wanted to kill him.

Finally he said, “I hate your fucking mustache.”

“What?”“It makes you look like a gay German lumberjack.”

“Okay.”“That’s what me and Stevie call you, ‘The gay lumberjack.’”

Hans didn’t react.“My Mom hates it too.”“No she doesn’t,” Hans said calmly.

“We never liked you. Your jokes. are stupid And your breath smells like shit from that stupid pipe. Who smokes a pipe? I only took this retarded macho trip with you for...
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Published on September 07, 2013 03:18

September 4, 2013

Dina's Smile (a 450-word freaky flash fiction story) by Oren Shafir


Later, after she was raped by Shechem, I was the one Dina sought out for comfort.
That first time I comforted her, though,  she was around four, and I was around 12. Simeon had accidently hit her with a rock above her left eye. The women stopped the bleeding with some shepherds-purse. Then they passed her around like a loaf of bread, each one trying her own trick to soothe her: something sweet, a rocking motion, a rattling noise, even a breast. But still she wailed her heartbreakin...
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Published on September 04, 2013 03:18