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Tenure [M/M/M]
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything    Price: $2.97 A bisexual, male Professor, newly tenured and bored at his college's Student / Faculty mixer, discovers two young Freshmen openly having sex--a gorgeous, brown-skinned classic Greek "godling" and a beautiful, gold-skinned mixed race male. Professor's enormous "Clydesdale-Shire" of a "horse cock" more... All Along the Watchtower: Submerged (A Novel Excerpt)
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $1.97 In ancient times, a legendary half Egyptian general's rage and jealousy may be his downfall, when he seeks to break a sacred alliance between his Amazon shaman / sorceress mate and her allies. [erotica novel excerpt, over 10,000 wds!] Ancient Warrior Romantic Erotica, Egyptians, Amazons, Shamanic So more... Dez at the Silver Pole
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $1.97 Dez is a willful, stubborn hottie, the bisexual top stripper and erotic dancer [exotic dancer] at Max's club; independent to the bone, she won't be controlled. But, enter Mr. Dark, a powerful, dangerous, wealthy player, a corporate gangsta with an eye only for sexy Ms. Dez. He's certain he can t more... Dia's Coach (1)
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $4.97 Young Dia is a naughty cheerleader, who prefers older men, well, one particular older man. She wants everyone's favorite team coach and teacher, Mr. Dean. He's been good and strong, resisting her; but, he's weakening.... And lovely Dia always gets what she wants. So, when she enters Mr. Dean's h more... Dia's Team Bang (3)
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $5.97 Dia's the only cheerleader on the team bus filled with excited, champion ball players, managers, a middle-aged co-coach, and Mr. Dean, the one teacher / coach Dia'd open her lovely thighs wide for, anytime and anywhere, and secretly already has. Dia would do ANYTHING for her man's pleasure. So, Mr. more... Grant's Boone - Initial Interview
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $3.50 A lawyer makes a pilgrimage to a corporate titan in order to get his help with freeing her client from a death sentence. She knows he's ... "interested" in her. But, her appeal to his sense of justice won't be enough; she'll have to curry and satisfy his lust for her in order to save her client's li more... Hesitation
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything SoftFocus   Price: $1.97 A businesswoman's emotional conflict between overthinking versus her erotic needs is tested when she's caught in the rain with the man who keeps her mind and emotions distracted. But, will she overthink a playful shower together, too? _3218 words Erotic Romance short story [a shorter version publis more... Hobble
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $6.00 Native American medical professional BENNET GILLESPIE'S "off track" life dangerously spirals, as his compulsive and sexual, love entanglement with DAY, a beautiful, "knife-happy" African American "innocent", and her overbearing, elderly British "guardian" threatens to cost Benn more than his life. - more... Hobble [An Adult Fiction]
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $6.00 Half Native American medical professional BENNET GILLESPIE'S "off track" life dangerously spirals, as his compulsive and sexual, love entanglement with DAY, a "knife-happy" African American "innocent", and her overbearing, elderly British "guardian" threatens to cost Benn more than his life. Is Ben more... Libidinous 1: Short Stories, Poems, and Novel Excerpts
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $4.50 Erotic short stories, poems, and novel excerpts. http://libidinous.neale-sourna.com/ more... NCADv4n1--North Coast Academies' Diary, Vol 4 #1--Tad: The Switch-hitter, His Twink, and His Teacher--A Lust Novella (M/M/M)
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $4.00 Gorgeous, biracial, bisexual rich kid, Tad, gets whoever he wants, male or female, and he has a relentless hard on for his English professor, Dr. Hupper, whose magnificent black cock Tad's stuffed down his eager, tan-white throat and given hand jobs; but, youngster Tad wants serious, naked alone tim more... Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Diary, Volume 1, #1--Laila: Cozy with Daddy
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $2.00 Brainy, multiracial, private school virgin, Laila Mariah Deever, chooses to seduce her handsome, middle aged stepfather, Ross, for her first incestuous sexual encounter. NCAD Vol 1 #1 Laila: Cozy With Daddy Neale Sourna's NCAD is Adult Erotic Fetish Fiction, usually one short story per issue [i.e., more... Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Diary, Volume 1, #2--Yune: Suck My _ _ _ _
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $1.25 Basketball jock Yune gets his stone hard, young Korean American cock sucked by a first time knob munching, K.A. church virgin, while his favorite, bespectacled, brown-skinned teen goddess secretly watches, and then later he's sucked off by a classmate's red-haired, society MILF mom. What a great bir more... Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Diary, Volume 2, #1--Ross: Daddy's Little Whore, uh, Seductress
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Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $3.00 Sexy middle-aged stepdad, Ross Deever, wakes naked beside his newly deflowered, multiracial stepdaughter, Laila; then vainly tries abstaining from hitting it again. And again. With a vengeance. Kitchen table spread, incestuous doggy bang on kitchen floor, and an extensive private lesson in proper fi more... Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Diary, Volume 3, #1--3 Sex Views: Ross, Laila, Sascha
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Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $4.00 Three (3) HUGE stories, priced as ONE (1)!! (1.) Sascha: Laila's Classmate-Public Parking, Sex Squared [8289 words] Studious, male teen virgin, Sascha, watches hottie valedictorian schoolmate Laila steam up her glasses, public sexin' her lucky stepdad, then nerdy Sasch "gets lucky," too, twice. ( more... Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Diary, Volume 3, #1. 2--Laila: Daddy's Willing Little Slut
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Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $6.25 Laila; Smarty Schoolgirl--Daddy's Willing Little Slut. Teen Laila's rape-punished by stepdaddy, Ross, for playing the skanking stepdaughter, and she loves it. Laila's first incestuous father-daughter rape (willing), including first bare cock in vulnerable bare teen pussy. 3711 words more... Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Diary, Volume 3, #1. 3--Ross: My Daughter's Anal Cherry
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Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $6.25 Ross; Laila's Stepdad--My Daughter's Anal [Asshole] Cherry. Daddy Ross regrets his criminal-rough treatment, until randy little Laila begs for more, in her pristine asshole. And gets it. A volunteer cock suck thank you, before she begs her daddy for her first anal. And gets it, with a simultaneous b more... Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Diary, Volume 3, #1.1--Sascha: Public Parking, Sex Squared
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $6.25 Sascha: Laila's Classmate--Public Parking, Sex Squared. Studious, male teen virgin, Sascha, watches hottie valedictorian schoolmate Laila steam up her glasses, public sexin' her lucky stepdad, then nerdy Sasch "gets lucky," too, twice. Graphic public sex and exhibitionism; voyeurism, teen male mastu more... Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Journal 1, Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Diary Vol. 1-3 Compiled
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Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything    Price: $4.00 Journal compilation of six (6) hardcore, sexual short stories previously published individually, as "Neale Sourna's North Coast Diary" entries. Laila: Cozy With Daddy [7857 words]; Yune: Suck My - - - - [3677 words]; Ross: Daddy's Little Whore, uh, Seductress [8401 words]; 3 Sex Views: Ross, Laila, more... No Wedding Night
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Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything SoftFocus   Price: $0.99 A wedding, a reception brawl, and the bride and groom's wedding night will be in jail. Or will it? _866 words Romance more... 1 to 20 of 281, 2 Next http://www.allromanceebooks.com/storeSearch.html?searchBy=author&qString=Neale+Sourna&page=221 to 28 of 28Prev 1, 2Show by: Best Selling | Top Rated | Recently Added | Length | Title | Heat Level | Price | Discounted
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Professor Teaches the Tight End (MFM)
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $1.97 A bonus story formerly found with the short story "Tenure - MFM": Professor privately tutors a certain Tight End footballer. The boy will definitely get more than his grades up, to save his place on the team, while Prof rams knowledge into him. _5930 words approx. more... Professor Teaches the Tight End (MMM)
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything    Price: $1.97 A bonus story formerly found with the short story "Tenure - MMM": Professor privately tutors a certain Tight End footballer. The boy will definitely get more than his grades up, to save his place on the team, while Prof rams knowledge into him. _5934 words approx. more... Rough-Me Dot Com
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $1.50 Dot com queen, Lara, runs an internet dating hookup site for "rough sex." Her own boring romantic life has her observing the online site communications of a client, named Wil. She makes contact with him, as Dennie, one of her online aliases, who "works for her." When Wil decides he wants to meet " more... Steve's Monkey's Paw & More
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Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $1.95 STEVE is a horrid bad boy, envious of friend ALEX's turn-around attitude with his soon-to-be new love, KARA, but grandma's monkey's paw, gives Steve complete control over anyone he wants; even Alex's sweet new lady; against her will.... Plus MORE, there are more stories and fascinating excerpts fro more... Temple and Silent Tommy: Bedrooms [A Post Second World War (WWII) Love Story/Novel Excerpt]
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything SoftFocus   Price: $1.00 A post Second World War (WWII) love story/novel excerpt. The war's been over two years; but, days ago Temple and her little dog Wuffer found Tommy, drinking the morning's milk outside the door of his own family home, like a stray tomcat, finally returned, after seven long years, from God only knows more... Tenure [M/F/M]
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything    Price: $2.97 A bisexual, male Professor, newly tenured and bored at his college's Student / Faculty mixer, discovers two young Freshmen openly having sex--a gorgeous, brown-skinned classic Greek "godling" and a beautiful, gold-skinned mixed race coed female. Professor's enormous "Clydesdale-Shire" of a "hors more... The Freelancer
By: Neale Sourna
Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything SoftFocus   Price: $1.00 Annie's new temp, Ryan, with the fascinating ass, is great at his job, even on his very first day; but, he's driving her to distraction and she can't get anything done! When Annie works late and alone, to catch up on work, gorgeous Ryan returns in order to show her what he's really freelancing in; more... Three - By Invitation Only
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Published by: PIE: Perception Is Everything   Price: $3.97 A sexy woman, a nameless man; she picks him up, as her husband watches, then she invites the new man to enjoy sex with them in their wealthy suburban home. Swingers, three-way, and more. _8967+ words more... 21 to 28 of 28Prev 1, 2neale sourna, ebook, ebooks, e-book, e-books, fiction, adult ebooks, adult fiction

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Sort By: Bestsellers Highest Rated Price: Low to High Title: A to Z Title: Z to A Date: Newest to Oldest Date: Oldest to Newest      $1.97 Add to cart Professor Teaches the Tight End (MFM) by Sourna, Neale A bonus story formerly found with the short story "Tenure - MFM": Professor privately tutors a certain Tight End footballer. The boy will definitely get more than his grades up, to save his place on the team, while Prof rams knowledge into him. _5930 words approx....Read more $1.97 Add to cart Professor Teaches the Tight End (MMM) by Sourna, Neale A bonus story formerly found with the short story "Tenure - MMM": Professor privately tutors a certain Tight End footballer. The boy will definitely get more than his grades up, to save his place on the team, while Prof rams knowledge into him. _5934 words approx....Read more $4.50 Add to cart Libidinous 1: Short Stories, Poems, and Novel Excerpts by Sourna, Neale Erotic short stories, poems, and novel excerpts. http://libidinous.neale-sourna.com/ $3.50 Add to cart Grant's Boone - Initial Interview by Sourna, Neale A lawyer makes a pilgrimage to a corporate titan in order to get his help with freeing her client from a death sentence. She knows he's ... "interested" in her. But, her appeal to his sense of justice won't be enough; she'll have to curry and satisfy his lust for her in order to save her client's life. But can they both just walk away afterward? http://libidinous.neale-sourna.com/ http://grant...Read more $2.97 Add to cart Tenure [M/M/M] by Sourna, Neale A bisexual, male Professor, newly tenured and bored at his college's Student / Faculty mixer, discovers two young Freshmen openly having sex--a gorgeous, brown-skinned classic Greek "godling" and a beautiful, gold-skinned mixed race male. Professor's enormous "Clydesdale-Shire" of a "horse cock" and his superior use of it lures the two to pursue and invite him for intimate, private sex fun,...Read more $2.97 Add to cart Tenure [M/F/M] by Sourna, Neale A bisexual, male Professor, newly tenured and bored at his college's Student / Faculty mixer, discovers two young Freshmen openly having sex--a gorgeous, brown-skinned classic Greek "godling" and a beautiful, gold-skinned mixed race coed female. Professor's enormous "Clydesdale-Shire" of a "horse cock" and his superior use of it lures the two to pursue and invite him for intimate, private sex...Read more neale sourna, kobo books, kobo, ebooks, e-books, ebook, e-book, fiction 

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Print Books Results for 'neale sourna' Refine Search: Author matches (6) Title matches (3) 6 Results    Hobble Paperback Neale Sourna RRP $43.99 $41.50 Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Journal 1, Neale Sourna's North Coast Academies' Diary Vol. 1-3 Compiled Paperback Neale Sourna RRP $35.99 $34.25 Steve's Monkey's Paw & More Paperback Neale Sourna RRP $10.99 $9.75 Neale Sourna's Cuntsinger
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Neale Sourna's LIBIDINOUS 1 - Short Stories, Poems, and Novel Excerpts

"Libidinous 1", Excerpts from the Adult Fiction Short Story Collection , includes"Steve" excerpt from "Steve's Monkey's Paw & More" and featuring the following:
_9078 words "...This new man didn't leave, either; he didn't move. He probably stopped breathing for a long while, as I watched his cock search his inseam for cunt.Which is all fine with me, because as soon as she realized he was there, her already versatile, greedy pussy had gotten real charged, clamping on me mercilessly till I thought I’d cum then. She knew I would, too.But, Sandy shifted her weight, and loosened her slick grip, teasing me to slow down and chill off, a bit, yet gave him a better view of her circular bobbing on her favorite, juice-slick cockhorse.I barely heard him gasp, “Shit” over my own moan and that delightful throaty squeal she makes when she knows she’s got total control of two rock hard cocks she wants.The reliable hardness of my cock and a fucking spare...."Table of contents: Three-By Invitation Only_short story [9078 words] I wanted her in the car, but... Our Wedding Sex Story Remember the new man? Sandy’s Shop Window Sex Display But, before I get to correct our new man... My Anal Punishment for Sandy Our present house guest was...
...and more coming in Libidinous 1].
#02_HesitationA businesswoman's emotional conflict between overthinking versus her erotic needs is tested when she's caught in the rain with the man who keeps her mind and emotions distracted. But, will she overthink a playful shower together, too?_3218 words Erotic Romance short story [a shorter version published in Playgirl Magazine]Plus a Bonus Love Poem: A Lesson in PassionISBN:978-1-938903-10-6 PDF ebook978-1-938903-11-3 mobi / kindle

"Hesitation" is also a Playgirl Forum shower wet love story. -- get your ebook (for your PDAs) and print versions (for your greedy little hands),  because  an older, shorter Hesitation is included in: "Steve's Monkey's Paw & MORE"only US$3.95! paperback, and ebooks


03_Silver Pole  READ excerpt Dez is a willful, stubborn hottie, the bisexual top stripper and erotic dancer [exotic dancer] at Max’s club; independent to the bone, she won’t be controlled.

But, enter Mr. Dark, a powerful, dangerous, wealthy player, a corporate gangsta with an eye only for sexy Ms. Dez.He’s certain he can teach this free girl a few things.In lust and love, what is “control,” what is “danger,” when two headstrong people are in conflict over their mutual desires, at the foot of a stripper’s silver pole._9587 words Erotic Romancestripper, exotic dancer, bisexual, lesbian, love, heterosexual, forced sex, coerced sex, domination, control CONTENTSBathroom Fun With Ginger
Age Appropriate?
Dez’s First Show - Backstage
Enter Mr. Dark
Dez The Headliner
Dark Dreams
Private Dancer
Premium Private Show
Touching
Penalty Fee?
Salome
Sharp Edge Of Control
Elbow To The Neck
Saddle Up, Girl.
Ride ’Em, Cowgirl!
His Cock’s New Home
Invitation
Sexy Exit

Tenue - MFM




BONUS: Professor Teaches The Tight End - MFM also available for separate purchase



04.1_Tenure_MFM  READ excerpt A bisexual, male Professor, newly tenured and bored at his college’s Student  /  Faculty mixer, discovers two young Freshmen openly hav­ing sex— a gorgeous, brown-skinned classic Greek “godling” and a beautiful, gold-skinned mixed race coed female. Professor’s enormous “Clydesdale - Shire” of a “horse cock” and his superior use of it lures the two to pursue and invite him for intimate, private sex fun, during a student dorm kegger night. Prof may have academic tenure — a protected and permanent job — but, he might still lose it all over these two.Do you think they’ll be worth it? Oh, yeah, Professor knows they will._13,760 words approx.
Bonus (included or for separate purchase): Professor privately tutors a certain Tight End footballer. The boy will definitely get more than his grades up, to save his place on the team, while Prof rams knowledge into him._5930 words approx.Total words: 19,690
PDF  Kindle/Mobicollege; university; school; coed; fellatio; cunnilingus; Lolita; teen; sex; exhibitionist; voyeur; anal sex; gay; swing; football; dorm; fainting couch; fingerfuck; masturbation; breast fuck; condom; rubber; safe; fellatio; throatfuck; top; switch; bottom; bisexual; interracial; dominant; urine sex; piss sex; urine; piss; raw sex; middle aged; middle-aged; submissive; urine enema CONTENTS The Freshmen/Faculty Mixer Liz on Her Knees The Pretty Fuckers Fingerfucking a Coed Cunnilingus on a Coed A Professor Exposes Himself Fucking a Coed & a Broken Condom Professor’s Office A Freshman Boy’s Kiss and Grope A Freshman Coed Visits A Victorian Fainting Couch A Bareback Freshman? A Professor Unprepared for Class The Dorm Kegger Watching a Freshman Fuck a Tight End A Professor and Two Freshmen A Freshman Sucks & a Coed Fingerfucked Prof Recoups and Watches Prof’s First Cock Taste Fingerfucking a Boy’s Virgin Asshole Assfucking a Boy’s Virgin Asshole Assfucking on a Borrowed Bed Rough Use & a Prof’s Ass Invaded BONUS— Professor Teaches The Tight End - MFM
A Professor Helps Meet and Greet Studying with Professor Sucking Professor’s Cock Professor Rewards a Tight End Professor Fucks a Tight End Professor Rips a Tight End Open A Professor’s Goodnight

Tenure - MMM



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04.2_Tenure_MMM  READ excerpt A bisexual, tenured, male college professor, bored at a Freshmen mixer, discovers two young freshmen boldly having sex openly — a gorgeous, brown-skinned classic Greek godling and a beautiful, gold-skinned mixed race male.

Prof’s enormous “Clydesdale - Shire” of a horse cock and his superior use of it makes the two pursue him and invite him for some very intimate, private fun during a dorm kegger night.

Prof may have tenure — basically a protected and permanent job — but, he might still just lose his job and career over these two.

But, do you think they’ll be worth it? Oh, yeah, Professor knows they will.

_13,761words approx.

Bonus
Bonus (included or for separate purchase): Professor privately tutors a certain Tight End footballer. The boy will definitely get more than his grades up, to save his place on the team, while Prof rams knowledge into him._5934words approx.Total words: 19,695
PDF,  Kindle/Mobicollege; university; school; coed; fellatio; teen; sex; exhibitionist; voyeur; anal sex; gay; swing; football; dorm; fainting couch; fingerfuck; masturbation; condom; rubber; safe; fellatio; throatfuck; top; switch; bottom; bisexual; interracial; dominant; urine sex; piss sex; urine; piss; raw sex; middle aged; middle-aged; submissive; urine enema CONTENTS The Freshmen/Faculty Mixer
Zil on His Knees The Pretty Fuckers Handjob on a Teen Slut A Professor Exposes Himself Fucking a Boy Coed & a Broken Condom Professor’s Office A Freshman Boy’s Kiss and Grope A Freshman Boy Coed Visits A Victorian Fainting Couch A Bareback Freshman? A Professor Unprepared for Class The Dorm Kegger Watching a Freshman Fuck a Tight End A Professor and Two Freshmen A Freshman Sucks & AnotherHandjerked Prof Recoups and Watches Prof’s First Cock Taste Fingerfucking a Boy’s Virgin Asshole Assfucking a Boy’s Virgin Asshole Assfucking Him on a Borrowed Bed Rough Use & a Prof’s Ass Invaded BONUS—Professor Teaches The Tight End - MMM A Professor Helps Meet and Greet Studying with Professor Sucking Professor’s Cock Professor Rewards a Tight End Professor Fucks a Tight End Professor Rips a Tight End Open A Professor’s Goodnight Grant's Boone - Initial InterviewPIE: Perception Is Everything Publishing
A lawyer makes a pilgrimage to a corporate titan in order to get his help with freeing her client from a death sentence; knowing he's ... “interested” in her. But, her appeal to his sense of justice won’t be enough; she’ll have to curry and satisfy his lust for her, first, in order to save her client’s life. But can they both just walk away afterward? _10,540 words http://libidinous.neale-sourna.com/ Short storyhttp://libidinous.neale-sourna.com/grant.html Novel excerpt Table of ContentsHer last resort.Her “sacrifice play.”His “inner sanctum.”A good saleswoman.“Boone.”“Someone powerful.”You’re all he cares about.“I’m just a businessman.”Drag out the repartee?Grant’s eyes.“Why not go to Crimmins?”He felt utterly peeved.“Just lie on your back again.”Boone was pissed.“Simple barter.”“A knowledgeable chauffeur.”A hardy heart abruptly pounding.Patience is commerce. A self-made woman.
A hostile re-takeover.
Multiple second thoughts.
This present “immoral” action.
On her knees to his power.
Her touch on him.
Oral first contact.
The politician.
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Tips for Writers / Ubiblog Columns by Richard Dansky | Central Clancy Writer | on September 19, 2013 |

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Columns by Richard Dansky | Central Clancy Writer | on September 19, 2013 | 5 comments | in Blog Updates The best resource you have as a writer is other writers.

For those of us of a certain age (which is to say, those of us old enough to remember typewriters, buy music on vinyl in a non-ironic way, and have fond memories of non-CGI Transformers), the image of the lone writer holds a romantic appeal – one that’s definitely echoed in the wider audience. The idea of a solitary wordsmith – locked in a room with only a typewriter and a blank page – plays to a certain fantasy of the artist, and for some forms of writing there’s some merit to it.

But even the most supposedly solitary forms of literary expression, be they novels or short stories or naughty limericks that include the word “Nantucket,” aren’t entirely solo efforts. There are editors involved. First readers. Copy editors. You get the idea. And that’s for forms that involve no other asset besides the words.
And believe me, it’s a good thing to get those other folks involved.

Most writers, in their more candid moments, will simultaneously admit to being their own worst critics and getting so wrapped up in what the writing should be that they can’t edit it properly. Having other eyes on your work is a tremendous help. Good readers and editors will mercilessly uncover the weak spots and the cheats in your narrative, will relentlessly expose places where you got stylistically lazy, and call out the places where you shortchanged the reader.

Also, if you’re lucky, they’ll catch the typos.

The trick is, of course, finding readers and editors who can do that for you, who can read what you’ve written and provide feedback that is not only not yours, but also actively useful.

Which brings us, in a roundabout way, to games.
 Don’t Go It AloneFor a long time, most game writers were solitary creatures, whether they wanted to be or not. The role of narrative in game design wasn’t necessarily highly regarded, and a dedicated writer was viewed as a luxury. The idea of two – or more – on a single project was mind-blowing in its extravagance.

Good readers and editors will mercilessly uncover the weak spots and the cheats in your narrative [Digression: At the first Game Writers Conference, now the Game Narrative Summit, I walked into the conference room before Marc Laidlaw’s opening talk and my first thought as I scanned the room was My God, I’m not alone. Every other person I’ve talked to who was there that day has told me roughly the same story, often using the same words.]

Which meant that when a writer wanted feedback on something they were doing, they weren’t getting it from writers.

Now wait a minute, I can hear you saying. Most of the people who are going to play the game aren’t writers, so feedback from writers is kind of key there, Spartacus. And yes, that’s true – knowing that things are or aren’t working for an audience is vitally important. If a reader hates the protagonist, it doesn’t matter if they’ve memorized Strunk and White or not; that feedback is useful.

But.

What that feedback is not, is directed, which means it’s not necessarily phrased in a way that makes it actionable. I don’t like the main character is feedback; there’s a serious disconnect between the way you position your protagonist’s backstory and her diction in the dialog you’ve written is actionable.
Let’s rewind a bit. Imagine you’re an artist and you’re showing someone your work. Their response, quite reasonably, is that they don’t like it and something’s wrong with the way the sky looks. Now, this is useful feedback insofar as it A)suggests that the project needs more work and B)calls out a rough area that could use some improvement. However, what that feedback is lacking is technical criticism, using the language of the visual arts. There’s nothing there about composition, about color, about tools – in short, it’s not couched in the professional context that would allow the artist to use it as a clearer roadmap to iteration and improvement.

And just like art, or engineering, or any other discipline within game development, writing has its own professional and technical language. Here is where the romantic notion of creation-exclusively-through-inspiration breaks down; writing is first and foremost a craft, requiring sweat and iteration and technical skill.

Like any other craft, it has techniques and best practices and standards, and the people best equipped to give feedback that addresses the needs of the craft are – wait for it – other writers. They do the job, they speak the language. And just as artists get valuable feedback from other artists, and engineers get better feedback on their code from other engineers, some of the most directed, useful feedback a writer can get will come from another writer.

[This assumes, of course, that the writer in question is good at critique and isn’t a jerk. But for the sake of continued employment of all concerned, we’ll assume both.]

I’ll confess, the first time I was put in the harness long-term with another writer (while working on Splinter Cell: Double Agent), it was a weird feeling. I’d gotten used to working alone, to the point where I wasn’t sure how to interact. I’m fairly certain Taras Stasiuk, the other writer in question, felt something similar. This was something new and different and challenging. (Which is writerese for What if they don’t like my stuff?)

 Then something weird happened. I passed Taras some of my stuff. He passed me some of his. He sent back comments on mine, which were very useful, and I sent him a few on his. I didn’t agree with all of his notes, but we discussed the places where we disagreed, which made me lay out why I’d made those choices and what they implied, and that led to some new discussions about where the characters were coming from, and before you knew it A)we had a great working dynamic and – this is the important part – B)the work was better. And I’ve relished having other writers to work with ever since.

Writing is first and foremost a craft, requiring sweat and iteration and technical skillThis is, of course, old hat to folks who’ve worked in TV writers’ rooms or found that mythical beast, the useful writers’ group. But for too many writers out there, there isn’t or hasn’t been a professional peer they could turn to. That means learning to rely only on themselves, to set up perimeters around their work, and – after too many rounds of being told I would have done it this way, and you should totally add a few dinosaurs – learning to view feedback as not necessarily in the work’s best interest. Those are hard habits to break.

They’re worth breaking, though, and that ultimately circles us around to the original premise, namely, that the best resource you have as a writer in games is other writers. Specifically, other writers who know and understand the sort of work you’re doing and who can give you the targeted feedback that will allow you to improve specific aspects of that work. So if you’re lucky enough to be on a team, or in a studio with multiple writers, then the best thing you can do is use them. Share your work, and let them share theirs with you.

Because they’re the ones in the best position to give you specific feedback you can use to make your own writing better.columnsrichard danskythe write stuff the authorPerhaps best known for his brief stint as the world’s leading authority on Denebian Slime Devils, Richard Dansky has been with Red Storm/Ubisoft since 1999. His first game was Shadow Watch and his most recent one is Splinter Cell Blacklist. In between he’s served on the advisory board for GDC’s Game Narrative Summit, helped found and develop the IGDA Game Writing SIG, and appeared on Gamasutra’s list of the top 20 game writers in 2009. He has also published six novels, one short fiction collection and a ton of tabletop RPG sourcebooks, which is why you should never tell him about your character. For a tantalizing taste of Dansky's inimitable insights, read his recurring column on the UbiBlog ("The Write Stuff") and follow him on Twitter: @RDansky

On Becoming a Game Writer / Gamasutra Columns by Richard Dansky | Central Clancy Writer | on October 10, 2013

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Columns by Richard Dansky | Central Clancy Writer | on October 10, 2013 | 36 comments | in Blog Updates

One of the questions I get asked most frequently is How do I get into game writing? Now, this isn’t the same as How did you get into game writing? Ask ten game writers that question and you’ll get twelve different answers. No, what people are looking for is the clear and well-manicured path into the profession – a certain set of steps to follow that, once completed, will yield a position as a game writer.

This is a perfectly reasonable question to ask, and in a just and fair and logical world, it would have a simple and concise answer. Unfortunately, we are not living in that world. There’s a reason every game writer’s journey is different, and that’s because different companies are looking for different things in a writer. Some embrace the role and smooth the path, some have very specific needs and wants, and some aren’t quite sure what exactly they’re going to do with a writer, but they’re pretty sure someone needs to be generating some text assets for their game right about now. There is no one true way, and anyone who tells you there is, is most likely trying to sell you something they’ve written about how to become a game writer.
That being said – and bearing in mind that I am not, in fact, trying to sell you anything – there are a few things you can do to advance toward game writing. They’re not hard and fast, there’s no achievement unlocked after accomplishing them, and they may seem a little counter-intuitive in places. But in 14 years of doing this, I haven’t found anything better. So, if you want to be a game writer, here’s what you’ve got to do:

Check Your Ego

If you believe that you are going to walk in the door as a writer, elucidate your grandiose vision for the story you want to tell and have the development team magically transmogrify into Oompa-Loompas who are there to actualize that vision, you may find yourself sadly disappointed. A writer is part of a team, there to mesh harmoniously with folks from other disciplines in order to create the player experience. Fail to understand that you are part of a team – that you are creating assets and providing deliverables, not cavorting through the fields of the Swiss Alps in a smock whilst declaiming Romantic poetry that the rest of us are privileged to hear – and you will probably also fail to understand why nobody wants to work with you.

Play Games

If you want to write games, play games. To write for any medium, you need to understand that medium’s unique form and demands. The best way to acquire that knowledge is to consume that medium, and by consuming that medium – or as we call it, “sitting your butt on the damn couch and playing some games” – gain both experiential and instinctive knowledge of what works.

It’s not the only thing, of course. You don’t sit through twelve hours of Dynasty Warriors 8 and emerge with the knowledge of how to write meaningful systemic dialog chewing its way out of your head like a particularly hungry Athena. You do, however, walk away with a pretty decent sample size of things that worked and things that didn’t work, and you can start putting that knowledge to use in your own work.

Observe Games

Of course, when I say “play games” I don’t just mean “play games.” Racking up body count in adversarial is cool, but if you’re focused exclusively on optimizing your play, you’re missing the chance to observe game writing in its natural habitat.

So play as a player, but also play as a writer. Listen to the dialog. Observe the visual storytelling. Look at the text that gets used, and ask yourself why those choices might have been made. See if you can reverse engineer – and thus understand – the narrative design.

Do this, and you’ll get a better grasp of how game writing works when the rubber hits the road. It’s not just the words, it’s when the words get used, and how many, and to what end, and where there are no words at all. Watch the game as you play it, and learn.

Make Games

The best way to learn what works as writing in a game is to get your writing in a game. Luckily, we’re in a place in the evolution of the industry when it’s possible to get your writing in a game even if you’re not working for a game company.

Go find yourself a Game Jam, or haunt a local college’s CS department bulletin boards to find groups that are making games on their own. Offer your services as a writer, even if all they need is menu text. Grab a tool kit and make something with your words in it. Get your stuff in a game and see how it plays.

And I’ll be honest here – odds are your first few cracks at it aren’t going to be great. That’s OK. This is the space where you can learn, and you can get better without your employment being on the line. Because the more games you write for, the better you’ll get at recognizing what does and doesn’t work, and the quicker you’ll build the habits of good work you’re going to need.

Besides, it doesn’t hurt to have actual, honest-to-Murgatroyd games in your portfolio.

Tweet

And by tweet, I don’t mean HAW HAW CAT VIDEO LOL. One of the things Twitter does is force you to phrase complete thoughts in a constrained space. This is entirely akin to writing for games, where you must on occasion phrase a complete thought in a space that is entirely constrained by the number of characters the German localization is going to require. Or, more likely, constrained by the fact that you don’t want your dialog to ramble, potentially interrupting gameplay in the process.

So tweet, and tweet smart. Learn how to write short, pithy sentences that communicate a point. And lay off the cat videos.

Talk With Game Writers

The best way to learn about the job is to talk to people who have done the job. This is not a surprise, nor is it unique to game writing. So, if you’re interested in the role, find ways to interact with people who are doing it. Go to conferences where game writers are speaking. Follow them on social media and engage – respectfully. I was wondering if I could ask you a few questions goes a lot further than Why did you make that incredibly stupid decision in your last game? Look to the IGDA Game Writing Special Interest Group and get on their mailing list. Make a reputation for yourself as someone who can engage cogently and professionally, and who has interesting things to say about the subject matter.

Also, don’t be a jerk.

If you do these things there’s a better shot that when someone has an opening and your name gets floated as a possibility, you’ll get a positive response. As opposed to, say, slagging a writer on your blog and then turning around and asking them for work. Because that always goes so well.

Taking the Next Steps

Will doing all these things get you a job as a game writer? No. Knocking on doors, sending out resumes, applying for gigs and presenting good work in your portfolio will actually get you the job. But if you do these things, you’re in a better position to be ready to knock on doors – and to be prepared to seize the opportunity when somebody answers.

For more of Dansky’s advice for writers, check out this post:

Tips for Writers columnsrichard danskythe write stuff the author
Perhaps best known for his brief stint as the world’s leading authority on Denebian Slime Devils, Richard Dansky has been with Red Storm/Ubisoft since 1999. His first game was Shadow Watch and his most recent one is Splinter Cell Blacklist. In between he’s served on the advisory board for GDC’s Game Narrative Summit, helped found and develop the IGDA Game Writing SIG, and appeared on Gamasutra’s list of the top 20 game writers in 2009. He has also published six novels, one short fiction collection and a ton of tabletop RPG sourcebooks, which is why you should never tell him about your character. For a tantalizing taste of Dansky's inimitable insights, read his recurring column on the UbiBlog ("The Write Stuff") and follow him on Twitter: @RDansky

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Great advice here. I had two sex scenes in a screenplay a long while back where one flowed nearly perfectly with few changes between bad girl and our hero and the other between him and the literal girl of  his dreams was completely redone about three to four times.

I knew exactly what the motivations, emotions, and character issues were for the bad girl and hero with bad girl.

But with the love interest, it took me a while to whittle it down to the right emotions, motivations, and character issues for a relationship that needed to be more than a bewitched booty call for the bad girl / bad witch trying to hook her guy magically while reenforcing it with sex. When love and a long-term commitment was on the line and the "good girl" / good witch, I found I had hangups I had to get out of the way.

Write. Then edit.

Rewrite. Edit.

Keep whittling and feeling or sensing your way through the who these people are and why they are having sex. The bad girl was entrapping him and he couldn't stop it then; but with the "good girl" [I make quotes because it is a loaded concept still in this culture] and the hero had a tender minefield of their own individual issues, goals, hopes and each touch, each kiss, each sigh, and choice of what they actually do comes from character and personal goals and writer complications as their ubergod.